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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #75 on: October 08, 2021, 03:54:38 AM »
Opaque, the little party is so well done! I like Lalli concerned about the cake, and Emil concerned about being hit by cake. And I take it Onni did magic tricks?

wave, the Sigrun drawing is very clever (covering multiple prompts might be a way to go, in the future), the bear is creepy, and Mikkel is very amusing. His attitude seems spot-on.
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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #76 on: October 08, 2021, 03:57:17 AM »
8.10.2021 Fire

Just a drabble this time.


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“I could build a new fire tomorrow.”

“Why?” Onni looked up from the flames. “What’s wrong with this one?”

“You know what! You keep complaining about how it makes your eyes water. And Tuuri’s eyes are red too, sometimes. I can help with that.” Lalli raised his chin proudly. “Grandma taught me how to minimize smoke.”

Onni blinked at him.

Lalli frowned. “Wow, your eyes look really bad today. Maybe I should start tonight.”

How could Onni tell him that it wasn’t the smoke from the firepit that bothered him, but the smoke from the village? “Tomorrow will be fine.”

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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #77 on: October 08, 2021, 07:29:09 AM »
Prompted by John L's comment on what you get when you run the Finnish wiki page for Firecrest through Google translate.

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Sigrun turned to Mikkel, appalled. “Is Reykjavík always like this?”

“No …” Mikkel stared at the passing procession in amazement. “It wasn't like this the last time I was here. Though, to be fair, that was six years ago. Hey! Emil! What are you doing?”

Emil brought up the rear of the procession, enthusiastically waving a blazing torch like the rest of the crowd. Lalli trailed along behind, watching the flames warily. Both wore flower crowns woven from red flowers. The others in the procession all wore black trousers and white smocks with garish red tie-dyed patterns, along with their flower crowns.

“I've found my niche,” Emil answered, waving the torch dangerously near Mikkel's hair.

Catching Emil's wrist and holding his torch away from anyone's hair, Mikkel asked, “What kind of niche is this? Who are these people?”

“Can't you see? They're fire hippies!”

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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #78 on: October 08, 2021, 12:43:48 PM »
Again a great crop of the cute, the funny and the heart-wrenching!

Opaque, the party is brilliant! Although I’m afraid Onni doesn’t agree :)

Wave, the teddy bear is of the latter variety. It used to belong to the person who became the troll, right? Tehta, your baby!Lalli being all helpful definitely goes into the same basket!

And then… lwise, thanks for posting :) And Wave, Mikkel (no longer) at it again! A classic, and a clever interpretation of the prompt.
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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #79 on: October 08, 2021, 02:36:07 PM »
Although the comic Witchy is on hiatus it still needs some representation.
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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #80 on: October 08, 2021, 06:34:22 PM »
Fire

VVVRRRRRRRRMMMMMRRRMMM

Noise. Loud noise. Strange noise… it’s something we know of… a machine? What is machine? Machine was common, before. We look. Oh, pain! Big machine hurts! We retreat.

We investigate. Machine go this way. What is here? We look. A little thing! A fly? A pretty white and golden thing. Pretty fly. Fly with small, hot… fire? A… firefly? We knew fireflies, before. We look. We like the firefly, we look closer. Firefly go “shoo”.

We want to see better, we pick up the… firefly is fast. Oww, firefly makes more fire! Big fire! Legs burn, we hurt, we fall. Oh the pain! Pretty firefly hurt us. Hurt us bad. We must stop firefly.

Big fire burns, hurts! Fire spreads and consumes! Firefly run, we must stop firefly. We burn, we are on fire. Firefly still run. We are in pain, pain! We hurt, we burn!

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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #81 on: October 09, 2021, 03:12:53 AM »
Ya'll have been so busy, it does my heart good (some years I felt like the only one).  Hotakainens make great subject matter (as do all the crew).  You can dress 'em up but they'd really rather you didn't take them anywhere - except Tuuri.  How well I know the feeling of pretending your fantasy matches the reality!  Too much reality for Sigrun as well, meep, but yay! for her birthday party.
I only saw Kiki's Delivery Service for the first time earlier this year - excellent Gigi and Kiki! 

I found myself all set up with brush and ink for a Zoom portrait-sketching session, but when I went to get the link, I discovered they were not having a session this week.  What to do? 
I decided to have a go at Botober's (prompts generated by an AI) Day 8, the 8-legged cat.

I now present it here as also fulfilling YoinkTober Day 9 - Just One More Tweak.  I had another image entirely in mind, but the more I messed with the brush and ink, I found myself doing Just One More Tweak repeatedly!
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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #82 on: October 09, 2021, 06:00:10 AM »
jitter: that's a super interesting POV, both because it's the rare first person plural, and because of their skewed way of seeing the world. (Although weirdly they manage to spot that Emil is good-looking...)

opaque: A very cool fire effect, and I love his pose.

wave: wow, so anatomically interesting! I am glad to see that the cat seems very comfortable in their body.

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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #83 on: October 09, 2021, 06:05:38 AM »
9.10.2021 Just a Tweak

I really struggled to find something that would fit this prompt! (At least in a way that is friendly for general audiences: I have plenty of ideas for how various characters could tweak their implants in a cyberpunk AU...)
I ended up deciding to keep expressing my opinion of the expedition organizers. A low-effort 250 words.


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“I’ve had to tweak my recruitment plans a little.”

Taru’s voice sounded distorted. Siv turned the knob, hoping for better radio reception. “Tweak, you say?”

“That’s right. Do you want the bad news first, or the good news?”

“The bad news.”

“That mage I was hoping to recruit… Well, he’s made his lack of interest very clear.”

“The one with the Skald sister, right? Is she out as well?”

“Oh no, she’s very much in. So much so, that I have made her employment conditional on her finding us a replacement mage. And that’s the good news: she has already found one!”

“Really? What sort of person has she found?”

“Another relative, a cousin. He’s a bit less experienced, but, unlike my first pick, he is immune. And get this: he is both a mage--and a scout!”

“He sounds… very useful. What’s the catch?”

“He doesn’t know a word of any language other than Finnish. But it’ll be fine -- his cousin promises to translate. And to try to teach him some basic Icelandic.”

“Sounds ambitious. But I suppose this is the best we can expect… And you are right, this is good news. If you’ve secured a cheap Finnish scout, we can stop looking for one over here, and ask Trond to focus solely on medics. They’ll definitely need a medic.”

“Any more news on the cat?”

“I did talk to the kids, but they flatly refused to let Bosse go. And you know what they’re like.”

“I do indeed.”

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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #84 on: October 09, 2021, 09:39:09 AM »
Wave, that is one interesting cat! Or maybes even two? If it is a siamese twin type of occurrence? In any case I like how happy it seems to be.

Tehta, they don’t really see Emil as a good looking guy, it’s the beautiful clean(ish, but in comparison to everything else) white of his uniform and his golden hair. And his overall form reminds us of… something… from before? I’ve always thought them to be some sort of a hive, thus the we.

Why you scheming Evil Ones! Grrr!

Opaque, he is beautiful. Again, unknown source, but I like the picture and the composition. It works well on its own, with no background info at all.
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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #85 on: October 09, 2021, 10:32:25 AM »
Just a tweak

It wasn't a dream, it was a nightmare! Rowan was useless. He sung well, and when she managed to drive some confidence into him, very well. Nice voice. But his movements were clumsy and uncertain. Apologetic even.

Rowan was really tall and had great, bright red hair (redheads are just the greatest, right?), and pretty with his freckles (there were lots!) and make-up. But he was tripping over his own legs, and even more in his dress. He looked really awkward with the padding and stuck his arms out in a completely unnatural way. When she tried to tell him to relax and be natural, he blushed and stammered and told her he needed to get used to the dress. But it had been weeks already!

He hadn't been to acting school, but neither had the divas. And the agency had assured her he was some sort of a natural miracle child. And yes, the voice was good. But that wasn't enough. Even the chemistry she'd seen between him and Owen failed to materialize.

She and Lucky were sitting in high seats, watching Rowan and Owen sing together. Rowan was fiddling with the padding, and Owen was visibly straining to not explode at him. "Stop that! Stop being so, so annoying! And don't apologize! Not one more apology, you hear me?" Owen was seething on the stage.

"It's terrible. He's dead weight. We can't keep him in the role, and we can't afford to feed him, if he doesn’t contribute."

"But we have the contract for the entire season! We have to keep him on until spring." Lucky countered.

"Yes, but we were hard pushed for money to begin with. If we can't make this work, I don't think we can survive the season!"

"Make this work… hmmmm… I think I have an idea! Don't give up!" Lucky jumped up and ran off, yelling for Emile.

Emile was found in the front row, staring starry-eyed at Lawrence, who was sulking at the side of the set waiting for his turn. "Emile, Rowan, come with me. I need you to do something!" Lucky was off with the two boys.

After a considerable while they re-emerged. Rowan was dressed differently. He had a knee-length blue tunic, and a long golden orange vest open in the front. He wore these with a sash and boots. His makeup was mostly gone, and his hair was partially braided so that it still flowed but wasn't billowing anymore. Most particularly he was not wearing the dress, nor the padding.

Lucky gestured her over to the stage. "May I present to you, our co-star!"

"Hmm, I like it. He looks good. And definitely more relaxed. What do you think, Rowan?"

"Oh thank you, I like this more. I am sure I can now…"

"But. But! He's playing the leading lady."

"That's just it" Lucky's eyes were tinkling. "He's the co-star, and the love interest. But there is no particular reason that would have to be a lady. I tweaked the script just a little bit. And I must say Emile did very well with the costume with zero warning."

"Hmmm, you are right, he looks… great. And more relaxed. Ok, we can try."

It worked like a charm. While Rowan still wasn't exactly smooth in all his movements, he now appeared young and innocent instead of awkward and clumsy.

"Well, I hope this helps you be less annoying" was all Owen said, but he almost smiled. Owen!

Soon they were singing again, and yes, the chemistry was there. The dream was right around the corner now. It was just a tweak, but it had worked wonders. Lucky was her little miracle worker, and Emile wasn't half bad as a stylist and costumer. What a most best company!
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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #86 on: October 09, 2021, 10:55:20 PM »
Whoops! Almost forgot to post today.
(Just a Tweak)
Engine Repair

Make a turn here
Make a tweak there
A cold engine stairs back at her
It's not a gear
It's not from wear
Tries to convince her mind to stir
She's feeling fear
She's feeling bare
Her thoughts grow darker. Her eyes blur
Are they still near?
Will they still dare?
Nothing done will make this car purr
This is all clear
This had repair
Yes! The engine begins to whirr
A sudden cheer
An engines blair
This is the sound she would prefer
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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #87 on: October 10, 2021, 12:00:32 AM »
Love it! A Tuuri trifecta!
The continuing saga of the opera (more than a tweak, maybe, but an excellent solution), the recruitment issues, and most especially the coaxing of the Cattank.

Edit: oh, I had the latest comment.  Rather than start a new reply, I'll just carry on, then.

Day 10 - Theme Music - Something stirring on the trombone, definitely, but couldn't choose quite which...


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I do play brass but I've never played trombone, although I love it sincerely.  There is a bit in the finale portion of "A Tale as Yet Untold", a brass band work by Philip Sparke, where the trombones take to a heroic theme, and it really demands a stand-up.  Here's a rendition of it (no visuals in the video), by Eikanger-Bjørsvik brass band.  Long-suffering Readers of my fics may remember one, Abide With Me, that I set in a brass band room in Norway, just around the corner from Dalsnes?  This is the band that inspired that, in the fine form that earned them European Championships.  As with all brass pieces, the dynamic range is huge, beware with your headphones.
Final movement starts at 14.42, trombones take the theme at 18.20. 
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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #88 on: October 10, 2021, 03:12:39 AM »
10.10.2021 Theme Music

I guess today is officially a trombone day now. Wave's awesome second picture can be seen as an illustration for this 150-word snippet. Only with different characters and fewer sunglasses.

Post-canon, obviously.


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"Good morning, Mikkel."

"Best morning, Emil. Is what we're apparently saying now. You here to see Sigrun?"

"That's right. Is she around?"

"Yes. I'll get her for you. But first: is your business with her official, or unofficial?"

"I've got a report to deliver, so… Official? Although you know she-- What the Hel is that?"

"Trombone. A musical instrument. Part of my new job."

"Oh, right, she did fire you last week."

"Well, pillow-fluffing is not one of my strengths. I did warn her."

"So what's the new job?"

"The exact job title seems unclear. But… You know that pile of sheet music the scouts found last week? She liked the name of the piece so much she wants me to play it whenever she does anything official. So, hang on." Mikkel raised the instrument to his lips, and played a few bars. "She should be here in a moment."




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Re: YoinkTober 2021
« Reply #89 on: October 10, 2021, 03:22:05 AM »
Jitter: Glad to see this story continue, and yes, this tweak is better in every way. (But Reynir could still use the padding, just... elsewhere.)

Opaque: very clever idea and rhyme scheme.

Wave: Very cool choice. I love the use of color. (Although I must admit the first guy looks like Commander Riker to me...)
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