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Jitter

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Haiku chain
« on: June 17, 2021, 04:47:46 PM »
Haiku chain is here
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Let your words flow free

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Haiku chain! Build on the last line of the previous haiku, or otherwise reference it! If the chain quiets down, feel free to restart it by adding a new haiku.

Note, these can be silly haikus, we don’t really care about the traditional rules. We do tend to stick to the 5-7-5 syllable meter, and if you can add the “change”, a difference of sentiment or a surprise, then great! Nature references and even kigos are of course very welcome, but lack thereof will not be frowned upon. In fact, pretty much nothing will be frowned upon! Just add your own! It’s for fun!

I put this in the General Board but it can of course be about SSSS!

« Last Edit: June 17, 2021, 04:52:28 PM by Jitter »
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #1 on: June 17, 2021, 05:20:51 PM »
"Fly, be free!" Mork cried.
Readers of a certain age
know what happened next.

Truly what we wish -
may all the Hotakainens
gain their sweet closure.
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #2 on: June 17, 2021, 05:30:33 PM »
Gain your sweet closure
Rid of monsters free of pain
Lie still in my arms
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #3 on: June 17, 2021, 05:52:01 PM »
Lie still in my arms
As roses bloom on your chest
Rain will hide the tears


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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #4 on: June 17, 2021, 06:56:42 PM »
Rain will hide the tears
Following from the last words
See a new moment

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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #5 on: June 17, 2021, 11:59:38 PM »
See a new moment
Drifting in benighted skies
Around you, clouds clear

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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #6 on: June 18, 2021, 01:36:10 AM »
Around you, clouds clear
As petrichor fills the air
Deep breaths in and out
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #7 on: June 18, 2021, 05:19:07 AM »
Deep breaths in and out
Ready to cross the river
Overcome your fear
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #8 on: June 18, 2021, 05:28:04 AM »
Best learn how to swim
Better than crossing bridges
Trolls lurk underneath!
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #9 on: June 18, 2021, 06:17:22 AM »
Trolls lurk underneath
Your footsteps carry me on
The tranquil dream sea
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #10 on: June 18, 2021, 09:49:25 AM »
Calm, dark sea of dreams
Where a shadow looms above
These waves on the blue
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #11 on: June 18, 2021, 05:56:36 PM »
Deep waves on the blue,
rising up above them all
Luonto, stand tall
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #12 on: June 18, 2021, 06:04:55 PM »
Luonto, stand tall
Protection against the sea
Seems to work for now
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #13 on: June 19, 2021, 03:23:25 AM »
Seems to work for now
to take one line and twist it
y'all having fun?
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Re: Haiku chain
« Reply #14 on: June 19, 2021, 07:09:22 AM »
y’all having fun?
crafting haikus with my friends?
I know I sure am
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