« Reply #2025 on: February 10, 2016, 04:45:09 PM »
That is just delightfully funny, Wavewright! I particularly love how you inserted sound effects to capture that Bo Diddley beat and the instrumental break.
(Prances off humming "I-I-I want Lalli! KRUNTS, paf paf! SHWUMP, drip drip!")
Hee hee I'm glad you liked it! Minna's excellent onomatopoeic devices were the inspiration, especially the small double ones. I had fun finding good ones in an archive search, and came to realise she has increased their use as the comic went on. There are barely any in the Prologue.
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