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Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« on: June 24, 2020, 01:56:39 AM »
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 1: Birth

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Welcome to our second ever Chapter Break Filler! As Minna goes on break, us Minnions are kicking into action, and Yeethaw_Gang brings us our first work in response to the (rather suitable) prompt of Birth.

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Thanks very much to Yeethaw_Gang for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post your own works down below!

Also a reminder - we still have two prompts left for the taking, so if you want to claim either of them, go over to the organization thread and send me a message.
« Last Edit: June 25, 2020, 11:58:19 PM by Keep Looking »
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #1 on: June 24, 2020, 03:22:32 AM »
Ooh, I really like this impactful poem with its usage of repetition!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #2 on: June 24, 2020, 06:15:37 AM »
Awww, under the pustulating skin of a newborn troll, good one.  I like the set-out too. Way to go, Yeethaw!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #3 on: June 24, 2020, 06:22:51 AM »
What a beautiful, sad, haunting poem! The black leaking from underneath sets the athmosphere even better!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #4 on: June 24, 2020, 08:57:38 AM »
When the world grows dark,
after sunset ends the day.
Birth is the starlight.
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #5 on: June 24, 2020, 11:07:59 AM »
Quote from: Keep Looking on June 24, 2020, 01:56:39 AM
Chapter Break Filler

.._.._..

Prompt 1: Birth

.._.._..


Welcome to our second ever Chapter Break Filler! As Minna goes on break, us Minnions are kicking into action, and Yeethaw_Gang brings us our first work in response to the (rather suitable) prompt of Birth.

Spoiler: show
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Thanks very much to Yeethaw_Gang for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post your own works down below!

Also a reminder - we still have two prompts left for the taking, so if you want to claim either of them, go over to the organization thread and send me a message.

I wander what have happened, because I see a white square instead of a picture or whatever it is supposed to be there...
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #6 on: June 24, 2020, 11:51:28 AM »
Thanks yeethaw for a chilling piece, and midwestmutt for a gentler one! Strong start!

Annuli, the work is a picture containing a poem. The Forum doesn’t store actual pictures, they are in fact links to other services. Sometimes a user has something preventing them from seeing some of the pics, for example my work computer doesn’t show pictures that are links to imgur because it’s classified as “pornography”...  which some of the content may be, but hardly everything is. But, no voting chibis for mm from work!

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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #7 on: June 24, 2020, 02:40:21 PM »
Okey, thank you, Jitter, I got the problem. My computer has an app that blocks everything that looks just a little bit like “pornography”, so… maybe that’s why
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #8 on: June 24, 2020, 03:10:59 PM »
Yeethaw your poem is so eerie and somber and gooood! and a very lovely haiku midwestmutt!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #9 on: June 24, 2020, 03:16:12 PM »
Yeethaw_Gang, I like this very much! An unexpectedly dark take on the prompt. I think good art generally violates expectations in some way, great job.
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #10 on: June 24, 2020, 03:25:57 PM »
Quote from: midwestmutt on June 24, 2020, 08:57:38 AM
When the world grows dark,
after sunset ends the day.
Birth is the starlight.

I love me a good haiku. Very nice!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #11 on: June 24, 2020, 04:41:49 PM »
Oooo Midwestmutt, well-crafted!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #12 on: June 24, 2020, 10:28:52 PM »
Thanks everyone! I had a lot of fun writing the poem, and especially doing the little background.

midwestmutt your poem is wonderful. I love me a good haiku, and I'm always a sucker for stars and space, even if mentioned briefly.
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #13 on: June 25, 2020, 12:57:16 AM »
Those are both lovely, and very suitable!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #14 on: June 25, 2020, 01:27:11 AM »
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 2: Growth

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Our second prompt of Growth is brought to us by none other than wavewright62!

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Ingrid Pedersen has become a much-greater-effort hippie since the Rash came to Norway.  She was the one who instituted composting and other ways to increase food production in Dalsnes, but every year is still a struggle.



May all of your tomatoes grow as impressively as Ingrid's! Thanks very much to Wavewright for today's piece, and if any of you feel inspired by this prompt, feel free to share your own works down below!
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