Author Topic: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2  (Read 19978 times)

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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #15 on: June 25, 2020, 02:05:40 AM »
Woahhhh, Wave. That's really pretty. I love the 'much-greater-effort' joke!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #16 on: June 25, 2020, 06:44:18 AM »
Lovely Art I see, very talented you are!

yeethaw, a quite unexpected, but equally fascinating take on that prompt. I would be thinking on babies and such...

midwestmutt, a great haiku!

Wave, another unexpected and fascinating approach! As on Birth, I would be thinking about a toddler... It seems that my thoughts are a lot human oriented... :)

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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #17 on: June 25, 2020, 09:33:33 AM »
I identify with Ingrid, I've been doing some heavy-duty gardening. The dirty knees are a great touch, wave!

For the past 5 months or so I've been trying to write a daily haiku, here are some recent gardening-related ones by way of a secondary contribution on the growth theme, inspired by wave's lovely Ingrid:

warm day with showers
dig, rake, and level, plant seeds
squash many blackflies

shovel and rake soil
drop seeds in furrows, tamp down
hope for fall harvest

sudden summer heat
haul water to the garden
bright green shoots poke out
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #18 on: June 25, 2020, 11:07:05 AM »
How did I miss that Haiku yesterday, midwestmutt!? Anyways, it´s really nice!

Wave this will definitly be my new headcanon XoX

And Vulpes, I think your Haikus fit the situation really well! I can practically see the scenes in front of my eyes...

I also didn´t expect the takes on these first two prompts the way they were, but I second Vulpes, art is supposed to be surprising, isn´t it? And both were amazing  :sparkle:
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #19 on: June 25, 2020, 12:01:45 PM »
In my time of life,
one thing i know about growth:
it's never too late.
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #20 on: June 25, 2020, 01:03:59 PM »
Wave, great Ingrid! It’s suddenly quite different hen you have no one but yourselves to count on!

Wonderful haikus, midwestmutt and Vulpes!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #21 on: June 25, 2020, 04:54:59 PM »
Ooo, more loverly haiku! Vulpes, the gardening brings out such a poetic frame of mind, doesn't it?  Midwestmutt, your growth one is sampler-worthy.

I forgot to mention on my image that it is based on the Rider-Waite tarot deck image for the Seven of Pentacles.  My favourite source lists this as Anxiety About Produce, wondering whether your hard work will bear fruit. 

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I originally had more scrawny green tomatoes, but opted to make them more pentacle-ish.
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #22 on: June 25, 2020, 05:27:08 PM »
midwestmutt, this one´s even better!  XoX

And wave, that fits very well! I don´t know a whole lot about Tarot, so thanks for the source.  :)
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #23 on: June 26, 2020, 12:39:24 AM »
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 3: Smile

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For today's prompt of Smile, our piece is brought to us by our very own Róisín!

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SMILE:

“Oh look, the baby wants to hold my hand!”
Cries Saku, as the tiny fingers close
Around his thumb. The little hand is strong.
For a baby, strangely so. He shivers, once.

But all seems well: a perfect little girl.
Her hair is silver, her sharp eyes are grey,
The grey of stormclouds. Strange, he thinks, how much,
Her slender form reminds him of a blade.

What is he thinking? She is just a babe!
But somewhere in the hollows of his mind
Some voice cries out, some knowledge must be seen.
What name would fit such an uncanny child?

And suddenly he knows. He knows and Sees.
She is the First. The magic that he feels
Flowing through fire and water, earth and air,
Now flows in life, in human flesh and bone.

Her name is Ensi. First in a long, long while
To live in magic. His first and only child,
She may yet save them all! Her fingers loosen.
He looks into her eyes. They share a smile.

My piece for ‘Smile’. Saku understands Ensi. Her name means ‘First’.


Thanks very much to Róisín for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post your works down below!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #24 on: June 26, 2020, 12:51:18 AM »
Indeed, Róisín, I headcanon that the magical ability came from Saku's side of the family. (Although I wonder if he wanted a lot of children and didn't get them, for whatever reason.) Lovely.
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #25 on: June 26, 2020, 02:48:04 AM »
Thanks Wavewright! My headcanon for Saku is that he is a mage of the sensing/blessing/protecting kind, more passive/receptive than the kind that can use magic to actively fight. And that Ensi is more of the type that can actively wield her magic as a weapon. Dunno how it is in the Minnaverse, but in those our-world magic systems familiar to me there is quite a strong distinction between the two kinds, with the passive sort being far more common.
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #26 on: June 26, 2020, 06:23:26 AM »
Róisín, thank you for this lovely piece! It’s touching and describes well something that could very well be canon!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #27 on: June 26, 2020, 07:53:53 AM »
Smile

He was always a happy child. As a baby he smiled early and often. As a toddler he was absolutely charming with his puff of bright red hair and emerging freckles. His outlook was always happily interested in everything, and he was full of expectation, always anticipating the best outcome. “Mom, what is this plant called? Why does it grow here? Why does it have such leaves?” His curiosity was endless.

Even when something unfortunate happened, he still saw some good in it. “Mom, my arm really really hurts! But now I know what it feels like to be stung by a bee!” “I didn’t know what I look like under my skin. Now I do! Does everyone look so red inside or is it because of my hair?”

I should have been more strict with him, told him off his foolhardy stunts. I should have made it clearer that things may go badly! But his questions always made me smile. Oh, it was impossible to stay mad at that child.

And now he’s lost in the Silent World! It’s all my fault! I should have raised him more careful! Will I ever see his precious smile again?
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #28 on: June 26, 2020, 09:33:16 AM »
I made you smile
Small things make me smile.
The big things leave me in awe.
Oh, a popcorn fart.
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #29 on: June 26, 2020, 09:55:17 AM »
Róisín, have i gushed about how much I love your writing??? Because I do!! It's really good. Also is that a narrative poem I see before me?? That's amazing!!

Jitter, oh god oh my I can feel the panic. Absolutely riveting and a dark but rather interesting take on the prompt.

midwestmutt, okay yeah you made me laugh out loud. I did not expect that. Your haikus are always so well crafted!

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