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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1215 on: May 17, 2023, 07:08:08 AM »
Questions, more and more
about your deep and thoughtful
awesome worldbuilding
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1216 on: May 17, 2023, 08:51:26 AM »
awesome worldbuilding
a basis for a good plot
not every story has
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Fate gives all of us three teachers, three friends, three enemies, and three great loves in our lives. But these twelve are always disguised, and we never know which one is which until we've loved them, left them, or fought them.

~ Gregory David Roberts

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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1217 on: May 17, 2023, 10:56:47 AM »
Not every story
Has to revamp your whole life.
Some are just for fun.

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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1218 on: May 17, 2023, 11:40:53 AM »
Quote from: thorny on May 17, 2023, 10:56:47 AM
Not every story
Has to revamp your whole life.
Some are just for fun.

[first line amended to correct syllable count per line]
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Fate gives all of us three teachers, three friends, three enemies, and three great loves in our lives. But these twelve are always disguised, and we never know which one is which until we've loved them, left them, or fought them.

~ Gregory David Roberts

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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1219 on: May 17, 2023, 10:50:22 PM »
Some are just for fun
Others are more for practice
In between chapters
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1220 on: May 17, 2023, 11:14:21 PM »
In between chapters
May come cool info pages
Or maybe after
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1221 on: May 18, 2023, 03:22:49 AM »
"Or maybe after
The storms subside you can
Go", said the captain.
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1222 on: May 18, 2023, 05:43:04 AM »
"Go," said the Captain
"Bid the soldiers shoot. Smartly, now.
"And end the battle."
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1223 on: May 18, 2023, 05:52:37 AM »
Now end the battle
That escalated quickly
Haiku chain is weird
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1224 on: May 18, 2023, 07:57:21 AM »
Haiku chain is weird
Twisting and turning in ways
So hard to follow
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1225 on: May 18, 2023, 09:17:13 AM »
So hard to follow
But in different fashions
Also hard to lead.
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1226 on: May 18, 2023, 02:11:33 PM »
Also hard to lead ...
But not to iron, or stone.
Mohs peculiar!

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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1227 on: May 18, 2023, 04:08:32 PM »
Mohs peculiar
There used to be mhos too but
They're called siemens now
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1228 on: May 18, 2023, 07:06:12 PM »
They're called Siemens now
Once they were Siemens-Schuckert
And built fighter planes
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1229 on: May 18, 2023, 10:08:36 PM »
They built fighter planes
That didn't need three stacked wings
Such a pity, that.
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