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Title: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on September 21, 2021, 05:13:28 AM
Hey everyone!  It's nearly October, and that means....YoinkTober is upon us!  For those unfamiliar with the concept, this is our Forum's variant of the InkTober challenge, where you are challenged to produce a fanwork every day in October, generally following a series of prompts.  Classically, this is an art challenge, focused on expanding your technique, but we expand the brief to include our wordsmiths as well.  The daily work does not have to be large or elaborate, just an attempt to take a moment for development of that part of your brain.  The daily prompts leave you all heaps of interpretive latitude.

This year the fandom, our Forum and its denizens have been through significant change and upheaval.  The Forum itself has responded with a major re-organisation, including expanding our community to appreciate works from fandoms beyond those created by Minna Sundberg.  Our YoinkTober theme this year therefore focuses on:
Transformation and Change

Prompts:

1 - Magical (Girl) Transformation
2 - Change of Season
3 - Masks
4 - Destruction
5 - New Clothes
6 - Familiar
7 - Sigrun's Birthday
8 - Fire
9 - Just a Tweak
10 - Theme Music
11 - Both is Good
12 - In disguise
13 - Food
14 - Character Growth
15 - Family
16 - Unpredictable
17 - Marriage
18 - Rearranged
19 - The Moon
20 - One Door Opens, Another Closes
21 - Birth
22 - Death
23 - Right in Front of Your Nose
24 - Water
25 - Community
26 - Tried & True
27 - Glow-up
28 - Made to Order
29 - Judgement
30 - Cats
31 - Costume

Good luck to all!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on September 21, 2021, 08:40:43 AM
Thank you Wave! I’m in, although I won’t make a 100% commitment to do every single day, but I definitely want to do more than I currently am. So a fun challenge is just what I need!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on September 21, 2021, 08:56:11 AM
Oooh I like those prompts! I´ll definitly participate again, though hold it like I did last year and not only draw SSSS-art, but also other things. I just like to have the variety. ^-^ But I´ll be sure to post the SSSS-ones
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on September 21, 2021, 02:26:15 PM
Mirasol, please post all of them! The idea is to transform and change, also our fandom :) SSSS won’t be here forever. Actually this is probably the last YoinkTober we are having unless we manage to create enough content that doesn’t depend on the comic continuing.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on September 21, 2021, 08:17:29 PM
Mirasol, please post all of them! The idea is to transform and change, also our fandom :) SSSS won’t be here forever. Actually this is probably the last YoinkTober we are having unless we manage to create enough content that doesn’t depend on the comic continuing.

Agreed - Mirasol (and everybody), as the top post says, all fandoms or non-fandom-aligned original works are valid for this challenge. 
(And as such, I ....don't see why this should be the last?  Shoot, check out the Lord of the Rings and Silmarillion fandoms sometime, for an example of a fandom that exists and generates new fanarts loooong after the work is finished and the creator *ahem* leaves the fandom.)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on September 22, 2021, 04:22:17 AM
(And as such, I ....don't see why this should be the last?  Shoot, check out the Lord of the Rings and Silmarillion fandoms sometime, for an example of a fandom that exists and generates new fanarts loooong after the work is finished and the creator *ahem* leaves the fandom.)

Indeed! Hence “unless”. My point was that we must evolve to avoid dwindling down. And we will! Let this YoinkTober be one proof of many!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Róisín on September 23, 2021, 12:02:34 AM
As time and the exigencies of life permit I shall try to put in something.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on September 23, 2021, 11:02:50 AM
Wave, those prompts are excellent! Thank you so much! Also excellent choice on the theme! ;)

They are all so good that I'm having trouble choosing one (or two), but I'll think about it. Anyway I'll try to do small things for most days.

This is going to be fun!  <3
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on September 30, 2021, 02:47:27 PM
Soon. Soon! SOON!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 01, 2021, 11:05:16 AM

Content warning: snakes

1.10.2021 Magical (girl) transformation

It had been almost a year and a half since Sointu's magic was discovered. A young man who introduced himself as a noita had been to Kaijatsaari a couple of times to meet her. He had left her some books, but Sointu didn't seem very interested in them. Every now and then Joni asked what she had learned, but she would roll her eyes and say that the books were a complete waste of time.

Last winter, when her vipers had gone to sleep (under the house, much to the dismay of some of the villagers, but hey, a noita was definitely a good thing to have, so they had to cut her some slack!) Sointu had been so bored that she had actually read through the books, and she had taken to singing songs of her own fashioning. Sometimes they sounded like something from the Kalevala, but sometimes there was so much hissing it sounded completely alien. In either case, while some only left her frustrated, some of the songs seemed to work. The fish catch was good, the cats had many live kittens, and the winter storms were severe, but they lost no one all year.

While Joni couldn’t' even begin to understand how it worked, he had some tiny insight on what was going on. Ever since that first encounter, he had felt that the adders… approved of him. He had never felt threatened by them, even when they got all agitated hissing (later it turned out this was very useful, because it meant something was nearby that needed being disposed of).

This feeling was not shared by everyone in the village. Most people tried to be friendly and polite, but it was clear they shuddered at sight of the vipers, and it didn't really feel very welcoming. Some actively shunned Sointu, and some even the entire family. No one had been in a hurry to move out of the island, though. Happy to accept the good fortune, of course!

***

September was ending, and the vipers were sluggish. Sointu, on the other hand, was overwrought. She worried about the snakes, but more about the long winter months without their company.
"Dad, why must they sleep all winter?"
"Well, see for yourself, they need the sleep. They are all groggy already."
"Yes, but why? They tell me it's because of coldness. But if they were in here with us, and we kept the fire going all the time, they wouldn't get too cold, would they?"
"Um, dear, I don't think that would work. Firstly, I don't think mom and your brothers would agree. But also, I'm sure the snakes…
"Vipers!"
"Yes, the vipers, they need their sleep. They are built that way."
"They tell me the same. "We cannot live in your housssssee. We will wake up in ssspring." But I don’t' want that! It's not fair!"

***

By the first of October, all of the vipers were under the house. Sointu was sulking on her bed, facing the wall.
"Come on honey, you must get up! We can't lie around all day!" Joni was cheering her daughter along. But she didn't answer, beyond a quiet hissing sound.
"Come on lazypants. Your chores don't wait for your friends to wake up!"
Joni grabbed Sointu's shoulder and shook her. The girl felt limp, and cold. Joni got worried. Finally, Sointu seemed to come around. "What isss it, dad? Let me ssssssleep… Wake me in the sssssspring…"

Now Joni was alarmed for his daughter and shook her vigorously. "Sointu! Are you all right? Don't tell me you are going to hibernate?"
"Whyyyy not… sssspring is better… ssssstay warm…"

Sointu opened her eyes. Just for a second, Joni was staring at vertical slits, where he daughter's eyes should be. A hissing sound was coming from her mouth. Joni yelped and let go of her, even though he was still strangely more surprised than actually horrified. "Sointu!"

"Aww dad! Winter is boring! And I hate chores!" Sointu sat up, yawning, and glared at her dad with her perfectly normal blue eyes.



Here’s the first one on them, Playtime: https://ssssforum.com/index.php?topic=1130.75

And here’s a photo with some vipers (not by me!) taken in 2017 near Tampere. Don’t click if you don’t want to see snakes

https://www.aamulehti.fi/kotimaa/art-2000007410696.html


Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 01, 2021, 11:37:26 AM
Ooh, I really like it! I've wondered about that particular mage before... I hope she figured out some way to cope with the winter in her much later job posting.

And she's definitely a magical girl, who has a transformation, on October first of all days! You really nailed it.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 01, 2021, 11:46:25 AM
1.10.2021 Magical (girl) transformation

I think I'll be posting a lot of drabbles.  This time I accidentally wrote two. The second one might be the silliest thing I have ever written.


DRABBLE #1 (Based on a moment in Adventure One)

Spoiler: show
Luna used to love running, alone or with humans. Now it feels wrong. Everything hurts when she runs: her skin, her back, the new limbs that make her faster. But her hunger drives her on, makes her run after the human. Hunting, not playing. That, too, feels wrong.

When the light hits her, her pain deepens. Sunlight is wrong, too -- there are so many wrongs -- and now, somehow, they come out right. Luna’s mind clears, just moments before her teeth sink into her prey.

She turns her head. Her teeth bite air.

“Good girl,” she remembers a beloved voice saying.



DRABBLE #2 (Sorry.  He's magical and it's a transformation, OK? Might be continued later.)

Spoiler: show
 sputters at the sight before him: Reynir, a vision in blue-green. “Is that… a dress you’re wearing?”

“Yes!” Reynir’s skirts fan out as he spins. “Do you like it?

“Hmh. Is this an Icelandic custom? For men to wear dresses to weddings?”

Reynir laughs. “No! But one of Guðrún’s bridesmaids is stuck in quarantine, and it’d be a shame to waste the dress. The embroidery alone took months! So I offered to try it!” He runs a hand down his side, sighing. "Pity I don't have the hips for it. But, wait! You might! And you’re the right height!"



Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 01, 2021, 12:39:02 PM
Oh no tehta, sad spiderdog is sad  :'( :emil:
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 01, 2021, 12:44:09 PM
Ooh, I really like it! I've wondered about that particular mage before... I hope she figured out some way to cope with the winter in her much later job posting.

And she's definitely a magical girl, who has a transformation, on October first of all days! You really nailed it.

Luckily also the grosslings are greatly hindered by winter!

The first of October was a lucky coincidence. I had this idea for a few days now, and today when I was writing, I checked when do the vipers actually start hibernation. A traditional wisdom has it they go September 21st, so late Sep till 1st Oct worked well. I almost missed it and had it down to late September first:)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 01, 2021, 01:48:49 PM
Oh no tehta, sad spiderdog is sad  :'( :emil:

It was sad! But her soul is at peace now.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 01, 2021, 04:17:41 PM
Wow, I love these!
I can see poor petulant Sointu, and the whole set-up, so well-imagined.  I love me some worldbuilding.
*watch me click the link ssoooo fast to sssee the pretty snakesss*

Oh, the spiderdog, nuuuu
(I wonder why we haven't seen much about sunlight and trolls in Adv. 2. This was one of the more inspiring snippets of worldbuilding surrounding the Rashed we got.)
I liked the 2nd drabble too, and it's totally in character.  Lanky Reynir could pull off a swishy dress, and would be game enough to stand in to be helpful.  Can Onni?  Hrm, hrm.  :onni:


*shuffles feet* I did a YoinkTober thing, too.  But... it definitely falls into the "thanks I hate it" category.  I was contemplating a redraw of a SSSS/Miraculous Ladybug mashup I did a couple of years ago (Emil transforms into Chat Noir), but I've had a hard working week.  I sat down and my mind travelled to a not-particularly-magical transformation we saw earlier this year. 
So, yeah.  Apologies, folks.

Once she turned 15, Lavender wilfully trashed her rating
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/178217443737600000/893434144405729290/SPOILER_20211001_211801.jpg?width=226&height=300)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 01, 2021, 05:47:16 PM
Oh, wow. It's already October?
*Frantically sketches something dumb*
Um... There! A magical girl!

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/derzxj9-36883394-0077-401d-9cf4-d9bf2bb398ec.jpg/v1/fill/w_600,h_1200,q_75,strp/hairy_magical_girl_by_opaque0_derzxj9-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTIwMCIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzdkODFhOTEyLTg0YTUtNDJlMS1hYWRkLTYxZmFmNjY4N2RmZFwvZGVyenhqOS0zNjg4MzM5NC0wMDc3LTQwMWQtOWNmNC1kOWJmMmJiMzk4ZWMuanBnIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTYwMCJ9XV0sImF1ZCI6WyJ1cm46c2VydmljZTppbWFnZS5vcGVyYXRpb25zIl19.S24csFY3f95JkoXAZhpzUV4GyYQsWC5qAtWel5RTC50)
Okay, it's not a transformation but I couldn't resist the thought of a magical girl Mikkel. Could also work for "New clothes " too.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 02, 2021, 03:27:08 AM
b-b-bwahahaHAHAHA what a Mikkel!

(https://imgur.com/BxXjLd3.png)

My Day 2 choice is much less controversial.  For Change of Seasons, many of us mark the passing of seasons in the garden, using our tools to prepare plants, pots and beds.  (ink drawing of a trowel in front of crumpled dirty garden gloves)
(https://64.media.tumblr.com/814fdf7907f94baf26bba9fd29693e01/57c2b43f52a53a7e-e1/s2048x3072/5a308aa21c68463f5469cf1515f6b50932800586.jpg)

(I may start making bundle posts with more than one day's offering.  We'll see.)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 02, 2021, 05:03:29 AM
wavewright62, I did enjoy the bunny picture but
Spoiler: show
when I first saw it I thought it was meant to be a drawing of Minna. Is that too mean for this forum? I can delete.
And would it bother you if I said that the trowel and gloves are a bit spooooky? I feel like the fingers could climb out of hiding and attack me at any moment. (glovetroll?)

Opaque. What can I say about Mikkel. Except that his fashion choices are... bold. The underboob window! The armlets! The skirt that covers nothing! He's just standing there, waiting for our reaction...

Would bundle posts be better etiquette? I am thinking about trying to set a rhythm where I do a response post, and then my own content post. (Daily for now, possibly much rarer as work revs up.)

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 02, 2021, 05:12:57 AM
2.10.2021 Change of Season

A double drabble this time. As you see, I used the prompt as a... starting point, more than anything. Emilalli warning. Appropriate for general audiences, but horrible fluff. Ugh, I need a black coffee.


Spoiler: show
Lalli clearly failed to grasp the seriousness of the situation. “But it’s normal,” he said. “Hair turns grey. The way some leaves turn yellow, or red, in autumn.”

“You and your obsession with trees…” Emil leaned closer to the mirror, inspecting his head for more flashes of traitorous grey. “But wait! Trees lose their leaves. Will I lose my hair?”

“Maybe. Trond did, remember?”

“I do, yes. It looked horrible.” Emil sighed dramatically. “Could you still love me if I looked like Trond?”

Lalli gave this some thought. “The age difference would be weird, now. But one day, sure. I am getting older too, you know.”

“It’s not the same! You look exactly like your grandmother, who looked amazing even in her seventies. It’s that ridiculous Hotakainen bone structure, and the ashy hair, which doesn’t change much with age. I, meanwhile, am known for… this.” Emil indicated his crowning glory. “Who would I even be, without it?”

“An idiot? Same as now?” Lalli moved closer and slid his arms around Emil. Their eyes met in the mirror. “But you just said it yourself: if your hair turns grey, you will look more like a Hotakainen. Would you really mind that?”
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 02, 2021, 08:45:15 AM
Awwww  :lalli: <3 :emil: that is so sweet! And exactly on topic! The prompts are just that, prompts to act as a starting point.

Single or bundle posts is up to you! In the chapter breaks single posts are the ”norm”, in the long YoinkTober some do bundles. But in my opinion single posts are better because there is more often something to see! Although I realise I proooobably check more often than most.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 02, 2021, 02:46:11 PM
Here, have a cracker. I was going to post some autumn photos, but then this happened.

Change of Season

It was a disaster. None of the players had deemed it suitable for their dignity to appear in time. No, that was not right, there was someone standing at the edge of the stage, looking lost. “Um, am I in the right place? I think I was told to come here and…” his voice trailed away.
“And who the frack are you?”
“I, um, my name is Rowan and the agency lady told me to… I’m sorry. Can I help you with anything?”
”Stay put. Don’t touch anything. Or lick anything.  Anything!”
”Ah, um, ok, I’ll just wait here then?”

She stormed of, yelling at the top of her lungs “Lucky? Lucky!! Where are you?”
The writer appeared  “Yes?”
”Run the cast by me again. There’s a redhead at my stage!”
“Readhead? That must be the new leading lady then!”
“Well, didn’t look like a lady to me… Michael? Michael!”

Her personal assistant came running.
“Where is everyone? Where have you been?”
“I was merely making sure Lawrence gets dressed”
“It’s not a dress rehearsal! We are just getting started!“
“No, I mean they weren’t dressed at all. He and that stylist of his. But he’s coming now.”
She looked at her assistant quizzically, but he was perfectly deadpan. “I hope you mean he is arriving. Very soon.”

Returning to the stage she saw Owen had turned up. The noob Rowan was trying to greet him in a friendly way, but unsurprisingly Owen was merely glaring at him. What is it with these people? Why does a lovely singing voice always come in such a difficult package?

Finally everyone was on stage. A little later Emile the stylist had been removed from stage, and they could at long last start the first rehearsal of the season. Change of season was always nerve wracking. The singers were not prepared, the shoestring budget was enough to cover half of their needs, and the divas always hated the play at first.

But somehow she always got it to work in the end, with her most best director and producer skills. It would be great this year too. The new leading lady was a total noob, but she already saw Rowan and Owen had chemistry. But when Owen and Lawrence sang, it was like a dream. Almost like the stage had been transported to another world. It would be another successful season for the company.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 02, 2021, 04:30:50 PM
I would say that writings to the prompts would be better as one-a-day.  I find it's less daunting for me to read on-screen.  For images, the only reasons I consider bundled postings are a) when I skip days, and b) there have been years where I feel awkward posting daily, if there are only a few of us participating. 
There is not an 'etiquette' to whether you post daily or bundled.

I admit the trowel was the initial subject, then I added in the gloves where they were (hadn't even included them in the pencils), hence their less-than-artful arrangement.  They detracted from the clarity, but ...post, and move on.

Spoiler: lavender • show
Subtext? Moi? *flutters eyelashes and sips beverage*
Yes, it was intended, and admittedly somewhat dodgy on my part, hence the apologies.


Now - for the writings themselves - splendid stuff!

Aging gracefully is an art, and not everyone can do it, but I love the interplay here tehta.  Lalli especially is written in character.  Possibly unpopular opinion: Emil would look stunning bald.  He has those dramatic eyebrows over startlingly-coloured eyes, and a glorious nose to hold it all together.  The prospect of his famous golden locks turning white is also good.  Little does he know, but I'm glad Lalli expresses it.

Jitter - nice interpretation of 'season', so clever.  Singing 'like a dream' o-HO.  The names of the cast's doppelgangers are cute.  But... what is the Director's name, may I ask?
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 02, 2021, 05:54:56 PM
Thanks Wave! The director is no one else than the most best Ms Victoria!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 03, 2021, 01:16:22 AM
Any fandom includes video games right?
I went with a not completely ridiculous post this time.

(Changes in Seasons)
The Mountain Dwellers

High on the once green mountain valley
Above all that had grown when spring came
Freezing winds rise from the alley

After the strongest fell
Our homes became our cell
Piles of snow amass
Whirlwinds too cold to pass

Waiting here for a light
To banish the cold night
One to see the unseen
A new strength we can lean

Restless spirits from the mountain path
Who have come together. Who can see.
To calm the mountain peak from it's wrath

With those who folded in
And those who have fallen
They progress through the cold
To reach the frozen hold

After forever there
Sudden warmth fills the air
The wind dies. The ice thaws.
Fully done with their cause

The new spring awoke a single bird
So the spirits left without a word
They have more to do. Or so I've heard.

Inspired by:
The Legend of Zelda- Majoras Mask
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 03, 2021, 02:48:45 AM
Response post time!

Jiiri: yes, a very clever interpretation! I guessed what was going on when I saw 'Rowan' and 'help' in the same sentence. Apart from the part about the singing that transports you to another world, I also liked the fact that Emile had to be removed from the stage. But that was very rude of Michael, to interrupt the styling session like that! I hear naked styling is all the rage in some circles.

Opaque: I have not played the game, but the poem is very evocative. At least, it evokes how I feel at the end of every winter. (And wait, it would work for both Changes in Seasons and, in a way, Mask, wouldn't it?)

Also, I agree that Emil could rock a shaved head! I am at an age where more and more of my male peers are shaving their heads, and it can be a very good look. I will have to see if any artists are willing to draw this.

Oh, and I just realized I forgot to reply to the comment on trolls and sunlight. You're right, Adventure Two barely (bearly?) talks about it, and we see plenty of activity during the day. I think there is a mention of overcast days being more dangerous?
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 03, 2021, 03:06:32 AM
3.10.2021 Masks

Getting sloppy with wordcounts! 250 words this time. Still SSSS, and pretty classic SSSS at that.

Spoiler: show
"Aren’t you glad you’re immune?” Emil asked. “I know I am. Not just for the obvious reasons, but also because those rubber masks seem terrible."

Talking to Lalli was... pleasant. Oddly so, given that Lalli obviously couldn't understand anything Emil said, and spent most of the time staring at various rocks, trees, and clouds. Sometimes even at the air. Although, he did sit with Emil by choice, and would sometimes stare at him in between staring at all the inanimate objects. Maybe that was enough.

"Seriously,” Emil continued, “they look so uncomfortable. And so unflattering! Anyone who wears one is in danger of looking like a, well…"

"Like a what, Emil?"

Emil managed to muffle most of his involuntary little scream. Where had Tuuri come from?

"Do go on,” she said brightly. “I'm very interested!"

"Oh… I didn't mean you, of course. Your face was made to wear a mask!"

Tuuri frowned. "Are you calling me ugly?"

"No, of course, I just--"

"Lalli..." Tuuri turned to her cousin and started to say something in Finnish.

Emil grabbed her arm. "No, please, don't tell him what I said! He'll hate me!"

“But my feelings are hurt!” Tuuri gave him a pointy little smile. "Why shouldn’t I turn to my cousin for comfort?"

"I'll do all your chores this evening! And tomorrow!"

Her smile widened. "How about this whole week?"

Emil glanced at Lalli, who was staring at them, his pale eyes full of curiosity.

“Fine. A week it is,” he said.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 03, 2021, 03:53:03 AM
Very evocative indeed, Opaque!
Ah, we all miss snarky Miss Tuuri, do we not?

I turned back to the Prologue for this next one - Masks.  It's an illustration of one of the first fanworks I ever wrote (under the spoiler). It features the woman who appeared on the Danish talk show, urging people to wear masks to help stop the spread of the new Rash illness.

(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/178217443737600000/894126311218483230/20211003_203524.jpg?width=700&height=498)
Spoiler: the origin of the beast dog of chap 7 • show
Mme. Stine sighed as she unlocked her apartment door.
She'd had a tough day, taping the news hour and almost getting into a punch-up with that imbecile Pedersen. She'd endured the looks from the people on the streets, some looking sidelong at her face mask.

As she opened the door, Mitzi bounded up to her, tongue lolling. She smiled and scritched behind the hound's ear, setting the heart tag on Mitzi's collar jingling. The dog had a terrible habit of chasing and catching the rats in the park near the hospital, but she was the light of Mme. Stine's life.

She took off her face mask. "Give us a kiss, Mitzi." Mitzi obliged. "Who's a good girl then."

The people could all get the so-called 'rash illness', but you can always trust a dog.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 03, 2021, 06:13:09 AM
Wave, oh no, spider dog being the most best girl  :'( :'( :'(

Tehta tee hee hee scheming Tuuri is scheming. Best part was “ and would sometimes stare at him in between staring at all the inanimate objects. Maybe that was enough.” Poor Emil.

Opaque, I have also not played that game, but the poem works without the background as well. It evokes a mighty fantasy tale, perhaps a game, perhaps a story. But I have well enough imagery to go with it without the actual game :) Also I’m glad you wanted to share from a different fandom - we are in agreement that we wanted to, and must, diversify, but we don’t really do very much of that yet. So, special thank you for this reason!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on October 03, 2021, 10:12:28 AM
Yay there´s so many awesome contributions already!!!

Since there´s such a lot I´ll only comment on the most recent ones, but I read and looked at them all, and I love them!

Opaque, I do know (and love) Majora´s Mask, and your poem captures the story beautifully! The ... giants? (I´m sorry, I only know what they were called in German :P) seem to be those really calm creatures, and the same energy is in your writing! (Hehe, does that mean, LoZ-content is something that more people here are interested in? Now that is something you should have not told me >:D)

tehta, this story really put a smile to my face as someone who also enjoys writing snarky banter between Tuuri and Emil! :)) (I do miss her still, but don´t we all?)

Wave, what a sweet drawing! But man did that short story-part give me a feeling of dread... :')

As for bulk-posts, I´m afraid I have no real choice but to do them, due to my usual problem of "there´s less daylight than I would need for photographing my drawings". :P After all, I like using all 24 hours I´ve been given to do my daily work... :'D
So here come the first two (Wheather today is too bad to take good photos, so I´m afraid todays contribution must wait until tomorrow.):

I´m also kicking it of with a not Minna-work-related contribution, instead belonging to Disney´s "Amphibia":
1: magical (girl) transformation (under a spoiler due to heavy spoilers for Amphibia´s season 2 finale "True Colors")

Spoiler: show

Since it was a day before Season 3 would start airing, I felt inspired to draw protagonist Anne´s magic form, fan- dubbed "Super-Sayanne".

(https://i.postimg.cc/8z9hCxfg/October1-Mirasol.jpg)

I didn´t have a single marker fitting her skintone, unfortunately, so I used the closest one for shading and left the rest out. :'(


2: change of season

Young Kitty has just finished making herself a comfy fall-style-bed, when she´s being surprised by winter. (Why young Kitty? Well, I found a really cute panel of her I wanted to use as a reference.)

(https://i.postimg.cc/QdHQhjtq/October2-Mirasol.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 03, 2021, 04:22:26 PM
Masks

Mother
Expert
Cook
Woman
Environmentalist
Citizen
Leader
Servant
Teacher
Guardian
Mentor
Spouse
Facilitator
Parent
Representative
Wife
Writer
Project manager
Voter
Decision maker
Moderator
Finn
Human
Earthling
Companion
Organism
Friend
Partner

Creative
Worried
Bright
Brave
Timid
Middle-aged
European
Well-off
Young
Old
Beautiful
Feminine
Fat
Outspoken
Social
Bubbly
Warm
Wise
Forgetful
Tired
Strong
Learned
Depressed
Afraid
Brilliant

Who am I?

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 03, 2021, 06:25:04 PM
Posting now because tomorrow (later today...) will be a crazy day.

Responses:
wave: That is chilling. Especially now that you have the combination of picture and story. Familiar, comforting things turning a sort of danger is the highest form of horror, for me. (If only she'd had a cat instead.)
Mirasol: I don't know Amphibia but I love the pose and expression.  And kitty is adorable; the leaves suit her.
Jitter: Noooo now the bar is raised, and I'll have to think of thoughtful original stuff instead of comfort-zone ssss fanfic (maybe after this week, though. I need my comfort zone this week.)

4.10.2021 Destruction
I'm still stuck in the world of SSSS scenelets, mostly featuring Emil for some reason. This one is a triple-drabble, because I am too tired to trim.


Spoiler: show
"That was my last good shirt!" Emil lifted up the tattered rag. How could one cat wreak so much destruction?

"Don’t be too upset," said aunt Siv. "The shirt wasn't that good. It was a bit too tight, for starters."

"It fit me just fine." It really had, now that he'd spent a year working out in the Cleansers! If it was tight at all, it had been in the shoulders. "Anyway, it was the last of the ones I got from Father. Now what am I going to wear to sophisticated parties?"

“Oh no, Emil.” Sune tugged on his sleeve, seemingly to be on the verge of tears. “We are so sorry! We just wanted Bosse to look more like you!”

Emil forced a smile. The kids had meant no harm; there was no reason to upset them. “It’s okay, actually. I never get invited to parties, anyway."

“But you could be!” Uncle Torbjörn put an arm around Emil’s shoulders. “If you join the Silent World expedition. A successful outcome is sure to lead to fortune, fame, and many invitations.”

The fame and fortune part did sound great, but it was the ‘successful outcome’ part that worried Emil. He shrugged.

“And, of course,” Uncle Torbjörn continued, “your earnings would allow you to buy at least a dozen shirts! You could be proud of how you dress, again.”

Emil glanced down at the pitiful remains once more. Sometimes, all of his life felt that way, like a pitiful ruin. If he had a chance to fix things, surely he should take it? “Fine, I will go.”

“Very well, let me fetch a contract.” Uncle Torbjörn hurried off.

Emil squatted down by his cousin. “See, Sune,” he said, “there really was no need to worry. I'll have new shirts soon enough.”
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 03, 2021, 09:05:52 PM
Here's a poem that's a little simpler.

(Masks)
Masks of The Four Corners

If a mask was apart of your soul
What would it look like?
Is what you're wearing your true face?
What will you do now?

The brave lend their courage
The hopeless lend their gifts
The martyrs lend their fame
The dead lend their image

The lonely offer choice
The friends offer shelter
The wicked offer luck
The sacred offer hope

A mask of strength
A mask of sadness
A mask of song
A mask of spirits
A mask of scars
A mask of stone
A mask of shadows
A mask of sight

If a mask was apart of my soul
What would it look like?
Is what I'm wearing my true face?
What will I do now?

Again inspired by:
The Legend of Zelda Majoras Mask
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 03, 2021, 09:10:41 PM
Jitter, you are you.  Also, a Wordsmith.

No spoilers for me, Mirasol, as I have no clue what your (awesomely cute) magical girl is about.  But that expression on wee Kitty! Outstanding.

(Oddly enough, my best light is often the ones by my shower. There are like, three insanely bright LED halogens back there, and I can get a decent photo if I can prop the pad onto my towel rail. Using natural light in my apartment usually ends up being obviously directional and/or blue, with loss of quality when I apply filters to compensate. *shrug*)

tehta, Emil done filled out a tad.  We didn't get to see what shirts he puts under that muy fancy jacket and cape.  Say... New Clothes is a prompt coming up!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: catbirds on October 04, 2021, 12:45:48 AM
I love all the poetry that people are writing this year! Especially those about masks. What a topical theme :'D

I don't have time to participate until uhhh next week...ish... but I'll keep reading and observing!

Jitter, this format of yours is especially interesting to me. Probably not the first to be formatted this way, but laying all your qualities that you can think of out in front of you is a very scary thing... for me, at least.

Wave, I totally agree with what Opaque said. It feels like something that has been happening a lot during the pandemic, with normally safe places suddenly becoming places where you could catch something you don't want very much, uhhh... scary!!! :'(

Mirasol, that's just such a cute Kitty! A very good thing to smile at :) I miss her, I feel like we haven't seen her in the comic in ages... Also, your drawing of Anne looks very cool too! I haven't watched the show yet, though.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 04, 2021, 02:39:35 AM
Mirasol, a lovely kitty! The magical girl looks great too although I don’t know the source material. I like your style, as always.

Wave I realized I forgot to comment on Lavender. She looks driven! She was the one character I liked too. And the trovel and gloves one is topical for me too, despite us being half a world apart. I was just planting bulbs this weekend.

Opaque, another great poem. Very different in form and tone from mine, yet still the same sentiment.

Wave, catbirds, thank you for the comments. Of course right after posting I thought of many more I absolutely should have included, not the least of which is dog owner (she wrote while being harassed by one of them). But it would never be finished if I truly went for it (perfectionist is missing btw) so I’ll leave it at that. Catbirds I don’t know if it’s a “format” other than contemporary free verse, but I’m glad you liked it.


Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 04, 2021, 12:54:11 PM
More video games! This time Chrono Trigger.
(Destruction)

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/des69yk-cee8ce76-8a4e-4c83-9ef4-8a2e298d922b.jpg/v1/fill/w_1280,h_1921,q_75,strp/year_1999_by_opaque0_des69yk-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTkyMSIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzdkODFhOTEyLTg0YTUtNDJlMS1hYWRkLTYxZmFmNjY4N2RmZFwvZGVzNjl5ay1jZWU4Y2U3Ni04YTRlLTRjODMtOWVmNC04YTJlMjk4ZDkyMmIuanBnIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEyODAifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.wAhAZbnZfiLeXltCWM8OQSycUBn_hmLhQCKioGQxVYs)

Meet Lavos.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 04, 2021, 01:41:13 PM
Oh wow! I don’t think I want to meet Lavos.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 04, 2021, 01:59:24 PM
Destruction

“What is it, Sanna? You look like you’ve seen a ghost.”
“Ah, um, sort of. I’m from here.”
“What? You are from here? From this village? They sent you to your own…”
“Well, not from here here. I’m originally from Pirttisaari, a few islands to the south. But still…”
“Oh no, was it attacked too?”
“Yes, same as here at Toivosaari. I don’t think I personally knew anyone from here but… it’s just like this at Pirttisaari too, isn’t it?”
“I think I heard there were some survivors but… no, actually, the ones I heard about were from here. I’m sorry.”
“Well, at least my parents didn’t live to see this happening. I… I need…. Can I take a moment?
“Yes of course. Take all the time you need. We’ll start the burn on the other side of the village.”
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 04, 2021, 03:39:09 PM
Opaque, never played that game, but Lavos does seem pretty destructive. I like your colour palette!
Jitter, wow, now I am thinking about how like 50% of Finns in SSSS probably have some tragic backstory or another. And about RL first responders...

And wave, sadly I won't be replacing Emil's destroyed shirt tomorrow. I have prepared a Yoinktober buffer, because this week is pretty insane for me, so I have first drafts for several days.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 04, 2021, 03:51:47 PM
Wow, many many amazing contributions!!! Sorry, but I've been to busy doing too many things to properly comment each (awesome) work, even if I still intend to do so. :)

However I was able to prepare a small story. I'm considering the possibility to expand it later, answering to other promps... let's see what you, my friends, think.

I'll put it under spoiler because it's a bit long... I hope you enjoy it.

Spoiler: show
Metamorphosis 1 - Destruction

"As Gregor Samsa awoke one morning from uneasy dreams he found himself transformed in his bed into a gigantic insect. He was laying on his hard, as it were armor-plated, back and when he lifted his head a little he could see his domelike brown belly divided into stiff arched segments on top of which the bed quilt could hardly keep in position and was about to slide off completely. His numerous legs, which were pitifully thin compared to the rest of his bulk, waved helplessly before his eyes."

"Oh! So the dream continues! And I'm inside Kafka's Metamorphosis! How strange!" He muttered. Perhaps because he shared the mains character's name? It already gave him some problem when he was a child... But this dream was so vivid, so real... How about sleeping a little bit longer and forgetting all that nonsense? Sounded like the best option, and so he tried. But he was used to sleep on his side, and this new shape prevented him to rotate his body... No, that wasn't his body! That's a nightmare! "I'll just close my eyes and sleep. When I wake up everything will be back to normal." He said, trying his best to breath slowly and relax.

After several minutes he remained pretty much awake, and started to look at his room. Why it was so dark and unkempt? Why there were so many boxes of medicines, syringes and bandages next to his bed. Most of all, why was he so hungry?

Gregor looked at his body again, but the horrific vision remained. Still dreaming, of course! Well, better to enjoy it the best he could. He never remembered well his dreams, but was quite sure they were never that imaginative... He managed to roll from the bed, landing on his six... no, eight spindly, but surprisingly strong legs. What a strange feeling! His arms and hands, however, looked almost normal, except for his nails, that have been replaced by long, blade-like claws. A tentative slash showed they were sharp enough to cut a candle as it was made of warm butter. On a way it was a cool nightmare, like playing a game on his computer.

A quick search on the room showed the laptop under some medicine books. Why would he, an engineering student, have those? He tried to reach the computer, but it was tricky to move objects with those claws. The first book he tried to grab displayed now five deep holes, showing he had to be very careful to avoid perforating things. After some more holes and hesitant experiences he managed to open the machine, pressing softly at the button to turn it on. There was no response, and connecting it to the charger did nothing. The lights also didn't work, so he concluded there was some power outage. Gregor looked again at the table by his bed. There was the candle he just cut, and the burnt remains of several others. He noticed again how dark the room was. The blinds were fully closed, and that intrigued him, since the room should be completely dark. He always insisted on that because he couldn't sleep if there was any light. However he could see quite well... But of course it was all a dream, so there was no need for logical explanations.

Time to explore the house, he thought. This strangely lucid and insane dream probably had many more cool things to do and discover. His bedroom door wouldn't open, but with little effort he broke the lock. Well, he was a monster after all! Having superhuman strength was no surprise. The long corridor was empty and full of dust, as if no one used it for a long time. His eight legs allowed a surprisingly silent advance while Gregor opened each door. All rooms looked abandoned, with closed blinds and dust covering floors, beds, everything. The dream obviously didn't contemplate the employees that kept the family mansion always clean and shiny, even on a floor where only his room, out of six, was permanently inhabited. His mother hated when he chose to move to the second floor, away from the rest of the family, but his father, dealing with the family business on another continent, indulged him, in exchange for a commitment to achieve top grades on University next year.

The large stairway looked just like the rest, but had, halfway to the first floor, an ample mirror that filled a whole wall, and what Gregor saw there made him stop. The closest animal he could recall was a lobster, but a pale and uncanny one, that had almost-human arms instead of claws and some surprisingly normal eyes. But jaws and mouth were proportionally much larger than any lobster would possess, and there were simply too many pointy teeth, almost as a shark. The most disturbing part, however, was the way the mouth opened, with a degree of elasticity he only remembered seeing on snakes.

It was an awful, terrifying vision, but at the same time somehow captivating, like watching a car accident. Gregor stood on the steps, contemplating how creative his subconscious actually was to create such a unique and disgusting nightmare, when he noticed the violin abandoned on the landing.

Sure, something related to his sister had to be on his nightmare! Always better on everything, school, sports, relationships... She even played beautifully the violin, while Gregor attempts on any instrument were laughable and rather painful to remember. He remembered going down those same stairs, not so long ago, following the music. But them it was his normal self, with just two regular feet on slippers.

Gregor reached the living room door, but didn't open it, just stood by the door, listening. The music was beautiful, and, he had to admit, skillfully executed. However the chosen piece also carried a deep sadness.
"Zora, stop that, please! Play some... something cheerful! Yeah, cheerful! For a change!"
The music stopped. "But mother, I... I can't! And you know very well why!"
His mother's voice sounded inebriated, and he recalled she's been drinking a lot lately. "Yes, yes, your brother, always your brother!"
"And your son, remember! He's up there, sick, and we already saw what that means!"
"Bah, it's jus... just some allergic reaction! He will..." the sound of glass touching glass interrupted the speech. "He will be better soon, you.. see..."
He heard the violin being laid down suddenly, its strings vibrating, and steps, and the sound of a bottle shattering against the floor. "Stop drinking! Stop! He's never been allergic to anything! You know that! Just face it! He got the damn Rash!"


Rash. Why that was so important? Gregor tried to remember, but just got faint images, news and headlines without context... Until a memory became clear. He was at his bed, the same bed where he had just awaken.

"Greg? Greg? Speak to me! Please!" It was Zora, his sister. He tried to answer, but somehow couldn't. His mouth wouldn't move. He was laying by his side, looking at the table where a candle burn, its flame steady. One of his hands was visible too, and was strange, almost completely covered in small red wounds.
Zora moved closer, and he could see she was wearing a surgical mask, and gloves. She lifted Gregor's head a bit, just enough to put a thin silver chain around his neck. She lifted a small hexagonal medal so he could see it. "Remember, Greg? Grandma magical necklace. She gave it to me before she died. You loved it when we were childs. It will protect you."
"It's no use, my dear." It was a man's voice, someone he used to know. The man entered on his view, also wearing a mask, together with a dirty white coat. He flashed a small lantern on Gregor's eyes. "There's nothing we can do. I'm sorry."
"We can't let him here! We can't! His my bro..."
"Brother. I'm aware of that!" The man interrupted. "Not the first, nor the last, I'm afraid. We have to move now. It's becoming too dangerous out there, and we can end up trapped in the city with this disease and... the monsters."
"Monsters? Don't tell me you believe in those rumors! It's all lies, people trying to scare the others so they can steal and..."
"They are real Zora! I saw one yesterday. Luckily we were able to shoot it down, the thing moved so fast! And took so many bullets to die. And I examined it, even if briefly. Don't know how that can be, but I swear it was half-human."
"But Greg! He..."
"He will die, probably. There's no cure for this. A few, according to the rumours, don't die, but start to change... And they wake up as monsters, hungry monsters. I've heard people are calling them trolls!"


Trolls? Monsters? Hungry? Gregor raised one claw to where his "neck" would be, and to his horror found a thin chain. The mirror confirmed his fears, showing a well known medal, the one grandma, that many accused to be a witch, had wear every time he saw her. He used another claw to scratch his "arm". It cut deep, and hurt like hell! A thin stream of blood felt on the floor, but soon turned on a slow trickle and stopped. The pain was still there, but subsided just as fast as Gregor's terror grew. It was real! He became a monster! Everybody ran away! He was abandoned on a dark room, sick, dying on his bed! He wasn't himself! Not anymore! Anyone that saw him would run, screaming, or shoot! Why? Why he didn't just die like most?

Gregor felt his anger rising, together with his hungry. He'd eat anything... perhaps anyone! But that would make him even more a monster, wouldn't it? a murderous... troll! Then an idea came to his mind. He could still get away from that nightmare.
And so he began to break walls, trashing everything on his way. The pillars took a little more effort, but the monster he inhabited was surprisingly powerful, and his engineering studies helped hitting the right spots.
A creaking began to spread all around Gregor, as cracks expanded on the house walls and on the ceiling over his head. He felt happy and his monstruous body, covered in dust, rotated as in performing some weird, soundless dance. The nightmare would be over soon.

A violent sound, almost like a thunder, enveloped him as the walls collapsed and everything went dark.


To be continued ?



(And how could I think of transformation and change without stumbling on Franz Kafka's Metamorphosis? So I decided to take that (fantastic) first paragraph as the starting point...)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 05, 2021, 02:51:35 AM
5. 10.2021 New Clothes

This 150-word thing is the continuation of 'Reynir in a bridesmaid's dress' from Day One.  Maybe next week I'll try to be less silly, or to branch out from ssss.



Spoiler: show


“What are you wearing to the wedding, then?” Reynir asked.

“This.” Onni indicated his grey rough-spun tunic.

“Really?!?”

“Yes. It’s my best outfit. What’s wrong with it?”

“Nothing! It’s very quaint. But Guðrún would prefer her guests to wear something more… colourful.”

“The embroidery is colourful.”

“Olive is a colour, sure.” Reynir tugged on his braid: he had noticed that this made his brain work better. It did not fail him! “I know! Since I am wearing this dress, you can have my tunic! You’re short, but you’re also very well-built, so it could work. And it’s the least you can do, after rejecting the dress!”

“Hmpf. Fine.”

***

“See? It looks great.”

“It does fit.” Onni rolled his shoulders. “One question, though.”

“Yes?”

“What do these runes do?”

“Oh, the runes?” Reynir felt his face colour. “They bring luck.”

It wasn’t a lie. Luck in love was still luck, right?

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 05, 2021, 02:59:59 AM
Thegreyarea, what a clever idea! I think Minna said that troll shapes are somewhat related to the original victim -- in this case, I guess his name.

I particularly enjoyed the part where it became clearer and clearer that he was in a post-rash house. And I do wonder at the significance of the necklace...
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: JoB on October 05, 2021, 03:20:25 AM
Spoiler: show

“Oh, the runes?” Reynir felt his face colour. “They bring luck.”
It wasn’t a lie. Luck in love was still luck, right?

Spoiler: show

"Oh, you can't be serious!!", exclaimed Feyja as Taru (http://www.sssscomic.com/comic.php?page=72) walked in.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 05, 2021, 05:18:54 AM
Olive is a color! It is! Theta I love the idea, and I hope the staves work! Did Reynir just add them specifically for Onni, or was Onni’s agreement to wear the tunic a result of the same staves working on Reynir’s behalf?

Grey, nuuu, horror! Like tehta, I liked the way it was becoming more and more clear to Gregor that not everything is ok. And I guess his destruction wasn’t enough to effect his destruction, if a continuation is in the thinking cap.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 05, 2021, 01:07:06 PM
JoB: Taru/Reynir/Onni new OT3? (Tareynni?)
I think Onni doesn't like Taru much, though, for obvious reasons.

Jitter: Reynir decorated his tunic for his own benefit, and he wasn't wearing it during the exchange, so I guess the staves will only kick in NOW. Maybe as JoB described, maybe not. (I'll have to continue this story at some point this month, I guess.)

Oh, and I didn't say this, thegreyarea, but you should definitely continue!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 05, 2021, 01:13:54 PM
New clothes

“Lalli, I must insist. At home it’s ok to go in your old rags, but we are about to meet people! Please come with me to the store!”
“I hate new clothes! They chafe and are itchy and smell all wrong!”
“I know I know, but sometimes needs must!”
“I will not try anything on. It’s even worse!”
“Well, no wonder all your new stuff chafes, if it’s not the right size for you. Please, I’ll help you pick something.”

Half an hour of bickering later

“No more! We’ve been here for hours! Just buy all of this and let’s go!”
“Just take my word for it. Try these on and you will find ones that feel nice. Just feel this shirt. Isn’t it nice and smooth?”
“Why is it pink?”
“Why not?”
“I am a scout. I hide. I wear grey.”
“You are not scouting all the time! Besides this is perfect for your colors. Wouldn’t you like some change every now and then?”
“No”
“I promise I’ll get you a korvapuusti right after this, if you at least try it. Please.”
“Hrmph”

The shirt was perfect. Lalli had never worn anything as comfortable before.

“Just look into the mirror! It’s lovely with your complexion and hair!”

“Five of these shirts please”
“Five? But you just said…”
“I like it.”
“Well, I guess a change from all grey to all pink is a change…”
“Now, where is my korvapuusti?”

Korvapuusti is Finnish cinnamon roll bun.


EDIT one line tried to escape but has now been returned to its right place.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 05, 2021, 01:18:20 PM
Taru and Onni are cousins!

Which reminds me of what someone told on the Disqus comments.

Q: How do the Icelanders keep from getting intimate with too close relatives, when they have no family names, a limited list of first names and therefore also patronyms, and a small population?

A: If you are first cousins, you know. If you are second cousins, your mother knows. Everyone is your third cousin.

So, best find your mate from, say, Finland!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 05, 2021, 03:07:34 PM
Onni got himself a new shirt.  :onni:
(New clothes)

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/des8v1t-1ca05c0b-41db-4305-8df2-45e88694faf8.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzdkODFhOTEyLTg0YTUtNDJlMS1hYWRkLTYxZmFmNjY4N2RmZFwvZGVzOHYxdC0xY2EwNWMwYi00MWRiLTQzMDUtOGRmMi00NWU4ODY5NGZhZjguanBnIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.EVg8uSk3wAtpfWZcg3cS_o0C-rYhzdt1KhkfhqFmu98)

Yes, this is a real shirt. Lol
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 05, 2021, 03:18:07 PM
Haha Opaque, this is perfect :)

In Finnish we say “put your chin down and head for new disappointments”. It’s probably Onni’s catchphrase. (Yes it is a joking version of “chin up and forward” kind of thing but I have heard the chin down version many more times).

Also Onni’s abs 🤩
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 05, 2021, 06:20:05 PM
Sooo… I guess today was ‘dress up a Hotakainen day’?

Jitter, yep, that seems very in character. I would really like to see an illustration, though. (Who's the helpful shopper? Tuuri? A close friend?)

Opaque, your Onni doesn’t need runes to be lucky in love. Just a tighter shirt. (I love the body language in the whole sequence.)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 05, 2021, 06:34:48 PM
6.10.2021 Familiar

I had planned to post another lighthearted dialogue, but that’s my comfort zone, so let’s step out of it, shall we? 300 words of present tense, for some reason. (I tried rewriting as past tense, but I think the present gives it a touch of shellshocked quality, which seems appropriate.)


Spoiler: show
Everything in Keuruu is weird. The houses are too tall and too close together, leaving almost no room for trees. There are too many people, and they are all strange and all dress alike. Even Onni and Tuuri are different. Tuuri is too quiet, and Onni spends all his time worrying and crying and telling Lalli and Tuuri not to worry. It’s confusing, and wrong.

There is one tree, behind the house they now live in, that is kind of okay. Lalli spends a lot of time in it, watching the leaves and the clouds behind them and ignoring weird Keuruu.

One day he comes back from scouting to find his tree changed. Someone has tied two ropes to a plank and hung it up from his favourite branch.

“It’s a swing!” Onni tells him and Tuuri. “Just like next to the schoolhouse, remember?”

Lalli shrugs.

“Do you want to try it?”

Tuuri shakes her head. Lalli silently agrees with her, but watching Onni try to smile cheerfully is terrible, so he gets on the swing to make it stop.

It is a good swing. It takes Lalli only a few moments to find his preferred height and rhythm. Some moments later, he finds a familiar sense of peace and rightness. It feels so natural that he can hardly believe he is still in Keuruu.

“I want to try, too!” says Tuuri. “Let me on!”

Lalli doesn’t want to stop. But her excitement, too, feels right: this is how she should be. So, he jumps off, and watches her take his place.

She starts off slowly, as usual, but is soon begging Onni for some pushes to help her go higher. And higher. And, shortly, Onni’s smile is not so weird anymore.

It is the first good day in months.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 06, 2021, 01:08:39 AM
Kiki and Jiji. Kiki's Delivery Service was one of my favorite movies when I was a kid.
(Familiar)

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/des9wxq-ad632204-d58a-4a3a-bd4d-6c08e6b7a9d1.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzdkODFhOTEyLTg0YTUtNDJlMS1hYWRkLTYxZmFmNjY4N2RmZFwvZGVzOXd4cS1hZDYzMjIwNC1kNThhLTRhM2EtYmQ0ZC02YzA4ZTZiN2E5ZDEuanBnIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.07MlGs5_Mb-Q6xGWt1lWh_k89Aka00kfqUybndDXoXA)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 06, 2021, 03:43:10 AM
Work has been whupping my butt, but I managed to do Day 4's prompt ...on Day 5.  I do realise we are now on Day 6.  Ah well, I may catch up.

DAy 4 - Destruction:  Just another day of "playing Cleansers" at chez Västerström
(https://64.media.tumblr.com/455bc42d7b7d9f766c18b6635679f192/619c05e8cbc80ff3-95/s2048x3072/c911d2f7dacaddf432aa866f2be354abdfe1ca43.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 06, 2021, 09:49:40 AM
Wave, oh no, I can imagine although I'm not sure I want to :) They cause destruction even when they are playing something that is in theory quiet :onni: so playing demolition is going to be dangerous.

Opaque, I really like this art too! You are multitalented!

tehta, bittersweet and very them! Especially I like how Lalli pays attention to Tuuri's sad mood and feels better when Tuuri feels better.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 06, 2021, 10:30:33 AM
This is kind of meh, but have some Tuuri enthusiasm. The point was to just throw something together, right? Hope someone gets something out of this.

Familiar

Finally she leaves behind the compound. FINALLY to see something else than old, boring Keuruu, old, boring Keuruu people and old, boring Onni! Lalli isn't particularly upbeat as a companion, but soon she will meet loads of new people. She stands on deck, quivering with excitement, straining to see every new thing beyond the lakegate. Now they are through, and it's so... so... mehhhh. Darkness, same stars as inside, same lake as inside. "You'll be able to see things once the sun is up!"
"I wanted to see things now!"

Finally they are past the seclusions and in a safe-ish (oooo it gives her heebie jeebies to think she's actually outside of a safe zone at the moment!) area, and the windows are opened. She'll see the remains of a proper old time city! She stands at the ready at the window, to finally witness the... logs... everywhere... obscuring the view to anything... "I wanted to see things now!"

Finally the barge has been left behind and she can see shore! It has lots of interesting tree stumps. And more tree stumps! And barges on the river! It's... still boring. "I wanted to see things now!"

Taru tells them there used to be tens of thousands of people just in this one city. More than all of Finland AND all of Sweden together. The ruins look unfamiliar. For one thing, they are hugely tall. Taru says they used to be big houses. Well, it makes sense that they would have big houses, to fit so many people in. Still, it doesn't look that different. It's just houses, a bit different houses, but... No, she's learning about the past and it's great!

The big ship is a disappointment, as they don't get out of the river liner at all. But in the morning they are in a different country! They walk along a bridge to meet actual Swedish persons! They will all be so tall and beautiful and... the first person greeting her must be their cleanser Emil. He's so, so... confused. And he smells of food. And not very tall at all, and... well his hair is fabulous. And he seems nice. And there are maps on the wall and they show... the same shipping routes they just followed.

Thanks to Lalli, they make the train. She manages to secure a window seat! And the windows stay open, because the Swedes are so blessed. So she gets to see a foreign country! There's a mountain! And another one! And an interesting rock! And yet another mountain! It's very very interesting, because they are Swedish rocks.

She tries to stay interested, but Lalli's comments draw her attention. Why can't Lalli behave! But nooo, now she missed a dead troll! The only thing so far that wasn't exactly the same as everything at home.

This adventure is turning out so boring. Why is everything exactly the same everywhere?

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on October 06, 2021, 01:51:54 PM
(Oddly enough, my best light is often the ones by my shower. There are like, three insanely bright LED halogens back there, and I can get a decent photo if I can prop the pad onto my towel rail. Using natural light in my apartment usually ends up being obviously directional and/or blue, with loss of quality when I apply filters to compensate. *shrug*)

Yes, when I take pictures too late, they turn out blue. But I usually don´t have the problem with the directional light - unless I use a lamp as the lightsource... :'D That also tends to result in the sheer unavoidability to get your own shadow on the picture and some weird light-reflections if the lamp is too strong...
(I did try the bathroom-light though now that you suggested it. The lamps there are quite bright, but there´s several. I had three seperate shadows on the picture I took. I´m afraid that wasn´t very sucessfull...)

And oh what sweet chaos the Västerström-household will now fall into... *quickly hides evidence of catapulting tiny things across the room as a kid*

Jitter, I did like your little story about Tuuri! A very familiar (heh :'D) feeling at the beginning of a journey. I enjoy the two scenes to the previous promts as well. You somehow manage to convey so much with mainly dialogue! And the scene still plays in my head as if you wrote every movement down. And I agree with catbirds, the poem for "masks" is written in quite an interesting poetry-format!

tehta, is there such thing as too much fluff? I don´t think so. :V I enjoy your little scenes very much, and I like the continuation between some of them!

Opaque, I enjoy both your art and poetry! Kiki and Jiji´s poses look really natural! And say, in the mask-poem, did you have a specific mask from the game in mind for each line or did you mean all of the masks in general?

Grey, oooh, what a chilling story! I do wonder if "to be continued" means continuing Gregor´s story or continuing with another metamorphosis. (I... only have third-party-information about the source-material, in case it wasn´t obvious. :P ) I´m looking foreward to it either way!

To get to posting my contributions from over the past few days. I´ll try posting them in smaller amounts in the future, but I´m also insanely busy this week, so I might have to do another huge art-dump on monday. We´ll see... ^^'
I´ll put each contribution under its own spoiler so this post doesn´t get too long.


Spoiler: 3:Masks • show

Here you are writing deep and profound poetry surrounding masks, and now I´m about to ruin it all by throwing a silly piece of fanart at you, I´m sorry... :P

I´ve been really getting into Splatoon lately, a game-franchise set in a post-apocalyptic earth where humans have died out and various sea-life evolved into humanoid creatures. You may play as an Inkling (like the character on the left) or an Octoling (like the character on the right). The only difference between these two options are their tentacles, ears and eyeliner, and that you have to pay for a DLC if you want to play an Octoling... :')
Most aspects of the game involve covering everything and everyone in paint.

My Covid-trained eye of course immediately noticed how many different face-masks there are to customize your played character with. There´s even an FFP2-mask! (And the last update that involved clothing happened way before the pandemic at that. :'D I´m assuming these pieces are a result of the grafitti-artist-vibe they´re going for.)

(https://i.postimg.cc/g0mZ2bqH/October3-Mirasol.jpg)


Spoiler: 4: Destruction • show

I also settled for a video-game-enemy. This one´s a Guardian Stalker from The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild. These machines went rogue a hundred years before the events of the game and destroyed everything in their path. To this day, almost no one dares entering the ruins they left behind.
(There´s also little things more anxiety-inducing in this game than hearing one of these guys´ signature music *shudders*)

(https://i.postimg.cc/DZz41QNW/October4-Mirasol.jpg)


Spoiler: 5: New Clothes • show

Again, same game as the previous one. I found a scrapped concept art for an owlet-Rito (Rito = a race of bird-people in the Zelda-franchise), and it was so cute I couldn´t help myself but to turn it into a fully fledged character! Then I designed their family. Overall I just put way too much thought into it. I might have a problem.
Anyways here they are rocking some "new" clothes, aka some of their dad´s clothes that they stole.

(https://i.postimg.cc/yNBt7jQS/October5-Mirasol.jpg)


Spoiler: 6: Familiar • show

Whenever I have no idea what to draw for a day during YoinkTober, I pick 3-4 markers I like and design a witch-character based on only those colors. (All in the spirit of the Spooky Season, you see.) I have a nice little collection by now. Since today´s prompt was so wonderfully witchy, I decided to do that today.
Here we have an earth-witch with her fennec-familiar:

(https://i.postimg.cc/VkX2ypR8/October6-Mirasol.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 06, 2021, 01:53:56 PM
Opaque: I, too, am a fan of this movie, and I love your composition.

Wave: As I said on Discord, I think we all know that this is a popular game with the triplets.

Jitter: Why are you mehing? I think the underlying idea behind this story is very good! (Tuuri's expectations were pretty high, weren't they?)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 06, 2021, 02:18:49 PM
Mirasol, all of your works are good, but the earth witch is my favorite. She, and her familiar. I like both there poses, and the color scheme is beautiful, and a very good pick for her earth magic.

tehta, Lalli’s personal shopper is Emil, hence the enthusiasm on color suiting Lalli’s own. BTW I’d like to point out that Lalli doesn’t disapprove the clothing being pink in particular, but being of a not-entirely-camo color in general. Out of colors they could have available in a normal shop in Finland, some sort of dusty pink could look good on him. The yellows typical of plant dyes tend to be more of spicy yellow which wouldn’t be ideal with Lalli’s hair.

Here’s a photo I took in a museum when there was an exhibition about life in iron age Finland (around when the Scandinavians were being Vikings) showing colors they could have had in Finland at the time. These are on wool.

(https://i.postimg.cc/KvzDM88z/1-EC0500-D-F6-FF-4-D7-C-B632-2-EBE8-ECF7-C19.jpg)

Actually the pale yellow in the middle is not like the plant yellows I was thinking about and could be good on Lalli. But the soft shirts were pink!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 06, 2021, 02:23:23 PM
Also thanks for comments, I’m glad you liked it. I was amused that Tuuri didn’t seem to be very impressed by the train, although that had to be the most different thing by far, at that point of the journey :)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 06, 2021, 03:16:00 PM
I understood the nature of Lalli's complaint. Pink/lavender is not very scouting appropriate, except maybe when scouting a field of heather in bloom. (He would surely have preferred olive... but I guess that's not available!)
However, I am amused, because I might call that rightmost colour "the colour of blueberry soup", as in https://www.doradcasmaku.pl/przepis-zupa-jagodowa-z-kluskami-60112 but with even more cream.

Mirasol, all of these are great and, more importantly, cheering. But I love the owlet, and the owlet's clothes, the most.

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 06, 2021, 04:37:45 PM
Oh, Jitter, that's a great picture. Those colors are so nice.

Mirasol, I wasn't thinking of specific masks (except the stone mask). More like a few masks per "A mask of".

Also, I haven't said yet how much I've enjoyed everyones posts. The stories are so fun to read and I love your poems Jitter.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 06, 2021, 05:17:05 PM
I took the photo because I was impressed and surprised by the variety and intensity of the colors.

There was just recemtly an article about a new reconstruction of a dress found in a burial from 1200’s. Of particular interest were the socks that had been preserved by some accident of geochemistry in sucha good condition that they could be determined to have been properly red. I think the traditional idea of “ancient clothing in Finland” is a bit more gray than the reality may have been, at least among the wealthy.

Here are photos of the finds: http://www.ravattula.fi/puku/

And the reconstructed dress: https://www.iltalehti.fi/kotimaa/a/d331df30-affc-424b-86c9-5f2f36dc7277
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 07, 2021, 04:59:40 AM
7.10.2021 Sigrun's Birthday

Happy birthday to the most best Captain (well, General in my double-drabble, I guess) Eide!

This is the last of the pieces I pre-drafted last weekend. I have decided that, from now on, I will try to be braver and produce new content even on workdays. So, prepare yourselves for low-effort drabbles where every other word is 'blah'.


Spoiler: show
“I blame you, you know.” Mead sloshed out as Sigrun waved her goblet in Mikkel’s direction.

“What for?”

“Here I am, sixty-four years old today--”

“You are sixty-two.”

“Eh, who can keep track of such huge numbers! Anyway, here I am, blahty-blah years old, and alive. And for that, I blame you. I had many opportunities to die in battle. I could have died from that head wound in 103, or when I got mauled by that giant in Sweden, or of disgust after that sea monster swallowed me last summer… but no no no, each time, you just had to heal me. And now I am ancient, barely able to lift my sword--”

“The sword you used to kill two beasts just this morning?”

“They were mere wolf beasts! No chance of ending up in Valhalla by fighting something so easy. And so I sit here, not dead, not in Valhalla, but in a longhall, feasting and drinking mead with friends, and-- Wait a minute. That sounds very suspicious. Maybe I am dead.”

“Do you want my medical opinion?”

“Sure.”

“No. You are not dead.”

“Ugh.” Sigrun took a long swing of mead. “Your medical opinions are the worst.”

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 07, 2021, 05:10:50 AM
Hello! Thanks for the kind comments on Gregor's story! Yes, I'm working on a continuation... let's see if I manage! :)

Now, I really would love to comment. So lovely, beautiful contributions! I'll try later today.

Meanwhile I'm late for the Familiar party, but here it goes...

(https://i.postimg.cc/QC015qmp/emil-targaryen.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/SYYnbCws)
Prince Emil Targaryen of Dragonstone


So I tried to transform (or transport) one of our beloved characters to another Universe, and came out with that... I hope you like it.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 07, 2021, 09:07:47 AM
The grey area, that looks so cute! Adorable little dragon and nice clothing choice.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 07, 2021, 10:52:45 AM
I found a word counter thingy so here’s a drabble about Sigrun’s birthday.




”I can’t take it anymore! Just shoot me now!”
”Now now, aren’t you overreacting a bit?”
”Overreacting!? I can’t have a drink on my own birthday, I can hardly stomach a tiny piece of cake, I…”

”I understand, your birthday is ruined this year.”
”Not just today! I’m constantly in pain, I can’t sleep, I haven’t killed anything for months!”
“Well, that at least is good, considering…”
“Considering that you did this! Turned me into this bloated monster!”

“You are beautiful. It’s the pregnancy glow. Happy birthday, my love”
“The day of their birth better be soon! I’m going nuts!”
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 07, 2021, 10:59:44 AM
tehta, my first thought was to transform Sig to a grandmother so it’s good I saw yours first and took a couple of steps back :) It’s probably the same Sigrun though  :sigrun: :sigrun:

Grey, the drake is so cute! As is Emil, but he always is :emil: I too like the clothing you gave him as well.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 07, 2021, 01:50:11 PM
Jitter, I don't see why we can't have a grandmother Sigrun and a 'why not in Valhalla' Sigrun, and I agree that they can be one and the same...

thegreyarea, Aaaaaaah. Your soothing pic is just what I needed at the end of my day. (His nose is very well done!)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 07, 2021, 02:23:27 PM
Tehta I mean the same Sigrun about to become a mom in mine and complaining about being too old to die in battle in yours (as well as also being a grandmother in yours then)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 07, 2021, 04:39:00 PM
Haha, Jitter...she really hates being safe zone bound while pregnant. Cute!
Happy birthday Sigrun.

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/desdby1-717366ab-e375-4bde-9ac1-22786d326aee.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzdkODFhOTEyLTg0YTUtNDJlMS1hYWRkLTYxZmFmNjY4N2RmZFwvZGVzZGJ5MS03MTczNjZhYi1lMzc1LTRiZGUtOWFjMS0yMjc4NmQzMjZhZWUuanBnIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.zflFChQRkxZViZ9UR8gTersnc8_8WMi0Vy0q2JhI_XU)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 07, 2021, 07:07:25 PM
Oh, Opaque! This is absolutely fantastic! They are all so cute! <3

Now tell me who managed to convince Onni to play the clown!  ;D
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 07, 2021, 07:34:48 PM
Turri.
Lalli helped but it was Turri.
She made annoying sounds around Onni until he couldn't take it anymore and gave in.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 07, 2021, 08:19:51 PM
Turri.
Lalli helped but it was Turri.
She made annoying sounds around Onni until he couldn't take it anymore and gave in.
Haha! Sure! Who else would be able to bend Onni?  ;D
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 08, 2021, 01:48:47 AM
*slouches in*
Day 6 - Familiar - the sun reflected off the water and into the troll's eye. It hurt, but also brought into focus the bear on the ground nearby. It looked somehow familiar.
(https://64.media.tumblr.com/f77af67152f43a9b1c070e3a80bb7fb2/8e265b9ab231ba3a-a3/s2048x3072/81216d805a6e776349831d9ac99ead76f79cde81.jpg)

Days 5 & 7 - New Clothes, Sigrun's Birthday - Sigrun receives a package: her uniform for her upcoming 'vacation'.
(https://64.media.tumblr.com/785ea2624048a08240b7e1f93769c466/5c9210e6b237f9b6-21/s2048x3072/46f2c32b926dd35dc2ff5c649f27dcabc061017a.jpg)

Day 8 - Fire - Mikkel has heard this one before.
(https://64.media.tumblr.com/5e362986f8ac1115d2c2725abeba9ae9/80ac9b6b762fc3a3-3e/s2048x3072/2f72f63b4d371ffb195bd0b77f64dd02a1172641.jpg)

...and, I'm caught up!  Now to catch up on the tasty offerings y'all have left.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 08, 2021, 03:54:38 AM
Opaque, the little party is so well done! I like Lalli concerned about the cake, and Emil concerned about being hit by cake. And I take it Onni did magic tricks?

wave, the Sigrun drawing is very clever (covering multiple prompts might be a way to go, in the future), the bear is creepy, and Mikkel is very amusing. His attitude seems spot-on.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 08, 2021, 03:57:17 AM
8.10.2021 Fire

Just a drabble this time.


Spoiler: show
“I could build a new fire tomorrow.”

“Why?” Onni looked up from the flames. “What’s wrong with this one?”

“You know what! You keep complaining about how it makes your eyes water. And Tuuri’s eyes are red too, sometimes. I can help with that.” Lalli raised his chin proudly. “Grandma taught me how to minimize smoke.”

Onni blinked at him.

Lalli frowned. “Wow, your eyes look really bad today. Maybe I should start tonight.”

How could Onni tell him that it wasn’t the smoke from the firepit that bothered him, but the smoke from the village? “Tomorrow will be fine.”

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: lwise on October 08, 2021, 07:29:09 AM
Prompted by John L's comment on what you get when you run the Finnish wiki page for Firecrest through Google translate.

Spoiler: show
Sigrun turned to Mikkel, appalled. “Is Reykjavík always like this?”

“No …” Mikkel stared at the passing procession in amazement. “It wasn't like this the last time I was here. Though, to be fair, that was six years ago. Hey! Emil! What are you doing?”

Emil brought up the rear of the procession, enthusiastically waving a blazing torch like the rest of the crowd. Lalli trailed along behind, watching the flames warily. Both wore flower crowns woven from red flowers. The others in the procession all wore black trousers and white smocks with garish red tie-dyed patterns, along with their flower crowns.

“I've found my niche,” Emil answered, waving the torch dangerously near Mikkel's hair.

Catching Emil's wrist and holding his torch away from anyone's hair, Mikkel asked, “What kind of niche is this? Who are these people?”

“Can't you see? They're fire hippies!”
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 08, 2021, 12:43:48 PM
Again a great crop of the cute, the funny and the heart-wrenching!

Opaque, the party is brilliant! Although I’m afraid Onni doesn’t agree :)

Wave, the teddy bear is of the latter variety. It used to belong to the person who became the troll, right? Tehta, your baby!Lalli being all helpful definitely goes into the same basket!

And then… lwise, thanks for posting :) And Wave, Mikkel (no longer) at it again! A classic, and a clever interpretation of the prompt.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 08, 2021, 02:36:07 PM
Although the comic Witchy is on hiatus it still needs some representation.
Jaga. Nyneve's father. The witch burning.
(Fire)

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/desf7zv-67c3ac5a-b846-4446-93e3-925ac92955b0.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzdkODFhOTEyLTg0YTUtNDJlMS1hYWRkLTYxZmFmNjY4N2RmZFwvZGVzZjd6di02N2MzYWM1YS1iODQ2LTQ0NDYtOTNlMy05MjVhYzkyOTU1YjAuanBnIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.EKLC-sMxyCDNWAhNe0NhpBf-o8d_XhI-vSpm2G5VDwc)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 08, 2021, 06:34:22 PM
Fire

VVVRRRRRRRRMMMMMRRRMMM

Noise. Loud noise. Strange noise… it’s something we know of… a machine? What is machine? Machine was common, before. We look. Oh, pain! Big machine hurts! We retreat.

We investigate. Machine go this way. What is here? We look. A little thing! A fly? A pretty white and golden thing. Pretty fly. Fly with small, hot… fire? A… firefly? We knew fireflies, before. We look. We like the firefly, we look closer. Firefly go “shoo”.

We want to see better, we pick up the… firefly is fast. Oww, firefly makes more fire! Big fire! Legs burn, we hurt, we fall. Oh the pain! Pretty firefly hurt us. Hurt us bad. We must stop firefly.

Big fire burns, hurts! Fire spreads and consumes! Firefly run, we must stop firefly. We burn, we are on fire. Firefly still run. We are in pain, pain! We hurt, we burn!

SPLAM
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 09, 2021, 03:12:53 AM
Ya'll have been so busy, it does my heart good (some years I felt like the only one).  Hotakainens make great subject matter (as do all the crew).  You can dress 'em up but they'd really rather you didn't take them anywhere - except Tuuri.  How well I know the feeling of pretending your fantasy matches the reality!  Too much reality for Sigrun as well, meep, but yay! for her birthday party.
I only saw Kiki's Delivery Service for the first time earlier this year - excellent Gigi and Kiki! 

I found myself all set up with brush and ink for a Zoom portrait-sketching session, but when I went to get the link, I discovered they were not having a session this week.  What to do? 
I decided to have a go at Botober's (prompts generated by an AI) Day 8, the 8-legged cat.
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/655828699891105824/896216989754884186/20211009_150043.jpg?width=768&height=603)
I now present it here as also fulfilling YoinkTober Day 9 - Just One More Tweak.  I had another image entirely in mind, but the more I messed with the brush and ink, I found myself doing Just One More Tweak repeatedly!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 09, 2021, 06:00:10 AM
jitter: that's a super interesting POV, both because it's the rare first person plural, and because of their skewed way of seeing the world. (Although weirdly they manage to spot that Emil is good-looking...)

opaque: A very cool fire effect, and I love his pose.

wave: wow, so anatomically interesting! I am glad to see that the cat seems very comfortable in their body.

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 09, 2021, 06:05:38 AM
9.10.2021 Just a Tweak

I really struggled to find something that would fit this prompt! (At least in a way that is friendly for general audiences: I have plenty of ideas for how various characters could tweak their implants in a cyberpunk AU...)
I ended up deciding to keep expressing my opinion of the expedition organizers. A low-effort 250 words.


Spoiler: show

“I’ve had to tweak my recruitment plans a little.”

Taru’s voice sounded distorted. Siv turned the knob, hoping for better radio reception. “Tweak, you say?”

“That’s right. Do you want the bad news first, or the good news?”

“The bad news.”

“That mage I was hoping to recruit… Well, he’s made his lack of interest very clear.”

“The one with the Skald sister, right? Is she out as well?”

“Oh no, she’s very much in. So much so, that I have made her employment conditional on her finding us a replacement mage. And that’s the good news: she has already found one!”

“Really? What sort of person has she found?”

“Another relative, a cousin. He’s a bit less experienced, but, unlike my first pick, he is immune. And get this: he is both a mage--and a scout!”

“He sounds… very useful. What’s the catch?”

“He doesn’t know a word of any language other than Finnish. But it’ll be fine -- his cousin promises to translate. And to try to teach him some basic Icelandic.”

“Sounds ambitious. But I suppose this is the best we can expect… And you are right, this is good news. If you’ve secured a cheap Finnish scout, we can stop looking for one over here, and ask Trond to focus solely on medics. They’ll definitely need a medic.”

“Any more news on the cat?”

“I did talk to the kids, but they flatly refused to let Bosse go. And you know what they’re like.”

“I do indeed.”

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 09, 2021, 09:39:09 AM
Wave, that is one interesting cat! Or maybes even two? If it is a siamese twin type of occurrence? In any case I like how happy it seems to be.

Tehta, they don’t really see Emil as a good looking guy, it’s the beautiful clean(ish, but in comparison to everything else) white of his uniform and his golden hair. And his overall form reminds us of… something… from before? I’ve always thought them to be some sort of a hive, thus the we.

Why you scheming Evil Ones! Grrr!

Opaque, he is beautiful. Again, unknown source, but I like the picture and the composition. It works well on its own, with no background info at all.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 09, 2021, 10:32:25 AM
Just a tweak

It wasn't a dream, it was a nightmare! Rowan was useless. He sung well, and when she managed to drive some confidence into him, very well. Nice voice. But his movements were clumsy and uncertain. Apologetic even.

Rowan was really tall and had great, bright red hair (redheads are just the greatest, right?), and pretty with his freckles (there were lots!) and make-up. But he was tripping over his own legs, and even more in his dress. He looked really awkward with the padding and stuck his arms out in a completely unnatural way. When she tried to tell him to relax and be natural, he blushed and stammered and told her he needed to get used to the dress. But it had been weeks already!

He hadn't been to acting school, but neither had the divas. And the agency had assured her he was some sort of a natural miracle child. And yes, the voice was good. But that wasn't enough. Even the chemistry she'd seen between him and Owen failed to materialize.

She and Lucky were sitting in high seats, watching Rowan and Owen sing together. Rowan was fiddling with the padding, and Owen was visibly straining to not explode at him. "Stop that! Stop being so, so annoying! And don't apologize! Not one more apology, you hear me?" Owen was seething on the stage.

"It's terrible. He's dead weight. We can't keep him in the role, and we can't afford to feed him, if he doesn’t contribute."

"But we have the contract for the entire season! We have to keep him on until spring." Lucky countered.

"Yes, but we were hard pushed for money to begin with. If we can't make this work, I don't think we can survive the season!"

"Make this work… hmmmm… I think I have an idea! Don't give up!" Lucky jumped up and ran off, yelling for Emile.

Emile was found in the front row, staring starry-eyed at Lawrence, who was sulking at the side of the set waiting for his turn. "Emile, Rowan, come with me. I need you to do something!" Lucky was off with the two boys.

After a considerable while they re-emerged. Rowan was dressed differently. He had a knee-length blue tunic, and a long golden orange vest open in the front. He wore these with a sash and boots. His makeup was mostly gone, and his hair was partially braided so that it still flowed but wasn't billowing anymore. Most particularly he was not wearing the dress, nor the padding.

Lucky gestured her over to the stage. "May I present to you, our co-star!"

"Hmm, I like it. He looks good. And definitely more relaxed. What do you think, Rowan?"

"Oh thank you, I like this more. I am sure I can now…"

"But. But! He's playing the leading lady."

"That's just it" Lucky's eyes were tinkling. "He's the co-star, and the love interest. But there is no particular reason that would have to be a lady. I tweaked the script just a little bit. And I must say Emile did very well with the costume with zero warning."

"Hmmm, you are right, he looks… great. And more relaxed. Ok, we can try."

It worked like a charm. While Rowan still wasn't exactly smooth in all his movements, he now appeared young and innocent instead of awkward and clumsy.

"Well, I hope this helps you be less annoying" was all Owen said, but he almost smiled. Owen!

Soon they were singing again, and yes, the chemistry was there. The dream was right around the corner now. It was just a tweak, but it had worked wonders. Lucky was her little miracle worker, and Emile wasn't half bad as a stylist and costumer. What a most best company!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 09, 2021, 10:55:20 PM
Whoops! Almost forgot to post today.
(Just a Tweak)
Engine Repair

Make a turn here
Make a tweak there
A cold engine stairs back at her
It's not a gear
It's not from wear
Tries to convince her mind to stir
She's feeling fear
She's feeling bare
Her thoughts grow darker. Her eyes blur
Are they still near?
Will they still dare?
Nothing done will make this car purr
This is all clear
This had repair
Yes! The engine begins to whirr
A sudden cheer
An engines blair
This is the sound she would prefer
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 10, 2021, 12:00:32 AM
Love it! A Tuuri trifecta!
The continuing saga of the opera (more than a tweak, maybe, but an excellent solution), the recruitment issues, and most especially the coaxing of the Cattank.

Edit: oh, I had the latest comment.  Rather than start a new reply, I'll just carry on, then.

Day 10 - Theme Music - Something stirring on the trombone, definitely, but couldn't choose quite which...
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/178217443737600000/896601313884925952/20211010_131449.jpg?width=700&height=485)

Spoiler: why trombone you may ask • show
I do play brass but I've never played trombone, although I love it sincerely.  There is a bit in the finale portion of "A Tale as Yet Untold", a brass band work by Philip Sparke, where the trombones take to a heroic theme, and it really demands a stand-up.  Here's a rendition of it (no visuals in the video), by Eikanger-Bjørsvik brass band.  Long-suffering Readers of my fics may remember one, Abide With Me (https://archiveofourown.org/works/24207010), that I set in a brass band room in Norway, just around the corner from Dalsnes?  This is the band that inspired that, in the fine form that earned them European Championships.  As with all brass pieces, the dynamic range is huge, beware with your headphones.
Final movement starts at 14.42, trombones take the theme at 18.20. 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E-GrMw3MAJ0 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E-GrMw3MAJ0)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 10, 2021, 03:12:39 AM
10.10.2021 Theme Music

I guess today is officially a trombone day now. Wave's awesome second picture can be seen as an illustration for this 150-word snippet. Only with different characters and fewer sunglasses.

Post-canon, obviously.


Spoiler: show

"Good morning, Mikkel."

"Best morning, Emil. Is what we're apparently saying now. You here to see Sigrun?"

"That's right. Is she around?"

"Yes. I'll get her for you. But first: is your business with her official, or unofficial?"

"I've got a report to deliver, so… Official? Although you know she-- What the Hel is that?"

"Trombone. A musical instrument. Part of my new job."

"Oh, right, she did fire you last week."

"Well, pillow-fluffing is not one of my strengths. I did warn her."

"So what's the new job?"

"The exact job title seems unclear. But… You know that pile of sheet music the scouts found last week? She liked the name of the piece so much she wants me to play it whenever she does anything official. So, hang on." Mikkel raised the instrument to his lips, and played a few bars (https://youtu.be/jn2BkiUH1jc). "She should be here in a moment."




Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 10, 2021, 03:22:05 AM
Jitter: Glad to see this story continue, and yes, this tweak is better in every way. (But Reynir could still use the padding, just... elsewhere.)

Opaque: very clever idea and rhyme scheme.

Wave: Very cool choice. I love the use of color. (Although I must admit the first guy looks like Commander Riker to me...)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: JoB on October 10, 2021, 03:56:34 AM
(Although I must admit the first guy looks like a red shirt Captain Kirk to me...)
(Umh ... next generation (https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/William_T._Riker#Music), actually, isn't it?)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 10, 2021, 04:22:39 AM
You're right, I had some sort of brain blip caused by lack of coffee. Fixing now.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 10, 2021, 04:32:11 AM
I messed up the hairline, but it is indeed supposed to be Cmdr Riker. 
Trombones do get the Valkyrie theme, but it's supposed to be the Wagner tuba - a specialised instrument pretty much designed for the purpose.  Idiosyncratic, just like Mikkel.
Spoiler: trombone in battle • show
"Right we're going in.  Are you ready?  Mikkel, sound us in!" 
Mikkel unstraps the case from his pack, puts it down carefully on the ground, opens the case and pulls out the slide, sighting it down his arm to check for any bends or dents. He spritzes the slide with lubricant, fits it into place and runs it up and down a few times.  Does a few breathing warmups.  Digs out the mouthpiece, buzzes through it, puts it back and fishes out another one.  He blows a mezzo forte G to get the air moving, then takes a deep breath and launches into the theme.
By this time the troll has come out and is standing with the rest of the troop gawping at Mikkel, all of its arms crossed.  "wHAt'S WiTh hIM?" 
Without taking her eyes off Mikkel, Sigrun winces and shrugs. 
"i'D fIRe hIM." 
Sigrun nods.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 10, 2021, 09:43:12 AM
Opaque, great Tuuri poem! That scene was an alternative for me as well for the same prompt, but I couldn’t have taken it nearly as elegantly! And I just had an Adventure 1 bit on the previous one.

Trombone it is, whether it’s Riker or Madsen playing it :) I am drawing a blank so far on Theme Song, we’ll see whether I’ll have to skip this one.

Wave, I don’t really think the tweak was very big. The hero and the co-star will in any case just sing about (and maybe to, if they are lucky) each other, perhaps hold hands. What difference does it really make which gender any of them are? We are a modern company you know!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 10, 2021, 11:42:10 AM
I chose trombone not because it was right for the piece, but because it seemed like the sort of thing Mikkel might play already (if only to make sarcastic wah-wah sounds at people).

Anyway, out of deep shame over my star trek gaffe, I have decided to destroy Mikkel's trombone, in this very silly continuation of my earlier 'theme music' piece. (Jitter, I borrowed your pink shirts. Hope that's okay. Also hope it's okay to spam like this with low-effort silliness.)


Spoiler: show

"Lalli, a word."

"Yes, Captain Eide?"

"I've realized that it is selfish for me to be the only one with theme music, and so I'm going to extend that perk to all my officers. It's quite hard finding good themes for everyone, though."

"Why are you-- Are you telling me this because you want me to find more sheet music?"

"No. I mean, yes, that's a great idea, you do that. But actually I'm telling you this because you are lucky! I've already found an awesome theme for you."

"?!?"

"Anyway, your fylgja is a wild cat of some sort, right?"

"My luonto is a lynx."

"That's a wild cat! So, another word for a wild cat is 'panther'. And, apparently, they are pink sometimes, which... Well, you do have all those pink shirts! This piece is most perfect for you! Mikkel, get your lungs over here and demonstrate Lalli's new theme. And you, Lalli, imagine this playing whenever you enter a room."


***

"A freak accident, you say? During a routine Cleanser training exercise?" Mikkel regarded the twisted remains of his instrument with resignation. He really should have foreseen this. "Oh well, this job was getting boring, anyway. Time for another!"


Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: LooNEY_DAC on October 10, 2021, 02:38:07 PM
...You guys know this (https://ssssforum.com/index.php?topic=193.msg185454#msg185454) is all your fault, right?
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 10, 2021, 04:14:17 PM
Hahaa, we are happy to have caused this :)

Sorry, I still got nothing myself.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 10, 2021, 05:27:28 PM
Haha, Yes! Riker looks great! My brother used to play trombone too. He was interested in playing specifically because of Commander Riker. We were also big fans of Picard's flute from The Inner Light.

Here's a poem for adorable little Lalli.
(Theme Music)
Quiet Song

Way back then, when he was quite young
Back to the place his coat was hung
A melody sat on his tongue
And in his solitude he sung

It was a ballad of darkness
About hearts brimming with weakness
Dreams filled with silence and meekness
Wallowing in their minds sickness

It came. Quietly and deadly it spread
Consuming all of his loved ones in dread
"Flee now! Run far away!" The eldest said
"Hurry and leave or you will join the dead"

With his kin, he fled his old home
Consumed in a fiery dome
Escaped to new place to roam
Far away from the catacomb

Year by year passes as they grew
He and them were the only few
Alone he sings for what he knew
Slowly he feels his strength renew

The song he loved from a long time ago
Laying gently in his memories glow
Bringing him order in his life of woe
Almost a peace like a new fallen snow

He works nights, keeping the woods safe
To bring some comfort to this place
At sunrise sleep shows in his face
And he retreats to his dream space

Deep in his mind he likes to spend
The daytime letting his mind mend
Alone he lets his voice ascend
Sings "Hello darkness, my old friend"
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Róisín on October 10, 2021, 06:52:46 PM
Oh wow! These are all just amazing!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 10, 2021, 07:09:47 PM
Opaque, you do a very good line in laments.  *sniff*

And tehta, there is Absolutely Nothing Wrong with low-effort silliness.  I like a good giggle, and that's a prime example.  Now to find a sax... oh, no, maybe they'll rediscover 'Careless Whispers', and every pantheon on the planet would withdraw their favour if that came to pass!

Edit: Okay, I got to amend another post, cool, cool.

Day 11 - Both is Good - the debate still goes on whether Emil and Lalli are linked romantically or platonically, maybe we should let bygones be bygones?
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/178217443737600000/896980644415016980/20211011_173318.jpg?width=495&height=603)

Oh, and LooNEY? Owned, delightfully.  (Although I had to go back and look, I thought Mikkel was already on trombone.  My mistake, and now (only now) realise that the fanart illustration I made of those story some time ago was wrong on that score.  My sincerest apologies.)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 11, 2021, 04:44:56 AM
11.10.2021 Both is Good

I cheated and wrote this yesterday, because I had time on a train. It's a bit longer than usual, pretty fluffy, and hey, it goes along with wave's proposed theme for the day! (Is there a debate, though? I though we were all co-existing peacefully, in this fandom: shippers, non-shippers, ship agnostics...)

Opaque: Very nice theme choice, definitely more fitting for Lalli than the Pink Panther theme. And a very evocative poem!


and now onto my contribution...

Spoiler: show
They'd arrived in Brúardalur only a day ago, and this was Lalli's fifth visit to the bakery. It made Emil feel a bit awkward. (Although, to be fair, he himself had already investigated the town’s only clothing store twice. There just wasn’t much to do here.) At least this time they were only window-shopping: it was late afternoon, so the morning’s pastries were all gone. All that remained was fancy breads, and...

“Hmm, cake,” said Emil. “You know what might make sense? Buying a cake for after dinner. To celebrate my birthday!”

Lalli frowned. “Your birthday?”

“Yes, the day of, er…”

“No, I understand. But your birthday is today?”

“Actually, no, it was last week, while we were in quarantine. But there was no cake on that ship. And even if there had been...” Emil shuddered, remembering the sub-Mikkel-level cooking of the ship’s chef. “But these cakes look great.”

“Mm-hmm.”

“Will you help me choose one? Look at this one, it’s berries and cream: you can't go wrong with a cake like that! But it’s a bit plain and boring. That other one, with all those sugar decorations, looks very beautiful and sophisticated.”

Lalli’s awed expression as he stared at the decorated cake was a delight to see. He looked so carefree, almost child-like.

“Wait!” Emil was struck by a thought. “I guess this means that I am older than you, now! So you’ll have to respect me more.”

Lalli tore himself away from all that sugar. “Older? You are… two-one?

“No, I am two-zero. Twenty. Wait, are you twenty already? When was your birthday?”

It took Lalli a while to find the words. “Month four, day two-- day twenty.”

“April twentieth? But why didn’t you say-- Oh.” Emil mentally reviewed their recent past. “I guess that was when you were out of your body, and I was pulling you around. So, bad timing for a birthday.”

“Yes, bad time for everything. But you give me cake. In your dream place.”

“You are right, I did! But that’s not really… You know what?” Emil turned back towards the cake display. “Let’s get both cakes, for both our missed birthdays. We deserve it.”

Lalli nodded. “Both… is good.”


Note: we know they arrived in Iceland in early June, because the newspaper came out on the 5th. So, they spent May in quarantine, and April 20th would have fallen right in the thick of things (maybe a bit earlier in the story than I put it, but I could not resist the idea of a dream birthday cake).
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: lwise on October 11, 2021, 08:08:49 AM
Ah, tehta, love it!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 11, 2021, 11:47:42 AM
That Riker sketch inspired me to make a "OS or TNG" drawing. I like both. <3
(Both is Good)

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/desle8g-f4654351-2a7a-4d17-96ff-ea349964d345.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzdkODFhOTEyLTg0YTUtNDJlMS1hYWRkLTYxZmFmNjY4N2RmZFwvZGVzbGU4Zy1mNDY1NDM1MS0yYTdhLTRkMTctOTZmZi1lYTM0OTk2NGQzNDUuanBnIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.OUdK9vKw05SjVTfB-_labc7ArfSeskDhzilLq2XSDUM)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on October 11, 2021, 01:32:48 PM
Aaah, so many sweet and funny and sad and scary contributions since I last visited! XoX :sparkle:
I hope I´m around more this week to comment on the new pieces!

Anyways, last week´s stress is now over, and here comes the promised art-dump (hopefully followed by smaller updates from now on):

Spoiler: 7: Sigrun´s Birthday • show

I offer you another different Sigrun: CoH-Sigrun! (And CoH-Mikkel) This one´s accompanied by a little drabble that I actually managed to get down to 100 words somehow.

(https://i.postimg.cc/Z52jXHYx/October7-Mirasol.jpg)

“Ok, I´ll phrase it differently. I´m absolutely sure this is not how to make Lavacake!”
“I´m not taking criticism by someone who once killed a Snow-Spider with his food.”
“You asked me to help prepare for your birthday party, I´m afraid you´re stuck with my opinion now.”
“Fair enough. But come on, of course it´s made like this. It´s called Lavacake, pretty straight-forward, isn´t it?”
“Did you consult a recipe-book?”
“Who needs recipes? A true baker goes with their gut! Besides, this here absolutely should be the right way to make Lavacake. Today´s the most fun I ever had cooking!”

(The guests never forgot the sweet smell of ashes and molten metal coming from the resulting cake...)


Spoiler: 8:Fire • show

I was feeling quite sick on that day, so this one isn´t super-creative... Also the lava on the last picture pretty much killed my orange marker, so I just ditched the colorscheme entirely.

(https://i.postimg.cc/jjfvTfL0/October8-Mirasol.jpg)


Spoiler: 9: Just a Tweak • show

The Squirrelcookie-chef has accompanied her mother to the store last Saturday. Upon reaching the checkout, she suddenly reverted back to her five-yearold self to beg for an Überraschungsei (https://www.bing.com/images/search?view=detailV2&ccid=oAyewNPw&id=E4564A555C5E0FBF063C44382469040ED7BBDFE2&thid=OIP.oAyewNPwJOoFE7WlB262VgHaHa&mediaurl=https%3a%2f%2fcdn02.plentymarkets.com%2fmgt7h3rmbzvp%2fitem%2fimages%2f11501%2ffull%2f11501-Ferrero-Kinder-Schokoladen-ueberraschungsei-ue-Ei-72-Stueck_1.jpg&cdnurl=https%3a%2f%2fth.bing.com%2fth%2fid%2fR.a00c9ec0d3f024ea0513b5a5076eb656%3frik%3d4t%252b71w4EaSQ4RA%26pid%3dImgRaw%26r%3d0&exph=800&expw=800&q=%c3%9cberraschungsei&simid=608008975168451571&FORM=IRPRST&ck=154F2998F8E4C5AD30E9960561C07413&selectedIndex=0&ajaxhist=0&ajaxserp=0) (a chocklate-egg with a small toy in it), which to her surprise, she got. Out of it came a sign!

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/839965225351905292/896496480515391528/20211009_223613.jpg)

With that she knew what she had to draw today! So here´s Mirasol from @thegreyarea ´s Squirrelworld adding the finishing touches to a fresh batch of squirrelcookies.
Featuring the last hurrah of my orange marker and my own endless tweaks to the squirrel´s color. I´m still not fully happy with it. But at least it fits the prompt in every way possible. :P

(https://i.postimg.cc/zvY6QPR9/October9-Mirasol.jpg)


Spoiler: 10: Theme Music • show

I had no clue what to draw for this one. :'D In the end I settled for that right here: "Tatort" (= "Scene of the crime", airing since 1970) and "Polizeiruf 110" (= "Police Call 110", airing since 1971) are probably the most well-known German crime-shows. New episodes are still being made and one of either airs every Sunday night unless there´s a national holiday or something. (Or football apparently, like this week...) They both follow several groups of police inspectors stationed in different cities solving crime. And they both have really well-known theme songs, the Tatort´s actually having never changed since the show started.

Tatort (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k0pV2faxne4)
Polizeiruf 110 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KxcDMQyhDKw) (I don´t think this is the current one, actually, but I couldn´t find it. The music is essentially the same though.)

(https://i.postimg.cc/Pxw02kNW/October10-Mirasol.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 11, 2021, 04:11:28 PM
Both is good

Spoilered for sex talk (no action)
Spoiler: show


So, now that we are decided, how do we proceed? Do we contact the Dagrenning program, or…?”
”Or what?”
”Or do it naturally, of course.”
”It’s not natural.”
“Lalli, what could possibly be more natural?”
“I know it’s how it happens, but… I am a man. Emil is a man. I know what to do with Emil, he knows what to do with me. But you are… girls. You are different.”
“Well, not so different. The dangly bits are located a little differently, but mostly it is the same.”
“And you don’t even have to look! We can help make sure the payload lands in the intended port!”
“Rakel! You are terrible!” Emil was blushing fiercely.
“Ok, I understand you need to think it over.”
“And also, remember if we try, we can stop any time, if you are uncomfortable.” Inka always seemed to understand Lalli’s feelings, almost as well as Emil did.

***

“So, are you boys certain you are, um, up to this? Pun intended.”
“Rakel, stop it!” Inka was exasperated with her wife.
“It’s fine. We are ok.” Lalli was his serious self, but his earlier visible awkwardness was remarkably lessened. “We can try. We all want this. We are family.”
“Yes, we are family. We support each other through any difficulties. Even sex.” Rakel was trying to appear solemn, but both her and Emil started giggling at this.

But it was all right. They all loved and trusted each other, and Lalli was comfortable with touching the girls, even though he was still a bit weirded out thinking about how you have sex with a person who doesn’t have all the parts he thought important. There wasn’t anyone else he could even contemplate this, but his family was safe to be with.

“We have decided I will go first, although my lovely wife has promised to assist in any way” Inka explained to a blustery Emil and surprisingly cool Lalli. “Which one of you will it be?”
“Well, we… we were thinking about how to increase the odds so…” Emil started.
“Both”. Lalli cut in. “If it’s ok with you, we will both try.”
“Oh, ok, both is good! You are right, it does increase the odds.”



@thegreyarea this is for you. Tehta is also guilty.

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 12, 2021, 04:06:52 AM
tehta, you are absolutely correct on the respective timing of their birthdays.  I hadn't quite put that together.  More cake, cake for everyone!
Mirasol, I love your collection and am glad you're less snowed under - the lavacake in particular is hysterical, and the squirrel token was indeed a sign.  Art is always in danger of Just One More Tweak!
Jitter...that certainly is a way to full-fill the prompt, oh my! 
Opaque, I wholeheartedly agree - BOTH.  The later series of ST look great, but without a TV or streaming service I have never viewed any of it - I tapped out somewhere around the second series of DS9 and the first few episodes of Voyager.  TOS was so much a part of my growing up, playing on reruns on the UHF channels (sing along with me now the 'fight theme'), but I remember the excitement (and occasional cringing) of TNG as my appointment viewing of the late 80s.

I was going to snark a bit about the Clark Kent effect in Miraculous Ladybug (dude, black hair, big blue eyes, resourceful, hair in two ponytails, about yea tall....nothing?), but in the end decided on a different way to represent...

Day 12 - In Disguise
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/178217443737600000/897359790056030208/20211012_183945.jpg?width=700&height=468)
I'm still stunned this clever plan worked.  Really?  Really.

Maybe that's how your brain works on acid. (*ba-dum-tssssh*)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 12, 2021, 05:55:13 AM
12.10.2021 In Disguise

Here are 250 words of the continuing adventures of Onni at Reynir's sister's wedding.


Spoiler: show
"Why are you disguised as an Icelander?" Lalli circled around Onni, eyes narrowed.

"I'm not disguised, I'm dressed up for the wedding… Ow! Leave my hair alone!"

"I'm just checking for braids. Are you going to make some? Or will Reynir help you?"

Was that some sort of mockery, or a genuine question? Onni decided to err on the side of helpfulness. "No, I am not planning to braid my hair."

“Mrf.” Lalli crossed his arms. "You still look weird. Why did you change?"

"I was told that the bride expects us to wear something colorful."

"I heard that too, but that’s a stupid reason to change. As I told Emil, if I wear grey, she won't even notice me, so she won't care what I am wearing."

“Other people might care.”

“What people?”

“Well, I might enjoy seeing you dressed up.” If only to feel better about his own ‘Icelandic disguise’. “And I know Reynir would. Emil, too, clearly.”

“I don’t care.” Lalli looked away, frowning, then resumed staring at Onni’s tunic. Still frowning. “Did you know you have staves all over you?”

“Yes.”

“What do they do?”

“Bring luck, apparently.”

“That’s stupid. You don’t need luck at a wedding. Not unless you’re the one getting married.”

“What staves would you wear to a wedding, then?”

“Staves of protection and concealment.”

Onni sighed. “If you are that interested in going unnoticed, maybe you should just cover yourself with branches and go disguised as a tree?”

“Yes. Maybe I should.”
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 12, 2021, 06:00:32 AM
So, in the end. yesterday's theme was... cake! Delicious cake.

Mirasol, I love both Sigrun's and the squirrel's baking efforts. (Especially Sigrun's, because she is most best.) And  I find the blue flame personally very appealing, somehow.

wave, what a nice reminder of one of the more fun episodes of Adventure Two!

Jitter, you already know what I think. (I think this is very sweet, really. Like cake.)

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: JoB on October 12, 2021, 06:22:24 AM
Spoiler: show

Onni sighed. “If you are that interested in going unnoticed, maybe you should just cover yourself with branches and go disguised as a tree?”
“Yes. Maybe I should.”

Spoiler: show

Of course, once Lalli thought things through, he realized that twigs and foliage are are bad camouflage at a wedding, and proceeded to inventing the Cake Ghillie Suit.

He was quite miffed when he found out that his intended model is only called "Earl Grey Cake", though.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: lwise on October 12, 2021, 06:44:54 AM
This is a non-fandom-aligned original work for today's prompt, “In disguise”.  It's over 1400 words, which I hope is not too long.

Spoiler: Flying is for the birds • show

Flying is for the birds!

That's what I thought, waking up in my dorm room two years ago, after the near-disaster of the party.  And it had gone so well!

At first.

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Going to college was strange and exciting.  Mom didn't want me to go; she didn't think I could handle it.  But it's not like I didn't know what the outside world was like; we had the Internet at home, after all.  She is perfectly happy living in our little valley and only going into town once a month, but I need more human contact.  Much more.

I put all the paperwork together, and I got admitted to OSU.  I had to take a bunch of tests since I was home-schooled, but Mom's an excellent teacher, and I had no trouble.  So there I was: seventeen and out on my own for the very first time.  I had made some friends.  Not close friends, and absolutely no lovers.  I've definitely learned from Mom's mistakes, even though I personally am one of them.

The drinking age is twenty-one, but students pretty much ignored that.  And, on a beautiful Spring evening, a group of about thirty underage students decided to have a party by the lake.  I went with them as a designated driver.  I can't drink because of the risk that I might lose control.

We got out there, some kids built fires, and we all stood or sat around and talked and drank.  With a new moon and not a cloud in the sky, it was very dark away from the fires, and couples were sneaking off into the surrounding woods.

I sneaked off down the road, past the woods, and into a field with the new grain just showing itself.  Even without my wings, I have much better night vision and hearing than normal people, so after a careful look around, I was sure I was unobserved.

I called my wings.

My wings are glorious, beautiful.  Their feathers are deep brown, barred with black and tipped with white.  My wingspan is about twenty feet, which is impressive, but clearly not enough to support my weight.  On the other hand, my wings come and go with my will, so they are not exactly bound by physics anyway.  When my wings come, so do my enhanced night vision and hearing.  I checked around again, listened to the lovebirds whispering back by the lake, and launched.

With a few wingbeats, I was up, far above the woods and the drunken students, up in the clear and beautiful air.  If any of them did look up, all they might see was a few stars briefly occluded.  They would have no idea what was happening.

I had not flown in six months, not since coming to college, and I revelled in the feeling, swooping and diving and twirling in sheer joy.

Until I heard the helicopter.

It was a long way off and no normal person would have seen or heard it.  It took just seconds for me to recognize that it was coming my way; it was coming for me.

I power-dived to the field, straightening up just feet above the grain, and streaked for the trees.  At the last moment, I flared my wings to kill my forward speed, dismissed them, and hit the ground running.  My night vision lingers for a few minutes after I dismiss my wings, so I had no trouble racing through the moonless woods, leaping over downed trees and avoiding low branches.  By the time the helicopter turned its searchlight on the field, I was back among the kids.

Everyone panicked.  It made no sense that the police would send a helicopter to break up an underage beer bash, but that's what appeared to be happening, and everyone ran for the cars.  Jacob, Michael, and Emily had come with me; they piled into my car along with Hannah, who had attached herself to Jacob during the party.  Mine was not the first car to leave, nor the second, but it was the third.  I thought that put me far enough back that I didn't appear to have superior knowledge, but also that we were unlikely to be caught.

I told the other four to duck down out of sight (Hannah and Jacob enthusiastically complied), and I drove exactly one mile below the speed limit, all the way back to the dorms.  Half a dozen official-looking cars passed us, but no one stopped us and we made it back safely.  We learned the next day that the last few students had been stopped and questioned about a large drone, but no one was arrested, and we were all very sober the next morning.

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Flying is for the birds!

I understood what had happened, of course.  The entire nation is crisscrossed with radar, especially out here in the plains and the low rolling hills, and my flight must have shown up on every radar for fifty miles.  I had just thought that a big “drone”, many miles from any airport, would be disregarded.  More fool I!

I could just stick to the ground, but that was a terrible prospect.  Just six months without flying had made me so desperate to fly that I'd become careless.  I knew I couldn't go forever on the ground.  Of course, I could go home to Mom, but that was an absolute last resort.

Don't get me wrong; Mom's cool.  Imagine the average mother seeing her baby girl suddenly sprout wings and try to fly away.  I think she'd hesitate too long, thinking she'd lost her mind.  Not my mom.  She grabbed me by the ankle, hauled me down, folded my wings for me, and carried me inside.  (Not that I remember any of this, but she's told me often enough.)

And if the average mother had managed to catch the kid and take her inside, she'd think she'd lost her mind again when the wings just vanished.  Not my mom.  She experimented, carrying me in and out (keeping a tight grip all the while), and soon concluded that my wings only appeared outside at night.  She modified a dog harness to keep me from flying off, and informed the trustees that she needed a nice isolated property somewhere.

It's nice being a trust-fund baby.

The trustees found this house in a deep wooded valley with only one road in and out, and pretty soon there we were.  Keeping her baby girl leashed any time we went outside, she encouraged me to learn to summon the wings and dismiss them at will.  By the time I had control of them (I was about five), we could have moved back to town, but she'd discovered that she loved the isolation for her own sake.  We stayed.  And I flew within the valley, staying below the lines of the hills to avoid being seen.  It didn't occur to me -- then -- that I was also staying below the radar.

For lack of a better idea, I stayed at the college and kept going to class.  All the classes were pretty easy (Mom is an excellent teacher), but the only one I was interested in was the one on cryptids.  My father must have been a cryptid, after all.  Mom had an affair with him in college, and somehow the birth control failed and here I am.  By the time she realized she was pregnant, it was summer, and he'd graduated and disappeared.  Even the private investigators couldn't find him.

Maybe he literally disappeared.  I can't, though.  I've tried.

There were no reports of cryptids like him.  Or like me.

Summer came, and I went home to Mom.  Glorious freedom to fly!  After a month, though, I was lonely.  It doesn't bother her to be out there by herself, but I just can't stand it.

We sat down to look for some place where I could stay under the radar and still be around people.

And that's how I came to working here, at the Palo Duro Restaurant.  I'm a good waitress, and the patrons love me.  The cryptid-chasers especially love me, because when I'm off duty I'll sit with them and talk about cryptids.  (That class comes in very handy.)  They always ask me about rumors of the Great Owl of Palo Duro canyon, and I always tell them that, sadly, I've never seen it.  I'll spend hours with them going over maps of the canyon as they decide where and when to watch for it.

For all their fancy gear, they've never managed to spot the Great Owl.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 12, 2021, 08:02:05 AM
lwise, this is great and not too long in the slightest! Have you by any chance checked out the Comic of the Month, White Noise by thepooka? If not, do, just saying :)

Mirasol, great works all, again! I also very much like the blue fire. I have a thing somewhere where blue flame indicates spirits of the dead arriving (in that case, Lalli’s parents, Tuuri and other of their relatives) and that is exactly how I imagined it - actual visible flames that are blue, not the translucent blue flame you get from e.g. a bunsen lamp.

Wave, I was also thinking of that scene :) But since I can’t draw, I’ll have to think up something else.

Opaque ouch little Lalli’s song. It makes me sad. But then the trekkie theme makes me glad!

As for both being good, of course two cakes is even more good than one cake! And so are two, erm, payloads, don’t you think? Remember when the baby was born, they could told the birth father by hair color so it was already established it could be either of them :)

Could someone please draw Onni in his colourful wedding tunic, and preferably with some braids too?
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 12, 2021, 12:10:16 PM
The game Hitman has a lot of fun costumes to wear while you play.
(In disguise)

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Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 12, 2021, 01:51:52 PM
In disguise

Jukka and Tuulikki started to get worried. They had been calling Lalli for while now, but still no answer. Where could he have gotten to? Surely he wouldn’t leave the island, right?

It was getting dark already, so they decided it’s better to be safe than sorry, and asked for Juha’s family to help look around for the little weasel.

“Did you check at the tree?” Onni asked.

“Of course we did, it was the first place we checked!”

The adults were looking in all sorts of hiding places, in the sauna and the woodshed, and around the village. But Tuuri knew the adults weren’t always very bright, so she decided to check out Lalli’s tree anyways.

Arriving at the great spruce she called for Lalli and peered up the tree. No answer, and no sign of his cousin. Except… the lowest branches were really really tangled. Tuuri picked up a stick and started poking. After a few pokes the brambles hissed “Knock it out!”

“What are you doing there?”
“Don’t talk to me. I’m a tree.”
“Well, I think you are a big baby!”
“I am a tree! Go away!”
“Everyone is looking for you, Lalli”
“Lalli is not here. I’m a tree.”
“Ok, suit yourself. I’ll go eat all the cookies by myself then.”
“What cookies?”
“Funny, it’s almost as if I heard someone talking, but there’s nothing but trees here.”
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 12, 2021, 03:03:03 PM
Wow Wow Wow! More and more and more excellent works! I feel hard pressured to properly appreciate all that!

And I've seen not one but two (!) mentions on my profile! Mirasol, your squirrel is absolutely stunning! I would never imagine it looking so good! It makes me want to dive again on our Squirrelworld, something that I've been thinking since the first time I wrote about Oaktown and its inhabitants. I promise to do it, but I don't know when...

Also Jitter, that's a fantastic (and hot) piece! I really love our boys'  :lalli: :emil: family and the practical approach they follow to that delicate subject... ;)

Now you people may have noticed that I'm not that regularly around these days. That's because I have a few things to deal with (nothing to worry about, all's fine) and because I've been lost in another "Universe". So lost that I missed the day for the "Fire" prompt, but I will show what I did anyway, because it's all about transformation, more exactly transforming our characters on something else...

So I won't bother you any more. Here it goes, under spoiler because it's a bit long...

An Adventure of Fire and Ice

Spoiler: show


Episode 1

"Emil! Are you here?" The long stairway that spun until the top of the Red Keep's highest tower seemed to go up forever, leaving a breathless Lalli wondering why his best friend enjoyed so much to stand on that lone place, having just the wind as company.

"Emil!" He called again, his voice weak, as he opened the door to the terrace, right on the top. And of course Emil was there, his silver hair sparkling under the morning sun. He looked completely distracted, playing with Kitty.

"Emil! Why you never listen?" Lalli said as he approached the young prince. "You knew the King would call you to the Small Council. Why did you have to come up here?"
Just then those beautiful, captivating purple eyes left Kitty to pay some attention to Lalli. "Hum... Did I knew? I don't recall..."

"My prince should be more attentive." Lalli said, approaching him and adding a small bow that was obviously sarcastic between them, particularly when nobody else was present. "The Master of Whisperers reminded you about that early this morning, when we both met him at the main courtyard."

"Oh, now that you mention it... That Ukko-Pekka always gives me the shivers. There's something about him, the way he looks... Anyway, the meeting will probably be just some boring stuff. Father must feel that I need to participate more now that I'm of age..." A flash of fear appeared on his eyes, and he moved away from the battlements, awkwardly descending the high steps towards Lalli. The movement shaken Kitty from her perching on Emil's shoulder, prompting the young dragon to open her wings and hiss.

"Perhaps... What if they are already considering some betrothal? Engaging me with a girl from a noble house! Or worse, some princess from a foreign country!"

Lalli patted him, smiling "My poor prince, forced to marry a beautiful woman and live here, or on some other castle, among the riches, worrying his pretty head with several little princes..."

"Lalli! Stop that!" Emil gave him a slow punch on the chest. "You, above everyone, know very well what I think about that! Can you imagine the pressure? People counting the days, weeks and months, waiting for her belly to bulge? Noticing what she eats or... which sounds we make on our bed? Whispering, harassing the servants to find out if my... wife... is or not again on that time of the month?"

"Truly a most terrifying prospect! I'm sure no peasant would ever exchange a satisfying life working on the fields from sunrise to sunset to endure such a challenge."

"Fine! Be as sarcastic as you wish!" Emil said, looking Lalli in the eyes. "You know how hard it would be for me. And with that would come responsibility, so less time to hang around, read or enjoy the company of friends..." And his voice trailed of.

"Hum... I suppose if you request my presence I'll be able to follow you." Lalli said, winking and handling Emil a large folded black tissue.

"What's that?"

"Your formal cloak. You don't want to show up on a meeting of the Small Council with those regular clothes." Said Lalli as he helped Emil with the black cloak emblazoned in the back with the red Targaryen three-headed dragon coat-of-arms. "There! Now you look like a proper prince!"

Emil gently caressed Lalli's hair. "You always think on everything, don't you? I would be lost without your... friendship."

Lalli's long fingers closed around Emil's arm, pushing it away. "Careful. Someone may see us!"

"What? How? Here, on the tallest tower?"

"Look up there."

"That bird circling above? You mean..."

"If I can do it others may do the same."

For a few moments Emil stayed silent, standing still as the wind blew around them, weighting the implications of Lalli's words. "Right, I'll be more careful."

A large smile appeared on Lalli's face. "Today must be a remarkable day indeed! My prince accepts my suggestion and takes the wisest course of action!"

"Oh, stop that! I'm just worried about my... our lives!"

"Fine, but we don't know what will happen. We only know for sure that you have been summoned, and also that's not a good idea to leave the King, and all the others, waiting for too long. We must go now!"

As if understanding Lalli's words Kitty decided to take flight on that moment, or maybe it was just chasing an adventurous butterfly that happened to pass by.

Emil and Lalli observed as the small dragon fluttered up and down, following the insect's path. Of course she could easily open her maw and burn the prey, but presently she seemed more interested in the hunt.

"Let her enjoy herself, Emil. Let's go. It's a long way down."

"Yes, you're right. Better go before they send someone else... Onni, probably. No use in delaying the inevitable."

Emil had just open the door to the stairway when a distinctive "WOOOSH" made him and Lalli look back, in time to see the butterfly's burning remains fall to the stone floor.


.......................................

Before someone asks: Yes, this is just the first episode. It's a challenging thing to dwelve on a dense and already stablished lore, and it takes time, and many visits to their Wiki... So I decided to make it by small episodes, hoping to avoid long times and hopefully making it more manageable with all the other things that I have on my Mind, including the second part of Gregor Samsa's story... ;)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Róisín on October 12, 2021, 06:26:51 PM
This looks interesting. Kitty as dragonet and Emil as a Targaryen, eh?
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 12, 2021, 06:54:38 PM
This looks interesting. Kitty as dragonet and Emil as a Targaryen, eh?
Exactly! I couldn't resist the sirens' song inviting me to the crossover reef! Now my boat is gone and we will find out if I can swim well enough to escape the currents of procrastination and the grasp of the cliché tentacles...
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 13, 2021, 12:58:34 AM
Because little Lalli is adorable...
(Food)

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Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 13, 2021, 04:07:19 AM
I'm not familiar with the Targaryn story, but it's still cute.  Two stories featuring flying at night! (I'm not counting the blessed cinnamon bun as flying, although it certainly looks to have lifted Lalli's spirits!)  I really like that cryptid story, thanks for that.  Lalli is a twig, right? So why not a tree? Of course trees don't eat cookies.


Mine is only a kinda-sorta crossover, for Day 13 - Food.  We all know nothing says fOoD quite like the dusklings, but who do they talk to when there aren't handy adventurers?  I reached over to the Botober prompt list again, with Tiny Shelled Horses, for the answer.

(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/178217443737600000/897750819120771152/20211013_203210.jpg?width=600&height=432)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 13, 2021, 10:36:18 AM
Opaque, your mini Lalli is truly adorable, and I suppose his passion for Cinnamon rolls is making this one fly! :D

Wave, great sketch! I love your sketeches, and the tiny horses are fantastic, as is the "not kosher" at the end! :D

Effectively a simple change in size can alter a lot... So here goes my take on the Food prompt.

(https://i.postimg.cc/25vWrrnP/FoOd.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/Y4r0xcn3)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on October 13, 2021, 11:24:07 AM
Mirasol, great works all, again! I also very much like the blue fire. I have a thing somewhere where blue flame indicates spirits of the dead arriving (in that case, Lalli’s parents, Tuuri and other of their relatives) and that is exactly how I imagined it - actual visible flames that are blue, not the translucent blue flame you get from e.g. a bunsen lamp.

Hm, I like this idea. :) To be honest, I didn´t put nearly as much thought into it beyond "what is a brightish color I have a lot of that isn´t some shade of red" (though I did consider drawing the weird light/flame-effects from the game "Everyone´s gone to the Rapture" first, which go into a similar direction, indicating the memory of souls).
But this is a very nice meaning to the flame!

To your stories, I still really like how you always find ways to expand on your timelines at different points! (And yes. Trees don´t eat cookies. More for the rest of the Hotakainens!)

Wave, you picked a great scene for "in disguise"! :'D Perhaps that plan worked because it confused the Kalma´s too much to care? And those Dusklings must have been surprised to run into some other specimen not really familiar to earth... Just in a completely different way. (Though the concept of a tiny shelled horse in itself ist strangely cute?)

tehta, Lalli doing everything to not stick out at the wedding put a smile on my face. Though probably it´ll be just as unusual to be the only one showing up in all grey when everyone else wears bright colors... :lalli:

Iwise, I really like your cryptid-story! And you have some very interesting worldbuilding in it!

Opaque, haha, now this is one very serious clown. :'D And tiny Lalli is adorable!

Grey, your Kitty-dragon just gave me a very stupid idea... But I must wait for a fitting prompt I can use for it. A sweet story nonetheless, I´m interested in how it´ll continue! And OH NO Reynir get away from there!!! (Now is this a cave filled with Dusklings or in itself one giant Duskling (As indicated by the two rocks looking like eyes at the top)? Which option is worse???)

Here´s my contributions for the past two days:

11: Both is good

This is a scene more or less straight taken out of the web-show "Bee and Puppycat". The animal that adopts the protagonist in the first episode has traits of both a dog and a cat, so instead of finding out what he is she just names him Puppycat.

(https://i.postimg.cc/zXHJmYyD/October11-Mirasol.jpg)

12: In disguise

One of my favorite Studio Ghibli-movies is "My neighbor Totoro". So here are Totoro and some other smaller spirits disguising themselves as various plant-life and landmarks. Luckily they´re invisible to most eyes in the first place.

(https://i.postimg.cc/zDcJPGXP/October12-Mirasol.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 13, 2021, 12:54:34 PM
Mirasol! Oh! Puppycat and Totoro look so cute!

Thegreyarea, Haha Sigrun did say that Reynir should be troll bait. Hope he has fun with that.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 13, 2021, 02:37:10 PM
Mirasol ooh what a lovely Totoro, and the other spirits. It is a wonderful movie, I should watch it again.

Grey, no, you take Reynir away from that ”cave” this instant! Or make him look like a Tiny Shelled Horse! (Wave, I managed start wondering what on earth are these, or perhaps even more accurately, why are these, until I read it’s from Botober).

Little Lalli with the Big Bun is sweetness squared!

As for mu contribution, someone’s death and decay is another’s food. To illustrate this, here are some photos of pretty mushrooms.

(https://i.postimg.cc/tgdD1wwh/B0758-C88-0-FB1-40-FA-AE11-287-E6-F0337-B4.jpg)

A lot more under the cut

Spoiler: show


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Even more here: https://postimg.cc/gallery/YFkX4GC

Some of these are delicious human food too! (Disclaimer: never ever pick mushrooms you don’t know with absolute certainty to be edible)

Ps @Alkia was it you who mentioned liking goblincore? Thanks for that, because it’s big part of the reason I have started paying more attention to mushrooms. They are so cute!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 13, 2021, 04:56:01 PM
13.10.2021 Food / 14.10.2021 Character Growth

Because of work/life insanity I have decided to double up on prompts (seems fair, as I posted twice for some of the others).
Note: my first idea for this one was to write about baby!Emil eating cakes and getting rounder. But then I had a better idea. So you're all lucky.
150 words, still Emil!


Spoiler: show
“WE WANT CAKE! WE HATE TURNIPS! WE WANT CAKE!”

“Stop that this minute, you three!” Aunt Siv’s voice was barely audible over the triplets’ shrill chant. “We do not throw tantrums in this house!”

Surprisingly, the noise stopped, replaced by a puzzled silence. “But... Emil does,” said Sune earnestly.

The nerve! Emil drew himself up. “I DO NOT--” He faltered as he noticed three pairs of five-year-old eyes, watching him in fascinated admiration. An unfamiliar sense of power fought against a familiar sense of shame; when the battle ended, all that remained was a strange, new idea.

He looked down at the horrible, cheap meal, and picked up his cutlery.

“I do not,” he repeated, spearing a wilted vegetable, “always feel in the mood for cake, myself. Sometimes, like today, I prefer proper food. Like these delicious turnips.”

His cousins grabbed their own forks.

“WE LOVE TURNIPS! WE LOVE TURNIPS!”
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 13, 2021, 04:59:51 PM
To those who commented on Lalli’s wedding outfit, with or without branches: I do sort of have a plan for what's supposed to happen next, and it does not involve tree camouflage... Let's see if it fits one of the prompts.

Jitter: My favourite part of your ‘twig disguised as tree’ vignette is Tuuri’s cleverness. And I do like the mushroom photos (are they all edible?). I have had several mushroom-related adventures around here recently, starting with my realization that the chanterelle, a mushroom I thought I could trust, has a near-doppleganger. (I can tell them apart now, at least.)

Opaque: I really enjoyed your take on the only truly canonical ship of the comic.

Wave
: I have to agree, the kosher-keeping duskling is the best.

Mirasol
: I don’t know puppycat, but I do know Totoro, and those disguises fit the spirits so well. It’s a very soothing picture.

Thegreyarea
: At first, your picture just amused me, but then I started thinking about how Reynir doesn’t meet Lalli’s description of what a (Finnish?) mage must be like. He would try to help, wouldn’t he?
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 13, 2021, 05:42:27 PM
Tehta no, not all of these definitely aren’t! The ones in the first picture are some sort of tiny mushrooms that remind me of fairies. But there is also the one porcini I have seen this year, and some of the ones growing along treestumps are likely one very good mushroom, or alternatively a very poisonous one (if I were picking, I have things I could check, but I was only gathering photos). But mainly the shrooms are doing the eating here :)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: JoB on October 13, 2021, 06:31:48 PM
I have had several mushroom-related adventures around here recently, starting with my realization that the chanterelle, a mushroom I thought I could trust, has a near-doppleganger. (I can tell them apart now, at least.)
Ah, but can you tell it from the other lookalike, too?

(One is just poorly digestive (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hygrophoropsis_aurantiaca) and the other has actually killed Finns (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cortinarius_rubellus#Toxicity) to introduce itself to mankind.)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Róisín on October 13, 2021, 09:02:54 PM
Thank you for putting those articles up, JoB! Good info! I teach mushroom foraging as part of general bushcraft, and it rather horrifies me how casual people are about what fungi they want to eat. I do try to teach caution and careful identification, but some people……

 I would be disinclined to eat false chanterelles at all, and being able to tell pore fungi and gilled fungi apart is really important! Taste is not enough! Someone I once knew who died of a Death Cap apparently described it as the tastiest mushroom he had ever eaten. I prefer to err on the side of caution.

Though some of the Cortinarius species do make beautiful dyes.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 14, 2021, 01:34:23 AM
I'm actually pretty safe here in Switzerland, mushroom-wise, because there are mushroom centers where you can bring your collection to have it vetted by an expert.

And the false chanterelle I meant is the first, which is apparently quite common in my local wood. The underside of the cap is quite different though (In German, lamellen vs leisten) so I don't think I'll be bringing any to the experts...
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 14, 2021, 03:05:28 AM
Day 14 - Character Growth - I went to The Queen's Thief series for this one, specifically the finale.  We are introduced to Pheris, a character who happens to be the eldest son of a powerful but toxic family, kept and named as heir for spite. He is somewhat lame and has difficulty speaking, and cultivates an illusion of drooling idiocy to fly under the radar.  He is thrown into the intrigue of a foreign court, but there are those who can see beyond his facade to the shrewd operator underneath.  One tutor in particular steers him away from the hated alphabet primer he refuses to learn, and toward the library's geometry scrolls (which he admits he cannot make head or tail of), and Pheris is captivated.  It marks a turning point in Pheris' life.

(https://64.media.tumblr.com/28efcff341c6d7ecc375b95876703faa/041c0411715ff132-07/s2048x3072/69acb10fba057b62a9c4f26e38ef3e3dba7f3701.jpg)

For those familiar with the series, Pheris' condition is unnamed, and the wiki posits that it's cerebral palsy, but I headcanon that it's achondroplasic dwarfism. 
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 14, 2021, 04:31:58 AM
JoB, the webcap can’t rbe mixed with the regular yellow chantarelle but we also have the funnel chantarelle https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Craterellus_tubaeformis which is approximately the same color and size. They can be told apart with confidence, but the problem is that the funnel chantarelle grows in large groups and sometimes some webcaps get picked along with them. Carelessness kills the mushroom eater.

The webcaps are lethal in any form, as are the white Amanita mushrooms. Those must definitely be avoided! As a general rule it’s best not to eat any white mushrooms unless you have expertise. The white Amanita is growing plentiful this year, hopefully there will be no poisonings.

But we also are in the habit of eating the fatally poisonous false morel (Finnish name is “ear mushroom)  https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gyromitra_esculenta which is delicious when prepared properly. I hope the earlier practice of selling them in the market just like that with no warnings, because “everyone knows it must be treated” has been discontinued though.

Yeah so, someone’s poison is another’s delicacy :) Just gotta be careful.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 14, 2021, 06:32:53 AM
Jitter, those are some lovely photos and delicious mushrooms (particularly when you don't plan to eat any of them ;)  )

Wave, nice drawing (as usual). Pheris seems an interesting and particularly challenging character to write. How one "enters in the head" of a person with a problem like his? I suppose with a lot of research and some artistic licence...

Anyway, thanks to all that enjoyed the first episode of the crossover, and my not-at-all-worrying picture of Reynir and his desire to help.
So here's mine for character growth, where we find that even characters that may look evil or dangerous sometimes can grow into some quite different...

(https://i.postimg.cc/8CDtmqCg/FriEnD.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/5X7BxKvs)

(and so I follow the orders suggestions of my dear friends that where (suitably) worried with Reynir :)  )
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 14, 2021, 08:31:14 AM
Whew, I’m glad Reynir had wandered into a Totoro crossover!

Wave, he looks a lot like Tyrion, I assume not by accident. And I like the way you depict him getting interested in the geometry stuff!

Tehta, that was very mature of Emil! Good boy!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 14, 2021, 04:05:12 PM
Character Growth

Everyone was grumbling. Ok, so the news sounded bad, but surely this was just another  pandemic? The Rash would become an endemic flu and things would go back to normal. Right? Ok, an upsetting number of people had gotten sick and some had even died, but it’s not like it was the end of the world or anything!

“God, Aksel, can’t you make your grandma cool down a bit? She’s driving me crazy!”
“Sorry Sigrun, I…”
“Less chatter and more work! We need this fence up TODAY.”
“Seriously, Berit, we can’t work all the time.”
“No, you bloody well can’t work, after one of those things gets in here and you are all DEAD.”
“Aksel, does your gran really believe in the… monsters? Maybe she’s gone a bit… you know… in the head?”
“Sigrun, please…”
“Young lady, I maybe old but I’m not daft! And I definitely am not deaf! I don’t know what is out there, but I DO know it’s better to be safe than sorry. Now pick up the shovel!”

“Ok this is crazy. I refuse to dig a single hole more today!”
“Andersen, are you mutineering?”
“Calm down, dear lady, I understand you are worried but surely…”
“Don’t you “dear lady” me, young man! I was in the Legion, unlike any of you, I know what to do!”
“She was too! Trust me, you don’t want to end on the wrong side of grandma.”

“Ok you clowns, LISTEN UP. You seem determined to get yourselves killed. Anyone who wants to do that, is free to do so. Take your things and leave by nightfall. Me, my grandson, and anyone with an inkling of sense, will stay here, inside this fence which we will finish TONIGHT. You go out, you stay out. Is this understood?”
“Grandma, please, you sound crazy!”
“Hush, puppy! I will keep you safe, even if I have to drive off your whole town.”
“We don’t need to take orders from you, crazy lady! We’ll go and take our chances!” Gøran was defiant.

“So, guys, are you all going to go?” Aksel was concerned for his friends.
“Well… we don’t really think it’s right she gets to kick us out…”
“I’m not sure leaving in this weather would be a good idea…”
“I don’t want to leave my things…”
Ingrid and Gøran were looking at their feet, clearly not keen to leave the town after all.

“Sigrun? What about you? You’ve been acting like all of this was a funny joke.”
“Yeah, well… I guess your gran is right… we don’t know what is out there, but, better safe than sorry.”
“So, you are staying?” Axel was suddenly beaming.
“Yeah. I guess I’d better start taking this seriously. And there’s something here I don’t want to leave behind.” For some reason completely unfathomable to Aksel, Sigrun seemed to be blushing a little.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 14, 2021, 05:13:41 PM
Nice one Jitter!  The line between heckling Sigrun L and married Sigrun L is a fun area to poke.  And sweet take-charge granny Berit - is that growth, or was it always there? We'll never know, but I'd say it worked.

thegreyarea - I don't who Tyrion is, but okay? 
It's helped that the entire book was told from Pheris' POV, so it was clear from the get-go how much he was playing everyone, and his reactions at realising certain people were not fooled in the slightest.  The fascination with the geometry was well foreshadowed from early in the narrative.  (One of the delights of the series is that the POV shifts from character to character with each book, so that the same incidents sometimes get viewed from more than one perspective.)
Also, a very fitting resolution and fit of the prompt!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 14, 2021, 11:58:17 PM
Ah! Shoot I almost forgot to make something for today. I guess haikus are easy. How bout Emil?
(Character growth)

A spoiled young boy
Grows from his constant hardships
Matures as a man
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 15, 2021, 02:38:59 AM
Day 15 - Family - an easy one to get my head around, not so easy to execute!  All of Reynir's older siblings are home for once.
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Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 15, 2021, 03:14:15 AM
Wave, I meant Tyrion Lannister of Game of Thrones, as played by Peter Dinklage: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tyrion_Lannister#/media/File%3ATyrion_Lannister-Peter_Dinklage.jpg

Peter has achindroplasia type dwarfism. I haven’t read GoT but I believe in the books it’s not specified (other that he’s malformed and ugly, unlike Peter).

As for Berit, it was there. She’s served in the Legion in her wild youth! (I didn’t quite work out what the Legion is but I think some sort of a resistance movement, freeing common people from an oppressive rule. Probably not in Norway.)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 15, 2021, 12:45:53 PM
Jitter, great story! I love to read about Berit and her interactions with Aksel and the others, and those hard times in the first years of the Rash.
BTW, as for the "legion" part... In my headcanon (and the timeline for "A Beginning") she fought the nazi occupation of Norway (being 16 or 17).

Wave, another fine drawing! Not an easy task to draw, but you managed it so well, particularly squeezed Reynir's face... :)

Opaque, nice haiku! Yes, our golden boy matured a lot since the beginning.

Speaking of Emil, here goes, the second part of my most successful (and only) crossover!
(Under spoiler because it's "a bit" long, and yes, there's family in it! ;)  )

An Adventure of Fire and Ice

Episode 2 - The Council


Spoiler: show
Kitty didn't follow them on the spiralling steps, choosing to fly directly down through the large empty space in the middle, just to come up moments later, floating up with her wings fully open.
"See? That's one reason because I come here often. She loves to drop down and them ride this wind that always flows up."
"Yes I see. You really love that dragon, don't you?"
"Oh I do! She's my dragon, but I'm also hers. You know that my family has this... connection with the dragons. I feel that I can trust my life to her and... Why you're looking at me like this? Are you... jealous?"
Lalli reached a landing and turned to Emil. "Me? Jealous? Of that beast? No way! Not for an instant! I'm just trying again to understand why you keep doing stupid things like climbing the tallest tower..."
Emil began to laugh "Jealous! Don't try to deny it! You..." He was interrupted by Kitty, that passed by them at high speed, diving to the bottom.
"We shouldn't stop!" Said Lalli, returning to the descent. "I don't want to meet an angry Onni searching for you."
"Don't worry! I bet your cousin is sparring at the training grounds like every morning."
They descended a little faster anyway, while Kitty passed by two more times, up and down.
"See, Lalli?" Said Emil while Lalli grabbed the heavy iron lock to open the tower lower door. "No problem!"

Behind the door an angry looking Onni waited, dressed in the Kingsguard full armour. "You... I mean my prince! And my stupid cousin! What are you both doing here when the King awaits?" He bowed slightly toward Emil, just under the mandatory minimum.
"My good Sir Onni Swann!" Emil replied, his voice obviously nervous. "What a... pleasure to see you in this beautiful morning! Shouldn't you be at your daily sword practice? Or it would be spears today?"
"No, my prince, not today. Not when there's an important meeting to attend, and I am supposed to accompany and guard you, also making sure that you are present when demanded." And he grabbed Lalli by his shirt's collar, almost lifting him "As my dear cousin here should have made absolutely clear to you!"
At that moment Kitty landed on Emil's shoulder, hissing at a startled Onni, that in turn let Lalli go. Lalli turned to the dragon, that looked back pretty satisfied. "Err... Thanks." Kitty let go a short roar, surprisingly loud for such a small animal.
"I see that you got another important friend, cousin!" Onni said, turning again to Emil. "We must go. Everyone is probably waiting, and it's still a long walk to the Throne Room." He didn't wait for a reply, turning and walking fast across the courtyard on the tower base, one hand at the pommel of his sword.
Emil and Lalli followed as fast as they could. "Did you said Throne Room?" Asked Emil. "Isn't it a meeting of the Small Council? Those take place at the Tower of The Hand."
"There's more people present. " Onni replied, without stopping or turning his head. "Visitors, from Braavos. or so I've been told."
"What?" Emil exchanged looks with Lalli. "Have you seen the Braavosi, Onni? Is there any woman among them?"
This time the knight looked back, without slowing his pace. "A woman? Are you now interested on Braavosi women, my prince?" He said, looking first at Emil and then, for a bit longer, at Lalli, before continuing. "I've seen them arriving, and it looked like there are two women. One is their leader, tall and beautiful, but I'd say a bit old for your age." He was smiling.
Emil couldn't hide the anxiety on his voice. "And the other?"
"I was unable to see her. She wears a long hooded crimson mantle that hides her face. All I could see was her hair coming out of it."
There was silence through the rest of the walk across the many corridors, until they arrived at the impressively tall iron doors to the Throne Room, where two more knights on white armour stood, moving aside to let them pass.

Emil straightened his back and entered the large room, trying to look as much impassible and royal as possible to hide the anxiety that made him sweat under his cloak. He saw that Lalli and Onni had taken position on his sides, one step behind. Lalli, on the left, had closed his own cloak, fastened with a silver brooch depicting a swan, symbol of his house. Onni, on the other side, kept his right hand on the sword and an extremely serious face.
At the end of the large and tall room the iron throne awaited, occupied by his father, King Torolf, flanked by large chairs where his mother, Helga, and the Hand of the King, Lord Trond Lannister, sit. Trond's eyes where on Emil, while her mother talked something with Sir Magnus Arryn, Lord Commander of the Kingsguard.
The air inside the room was cold, and before reaching the middle Emil felt Kitty lifting from his shoulder. He tried not to raise his voice while calling back her. "Kitty, come back! Now!"
But that was, as he already knew, useless. The little dragon darted towards the throne, deviating in the last second before any one was able to react, and going around, close to the huge stained glass window behind.
Then she came back, roaring and flying close to the heads of the other members of the Small Council. His uncle Torbjörn covered aunt Siv with one arm, while Grand Maester Taru crouched and Admiral Olsen took a big jump back, hitting his chair, that fell with a loud crash. Only Lord Ukko-Pekka kept his composure, seemingly unaffected.
Kitty took another turn and headed to the other side of the room. Just then Emil noticed the visitors Onni mentioned. They retreated fast to the wall behind, leaving space for the young dragon to pass. She roared again, obviously happy with all the attention, and flew back to the throne, landing on the King's arm.
Torolf bend closer and whispered something to the dragon, that lift of, making two circles around the throne and finally perching on an iron rod that held a large brazier. Kitty, lit from below by the flames, opened her wings, let out another roar and crouched, enjoying the heat.

"They like it hot, our dragons." Said the King, turning his gaze towards Emil. "And you must learn to command her, son. We are..." he looked at the members of the Small Council. "...or should be, used to them, but our guests had all the right to be frightened."
Emil knew better than replying, or arguing, with his father on that moment, so he just bowed. "Forgive my delay, father. I hope it didn't offend you or any of our guests."
Torolf raised from the throne and walked towards the visitors. "Speaking of them, let me introduce our esteemed guests."
Only then Emil could properly observe the tall, beautiful woman that Onni mentioned. She had clear blue eyes, a strong but elegant nose and red hair, cut short, and was wearing a sea-green shirt, with matching pants, and some outrageously red knee-high boots.
"Lady Sigrun Antaryon, a niece of Braavos' Sealord. Also a renowned adventurer and, so I heard, an excellent water dancer, meaning bad luck to those fools that let themselves be deceived by her beauty."
Sigrun bowed to the King, and them to Emil, speaking with a strong Braavosi accent. "It's an honour meeting you, Prince Emil."
Somehow Emil felt that she wasn't used to those pleasantries, but was doing her best.
The King continued. "And by her side is Lord Mikkel Forel, a cartographer and lady Sigrun's adviser."
Mikkel was a massive, strong man, with a large face and blue eyes. He was all dressed in black leather and had golden hair that continued on both sides of his face, creating the largest whiskers Emil had ever seen.
"I beg the King's pardon, but I'm no Lord, just a curious man that spent too much time around books and maps." Mikkel said, turning to Emil. "A pleasure to meet you, Prince."
Emil was getting more and more nervous, sweating so much that he would surely have to take a bath after leaving the room. It was all clear. These were a delegation sent by the Sealord of Braavos, and they have been scheming a betrothal with his father. The woman in the crimson mantle was to be his bride! And she was taller than he! Maybe even Lady Sigrun's sister, taking by that long red braid... And why she hid her face? What if she's ugly? But how, being her sister? Well, perhaps..." He couldn't think straight, his heart beating so strong that he imagined everyone would be able to hear it. Well, not everyone, but Kitty surely sensed his distress and left the brazier, landing a second later on Emil's shoulder. His claws were scorching hot, raising smoke from his cloak! Emil was sure they would leave a painful burn weren't him a Targaryen.
The King observed all that with a smile. "You probably noticed our third guest, my son. This is Reynir Vhassar, a priest of the Lord of Light."
Long, delicate hands pushed back the crimson hood, allowing Emil to see a beautiful figure, with red hair, lots of freckles and intense green eyes.
"I feel honoured, Prince. May the fire that burns inside you remain strong for a very long time."
That voice... "A man..." These words escaped Emil's lips before he was able to stop them.
"Indeed, honourable prince. I'm aware that most R'llhor servants are women, but the Red God only cares for the fire burning inside every person, and that fire is the same, women or men."
Emil took a long breath and looked over his shoulder to Lalli, that he could swear had a small smile on his lips. He turned back to the priest and nodded. "That long braid led me to think... you know."
"Yes, Prince, that happens a lot." Reynir replied with a smile, taking the long braid on his hands. "It's an ancient family custom that I keep as a reminder of my home island, Lys."
"A beautiful custom, I'd say." There was something special about the priest, Emil thought. He was so... likeable! As if they have been friends for a long time.

The King sat back on the iron throne and hit the floor with his sceptre, commanding everybody's attention. "Son, I suppose you are wondering our guests motivation, and why I sent for you."
Emil let go the relief he felt by realizing there wasn't a marriage on the horizon and stood before Torolf, now more King than father.
The King raised his voice so everyone could hear well. "Now that you come of age it's time to serve the Realm, for the King and his family are as much servants as the poorest peasant, and with their stance and titles also comes a much greater responsibility."
Emil cringed inside. Nothing good could come ever from that speech.
"Therefore the Realm has a mission for you, a mission where you can show the full value of being a Targaryen."
A mission! Probably dangerous, surely far away. Emil already knew that being the fifth and youngest son made him almost expandable. He have heard the stories of the courageous deeds done by princes like him before, usually the ones that weren't the best positioned to inherit the throne. Some never returned...
He gulped before speaking. "May I ask what is the mission my King sees fit for his son?"
"Sure! you will love it!"
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 15, 2021, 02:00:01 PM
Grey, I was thinking the same but that would make Berit to be in her 90’s in Y0 which seems a bit much. Also wouldn’t that make her a bit old to be Aksel’s grandmother? Or, well, we don’t know how old Aksel is, but he’s definitely not born earlier than 1990 (assuming Y0 is 2013). Sooo, if Berit were born in 1925… yeah, she could be Aksel’s grandma after all, assuming she had children a bit later than most women in the 1940-50’s. She doesn’t really strike me as a 90-year old, but of course she can be a steel granny still in great shape at that age :)

Ok, I’m buying it, she did fight the Nazis. Go Berit!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 15, 2021, 05:39:51 PM
A bit sad but here anyway. Everyone hug your nearest Turri.
(Family)

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/desuoec-d648f07c-cf38-4579-a683-2f6c68f3bf11.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzdkODFhOTEyLTg0YTUtNDJlMS1hYWRkLTYxZmFmNjY4N2RmZFwvZGVzdW9lYy1kNjQ4ZjA3Yy1jZjM4LTQ1NzktYTY4My0yZjZjNjhmM2JmMTEuanBnIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.sOXAZuwU4-357MJFadWhd8ZFOHQF2hsX4iBPkg9opKc)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 15, 2021, 05:44:19 PM
15.10.2021, Family

Getting in just under the wire... I moved countries today, and it was all pretty exhausting. I promise to come back and leave comments about all the wonderful works that have popped up in my absence. (It'll be easier once I have my computer set up.)
150 words written to express my Hotakainen feels, as well as my feelings about the organizing team (which match Onni's...)



"Quiet, everyone!"

Across the table, Lalli woke from his nap and opened one confused eye. Tuuri, meanwhile, stopped mid-sentence, took a breath, and asked, "Why? What--"

"I said quiet!" Onni backed up this order with a glare. In the silence that finally followed, he heard it again: a knock, followed by a cheery "Hello! Anyone home?"

"Aunt Taru!" Tuuri's whisper was entirely too loud, and too delighted, for Onni's liking. Did Taru really have no shame, dropping by uninvited--disinvited, even!--to fill his sister's head with fairytales of the dangerous world outside?

"I told you before," he whispered. "That woman is not welcome in my house."

"But Onni," Tuuri's mouth turned down at the corners, "you can't turn away family…"

She didn't have to finish her thought. The words "there are so few of us left" hung unspoken in the air between them.

Onni got up to open the door.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 16, 2021, 04:52:19 AM
Day 16 - Unpredictable - In which I went out to get some sketching for an Urban Sketchers session, and while I was out, my daughter called and wanted to hang out with me, we had a lovely visit, she's just left and it's rather late at night, but y'all can have this sketch I made of the statue of Dove Myer-Robinson, firebrand mayor of Auckland back in the 60s.  Unpredictable, right? (next to pic of the actual statue for reference)

(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/178217443737600000/898801151900778496/20211016_153134.jpg?width=393&height=603)(https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/6/64/Dove-Myer_Robinson_Aotea.jpg)

Spoiler: lucky charm • show
I was planning to do a cartoon of Miraculous Ladybug looking incredulously at whatever Unpredictable random item her Lucky Charm generated this time.  If I catch up and do it tomorrow, I'll post it here.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on October 16, 2021, 08:44:22 AM
Lovely contributions everyone! I´m especially happy to see that Reynir did not get eaten by a giant Notoro. :'D
And I hope your move went well, tehta!


13: Food

This counts as food, right?

(https://i.postimg.cc/C1Nd10p7/October13-Mirasol.jpg)

14: Character Growth

I chose an "antagonist" from How to train your Dragon´s spin-off-series "Defenders of Berk" for this prompt, since it applies both in the figurative and the literal sense. This dragon, the Screaming Death, has its own arc and later shows up sporadically in another Spin-off, "Race to the Edge". He is one of the rare dragons who never gets tamed, and instead develops from a chaotic over actively antagonistic to a somewhat neutral force over time. He´s still dangerous, but mostly peaceful if not approached. Notable is that he is also physically bigger every time he shows up, as he starts out as a baby.
I took sort of a painting-approach for this one to mimic the CGI-animation of the show. I used mostly brush-pens and markers instead of fineliner.

(https://i.postimg.cc/Wz1zqy2v/October14-Mirasol.jpg)

15: Family

I tried the painting-style again since it worked so well for the last picture. Unfortunately, that didn´t really repeat. :P But here´s Ori and his adoptive mother Naru from the game "Ori and the blind forest".

(https://i.postimg.cc/mgjHk73C/October15-Mirasol.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 16, 2021, 11:44:43 AM
Great work everyone!

I haven’t given up, I have ideas for both Family and Unpredictable but I’ll have to start the other computer so it’s taking a while.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 16, 2021, 11:47:38 AM
Wave: I do not know The Queen’s Thief, but Pheris’ story reminds me of Claudius (the interpretation from “I, Claudius”, in which he frequently prefers to be an idiot to survive imperial politics) and I really enjoyed that, so might try The Queen’s Thief, too. And poor Reynir looks rather overshadowed at that table. Finally, the statue sketch fits, as it was unexpected even for you.

Thegreyarea
: very relieved to see Reynir’s happy ending! (Happy for both participants, since he helped.) And I am enjoying the crossover. I think the roles suit the participants very well (although I could also see the Finns on the Wall… but the Swann family has its charms, too.)

Jitter: I very much enjoyed reading about how Resistance Grandma saved Dalsnes (and, I suppose, set up some cornerstones of the culture that would develop there…)

Opaque: I am wondering myself what exactly it was that turned Emil from the spoiled brat of his dreams into the decent person we meet… And I was amused to see your Hotakainen pic right next to my Hotakainen drabble. (I think you really captured them!)

Lwise: This seems like a very believable Sigrun. I would definitely agree that a flowing gown would be more comfortable than an (untailored!) tux. But the dancing still worries me.

Mirasol: The dragon pic is spectacular! Love the alternate technique. The other two are very cheerful and cheering -- the colours help, but the creatures look adorable and who doesn’t like candy?


Phew, all caught up. Not sure I will have time to make my own contribution today, but maybe I can do a double tomorrow.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 16, 2021, 11:01:47 PM
Day 17 - Marriage - one of the most transformative experiences available to humans. Likewise, when it ends.
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/178217443737600000/899123037885050931/20211017_145310.jpg?width=700&height=430)
Spoiler: personal • show
Today would have been our 40th anniversary as a couple, and not-coincidentally our 36th wedding anniversary.  Well, it still is, just ...not being commemorated as such.


I'm bemused at how many of you want to see poor Sigrun get married off and knocked up with twins.  I mean, do you expect Mikkel to bring her flowers and a nice cow with a heart on her blanket to woo her?  (As in this scene (http://www.sssscomic.com/comic2.php?page=57))  Maybe I don't want to know the answer to that question.
This is not to disparage your stories in the slightest!

I can just see Tuuri standing up from behind the sofa and pulling herself up to her full 5'1" (or whatever it actually was) and making her statement to her cowering brother.

Note to tehta - I can heartily recommend the series, but Pheris only shows up in the last book.  However, everyone underestimates the titular character whose story this is, with astonishing results.  It gets intense, this is NOT a fluffy story, despite being a comedy in the classical sense.  Bonus if you have interest in the classical Mediterranean cultures upon which the setting is modelled.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: JoB on October 17, 2021, 03:46:16 AM
I'm bemused at how many of you want to see poor Sigrun get married off and knocked up with twins.  I mean, do you expect Mikkel to bring her flowers and a nice cow with a heart on her blanket to woo her?  (As in this scene (http://www.sssscomic.com/comic2.php?page=57))  Maybe I don't want to know the answer to that question.
Naah. That'd come with too high a risk that, halfway through the ordeal, Mikkel will walk off and tend to the cow (https://images.indiegogo.com/file_attachments/872086/files/20140921103801-a_iggmainimg.jpg) (bottom right) like the good Danish farmer he is. :3
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 17, 2021, 07:23:36 AM
16/17.10.2021 Unpredictable/Marriage

Still very busy, so have decided to double up on prompts again. 300 words of marriage-themed silliness! I hope it is unpredictable enough...


***

“Sigrun, I have a favour to ask of you,” said Emil. “A big one.”

Sigrun looked up from the dagger she was sharpening. “What is it, sport?”

“In a week, I will be twenty one. And I--”

“Yes!” Sigrun leapt up, punching the air with her dagger. “I will absolutely throw you a party! One with wall-to-wall booze and plenty of buckets. A small taste of Valhalla, very suitable for a day that brings you closer to death!”

“Er.” Emil looked strangely unenthused. “Thank you, but that will not be necessary. What I meant to say was that twenty one is when I am finally supposed to inherit some mine stocks.”

“What are mine stocks? A soup thing?”

“What? No, they’re kind of like money. Anyway, I just found out that, according to my grandfather’s will, I will only inherit them on one condition: that I am married before my twenty-first birthday.”

“Hmm. What a dumb will. But then, I supposed you want me to find you a spouse? That shouldn’t be too hard. I have always--”

“No, actually.” Emil’s face reddened. “It cannot be some new person. It needs to be someone I can trust. So, Sigrun… Will you marry me?”

Sigrun almost asked ‘to whom?’--her parents had conducted their share of ceremonies--but she caught his meaning in time. “I don’t know, Pretty Boy. Sure, you are pretty and all, but we have never even banged once.”

Emil’s redness intensified. “And we won’t have to! This is just for the money! Part of which will belong to you, of course, as my spouse.”

“I do like money.” Sigrun considered the pros and cons. “So… would this marriage involve a party? With wall-to-wall drinks, as described?”

“I was not planning on it, but… sure?”

“Okay then. Consider yourself engaged!”

***


(This ficlet is set in a universe where none of our fearless explorers have paired off. I have not yet decided whether any of them want to, but I HAVE decided that if I describe the wedding, it will not go 100% smoothly.) Oh, and wave, I hope this particular Sigrun-marriage is more aligned with how you see her.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: lwise on October 17, 2021, 08:47:58 AM
Sorry, @wavewright62, I just found the thought of the most best troll-hunter dealing with marriage, Mikkel's family, wedding gowns, and pregnancy, to be amusing.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 17, 2021, 11:57:02 AM
Wave, first of all, hugs!

Secondly, I tend to think Mikkel and Sigrun will end up starting a family but perhaps more in a “I like you and I bet you like me too, don’t you think we should have kids now” sort of thing. Sigrun being a career troll hunter doesn’t exclude her wanting to become a mother too. Since deciding to have children is more of a commitment than getting married (in my mind at least, although it can happen by accident too), after they decided to start a family together, getting married would be small potatoes. Except if the traditions are irritating :)

Also I think this world has (should have, even) a strong expectation that people have children if they can, especially immune people. Not that anyone would be forced to! But rather that it would be seen as the norm even more than in our world nowadays (in Finland it’s perhaps still somewhat expected but it’s not rare to be childless, either by choice or by life situation circumstances). And also as they need everyone’s skills and efforts, I think becoming a mom would not stop her from being a troll hunter, or any sort of hindrance in her army career. Her mother is a general too. Obviously during pregnancy, even if it weren’t twins, and when the babies are small, she would be “tied up” at the home (not sure they’d have the capability to produce safe formula for example, so she would be breastfeeding) but only temporarily.

I tend to think about procreation a lot, in relation to basically any post-apocalypse scenarios. I’m all the time commenting things such as “don’t let her do it, you have only two women of childbearing age, you can’t afford her to get hurt”. If the human population came to a very small group, people should plan their breeding very carefully! Not in the SSSS situation, at least any more, they have enough people now to not be likely to succumb to loss of genetic variability (some small communities still might, if they didn’t make it a point to avoid) but in the early years. Sometimes I wonder why it seems so important to me, perhaps I have some Bene Gesserit in me :)

For clarification, I only mean apocalypse / post apocalypse stories. Otherwise I’m not particularly interested in such elements in stories. And, the Handmaid’s Tale, which I probably should love, I don’t. It’s too bleak. So if plans such as I make would appear in a story, I probably wouldn’t like it at all. But hey, the Bene Gesserit do not do what they want but what is good for the world(s)!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 17, 2021, 12:41:09 PM
Jitter, I think your musings make a lot of sense.

(I also wanted to add that my ridiculous story was not conceived as a response to /argument against others' more thoughtful ones. I was just meant to amuse, primarily myself.)

And for a different take on Sigrun and motherhood, there is always skrankku's comic (https://skrankku.tumblr.com/post/659896381193011200/sigrun-does-not-over-think-things).)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 17, 2021, 02:56:27 PM
I repeat, I do not disparage your stories, nor would I squirm if you continued in the same vein!
Lemme put another exclamation point or two here  !! !!
They're fun, and fun is (mostly) what we're here for. 
I apologise for any misunderstanding.

(FWIW, I loved the book of The Handmaid's Tale, haven't watched the TV production.  Bleak, certainly, but not a stretch to imagine happening in the Not-Particularly-United-Anymore States.)

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 17, 2021, 04:04:54 PM
Wave, I certainly didn’t feel like you were saying such stories are bad :) But, you asked a question so I answered (also just yesterday I was watching Raised by Wolves and very irritated by how they don’t seem to realize what they need to restart human race there).

I have read the Handmaid’s tale book too, very long ago. I liked it but don’t remember much. But the series has the same “everything is much bleak, interspersed with misery” atmosphere that all television seems to have nowadays. I think there is more in the series about life outside of Gilead than there was in the book, but still it’s all so so hopeless. Of course the fact that the setting doesn’t seem too far fetched doesn’t really help with the dark mood!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 18, 2021, 01:14:17 AM
I had a serious case of writers block for a while but I think I've figured out some decent enough poems for unpredictable and marriage.

First up..

The Borg
(Unpredictable)

Amongst our lives of knowledge and order
There are those who contest
We fly through stars, across every border
Yet all is seen distressed

We will bring together all whom we cross
Our methods effective
Every mind as one. Here we feel no loss
A peaceful collective

Those who dwell here, stubborn, violent, prideful
Leave us forsaken
They refuse and fight our logical pull
Refuse to awaken

Unpredictable are they who push back
Never understanding
The beauty of the perfection they lack
Yet they are endearing

Their techniques are difficult to adapt
Unusual tactics
We found him, their strength, and he had neen trapped
The first one of our picks

Somehow he resisted. Somehow he knew
His crew came to guard
And escape with who we couldn't subdue
That man, John Luke Picard

And this one was inspired by Reynirs sister who stayed home.

The Question
(Marriage)

I have spent forever away from home
And I'm wondering who is there
A little brother? Still longing to roam?
Our parents? Giving him a glare?

Seeing everyone I've missed while abroad
Was the greatest part of my day
My love came here to greet me and I awed
My breath was stolen. I began to sway

An important question stirred on his lips
A question I couldn't resist
He asks if I would cancel all my trips
And tells me how much I've been missed

I have spent forever away from home
Finally now my mind is clear
I no longer wish to wonder and roam
I think I will choose to stay here
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Róisín on October 18, 2021, 06:51:31 AM
Wavewright, sympathy and hugs! Marriage can be difficult in its ending - in some ways I consider myself fortunate that I have outlived previous partners rather than parting ways with them. I can only hope that Star, being a good deal younger than I, may outlive me.

 Being myself someone who has lived an adventurous life, but still wanted kids, and have them, I have never seen having children and leading an adventurous life as being mutually exclusive. But considering them so seems to be all too common! I would expect that in a post-apocalyptic world there would be more need for women to be capable of doing both.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 18, 2021, 02:39:28 PM
Opaque, great poems both!

I’m lagging badly! I have been drained by work as well a having a mild cold, sorry all!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on October 18, 2021, 03:04:03 PM
Wave, hugs from me too! This is an angle I didn´t even think about when I read the prompt. But let me also compliment you on the perspective and angles of the scene, that´s difficult to pull off!

tehta, haha, this does seem really in-character for Sigrun. :'D

Opaque, I enjoyed both of your poems! Glad you got over your writer´s block!

Jitter, I hope you´re feeling better soon! No need to be sorry, work sadly doesn´t abide to YoinkTober-rules... :P


16: Unpredictable

Very predictably I had no idea what to draw for this prompt. :'D So I turned to my brother for advice. He suggested drawing the Pokémon Morpeko, which is the lovely fellow on the left most of the time, until it makes a specific attack (or is hungry), which, very unpredictably, makes it turn into the angry purple version of itself on the right.

(https://i.postimg.cc/Wzk9YsFk/October16-Mirasol.jpg)

17: Marriage

I suppose this one needs a bit of context. For years now I´ve been drawing one picture-puzzle each year featuring a Mouse family (about 20 characters maybe). Drawing such huge scenes with a more simple style is really fun, it lets you play around with so many details, and you can tell so many small stories at once. So I sticked with these characters ever since I invented them way back when and still draw tid-bits of their lives. And, as coincidence wants, in last year´s puzzle someone got married. But since I drew that already, here´s a photo the photographer later took of the bride and her bridesmaids. (Though it seems to be a testphoto, as some of the posing is still a bit chaotic. But at least the grey filter already works! What do you mean I just didn´t have the right colors to actually color the picture?)

(https://i.postimg.cc/ryBZ0R3C/October17-Mirasol.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 18, 2021, 06:31:16 PM
So many amazing thing! Time for a bit of feedback.

Opaque, I agree the Hotakeinen's portrait is sad, but it's also very well done. I love the detail of Lalli looking sideways. It fits him so well!
Also enjoyed the poetry! The Borg part was quite unexpected! Anyway we must admit they are better than the Vogons...

Tehta, I love the "Family" story. So much feelings in so few words! The idea of a marriage between Sigrun and Emil is also quite unexpected, and funny, particularly for someone like me that have Sigrum and Mikkel together (in my mind) for so long. Nice story! And thanks for pointing Skrankku's comic! :D
Also, I agree that our finns would fit well on the Wall on my crossover, but I couldn't resist using the Swann for obvious reasons. I'm considering giving the Hotakainens/Swanns in the story black hair, to avoid having Lalli and Emil with very similar tones.
(BTW please feel free to call me grey for shorts, like everybody else. ;)  )

Wave, first a very big hug.  <3 I can just imagine how hard it was, but I suppose still better than sustaining a non-working relationship.
All great drawings as usual (I love your style). Now, that statue in the picture really looks like one of those street "statue-man". Must be the folded "tissue" covering the base...

Mirasol, so many lovely drawings! The "Food" one made me fatter just by looking at it! And the Antagonist dragon is awesome, as is the rat marriage! Oh, and I like very much your care with the dedicated lettering with "Yoinktober" for each drawing!

Reverend Mother Jitter, thanks for admiting your Bene Gesserit membership to us. :)
I'm sure reproduction aspects would be quite relevant on the SSSS Universe, particularly on small comunities (basically everywhere except Iceland and Mora). I guess there would be a "family bureau" (or a single person on small villages) that would keep track of all families to minimize genetic problems and, probably, incentivise (when possible) unions between immune people.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 19, 2021, 12:44:24 AM
Took some thinking about what I wanted to rearrange. The living room perhaps?
(Rearranged)

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/det1o9l-9e41d62e-7ce0-410b-9e57-2881843ef872.jpg/v1/fill/w_945,h_709,q_75,strp/blanket_fort_by_opaque0_det1o9l-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9NzA5IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvN2Q4MWE5MTItODRhNS00MmUxLWFhZGQtNjFmYWY2Njg3ZGZkXC9kZXQxbzlsLTllNDFkNjJlLTdjZTAtNDEwYi05ZTU3LTI4ODE4NDNlZjg3Mi5qcGciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9OTQ1In1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.eS87Eg0yMexgCDF143TXeDxsZ5VoptGVbz9MR0HH0ro)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 19, 2021, 02:39:42 AM
D'awww, what a sweet mouse family, Mirasol.  (Although if I had to pick, Ms Second-on-the-Left could provide a bit of mischief!)
Not knowing Pokemon, that description sounds great to me!

Opaque, the blanket fort! Splendid!  Presumably Kitty is handling the hot chocolate duties?  A change of pace from the more wistful poem.  I have to agree, the Borg arc where they subsumed Jean-Luc Picard was genuinely scary back in the day.  I still remember the sheer cinema of him stepping out with that light in his eye... brrrr  Lots of data for them to process (no pun intended).

Day 18 - Rearranged - Customer service on the Sveavägen line occasionally calls upon the crew to rearrange the cabin assignments, even if they are a trifle stressed.
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/178217443737600000/899875567715889172/20211019_151128.jpg?width=650&height=480)

(I am working on my The Moon piece, hopefully I'll get it finished when it's still the 19th somewhere.  If not, well, I'll post it when I finish it.  I want it to match my imagining.)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 19, 2021, 04:39:13 AM
Wow Opaque, the  :sparkle: :sparkle:blanket fort! :sparkle: :sparkle:

I love it!

@readingdragon come see this. Ask and you shall receive :)

Wave, I have to agree that working on the Sveavägen is likely to add a tiny bit more stress to the work of a ”train servant” as Michael Sr might call them.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 19, 2021, 05:04:12 AM
I, too, am suffering from work. I do have an idea for 'rearranged' but haven't had a chance to write it yet -- and I might go with something simpler anyway.

BTW, I have a Yoinktober document with some quick ideas I noted under each prompt when I started. The one under 'moon' says 'butt'. You're all welcome to use that one. Moon haiku anyone?

Now it's time for some reactions!

Opaque: I like both poems. Especially Guðrún's, since I seem to keep writing about her courtship/wedding. And the fort picture is very fun, especially the detail of Reynir bugging Onni like he always does.

Mirasol: I know how that purple Pokemon feels. And the mice look so happy. This semi-posed picture is probably better than the final posed version, anyway.

Wave
: I love the train servant's facial expression. They're doing a great job holding it together.

Grey
: Just to respond to your comment on the Sigrun & Emil story... They're not married, just engaged! A lot can still happen, including Mikkel convincing Sigrun that this is not the most best idea.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 19, 2021, 06:12:14 AM
18.10.2021 Rearranged
(Maybe even re-rearranged...)

Decided to take an early lunch and write up a silly continuation of Onni's adventures at Guðrún's wedding. 400 words of drama!



Spoiler: show
Onni was surprised to discover that the seating for the wedding feast had been pre-assigned, with tiny written tags marking each plate. The fact that he had not been placed at the same table as the expedition team was no real surprise--he was not part of their group, after all--and his vague hopes of sitting near Reynir had, of course, been extremely foolish. Still, sitting down at a table full of strangers filled him with dread, which doubled when he noticed his neighbour: the woman who had kept talking to him during the ceremony, asking intrusive questions about the intimate applications of Finnish runos.

“Ah, Onni, we meet again!” she exclaimed, smiling far too widely. “Isn’t it just wonderful?”

“Hmm.”

“So, where were we?” She looked up at him through her eyelashes. “I believe you were going to tell me more about Finnish sex magic?”

She had clearly misunderstood something fundamental about his description of the prayers one might offer up to Lempo. Seeking to fortify himself, Onni grabbed for a nearby bottle of aquavit and filled his glass to the brim.

The woman gasped. “I have heard that Finns drink a lot, of course, but… Doesn’t it impair your sexual performance?”

What? Onni sipped on his drink to buy time as he looked around wildly, praying for any sort of escape. Oddly, his prayers were answered. By a vision in blue and green.

“Onni!” Reynir exclaimed cheerfully. “There you are! But why are you sitting all the way over here? I am sure I placed--”

“Your delightful Finnish friend,” said the woman, placing a hand on Onni’s forearm, “is sitting with me.”

Reynir looked from Onni to her and back again, his smile turning upside down. “Wow! I see! You moved your name card?”

“I would have, if I had known it was possible. But wait.” Onni turned to the woman. “Does that mean that… YOU moved it?”

She simpered. “Yes. Aren’t you glad I did?”

“No.”

“That’s right, Eva.” Reynir had placed his hands on his hips. “Onni is not interested in flirtation! Particularly not with strangers!”

“Then why is his tunic covered in love staves?”

Honestly, this woman! What a one-track mind: first the obsession with Lempo sex runos, and now this. “Actually,” said Onni, “they are--”

“Actually,” said Reynir, snatching up Onni’s name card, “Onni needs to come with me. I am reversing this seating rearrangement.”



I would appear that, when Reynir enchanted his tunic, he did not consider how the act of wearing something covered in staves for luck in love might be perceived...

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 19, 2021, 08:09:00 AM
OMGs tehta, the best laid plans of mice and men…

Mybe Reynir should rearrange Onni’s tunic to place the staves in the inside, to goad him to be amorous instead of making others amorous on him. It’s not like somebody needs any persuasion anyways! Or was Onni’s vague wish a product of the staves at work?
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 19, 2021, 08:17:50 AM
OMGs tehta, the best laid plans of mice and men…

Mybe Reynir should rearrange Onni’s tunic to place the staves in the inside, to goad him to be amorous instead of making others amorous on him. It’s not like somebody needs any persuasion anyways! Or was Onni’s vague wish a product of the staves at work?

We may never know! Unless I write more of this. And your idea is a good one: Reynir should totally ask Onni to take off his tunic.

Incidentally, the Lempo-sex-rune-obsessed woman is inspired by you. Well, by your works.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 19, 2021, 01:23:27 PM
Oh, Miarsol, those mice look so pretty! I love the way you drew the dresses.
Haha, Wavewright! That face! It's great! They should get that glass fixed.

Here's another Majoras Mask post. The moon in that game can be pretty spooky.

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/det2lnf-649e88a0-f7ac-4444-a056-f0c2d15ef3d7.jpg/v1/fill/w_945,h_709,q_75,strp/the_moon_looks_bigger_than_before_by_opaque0_det2lnf-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9NzA5IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvN2Q4MWE5MTItODRhNS00MmUxLWFhZGQtNjFmYWY2Njg3ZGZkXC9kZXQybG5mLTY0OWU4OGEwLWY3YWMtNDQ0NC1hMDU2LWYwYzJkMTVlZjNkNy5qcGciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9OTQ1In1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.cXAEHWzy_wykZeHNAG5TIZ-T-31qHFP3TFjIHfJO7C4)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 19, 2021, 01:45:35 PM
We may never know! Unless I write more of this. And your idea is a good one: Reynir should totally ask Onni to take off his tunic.

Incidentally, the Lempo-sex-rune-obsessed woman is inspired by you. Well, by your works.

I knew you'd say that! In my defense, it IS the staves at work! I would never ogle a quiet Finn, if I wasn't under a spell! No, wait a minute... My hubby doesn't use sex magic, though. At least as far as I know.

All this totally reminds me of a Reynir art where he's possibly wearing some of those staves on his skin... I'll have to see if I can find it.

Opaque, that moon IS scary!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 19, 2021, 02:06:28 PM
So finally I managed to get something written down!

15.10.2021 Family

Ensi… Ensi… did you like it?... how did you feel when we got your family?...

Did you enjoy it when he bit her?... It was such a delightful scene, and how she screamed… too bad he wasn't a noita… he would have made a great addition to our collection, don't you think Ensi?

Ensi… admit it, you liked watching… watching him burn… Ensi… his light hair all alight…

Ensi… isn't it such a blessing to have sons?... such wonderful sons and their beautiful wives… all dead now… oops, did we do that?...

Was it good to have children, Ensi?... why were you allowed to, when WE GOT NOTHING?... But now we have you, and you have us… for ever and ever… Ensi…

Oh we loved seeing the shooting… Ensi… wasn't it so beautiful how his blood spattered everywhere?... the shooter was your best friend, wasn't he?... We wonder what got to him, to go butchering your son?... or that's right, we did… Ensi…

Ensi… isn't it wonderful to be free of their demands?... Admit it, you hated having family! Rejoice with us now that they are dead, all dead… --- What's this? More of them? You still have living family? Not for long!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 19, 2021, 02:22:49 PM
17.10.2021 Marriage

Veeti didn't want to get married. Not again. It had been so devastating when Kati died, and the baby too. Such ridiculous waste of life! He had been quite young Before, but he did remember having children was not something women died of.

But mum was all over him, of course. You must have more children! Your immunity is hereditary. It is selfish of you to wallow in your grief. Finland needs more people! Do your duty! This is a common effort, everyone must do their part. I want to see you remarried to a suitable young woman before it's my time to leave this world! Would you have me die unhappy?

Satu was all right. She was calm and hard-working. And young, or course. Living with her would be bearable. And she seemed to think it was a good idea. Probably mum had got to her too. And her own mum as well. Veeti was well in his fifties already, but his immunity was very tantalizing.

Maybe it would work. As long as she understood she could never replace Kati.



Taru was born in Y49, and Veeti is something around 10 in Y0. So her mother must be considerably younger than him.

This may also have something to do with the fact she seems to have an utilitarian view of family relationships.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 19, 2021, 02:31:27 PM
Reverend Mother Jitter, that's one nightmarish internal (should I say infernal?) monologue inside the Kade. I really hope it wasn't like that for over a decade...

Also, the idea of staves on Reynir's skin is... interesting. Could be a mean to give him more powers? (beyond the power of attracting his mate, I mean)

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PowerTattoo (https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PowerTattoo)

Also excellent short on "marriage" and all the pressure that would have surely existed on Post-Rash Finland, including the Taru part. Well done! :)

Opaque, I'm sure that moon is a harsh mistress!

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/TheMoonIsAHarshMistress (https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/TheMoonIsAHarshMistress)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 19, 2021, 02:33:59 PM
18.10.2021 Rearranged

"Michael, what are you doing? Isn't that your dining chairs? Why are they out here?"
"Beats me! Signe absolutely demanded we rearrange the cottage."
"Rearrange? But you only have the one room?"
"Indeed. So, I have to carry the smaller items out to be able to move the table!"

"And you just do what she says?"
"Have you met her? This is Signe we are talking about!

But you are right, she's acting a bit irrational."

"Have you asked why this is so important to her?"
"Well, yes, she says we need more space."

"More space? How come?"
"I don't know!"
"OhmygodMichael! she's nesting!"
"Nesting? What on earth are you talking about now? Have all the women here gone bonkers?" *muks* "Ouch! Did you just slap me?"

"You big oaf! Go to your wife and ask her why she needs the space. I think she has some happy news for you."
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 19, 2021, 02:38:34 PM
Aaand today! Almost caught up now

Crossing the darkness
A hint of silent silver
My Love is the Moon



Thanks Grey! You may be glad to hear the story for Unpredictable is taking us back to the Finaians!

Here is the Reynir I mentioned earlier: https://ssssforum.com/index.php?topic=1137.msg174610#msg174610 Somehow I get the feeling these staves could work even better than the ones on the tunic!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 20, 2021, 02:04:27 AM
So many frightening offerings, in time for the spooky season! The intra-kade dialogue (holy cats, that was scary), Opaque's mask moon, Signe on a rampage, and Onni covered in enough love staves to get some rando in the mood for luurrrrve.  It's.. almost too much fright!
Ahhh, Jitter, nice antidote.

I have finished my Day 19 - The Moon piece.  Kuutar has heard Lalli's runo. (never fear, I am not stuck in chap. 3)
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/178217443737600000/900227903646744656/20211020_163655.jpg?width=473&height=603)

As per Satu's age - there is an overriding flaw in Minna's family tree, where her math is seriously faulty.  The Prologue characters generally reproduced somewhere between their late 40s-60s, including the in utero Ensi.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 20, 2021, 02:27:40 AM
Oo Wave, Lalli is almost smiling! :lalli: Sweet little noita boy!

I have noticed the generation error. I think there are enough if not nearly too many Eides (for them I came up with a birth year each when I wrote the bit about them going to school)  but definitely not enough Västerströms.

Also after the first generation they are all patrilinear. Boring! (Although this helps some with the age discrepancy)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 20, 2021, 06:23:19 AM
19/20.10.2021 The Moon / One Door Opens, Another Closes

I almost posted a low-effort 'Lalli likes the moon' drabble, but doubling up on prompts is just more fun. 450 words of Mikkel's pre-Adventure adventures.



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“Listen up, Madsen,” Doctor Bohr announced. “I have a date tonight, so I need you to stick around after hours and help me out.”

Mending his socks, deworming his cat, painting his porch, and now this? The (not so) good doctor sure had a very odd view of the duties required of a dental assistant. Still, a job was a job, and this one was, at least, educational, so Mikkel kept his face neutral as he asked, “In what capacity, exactly?”

“Well, the lady in question is a person of culture and sensitivity, an artist, so we will need to go all out. Flowers, wine, music, moonlight… the full, perfect package. Make it happen, Madsen.”

Flowers were easy: they grew everywhere. Wine could be purchased from old Agnes for, say, a handful of the doctor’s painkillers. Music… well, Mikkel HAD started learning the trombone. With some luck, this artistic lady would enjoy his scales and arpeggios. As for moonlight, however…

“I will do my best. But moonlight might be hard to come by, on a moonless night.”

“Excuses are the refuge of the lazy and the incompetent, Madsen. When I hear music, and lead fair Frida over to the window, wine in hand, a flower in her gorgeous hair, I had better see a moon.”

A job was a job, but there were limits. Still, Mikkel was nothing if not resourceful.

***

Mikkel lingered on the last note of his last scale for as long as his untrained lungs permitted. Then, he gently laid down his instrument, cast a glance at the upstairs window--as predicted, it showed a bored woman and an irritated dentist--and turned away from the building.

Undoing his belt and dropping his trousers was the work of a second. Strangely, though, the angry screaming did not start until he had leaned forward slightly.

Mikkel listened to the doctor’s words serenely, memorizing a few new curses, until he heard the by-now familiar phrase: “Madsen, you are fired!” Only then, once he was truly off the clock, did he pull his trousers back up.

He was putting away his instrument when he heard the lady call out.

“Ahoy, musician!” She waved from the window, alone, no dentist in sight. “What a nice, solid shape you have there. Almost abstract in its spherical harmony.”

“Thank you,” said Mikkel, closing the trombone-case. “That is exactly the effect I was going for.”

“Oh, very well done. You know, I might have a proposition for you.”

Mikkel had performed many jobs, but propositions from cultured ladies were somewhat outside even his experience. Still, he was always happy to pick up new skills. “What sort of proposition?”

“Have you ever worked as an artist’s model?”

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 20, 2021, 06:37:31 AM
Commenting time!

Opaque: As others have said, horrifying.

Jitter: First of all, I did not say the lady was you. She just shares your interests! I know that, as a Finn yourself, you would never prolong such an excruciating conversation. (Also, the runed Reynir is pretty, but possibly a bit too much for Onni to handle at this point.)
Secondly, so much amazing stuff! You must be better! The Marriage vignette, which was probably based on your Bene Gesserit membership, is very clever and almost makes me feel for Taru. I think your Signe sounds spot-on. The Haiku is more traditional than what we usually see here: I think the moon is a valid seasonal reference. Maybe poetry forms were one of the few things Emil actually studied? And the Kade piece is just chilling, and also ingenious.

wave: Thank you for soothing my Moon-and-Kade-jangled nerves. Happy pics of Lalli are so rare.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: lwise on October 20, 2021, 07:49:24 AM
I have noticed the generation error. I think there are enough if not nearly too many Eides (for them I came up with a birth year each when I wrote the bit about them going to school)  but definitely not enough Västerströms.

I solved the Västerström problem by making Torbjörn Torolf's rejected son, adopted by Mia and Fredrik and never told the truth of his parentage.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Róisín on October 20, 2021, 08:25:42 AM
Oh yes, I remember that story. It was a good idea. Parts of that story were truly horrific, parts were just sweet.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 20, 2021, 11:33:13 AM

Jitter: First of all, I did not say the lady was you. She just shares your interests! I know that, as a Finn yourself, you would never prolong such an excruciating conversation. (Also, the runed Reynir is pretty, but possibly a bit too much for Onni to handle at this point.)
Secondly, so much amazing stuff! You must be better! The Marriage vignette, which was probably based on your Bene Gesserit membership, is very clever and almost makes me feel for Taru. I think your Signe sounds spot-on. The Haiku is more traditional than what we usually see here: I think the moon is a valid seasonal reference. Maybe poetry forms were one of the few things Emil actually studied? And the Kade piece is just chilling, and also ingenious.

I know you didn't indicate me, so no worries :) And yes, I am feeling better! I had all these ideas but could not muster the strength to write them, now I did.

I am sure the moon is a proper kigo although I didn't check what time it would refer to. Somehow I think autumn but really I don't know.

Also I totally lost it with Mikkel's moonshine :D  :mikkel:

lwise that is a clever idea. I don't think I have read that, I'll have to go look.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 20, 2021, 11:36:26 AM
Wavewright, that Lalli drawing is great! I love the moon through the window.

Jitter, your stories are so fun (and disturbing, poor Ensi). Signe demanding things without explaining why is so something she would do. Haha.

Tetha, poor Mikkel. Poor guy never catches a break. At that point he's probably heard "you're fired" more than "you're hired".  :mikkel:

A poem for Turri

New Path
(One door opens, another closes)

Standing in silence
Looking for guidance
This young girl needs to work it out
She cannot escape
Confined to this place
Though she prefers a different rout

What's beyond the walls?
Where adventure calls
Ruined ancient halls
The wonder of all

Perhaps a bit naive
But knows she can't leave
Taught of the dangers of the world
She would be exposed
That door has closed
There's another way. Her brow furled

Shaking off the fear
Driving her career
Make a path appear
So she can leave here

She's great at her work
She said with a smirk
Too enticing an offering
Open up the gates
The silent world waits
There can be no more faltering
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: lwise on October 20, 2021, 11:41:48 AM
@Jitter, it's called Emil's Long Walk.  https://archiveofourown.org/works/24988444 (https://archiveofourown.org/works/24988444)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on October 20, 2021, 11:47:16 AM
Opaque, the blanket fort! A relic of our comment-section´s lore. I love it! And also a truly great choice for the moon-prompt! (To this day I still wonder at what point the creators of that game went "You know what, let´s give the moon a creepy face!", but it´s nothing if not effective in setting the game´s tone...) Your poem captures Tuuri really well too!

Wave, that poor train-employee looks very stressed... I do hope the job at least pays well. And I really like your Lalli-picture! Especially the sky looks amazing!

tehta, oh poor Onni! But I think Mikkel got the best outcome with being fired in this situation... (I have to ask though, what´s the connection between the moon and butts? ^^')

Jitter, so many offerings! I especially like the "Family"-one. A view into the Kade, truly chilling! XoX


18: Rearranged

At some points during Tetris you just wish you did a lot of things differently. Or were able to rearrange them after the fact.

(https://i.postimg.cc/Hs1ztr7f/October18-Mirasol.jpg)

19: The Moon

In the show Adventure Time there was an arc called "Stakes" once. In it the current focus-character Marceline had to kill five very powerful vampires which were designed after Tarot-cards and their meaning. One of them was designed after "The Moon". She seemed small, graceful and innocent at first glance, but if you looked too closely had way too many teeth and limbs. She didn´t speak, but could almost mindcontrol others, was extremely fast and had incredible healing-powers. (Ehm, I think it´s obvious that I thought she was the coolest of the vampires...)
I don´t fully recall which aspects of her were directly taken from the card, but there´s some incredible analyses of that on Youtube in case you´re interested.
In this one I tried to think her design backwards and drew a Tarot-card with her on it. I don´t know a whole lot about Tarot, so I let internet-references guide me. I hope I did okay. ^^'

(https://i.postimg.cc/hPt6s0Mw/October19-Mirasol.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 20, 2021, 12:19:22 PM
Mirasol:
Regarding the question about the moon and butts, look at definition 12 here (https://www.dictionary.com/browse/moon).

Regarding the art, the tetris one is very annoying for obvious reasons, and the moon one... eeeeee! I am a total Adventure Time fan, and also specifically a Marceline fan. (Her story with Simon is just heartbreaking, plus she's so cool, of course.) I recognized the character at once!

Opaque:
That's a wonderful poem that spirit!Ensi might want to read, for insight into her grandchild.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on October 20, 2021, 01:02:26 PM
Mirasol:
Regarding the question about the moon and butts, look at definition 12 here (https://www.dictionary.com/browse/moon).

Hm, that explains a lot. :'D

Regarding the art, the tetris one is very annoying for obvious reasons, and the moon one... eeeeee! I am a total Adventure Time fan, and also specifically a Marceline fan. (Her story with Simon is just heartbreaking, plus she's so cool, of course.) I recognized the character at once!

Ah what really? Eeeee! I too am a huge fan, especially of Marcy (Yes, she is so cool!), and both the Stakes-miniseries and the episodes of her and Simon remain some of my favorites to this day. :))
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: JoB on October 20, 2021, 02:41:27 PM
(I have to ask though, what´s the connection between the moon and butts? ^^')
Ehhhh, pale white (if you're of that general color), round, rising above the horizon/waistband on cue... otherwise the kind of random association that makes another thing a "tramp stamp" in English but "ass antlers" (Arschgeweih) in German (except Swiss German, I'm told) ...

In this one I tried to think her design backwards and drew a Tarot-card with her on it. I don´t know a whole lot about Tarot, so I let internet-references guide me. I hope I did okay. ^^'
Looking at the classic design (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Moon_(Tarot_card)) and comparing it to the one I randomly came across (https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/wyrmwood/corrupted-tarot-by-wyrmwood) today

Spoiler: folded to save some screen real estate • show

(https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/7/7f/RWS_Tarot_18_Moon.jpg/220px-RWS_Tarot_18_Moon.jpg) vs. (https://3kyj0yax3f42pj6jr2qjywv1-wpengine.netdna-ssl.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/10/The-Moon-608x1024.jpg) (https://3kyj0yax3f42pj6jr2qjywv1-wpengine.netdna-ssl.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/10/The-Moon.png)

I'd guess that it's a nigh-impossible mission to (re)design a tarot card such that the users will not find a hidden and welcome meaning in it. ;)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 20, 2021, 02:47:33 PM
One Door Opens, Another Closes

”Reynir, come sit with me.” Unndís seemed serious, almost sad.
“What is it, dear?” Reynir followed his wife to the bench just outside their door. The children were in bed, so when they left the door ajar they could enjoy the rare warm-ish evening.
“Reynir, I… I have come to a conclusion. We can’t go on.”
“What? I don’t understand you, Unndís. What do you mean?”
“This…” she was vaguely gesturing at both of them, as well as towards their home. “This is not your destiny, Reynir. Not for ever.”
“Not my…? But… you are my wife! Of course you are my destiny forever!”

“No, love. You are not one for such domestic comfort. I know you crave adventure.”
“No, Unndís! You are wrong! I promised to stay with you. Have I ever complained about our life?”
“No you haven’t. But I know you. I can tell you feel diminished. You cannot be stuck to this village. This island. And I cannot be stuck waiting for you.”

“Unndís, I would never ever leave you! And the children!”
“I know that, Reynir. That’s why I have to do it.”
“Are you… let me get this straight. Are you telling me that we should divorce?”
“No. I’m telling you we will divorce. You have to go find your purpose, and I have to be free to look for mine.”
“But… I want to stay here! Stay home with you.”
”But you don’t. Not fully. Staying would not be right, not for either of us.”
“But the children…”
“They are always your children. You will always be welcome here, as their father, as a beloved friend. Just not my husband anymore.”
“We made a promise! Asked for Freya’s blessing!”
“Yes we did. And she did bless us! What else do you call three healthy, wonderful children? We have received our boon!”
“I… can I… can we at least consider this for a while?”
“Of course. There is no hurry. But my mind is made up, as this is what my heart tells me.”

That night, sleeping next to the woman who had been his (admittedly, on and off) sweetheart since their teenage years, Reynir had his first omen dream in several years. He saw different landscapes, mountains and lava fields of his native Iceland as well as hills covered in mighty forests and great lakes studded with green islands. He saw roaring rivers and stormy seas, warm sun and fields blanketed in snow. And galdastrafir, staves everywhere. They were glowing, growing, forming and etching everywhere in all the lands and seas he saw. And he felt the life in all that land, and somehow touched it, and was touched by it. And death too, disease and healing, hurt and happiness of all things that were still alive in the wounded world. Sometimes it was awesome, sometimes scary, sometimes outright horrible. And all through these visions, he felt another with him, a presence and support of a companion. He didn’t see, who it was, but he felt familiar.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 20, 2021, 05:16:15 PM
Bit of emotional whiplash here, fer sherr.
tehta, that is one perfectly crafted bit of fluff and nonsense.   :mikkel:
Opaque, again a beautifully evocative piece, and I love the rhythm of it.
Mirasol, a nice Tarot redesign is *chef's kiss* for the prompt.  I don't know this character, but I find it interesting that the reversed card would have the pointy bit on her head pointing down, like a blade or stylus.  Both of those can be used to reveal the hidden elements of the Moon from the upright card.
Jitter, your story would also tie into Marriage, and (very tangientally) Familiar.  Although I would hope Unndís is a seithkona as well, else this would be a helluva shock.

My idea for One Door Opens, Another Closes was a corridor in Odense hospital with the classic comedy premise of various bits popping in and out of the doors - Mikkel & Sigrun, socktroll, Lalli, ghosts, the skull-encrusted giant.... but it got to be too complicated, plus uurrrggggh perspective.  I may return to this, but it ain't'a happenin' today.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 21, 2021, 06:54:52 AM
20.10.2021 Birth

Wow! I just thought about it, and yes, it seems that Mia had a kid in her sixties. Pretty good for a godless Swede! (But giving Torbjörn that somewhat scandalous origin--he could even be out of wedlock, which a prissy family might care about--makes so much sense! Headcanon adopted.)

Jitter, your story made me very sad, because of its realism. Sometimes love is not enough... But hey, maybe your Reynir is the same as mine, below!



Now for the main part: something very simple today! 150 words of lunchtime content.

The baby was healthy, and genuinely adorable. It was only with reluctance that Árni handed it back to Sigríður and stepped back, to give both their mothers better access.

He found himself standing next to Aunt Helga, who was yawning broadly. At first, he felt offended--how could anyone be bored by this baby!--but then he understood.

“Did you not sleep well?” he asked. “Any dreams?”

“Yes, but not the kind you hope for. Nothing prophetic about the baby,” she said, yawning again. “No, I dreamt of pure nonsense. Endless forests, huge ancient cars, land-beasts. You, but much younger, in a fur cape. Or without the cape, in a boat with a man with a bad haircut, rowing past strange trees, like ferns on a stick. And spirits. So, so many spirits, sad, and angry, and joyous.” She rubbed her eyes. “I really should not have eaten all that cheese.”
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 21, 2021, 07:21:45 AM
Great contributions, everyone!
I'm busy today, moving my old mother to a new apartment, smaller but closer to where I live, so I won't be able to do much. Hopefully tomorrow all will be settled...
Big hugs
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 21, 2021, 05:15:30 PM
Day 21 - Birth - Hotakainen silliness, anyone?
(https://64.media.tumblr.com/66947020001568ebbd9afe82159f15ae/e921ab8019d8aa81-5b/s2048x3072/49be5b755585acab6f64cb9afebf57668b479016.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 21, 2021, 11:40:45 PM
I won't append this to my previous comment because it is very different.

Day 22 - Death - the card of closure, moving to the next phase - sometimes that means a literal death, sometimes it's just clearing away that which is dying.

(https://64.media.tumblr.com/a734de7d33c4d50c3d6f7b218d405dbe/e90604e5e15fb008-df/s1280x1920/b6f68479b5c55c144a17292ee9ae493e8767e41d.png)

Death reversed is not life, it is stagnation - stuck and unable to move on.
(https://64.media.tumblr.com/944e41bf248ffd347592e0c4f89cebc0/e90604e5e15fb008-6e/s1280x1920/50052792cc4c3749b77c2d733c0d2ddb24a0b6d9.png)


Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on October 22, 2021, 01:53:52 PM
JoB, oooh, the werewolf-card looks really cool! And the explanation on it seems pretty in line with the character I drew. If I remember correctly they did it in the show so that the card´s normal and upside down meaning would both apply to the vampire´s designs and to the character development Marceline would go through in that episode. I always found that such a fascinating concept for a story!

Jitter, what a bittersweet scene! But sometimes that´s the only way to move foreward.

tehta, yes, nothing prophetic indeed... Now is it a blessing or a curse Reynir and his dad look so alike? :reynir:

Wave, hehe, the silliness is much apprechiated. And Veeti dismissing all the "unimportant" stuff and jumping right to names is hilarious. :'D (His suggestions though are sure something...) The design of your card reminds me a bit of "The Scream" by Munch, which I think is very fitting.


20: One door opens, another closes

Note to self: even though I always think it won´t take longer if I don´t do lines, I´m absolutely wrong and I will regret it.

I chose to ignore the existential crisis this prompt gave me and drew more silly fanart, again for Splatoon. :V
The two (so far) existing games in the franchise have started a tradition that when one game´s "lifespan" comes to an end, it will hold a final event where the community gets to vote for and fight over two possibilities which will influence the next game´s plot to a degree. And even though the team I was in favor of won this time (team Chaos) and the trailers for the third game look great, I can´t help but feel just a little bit sad that this also means we´ll never get to see (outside of fanfiction) what the other option would have entailed.

(https://i.postimg.cc/DwXd4b32/October20-Mirasol.jpg)

21: Birth

I drew another witch-character, this time a young witch waiting for his familiar to finally hatch. I wanted to use a similar coloring as the background on my tarot-card since I thought it looked nice, but without any real bright colors to balance it out it didn´t turn out as well as I hoped... :P

(https://i.postimg.cc/zfwC0Zf6/October21-Mirasol.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 22, 2021, 02:26:48 PM
I have written several births so didn’t feel like another one but here’s a haiku for birth as well as death

Yellow leaves falling
Disappearing under snow
Nourish the new growth

(https://i.postimg.cc/7YS22K1b/E729-BA0-D-CA6-A-4712-9-E66-7-C9-DC5-E0-D9-A1.jpg)

(Yes, I was raking leaves the garden today. Again. The trees are lovely, but there is a lot of raking!)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 22, 2021, 03:19:44 PM
Mirasol I like the color scheme of your Birth! The other one is interesting too, although again I don’t know the game. But Tetris I do know! No rearranging!

Wave I too was immediately reminded of The Scream with the Death card, except for the deadly colors. And the Birth is great, Tuuli looks like the crazy person she was designated in the beginning :)

Tehta it could well be the same Reynir! Maybe he will get to see his palm trees after all!

And thanks for the comments on the divorce piece. I find it overly soppy myself. I needed a piece for the Spirit House arc resolving Reynir’s children while still allowing him to be with Onni. I think it needs more work but it serves the purpose for now.

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 22, 2021, 04:52:18 PM
22.10.2021 Death

I do plan to leave comments on others' pieces, but it will have to wait until tomorrow!

For now, hmm. I had asked on Discord whom I should kill horribly, and the eventual suggestion was 'Sigrun, in a way that keeps her out of Valhalla. For example, by food-poisoning caused by Mikkel's cooking'. I think I could have made this work, but in the end I went off in a completely different direction, since the last few comic pages have put me in a more Hotakainen mood. I am not sure I like this: I think it is the most dramatic thing I have written outside of an Emil POV. But we know something like this must have happened, don't we?



Spoiler: show
Onni had been bracing for death ever since hearing the first remote scream. Every new scream, every gunshot, every plume of smoke spotted across the water had increased the tension in his body, until moving his stiff limbs through his daily chores required a deliberate effort. Sleep felt impossible. He’d sit there in the night, holding Tuuri and trying not to think about anything except the practical things he could or should do.

In the end, sheer exhaustion dragged him down and into his haven, where he barely took in the gloomy sky before drifting off, again, the rock wall at his back.

And then the built up tension broke, horribly: something snapped inside him -- HIS FATHER WAS DEAD -- and he sat up wide awake, heart pounding, with only just enough presence of mind to catch his sister before she slid to the ground, and to lay her down gently, instead.

Luckily, she did not wake. Her face remained peaceful, untroubled. How would he tell her? How would he help her through it? That was the important thing now, not the broken tangle in his chest. He was needed. He drew into himself, tried to find his composure--and was glad of it, when he felt his heart clench again; an aftershock? A second death? But why did it feel so much like the first?

His question was answered when Lalli raced out of his dark corner and past him, towards the dark water of the lake. Onni staggered to his feet, and ran after, stumbling, far too slow, reaching him only when they were both already knee-deep.

Lalli stopped then, before Onni had even placed a hand on his shoulder.  And Onni hated himself, because his first coherent though was, “At least he won’t need to be told.”

“We will be okay,” he said, instead, feeling his eyes moisten.


Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 22, 2021, 05:15:03 PM
Because Ensi is awesome, I decided to combine birth and death into one that's all for her.

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/det9gsx-1acbf818-2ee3-4dc0-a1ff-427113ce8d02.png/v1/fill/w_945,h_709,q_80,strp/ensi_by_opaque0_det9gsx-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9NzA5IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvN2Q4MWE5MTItODRhNS00MmUxLWFhZGQtNjFmYWY2Njg3ZGZkXC9kZXQ5Z3N4LTFhY2JmODE4LTJlZTMtNGRjMC1hMWZmLTQyNzExM2NlOGQwMi5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9OTQ1In1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.eew8lSc_FP9dhdWrHGp9yxF_imYJoeVHUZ1DYOgvr74)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 22, 2021, 05:52:28 PM
No Hotakainen shall have mercy!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 22, 2021, 07:08:15 PM
Ooh, it's tomorrow now.

Opaque: Yes, Ensi is awesome, and I love this picture, from the Sauna birth through the beautiful forest to the release from the Kade.

wave: The death card is very clever, the way it works in reverse.  And the birth comic is hilarious. Crazy Tuuli, sure, but also anxious Saku... And I wonder how different Ensi might have been, with an Italian name.

Jitter: another true Haiku! And beautiful leaves. (Also, Reynir WILL get to see palm trees in any headcanon I develop for him.)

Mirasol: I love both pics, although I do not know the game well. And I do like the colours on the hatching picture! And the furniture, especially the lamp.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 23, 2021, 12:43:22 AM
Day 23 - Right In Front of Your Nose - Aksel Eide & Sigrun Larsen have been friends for awhile, but it takes an apocalypse to make them see one another in a new light.
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/178217443737600000/901232327764623420/20211023_104747.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 23, 2021, 04:38:43 AM
Wave, a nice scene in the middle of the apocalypse 🥰 And very well done, I especially like Sigrun here.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: JoB on October 23, 2021, 05:10:31 AM
I had asked on Discord whom I should kill horribly, and the eventual suggestion was 'Sigrun, in a way that keeps her out of Valhalla. For example, by food-poisoning caused by Mikkel's cooking'.
A warrior dying from a poisoned dish prepared by a faithless Dane? I suspect that some of the einherjar would vote "come on in already" nonetheless ...

Spoiler: gore warning • show

How about getting shipwrecked in icy waters, with not even a shark around to mock-fight (https://satwcomic.com/off-to-the-rave), the only nearby land being a small island that is an active volcano so that you have warm water nearby and can momentarily stand on semi-cooled-off crust but need to stay awake at all times to step out of the way of stuff that'd happily kill you in a not-an-actual-opponent way?


And I wonder how different Ensi might have been, with an Italian name.
Still zipping through the forersts to mage-scout, but intentionally stomping every mushroom in sight? :3
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 23, 2021, 03:41:43 PM
23.10.2021 Right in Front of Your Nose

My contribution is somewhat in the same spirit as wave's, but I had planned for that ahead of time! It's the continuation of Onni's wedding adventures. I hope he likes them better than yesterday's grief and drama. (And no, it's not all just an enchantment brought on by the runes! Inside or out, they do not work on the tunic's wearer...)

But oof, I am running out of steam, a little! I wanted to trim this down--I can see that some parts need it--but even writing it took way longer than expected. It's been tough, poking at a new idea every day or two. I think it's made me a faster writer, overall, but I worry about the quality.

Reactions tomorrow, as before.




Spoiler: show
“I am so sorry about that,” said Reynir, as he led Onni around the edge of the field where the wedding feast was taking place. “I have never worn this tunic, myself, so I had not realized how the runes might affect random strangers.”

“Never mind.” Onni found he could not be truly angry with his rescuer. “It must be an easy mistake to make. Don’t the runes for love and the ones for luck look very similar?”

“Not very.” Reynir tugged on his braid. “But never mind, I have an idea! Why don’t you turn the tunic inside out? That way, the… love-runes… will at least be hidden, and might lose their power.”

“Worth trying.” Onni reached for the tunic’s hem.

“No, no, hold on! Let’s find somewhere more private!”

Onni did not understand the fuss. (Surely, nobody would care if he went shirtless for a few seconds? At least, not once the runes were out of the picture?) Still, his agreeable mood persisted, so he spent some time helping Reynir look for suitable cover. This being Iceland, all they found was low shrubs; in the end, Reynir elected to act as a screen while Onni changed. The whole incident seemed to fluster him a great deal. He had to take a moment before leading Onni to his real assigned seat.

Which turned out to be at the bridesmaids’ table.

Onni should probably have expected this, given how Reynir was dressed, but he could not help feeling unworthy of such an important spot. Once he sat down, however, things got much better. He was welcomed, but only in a vague, friendly way: the bridesmaids were far too busy discussing the bride, and the wedding, to ask him any personal questions. Sitting in calm silence and hearing others’ cheerful gossip wash over him was not unpleasant.

After a long, peaceful while, he became aware of another conversation: two of the bridesmaid’s dates were discussing the practicalities of sheep-rearing. Hearing such plain, fact-based talk proved another source of comfort, one Onni had not known he needed. After a while, he felt comfortable enough to join in, asking a few basic questions, and listening to the sensible answers.

And then, Reynir joined in.

Hearing his voice, Onni felt a mixture of emotions. Some pleasure--caused, no doubt, by the gratitude he still felt over his earlier rescue--and some anxiety that his moment of social comfort was about to end. To his surprise, however, the conversation stayed on-topic. Reynir stated a few opinions, which were received with courtesy: no, with appreciation, even respect. It seemed that a couple of Reynir’s sheep had been the envy of the county fair, and his best ram was in great demand.

It made sense, of course. Sheep husbandry was Reynir’s actual job: he had been a mage for about as long as Onni had been a world traveller. So why was the fact that he was at least as competent as the other farmers such a surprise? Was it because he was so much better-looking?

Now where had that thought come from? Onni reached for a drink.

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thorny on October 23, 2021, 03:44:50 PM
Reverend Mother Jitter, that's one nightmarish internal (should I say infernal?) monologue inside the Kade. I really hope it wasn't like that for over a decade...

Coming back to this:

I think probably not. Kade-enslaved Ensi didn't seem to know who she herself was, or who anyone else was. When Tuuri broke her soul out of the Kade, Ensi-soul tried to get back into it; and showed no sign of recognizing Tuuri, Onni, or Lalli until the Swan shook her loose the rest of the way.

(That was still an impressive work by Jitter, though.)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 23, 2021, 06:05:39 PM
Right in front of your nose

She was felt equal parts fabulous and empty. The Opening Night had been a success. All of the main singers had been wonderful, and the audience had been raptured. Like they had been transported to another world! She was sure that when Rowan descended from the tree to Owen's open arms, there wasn't a dry eye in the entire auditorium. Owen himself had looked ready to burst into tears. The man was a great talent, no matter how much he tried to claim otherwise. And he and Rowan really worked well together.

Now the stage lights were out, and the audience were finding their way out of the theatre. Owen and Rowan were still holding hands after the numerous rounds of bows they had taken and looked a bit like they had forgotten the play was over. Lawrence was nowhere to be seen, although she was sure Emile was helping him unwind.

She wanted to, no, needed to celebrate this triumph, but all of the stars were occupied. What to do? She was already considering whether it would be too cruel to disrupt Owen and Rowan's moment, when her staff arrived at the backstage area, with flowers and champagne. Oh, of course! She did have all the most best company!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 23, 2021, 08:54:49 PM
Aw, so many nice contributions!  Have I told you all yet how much I appreciate all of you coming along for this ride with me?  Like tehta, I feel the pressure of producing just about every day as the month goes on, but it is part of the original point.  Much like NaNoWriMo, it's supposed to help instill a realisation that we can fit creativity into our busy daily lives, and possibly start a healthy new habit. 
Spoiler: whining moi moi moi • show
Personally, this is the time of the month when I get the blahs, too, because I start spending more time & energy on the pictures and get frustrated when they get pretty much ignored on social media when I share them.  I usually stay within the realm of cartoony jokes, because when I try to put in layers of meaning and reference distilled into a detail, it doesn't connect with anyone outside my own head. I then get depressed because a pisstake I doodled in literally 30 seconds is better-received. *raises hand* Hi, I'm wavewright62, and I am an affirmation junkie.
*ahem*


So: affirmation for everybody!
I am really enjoying the ongoing stories of both the opera and the wedding.  Such shenanigans!
Jitter, you can be counted upon to bring the spirit of nature into your haiku - this is exactly right.
tehta, the angst when the spoilered spoilered, and Lalli then spoilered too!  But not their mothers?  hmmm
Opaque, encompassing both birth and death in one concise, beautifully laid out piece! *chef's kiss* The palette suits the image well.
Mirasol, going lineless brings a really nice result in your work, even if it does take longer?  You brought the two options into lovely realisation, and I love their colours and the composition. Also, chicken feet on the furniture?  LOVE it!
Last - JoB, you got the reference! Huzzah! (Veeti was indeed inspired by his handheld game, at least for Mario.)

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 24, 2021, 02:12:21 AM
Wavewright, that cute drawing of Aksel and Sigrun gave me some inspiration for the right in front of your nose prompt. That scene is great.

I wanted the poem to be nonspecific but it's about a video game couple from one of the Harvest Moon games Rick and Karen.

Old Friend
(Right in front of your nose)

Sitting here, side by side, on a crisp clear morning
We talk, as always. Our eyes meet with no warning.
He has matured over the years since we were young
And now looking into his eyes my heart is strung

Today just like every other in this small town
We sit on our bench, as always, and goof aroun'
But our time is short and we begin our work day
I look as he walks away wishing he could stay

Someday down the road I knew I would find someone
Who knew that my childhood friend would be the one
That sudden spark as we both sat there together
The thought of romance left me light as a feather

What I feel now is stronger than just a mere whim
I never knew how deep my feelings were for him
Next time I see him. I will tell him at our place
It turns out, my love was right in front of my face
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 24, 2021, 05:36:48 AM
Once again, it's tomorrow...

wave: I already mentioned your fence drawing, but here I would like to say that it's very well done. A small casual moment, with both of them enjoying the closeness... I also feel a strong sense of what the weather is like, because of the combination of what they wear and how they leave their heads uncovered.

Regarding the feedback thing, I feel you! As a writer, I know that it's never the pieces one really works at that get the feedback. I write plenty of silly one-offs and I can definitely see the difference. (And, actually, feedback is another Yoinktober problem, for me: there are so many pieces that it's hard to find the time to be thoughtful about each one. I knoe some of my comments have been very hasty, and I apologize.) I will try to do better, all round.

Opaque: A very cute poem. I don't know the game, but I read it as a companion to the pic above and it also worked quite well...

Jitter: A thrilling conclusion! Or is it? I hope Ms Victoria enjoys the staff that showed up in her room (I will see myself out).

JoB: I laughed at the mushroom reference. (Incidentally, I went mushroom picking in Italy on Friday, and to my disappointment nobody stomped on anything.) But the volcano thing is just cruel.

 
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 24, 2021, 06:00:19 AM
Opaque, I’m not sure whether I have commented on all of your poems, but they are impressive! They convey so much feeling in such elegant ways. (In the Right in front of my nose there is a small typo on the last stanza, I think you meant knew instead of new?) And I am continually amazed at the way you chur ot both great art and poetry!

Wave, can I join your club too? Oh the sweet affirmation! I don’t need it, I could easily stop at any time! I just don’t want to, in a completely rational an composed way… More, please!

At least I feel it may be healthier for us to crave for “likes” for something we create rather than how sexy we look in photos*. Now for some people getting the best photos of themselves is a creative effort akin to performative art, and as long as they enjoy it, I have absolutely nothing against it. But when it becomes a pressure, that you have to get Insta likes, it is not good for the person or for their community.

* which, incidentally, is not at all, in my case
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 24, 2021, 12:18:14 PM
Thank you for the heads up on my misspelling on the poem. I fixed it.

Also, elegant? Hehe, now that's a word that has never been used to describe me or anything I do. I never knew how fun it is to construct poems and I'm having so much fun writing them. Thank you for the kind words y'all have given me regarding my art. There have been so many inspiring post on this thread. The stories, the art, the pictures are all fantastic!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 24, 2021, 05:01:38 PM
Day 24 - Water - a change of pace for me, with a nod toward the spooky season

Water underneath
Body of water leaching water of body
underneath water

Edit:  I like this better:

Water underneath body
of water leaching water of
body underneath water
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 24, 2021, 05:14:48 PM
Wave, I love it! A poetical palindrome, and definitely creepy.

My own excuses below...
Spoiler: show

I won't be posting today, because my life took the prompt too seriously and we had a burst pipe in the kitchen, leaking into the shop downstairs. There was a lot of panic. My partner's brother-in-law is a plumber, so he came over, as did seven more of his relatives (we're visiting his home town and staying in an unused family house, so I guess they all wanted to watch the floor and wall being pulled apart in the search for the pipe) and I had to make lunch for everyone. Without using much of the kitchen.

Hmm. Maybe that could have been a Madsen story or something. But I am too tired to write it...
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 24, 2021, 05:55:35 PM

Hmm. Maybe that could have been a Madsen story or something. But I am too tired to write it...

Oh, please do! Especially after Michael told Signe she should go be 'a plumber or something', it would be turnabout!
After, you rest up from catering this catastrophe.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 25, 2021, 04:59:13 AM
(ooookay, me again?)

Day 25 - Community - "Angelina finally picked up a plate, piled a scoopful of rice on it, and spoke to the nearest of the newcomers, “You want the green stuff, or the yellow stuff, or the red stuff?”  Before they could answer, she hastened to add, “They’re all nice.  And there’s chicken, and some beef, and I think that’s chorizo?  Oh, there's kielbasa.  Whatever you want, here y’go.”"

An illustration from 'Thanksgiving at the Last Curry House in New Jersey' (https://archiveofourown.org/works/15019994), a Year 0 fic I wrote some time ago that examines the concept of creating a Community where you find it, against the backdrop of a group of people who take refuge in a strip mall in rural New Jersey.  (spoiler: lots of them die) Pictured are Dierdre, Rachel, Nisha and Angelina, with some of the refugees who show up magically in time to eat all the curry they made when the freezers finally shut down.  It...kinda sorta makes sense in context.

(https://64.media.tumblr.com/de3a1be084519d7f17a2f955011007b5/40cdfd0b2455cf03-43/s2048x3072/e9fe4479bc9fde7efe2a331abd6cefe4fb6c8191.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 25, 2021, 06:27:13 AM
wave, that's a perfect use of the prompt! I like all the different character designs. And the pic on the wall: I can just see it in colour.
(Oh, and regarding the earlier question about Onni's and Lalli's mothers: I was imagining that happening a bit later. I think the twins were somewhere together during my snippet, perhaps looking for Ensi.)

For myself, unless sudden inspiration strikes, I think I will be skipping a couple of days. Excuses, excuses:

Spoiler: show
The plumbing issues continue, and now the work-week has started... and I would rather rest up and come back strong for the last few days than tire myself prematurely. Hopefully others are doing the same! And, yes, the wish for feedback plays into this. When I am writing for myself, to create a story that I wish would exist, I can be semi-mature even if I get no real feedback. I can convince myself that I wrote the fic that I wanted to exist, my future self will like it, and that perhaps there are a few people out there who share my preferences and will find and enjoy it someday. After all, I am not unique! But forcing myself to write to a random prompt, without even myself as a potential audience, well... it's hard not to feel bad when my contribution doesn't get any traction. So I'll wait until I feel inspired enough to suspect I will enjoy re-reading the piece someday.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 25, 2021, 11:17:39 AM
I am traveling for work for the first time since early last year and it’s surprisingly stressful! But I have a piece for Water at least, which you will get soonish. Don’t think I’ll have time to finish it before dinner but I will post it before I go to bed tonight. Promise!

Wave, your palindrome is great and really spooky! Good I’m nowhere near any bodies of water! No, wait…

Also, mmmmm curry… the people are wonderfully personal! Great work again.

Tehta I am sorry to hear about your disaster zone! You are right to not push yourself into writing when it doesn’t feel good.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on October 25, 2021, 02:07:38 PM
*Rushes in* Ah, I´m back! Had a bit of a stressful (if very nice) weekend.

Jitter, a beautiful leaf-picture with accompanying Haiku! And yay for the opera-cast surviving opening night! There´s nothing like celebrating after that! Out of total theater-kid interest, are you using an existing play as a reference, or is it fully fictional?

tehta, oh boy, that death-scene made me feel some things. :'( But at least the wedding seems to slowly get Onni into a better mood.
The entire plumbing-situation sounds very stressful though. Do take all the time you need to recover the creative-juices! And may everything be fixed soon!

Opaque, a worthy tribute for Ensi, who is indeed awesome! And a really nice poem!

Wave, the Scene of Aksel and Sigrun is very sweet! And the fence must have taken forever! Both versions of the palindrome are wonderfully eerie, it immediately paints a picture in my mind. (I might have been listening to the Magnus Archives just a bit too much lately...) And the curry-scene seems very hopeful! I must read the story it´s based on if I have a bit more time later.

Spoiler: ongoing affirmation-discussion • show
I seem to be going about the feedback-thing similarly as tehta. A part of that might be that, except for here, I I tend to keep most of my work "for myself" (or close family and friends) anyways. Often it is enough for me that I brought a thing into existence to give me the will to keep going. That said, I do love affirmation as well, and I know the frustration of the dumb funny story/picture that didn´t take long being better-recieved as the piece that has been long planned out. (Though these long-planned-out pieces also have a very high probability of simply never getting finished, leaving me in such euphoria that I got something done that I don´t mind a lack of feedback. ^^')

I´m trying to give good feedback, but I often struggle with putting my opinions and thoughts into words. (Like right now, heh...) Know that I´d always like to shower you in all the gallons of praise and affirmation everyone of you deserves (which is a lot!), but I most likely got lost in the phrasing at some point.


Here´s the things I drew over the weekend:

22: Death

I´ll follow suit and kill some Hotakainens, like the rest of you. :V Since it´s more or less redrawn from a very recent page, I´ll put it under a spoiler.

Spoiler: show
Reference here was the first panel on this page (http://sssscomic.com/comic2.php?page=507) from the latest chapter. As it´s the moment Ensi realizes Tuuri is dead (perhaps also the moment she realizes she herself is really dead as well), I thought it would fit the prompt quite nicely.

(https://i.postimg.cc/rmgRRc74/October22-Mirasol.jpg)


23: Right in front of your nose

How watching other people play videogames sometimes feels like, especially if you promised not to help, featuring two OCs of mine.

(https://i.postimg.cc/25QZmnw2/October23-Mirasol.jpg)

24: Water

I´ve been practicing how to animate water lately. So far that mainly involves drawing lots of splashes in various stages of splashing. (From reference, of course. I hope to get past needing a stylized reference to an actual photo being okay too soon.) Therefor, here you go, a splash, but with brushpens:

(https://i.postimg.cc/Qdn1NcR3/October24-Mirasol.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 25, 2021, 03:26:31 PM
Haha, Mirasol. Your right in front of your nose post is a feeling I know all too well. Very nice!

So for water I was going to do another poem for Turri but after a while I figured it would be too sad. (Turri and water don't mix well) So instead of making everyone depressed I went with another mash up. Water/community

Here's a little drawing of the Southern Water Tribe from Avatar the Last Airbender.

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/detfot3-65746f34-792f-40b8-97a1-85e3bc3e4979.jpg/v1/fill/w_945,h_709,q_75,strp/the_southern_water_tribe_by_opaque0_detfot3-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9NzA5IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvN2Q4MWE5MTItODRhNS00MmUxLWFhZGQtNjFmYWY2Njg3ZGZkXC9kZXRmb3QzLTY1NzQ2ZjM0LTc5MmYtNDBiOC05N2ExLTg1ZTNiYzNlNDk3OS5qcGciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9OTQ1In1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.G2JYHFB7wjCqHkWEwyjTIbjV4Mbg96gWJ1-8CZveDds)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 25, 2021, 03:28:22 PM
24.10.2021 Water

Okay, I am a lying liar who lies.
I went running and got an idea for a simple answer to the Water prompt, maybe a drabble. Then I sat down to write it, and it's 500 words of the Evil Committee. With some, er, mentions of water.
Also, the plumber was here for a while today and fixed both the leak and the heating, which I wasn't even expecting! It's now a balmy 19C in here.


Spoiler: show
The third rewrite of the research mission proposal (this time, one aimed at the Nordic Council for History and Rediscovery) had been progressing well until they hit the usual snag: risk calculation.

“How about we put down an expected survival rate of... 80%?” asked Torbjörn.

Siv regarded him with fond exasperation. “Honey, I don’t think we should lie quite so blatantly,” she said.

Taru smiled at her. “Why not? Most of the competing proposals will be full of lies. That’s just how these things work.”

“I don’t see why we need to say anything at all.” Trond definitely did not smile, at anyone. “Everyone knows the risks.”

“Mommy! Daddy! Water!” shouted the triplets from upstairs.

Oh no. The little… darlings! Siv had told them, several times, how important it was that they stay up there, out of the adults’ way. She had even promised cake, a completely frivolous expense, as a reward. That must be why they had, for once, decided to listen.

“Excuse me.” She began getting up, but Torbjörn was faster.

“Let me, honey,” he sang out, striding out of the room. Possibly to avoid the argument, which, in his absence, Siv might very well have won, but not without feeling rather disloyal about it. In the end, she agreed to 75% (+- 25%). She was a woman of science, after all.

By the time Torbjörn returned, the discussion had moved onto the budget, which was much unchanged from their previous proposals--except that Trond claimed to have found someone who was prepared to make the uniforms on the cheap, as long as she was given “full freedom of artistic expression”. For once, they all agreed that they did not care, and Siv started to feel positively cheerful, when…

“Daddy! Water! Water!”

She looked at Torbjörn. “They did ask for daddy,” she said.

Unable to deny this, he gave in quickly. This time, the only thing of note he missed was Taru’s theory as to what ‘artistic expression’ meant: something sexy, like sparkly undergarments.

“How is that sexy?” Siv asked.

“It draws the eye to one’s assets.” Taru indicated her own front.

“I am too old to remember what sexy even is,” interjected Trond, predictably.

“All right then!” Torbjörn walked back into the room, rubbing his hands. “What’s left? The timeline?”

“That’s right,” said Taru. “Next winter would be best, don’t you think?”

“WATER! DADDY! MORE WATER!”

Now, that was quite enough! Siv was out of the room before Torbjörn could so much as grimace. She did not bother stopping by the kitchen for water, but marched towards the foot of the staircase and glared up at the three sweet little faces hanging over the bannister.

“This game stops now! Daddy and Mommy are working. How much water can three children possibly need?”

“Lots,” said Sune.

“You see, we were, um….” Anna twirled one of her pigtails.

“Playing Cleansers,” finished Håkan.

Siv’s heart sank as she realized that the weird, burnt smell she had noticed was not Trond’s expired cologne.

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 25, 2021, 03:39:09 PM
Opaque: thank you for not killing any more Hotakainens. But, hey, another fandom I recognize! Katara is doing a great job for that stage of her training. (I assume this is pre-canon?) Sokka looks awesome too: I really like his pose. I would quite like to hear what he is saying, though.

Mirasol: when I clicked on your Hotakainen spoiler I went phew. That's not a sad scene! And I think you really captured the mood of that moment. Also, I really like the stylized splash: it's so simple, but it's so obvious what has happened. Finally, your OCs have very nice designs (especially the greenish one, love the hair/jumper combo) and their beanbags are the exact same colour as the beanbags in my old flat, so good taste. I don't know the feeling though, as I get twitchy watching others play. I'd probably spill the beans at once.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 25, 2021, 03:44:57 PM
Here is still more Water

Water 24.10.2021

Lalli was startled by a spray of cold water. He felt terrible. He was lying on his face on wooden planks, but the entire world around him was heaving like crazy. The water was weird too, different from the water in his pond. Oh yes, salt. It was seawater.

Closing and opening his eyes, he gauged his surroundings. The planks he was lying on were wide and sturdy and went on in front of his nose. On his right-hand side there was a low wall built of the same timber. On his left were some bulky nondescript items, probably crates or something similar. And yes, the entire area was heaving, up and down, front to back, side to side.

Another serving of salt water drenched Lalli, sloshing in over the wooden wall. Suddenly he realized he was on some sort of a ship, and promptly discovered also why he was right next to the gunwale.

After a short while of gazing directly downwards (quite high up, curving ship wall built entirely of wood, lively waves) he raised his head and looked out. The ship was indeed at sea. Despite the horrible heaving, the weather was otherwise nice. It was sunny, and extremely warm. The water was bright turquoise blue, and sun was dancing on the whitecaps. Farther out, an island sported ridiculously bright greenery above a bright yellow ribbon of… sand? at the waterline. It could have been beautiful, or at least interesting, if he weren’t on a bloody ship!

Just as Lalli had gained some composure, he heard shouting. “Ahoy! To Davy Jones' locker with 'em! Fire!” Quite a familiar voice. Soonish after the order to fire, a very loud crash jolted the planks, and Lalli with them. Picking his way gingerly, Lalli set out to investigate. Following the shouts (followed by two more crashes) he arrived amidships.

On the high bridge at the aft, a formidable figure shouted and waved around with a weird, curved sword. They were sporting a richly decorated jacket of white and black, and an enormous hat with two huge plumes Looks like feathers? But no bird has nearly such enormous feathers!) From under the hat, bright crimson hair was flying in the wind.

Behind this person, another was standing at the ship’s helm. The second one was even taller and muscular, and wore only a pair of trousers tied under the knees, with a sash on the waist (another of the weird swords was hanging on his hip) and a small scarf on covering their head of short hair, just as blonde as their (his?) sideburns.

Suddenly a voice shouted from above “Ho! Incoming!” Thanks to his scout reflexes, Lalli flattened himself on the deck just as an iron ball went over the ship exactly where he was just standing. Whistling loudly, it fell into the sea on the other side, doing no further harm. Looking up, Lalli saw a man high up in the mast. The lookout was also wearing the tied trousers, with a vest of forest green. His hair was grayish pale and messy. “Onni!” suddenly Lalli’s head cleared a bit. Onni appeared not to hear him over the din of cannon fire and wind. Why are we on a weird and stupid ship?

Lalli quickly decided against climbing to the crow's nest (the heaving gets worse the higher you go!) and decided to try and talk to Sigrun first. Easily avoiding a couple of more shots, he got up to the bridge. “Hey, Captain, what is going on?”
“Who dares disturb the Queen in the middle of an epic battle? Oh, it’s you, Twigs. Found your sea legs yet? Laddie, I don’t know who cursed you to become a seaman, with that stomach of yours!”
“Twigs? The Queen?”
“Are you quite all right?” the helmsman asked “Surely you haven’t forgotten that the great Victoria the Red is the current Pirate Queen?”
“Oh. Yes. Sorry for the intrusion!”

The persons were Sigrun and Mikkel, sort of, but Lalli had gotten a good look and saw their somehow indifferent manner. They were just DreamSigrun and DreamMikkel, not really here. Onni was too far up to tell, but before climbing to him Lalli decided to go look for others. Based on the loud crashing and booming, someone was at the cannons belowdecks.

Through a large hatch and down a ladder, Lalli quickly arrived at the gun deck. Two figures were working with a large cannon. A tall one in blue clothes was hauling cannonballs from a bigger storage crate to a smaller holder at the cannon’s base. His long red hair was braided into dozens of small braids fastened with beads (the sound of those must drive him crazy, when there’s no cannonfire to drown it) on top of which he wore a silly white cap, resembling a beanie.

The other one was slightly shorter and dressed in finery. His black jacket had red and gold embroidery, and a white… mesh? adorned his throat and chest. His hat was smaller than the Queen’s, but only slightly, and only had one of those impossibly large feathers. His golden hair was practically sparkling despite the belowdecks being almost dark.

As Reynir was the likeliest one to be lucid, Lalli stepped towards him. “Oh, hello Twigs? Can I help you? Although I must say I’m currently helping the Master of Arms! But when the battle is over, I will be happy to assist…” Oh. DreamReynir. Never mind then.
“No, it’s ok, carry on”.

The “Master of Arms” was flushed with excitement. He was holding a keg smelling of gunpowder and stuffing a hole on top of the cannon. Nearby (a bit too close for Lalli’s comfort) was a burning torch. “Emil, what in the name of Ukko is going on?”

“Ukko? I don’t know what that is? As for the goings on, we are about to beat the infamous Envy of the Seas! Poor Twigs, have you thrown up your memory too? No matter, since you are down here, why don’t you get me another keg or two? I’d rather you carry them than Shorty here - you know how he is, eager to help but sometimes he fumbles. We don’t want that with gunpowder, now do we?”

Emil was chattering happily. He was tangled in the dream, but at least he was there. Now Lalli had to figure out how to snap him into lucidity. That may prove tricky, as he was clearly very happy to be firing cannons. Just as Lalli thought this, Emil yelled “Fire in the hole!” and touched a lightning stick to a rag on top of the cannon’s barrel. Down Lalli went again, this time to evade the backward burst from the cannon. The noise was deafening. Stupid cannon!

After his head stopped ringing, Lalli tried to talk with Emil again. But it was hopeless. Apparently the battle was a historical event. The Grey Cat was about to be the first galleon to ever beat a Man O' War ship, such as the Envy of the Seas. No time to talk! Clearly there was far too much gunpowder around to entice Emil’s attention from any reasonable things. Stupid gunpowder.

“You are looking green again! If you throw up into the powder, I will have you tied to the rigging!” Emil was taking this Master of Arms thing seriously. Stupid Emil.
“Why don’t you go up, we’ll manage here” Shorty prompted in his slightly absent-minded dream way. Stupid not-Reynir!

Lalli climbed up just in time to hear Victoria the Red yelling "Come about! Get her broadside!"
The helmsman took a deep breath, adjusted his huge hands on the helm and shouted: "Down anchor!" A loud clattering sound was accompanied by a violent jerk of the entire ship "Boom about!" somebody shouted, and again Twi… Lalli went down on his face. Stupid boom! I am getting enough of this! "Up anchor!"

"Shiver me timbers! I never seen anybody do an anchor turn with a galleon before!" even Victoria the Red appeared impressed. They were now facing the bigger ship, and the bow guns were happily firing away.

"Twigs! Get ready to grapple!" Victoria had noticed him. She was now waving a blunderbuss in addition to her cutlass. Why do I know these stupid names? Lalli grabbed his own cutlass and held it with his teeth, to be ready to… Don't get sucked into the dream!

Hand to hand combat was imminent. As Lalli had no interest in waking up sore like after a beating, it was time to wrangle Emil away from his precious cannons. Lalli grabbed a bucket of water sitting on the deck (probably in case he needed to clean) and went back down.

"Cor blimey Twigs! Ye look's all agitated!" Reynir - Shorty - commented when Lalli approached them. Lalli upended the bucket on Emil's head, destroying his fine hat but also wrenching him awake.

***

"What the Hel!" Emil spluttered. Lalli was sitting on his chest, fuming.
"This is your only warning! You will stop reading your pirate stories in the evening, or I will sleep outside. No, rather, YOU will be sleep outside. And far enough from the house!"
"What? Why? How? Why is my pillow all wet? And my hair?"
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 25, 2021, 04:03:23 PM
This story is thanks to my son, who is playing Sea of Thieves a lot. As he was on autumn holiday, I have been exposed to pirate-themed banter lately. There is in fact one line from him that sparked the whole idea, as I wanted to use it somewhere. Guess which one :)

Then I went checking for a couple of terms, found this: https://www.pirateglossary.com/ and well, there was more. We also happened to talk about ships and cannons on the stream. And of course I present a humble bow to @LooNEY_DAC and his Tall Ships & Taller Tales, which you can read and enjoy here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/8663890

Opaque, this Water art is a mastepiece! I like everything about it!

Mirasol, I also very much like your characters (as well as all of your other art). I don't get that feeling a lot with games, but with many other things such as trying to help my kids study for tests, and we end up spending time arguing whether the biology chapter on cells does mention the nucleus or not (spoiler, it does, it is right in the picture in the middle of the page you are staring at! Right in front of your nose!).

tehta, I guessed from the start that the water is needed for putting out of fires. But how did Torbjörn manage to leave it burning twice? Or did they start another immediately after he left? And Trond's after shave, pffft.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 25, 2021, 04:45:24 PM
Jitter, I loved that! It really brought up memories.

Spoiler: show
(At one point in my chequered fandom past I participated in the Age of Sail fandom--Horatio Hornblower, Master and Commander, that sort of stuff--and I feel like an SSSS AU would just write itself! The main point of Master and Commander is the friendship between a captain and a ship's doctor, who is the only person on the ship not under the captain's command. And many of the Age of Sail works feature extremely close friendships between midshipmen or lieutenants. A young impoverished aristocrat is EXACTLY the sort of person who would get sent to sea to seek his fortune! Also, stowaways--and press-gangs!-- are a thing, and the level of danger is not unlike that of SSSS.)


To bring it back to your piece, I like the premise that Emil had better be careful what he reads before bed. This could be a series, in which Emil's overactive imagination inserts his friends into various genres. Alternatively, he could catch on, and try arranging little dream-holidays by reading just the right thing. If he and Reynir become friends, he could even take Reynir to see palm trees!

Okay, sorry, I keep getting distracted by the possibilities of your idea. I thought the roles of the characters were very well-selected, especially Emil's and Sigrun's. And I enjoyed watching Lalli duck all those cannonballs.

Finally, regarding the triplets: Torb never knew anything was burning! He just assumed his little angels were thirsty, for water or attention, so he filled a few glasses and passed them up the stairs with a cheerful remark. He's not as smart as Siv, or you, apparently.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 26, 2021, 08:01:26 AM
26.10.2021 Tried and True

Skipping right over community...  maybe to revisit it later. Anyway, I had what I hope is an interesting idea for how to handle this one over lunch. It's a series of riddles of sorts! If someone solves them, maybe spoiler your solutions?


A selection of the answers written on the application for the Nordic Council’s Silent World Research Mission, in response to Question Ten, ‘What is your tried-and-true method for solving problems?’

Emil Fredrik Västerström
First, I study the problem. I am a trained brainiac, you know. Research is very important! Eventually, I understand the problem, and solve it.

Mikkel Henrik Madsen
Seldom have I encountered an interview (or application) question as fascinating as this one! And, as you can see from my resume, I have been hired for over a hundred different jobs, so I know of what I speak. Regarding the question itself, well, my tried-and-true problem solving method is to do exactly the right thing, no more, no less. Certainly, there are some subtleties to this. Among my many previous bosses, some have preferred to leave their problems unsolved, even when a solution was both simple and obvious. So, as a model employee, I have, in such situations, decided that “to do exactly the right thing” was to do nothing. My bosses always know best, after all.

Tuuri Kaino-Vieno Hotakainen
Every problem has a solution! Never give up, that is my motto. There are always new ideas, new possibilities, new techniques to discover. Have I mentioned that I am a mechanic as well as a skald? Unusual for a Finn, I know, since we have so few machines, but there was a boat with an engine at our childhood house and it just made me so curious! So, I talked the elders in Keuruu into letting me experiment with completely broken machinery, and I read books and worked long nights, disassembling and reassembling everything, and in the end I had a working engine of my own. It powers the postman’s cart now! Anyway, as you can see I am very resourceful. Some of my other skills include: fluency in Icelandic and Swedish, multilingual translation, typing, accounting, basic carpentry and plumbing, map reading, folk dance, and haircutting. Moreover, Ms Hollola will be able to tell you how I helped her solve one of her own problems, by recruiting a mage and scout.

Sigrun Solveig Eide
Solving problems? That sounds like loser talk to me. Attacking problems head-on is more like it! Battlegrounds, especially, are no place to sit around thinking. By the time you have “analyzed” the “situation”, BAM!, you are dead, or worse. I like to rely on my instincts, and on my years of experience. Not that I am as experienced and old as you, Trond, obviously. Good job picking me for this vacation, by the way, but why do I still have to answer these stupid questions?

Lalli Saku Hotakainen
Kyllä

(Since it wasn't obvious when I first posted this: there are acrostics in the answers! I think Lalli's response ruins the setup a little, but I just could not resist. Pfft.)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: lwise on October 26, 2021, 08:29:48 AM
Since Lalli doesn't know Icelandic or Norwegian, I think his answer is perfect!  As are the others, as well.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 26, 2021, 08:31:19 AM
Since Lalli doesn't know Icelandic or Norwegian, I think his answer is perfect!  As are the others, as well.

But did you get their TRUE answers?
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 26, 2021, 08:43:57 AM
Tehta, I'm not sure whether Emil was wise to omit the fact his way to solve the problem is to blow things up.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 26, 2021, 09:10:07 AM
Tehta, I'm not sure whether Emil was wise to omit the fact his way to solve the problem is to blow things up.

Is wisdom something Emil is known for? Also, it's true that he doesn't mention explosions, but I did encode a more appropriate secret message into his reply.
(Is my puzzle too obscure? I will put a spoilered hint below.)

Spoiler: show
It's an acrostic. Emil's secret tried-and-true method is FIRE. Hopefully that will help reveal the other two answers.

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: lwise on October 26, 2021, 09:38:57 AM
Ah, very good.

I thought their true answers, all of them (except maybe Mikkel), would be "When in danger or in doubt, run in circles, scream and shout."
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 26, 2021, 10:03:06 AM
Hahaa, I wouldn't have noticed that, if you hadn't prompted me to look more! Well done!

Another mystery is why the seiður are not letting Reynir study within his true potential.

26.10.2021 Tried and true

"And today we will focus on staves for directing the movements of animals. Do any of you know some of these staves? Maybe you have seen the "Sheep to not pass" on fenceposts? Ah, Reynir?"
"Yes, did you know that this stave can be modified to stop ghosts?
"Ghosts? My dear child, ghosts are not the subject of this course."
"I know, but these staves are, right? What I'm saying is…"
"Hush now, Reynir. Anybody else?"

***

"And here we must pay attention not only the order in which the elements are drawn but also the direction of the hand when… Yes, Reynir?"
"I have used this sort of galdrastafur! A derivative design protected my Captain from getting trampled by Lake Cows!"
"Lake Cows? I don't think I have heard of this breed before?"
"No, it's not a breed of cattle, they were a herd of beast cows that walked to our camp from a small lake one night in Silent Finland when we…"
"Reynir, would you please concentrate on the matter at hand! We are learning animal husbandry staves here. This is not the time or place for your… stories."

"They are not stories! I'm giving you valuable information about uses of the staves we are learning about."
"I fail to see why anyone in the class would need to know anything about avoiding beasts. Now could you please…"
"But it's important! It saved our lives! I saved our lives!"
"Let's say I believe you, dear. But this is a farm magic class."
"But you won't let me take any other classes!"
"Well, our traditions have served us well, and we see no reason to change them just to accommodate a hothead like yourself. And a male one at that."
"But these galdrastafir can be…"
"The galdrastafir we are teaching are tried and true. I strongly advise anyone, especially you, my child, against messing around with them. Changes to the patterns will likely only render them ineffective, but in some rare cases it could be extremely dangerous! You might end up causing colic in your sheep!"



Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 26, 2021, 10:29:07 AM
OH NO NOT SHEEP COLIC.

I think that might actually discourage poor Reynir. But what might work better for him is to learn Finnish-style, from a fellow mage. Someone who's a bit of a renegate. Maybe a Norwegian?
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 26, 2021, 11:25:01 AM
I thought their true answers, all of them (except maybe Mikkel), would be "When in danger or in doubt, run in circles, scream and shout."

That doesn't sound much like Lalli, either. But Sigrun, Emil, and Reynir, yes, I can picture that very clearly. Maybe Tuuri too.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 26, 2021, 01:50:12 PM
Hello friends! I've been busy, as I told you, but finished my mother's move to a new house! I haven't had time to check your recent contributions, but will try to do that later.

Meanwhile here's the third episode of our adventure! I hope you like it! It doen't match today's prompt, but surely has some change... :)

An Adventure of Fire and Ice

Episode 3 - Training Ground


Spoiler: show
"I hate it!"
"Cool down, Emil! It's not that bad."
"It's a suicide mission! No one ever returned from the Sunset Sea! Nobody found those mythical lands beyond!"
Lalli ran to check if all windows were closed, and briefly opened the room's door to check if anyone was behind it. Satisfied, he returned and rest his hands on Emil's shoulders. "We've been talking about that since yesterday's audience. You already admitted that's not entirely true. We heard the evidence they presented, the reports about the Sun Chaser being seen on Asshai, that map..."
"The map? Mikkel is a cartographer. He may have just made it up. The rest are tales, legends! Stories told by drunk fishermen to impress! No a single proof!"
"We discussed it before. There's proof, but not exactly convincing."
Emil stared at Lalli's eyes. "Now that's an understatement!"
"Remember, no one ever had the resources we will have. Four, Emil! Four big, brand new ships, the Realm's very best, plus the Braavosi one! All with experienced crews. And commanded by Admiral Asa Ashwood herself! She's a legend, I've heard. If she's willing to go it can't be that risky."
"Yeah, perhaps it isn't... Anyway, there's nothing I can do." Crossing the large room, Emil sat on his bed and reached for his boots, looking defeated.
Lalli followed, sitting next to him. "This can be your great opportunity. You've heard your father. You can become the ruler of the new lands, set your own domain, answering only to the King."
His face became a bit more illuminated. "Yes, I've told you... That part sounds good, being away from the court and the constant gossip... Almost too good to become true." Emil put a hand on Lalli's back and smiled. "Right, I agree that would be good, if we survive."
Lalli smiled back. "We will be together, remember? You, me, Kitty..."
Emil smile became larger. He bent a little closer to Lalli, touching his jet black hair, and muttered. "That's the best part, I suppose."
Lalli's heart beat faster. "Hum... Of course it is."
"I guess there's still some time before my first lesson."
"I'm sure there is."
---
"You're late, prince. I was about to go away."
"My apologies, Lady Sigrun." Said Emil, with a guilty look on his face while he entered the training ground, almost tripping on the steps. "We had a small problem to solve." He said, pointing at Lalli that walked by his side. "Small court things."
The sun was high on the sky, heating the stones of the large walled space between the Red Keep's main wall and the sea. At least there was some wind to refresh them.
All that light made Sigrun's hair a particularly intense shade of red. She was wearing a large white shirt, black pants and grey boots, and holding two wooden swords on her hands. Her eyes were on Emil, evaluating him.
"Yes, I'm sure a prince always has small court thing to do." She glanced at Lalli, and then at Mikkel, that stood behind her, still all in black, under the shadow of a balcony. "But my time is precious, prince. We have many things to arrange before our departure, and two weeks will hardly be enough."
Emil removed his vest, passing it to Lalli. "I have no doubt on that, my lady. Shall we begin?"
"And what about that small dragon hatchling of yours? I was told you're always together."
"Well, many times, but hardly always. Kitty is flying with her mother and a sister, somewhere."
"See, Mikkel? I told that "big bird" we saw far away was a dragon."
"They usually take off at sunset, and fly mostly over the sea. We don't let them all fly at the same time, it scares people."
"Fine. Let's begin. And remember, prince, I only agreed on teaching you the art of water dancing on condition of your full commitment, and that includes being always on time for your lessons. I'm not here to bow and kiss your... boots."
"I'm glad for that, lady Sigrun. And assure it won't be a problem. Also, while we are alone you can call me Emil."
On that precise moment Onni arrived, wearing a lighter version of the Kingsguard armour. "My prince." He bowed slightly towards Emil and Lalli, and turned to face Sigrun and Mikkel. "M'lady, my lord."
Sigrun wasn't impressed by the deference. "What's this? The prince needs a guard for his lessons?"
"These are my orders, m'lady, whenever the lesson can be dangerous, and particularly when there are foreigners present. Orders from the Hand." Onni answered, finding a shadow to remain away from the sun.
"Humpf, I supposed that my agreement with the King implied a higher degree of confidence, but that's fine anyway." Sigrun threw one of the wooden swords to Emil, that failed to grab it. The sword made a loud noise hitting the floor, and Emil, already a bit ashamed, bent to catch it.
There was a faint smile on Sigrun's face, while Lalli, Onni and Mikkel remained impassive.
"Show me what you know, prin... I mean Emil. Come, and try to hit me. Have no mercy!"
Trying to remember all his many lessons on sword-fighting, Emil advanced, sword raised, while Sigrun kept her sword pointing down and waited, looking very relaxed.
High, low, one side, the other... Emil attacked the best he could, forcing Sigrun to step back. He kept swinging the sword, and all she did was parrying his moves. Maybe, he thought, all these stories about water dancers where a bit far fetched, exaggerated to bring fear to anyone considering to fight the Braavosi.
Then Sigrun winked to him and began to dodge every blow, moving with amazing agility. Emil insisted, but she seemed to know where he wanted to strike. Then she advanced, storming him, blow over blow, without stop, and all Emil could do was deflect and move back. He began to sweat and got hits on both legs, shoulder and the other arm.
Sigrun made a lightning fast move that ripped-off Emil's sword, throwing it on the air. She made a twist, grabbed the falling sword and crossed it with her own, having Emil's neck between both blades as if it was a giant scissor ready to cut of his head.
Emil was still trying to understand what just happened when he saw Kitty coming down from the sky. Soon she began flying in circles around them, hissing at Sigrun.
"This is between me and Emil, dragonling! Go away!"
However Kitty insisted, getting closer and closer, until Sigrun dropped one sword. Next instant her hand was grabbing Kitty's tail. The small dragon flapped her wings fiercely, and let out several acute squeaks.
"No! Sigrun, let her go! Don't do that!"
"Don't worry, prince! Just giving it a small lesson on good manners! I'll let it go... Ouch!"
Kitty's still very young, and her bit wasn't strong, but her teeth were sharp, probably piercing Sigrun's glove. She let go the tail and started to run after the dragon, waving the wooden sword. "Your little..." And she said something in The braavosi language that Emil's tutors never bothered teaching to the young prince.
Kitty didn't fly upwards, choosing to keep her distance to the ground, squeaking and dragging Sigrun behind her. Everybody was looking at the comedic show, including Emil. When he finally understood what was happening he began to run all he could after Sigrun, yelling as laud as he could. "STOP! LET HER GO! DON'T FOLLOW!"
But Sigrun didn't listen, or care, and kept running away from them towards the opposite side of the training ground. Emil kept running, but soon a large shadow covered the sun. Kitty squeaked again, and this time got a reply in the shape of a thunderous, guttural roar that filled the air, making everybody stop and look up, except Emil, that kept running towards Sigrun.
A second later a powerful gush of wind hit the ground, raising a cloud of dust on every direction. When Emil managed to reopen his eyes he saw what he feared.
A good part of the training ground was now occupied by an immense winged figure, it's black scales and multiple horns reflecting the sun. The dragon huge head, with a mouth large enough to swallow an ox whole, was turned toward Sigrun, that looked very small in contrast.
Kitty was perched on top of the one horn, longer than a man, while the dragons eyes, red and furious, looked intensely at Sigrun, that dropped her wooden sword and just stood there, paralyzed.
"NOOO! NO! BACK!" Emil managed to reach Sigrun and put himself between the massive dragon and her, raising both arms. He switched to High Valyrian and began to shout at the dragon. "VEMO CKAB, BALERION! TUBI DAOR! DAOR EMILUN! DAOR MORGOTH!*"
Those huge eyes narrowed, looking straight at Emil, that repeated the words, adding others as he pointed at Sigrun. "DEFRIN TARGARYEN! DAORUNI GIMI! PIDSTU! ESH EOSAPOLGIZ!**". The dragon seemed to ponder what to do next for a while, and then let go another deafening roar, together with a breath as hot as if Emil opened one of those ovens used to make bread at the kitchen. He stood his ground the best he could, covering Sigrun, and watched with great relief as those enormous wings unfolded, flapping powerfully as the dragon lift off in the cloudless sky.
Seconds later it was far away, looking just like a big bird. Kitty didn't follow, choosing to land at Lalli's shoulder.
Emil turned to face Sigrun. "We are very lucky! Balerion is on a good day, otherwise we would both be toast by now."
She remained without words. "And never attack a dragon hatchling, particularly is you don't know if the mother is close. They can be very protective, as you saw."
"You saved me!" She managed to say, wide eyed. "You ran to me, and put yourself between me and that thing!" Sigrun bowed, and her voice took a serious tone. "You saved my life, Prince. You and your father already had my loyalty, as I pledged yesterday. Now you have my gratitude, and my promise to pay back in the same coin if your life is at risk."
"Thank you, my lady. Your gratitude is welcomed. I hope you never have to pay your debt, though. Now, let's take a look at that hand and continue our lesson... or not, if you feel too shaken from this unpleasant incident."
Sigrun took the fallen sword and they walked side by side back to the entrance. The skin under the glove showed two small, clean punctures. "Hum, I've had worse." She said, putting the glove back. "Tell me, prince, how did you know it was going to show up?"
"Not an "it", my lady, she. All dragons are female, as they all can lay eggs when they find a suitable match. I believe Kitty just act on her instincts, dragging the threat... I mean you, to a larger area where her mother could see better when she came after the calling."
"And you knew that how?"
"Since childhood Targaryens learn many things about dragons, as you can imagine."
"Yes, I suppose so." Sigrun answered. The way she looked at Emil had somehow changed. There was a hint of admiration, and respect, as she now saw him as a young man and not a spoiled overgrown child. "So Kitty is the daughter of Balerion, the Black Dread itself! Gods, she's huge!"
"Yes, Kitty the red, or Kitherion, her true name, together with her sister, Tessarion, the blue. Both are Balerion's hatchlings. Yet we don't expect them to reach their mother's size."
Lalli, Onni and Mikkel were together, waiting for them. Kitty looked tranquil over Lalli's shoulder.
Discreetly pointing at her, Sigrun muttered to Emil. "Won't she be mad at me?"
Emil smiled. "Who? Kitty? No, I'm sure she just wanted to give you a scare. Not the kind that carry grudges. Just keep in mind to never underestimate dragons. They are not common animals. They are very smart and full of tricks."
Sigrun agreed, nodding towards Kitty, the replied with a soft chirp. She smiled to Emil. "Shall we start again? This time I'll teach you a few simple moves."


Note: I've checked a page about the High Valyrian language, but it doesn't has much info, so I had to make up a few words. The ones in bold are canon for the TV series

*: VEMO CKAB, BALERION! TUBI DAOR! DAOR EMILUN! DAOR MORGOTH!
*: MOVE BACK, BALERION! NOT TODAY! NO COMBAT! NO DEATH!

**: DEFRIN TARGARYEN! DAORUNI GIMI! PIDSTU! ESH EOSAPOLGIZ!
**: TARGARYEN FRIEND! KNOWS NOTHING! STUPID! SHE APOLOGIZES!

And here's the source page: https://www.makinggameofthrones.com/production-diary/2014/5/8/high-valyrian-101-learn-and-pronounce-common-phrases/ (https://www.makinggameofthrones.com/production-diary/2014/5/8/high-valyrian-101-learn-and-pronounce-common-phrases/)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 26, 2021, 03:48:55 PM
I updated my post to include Tuuri. I just could not leave her out. But I will leave poor Onni in peace, because I already know it's back to the wedding tomorrow.

grey: Still very much enjoying this. Emil and Sigrun seem very in character (somewhat arrogant recklessness for her, whining with flashes of heroism for him). And it's always nice to see some background emilalli...
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 26, 2021, 04:12:27 PM
I wasn't sure what to do for tried and true so I attempted to use my brain for once. It hurt. So, a tried and true method for keeping safe zones safe came to mined. Quarantine.

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Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 26, 2021, 04:25:35 PM
Time for a catch up!
Thanks for the hint, tehta:
Spoiler: solutions • show
I had no idea what an acrostic was, but thanks to your hint, I now get it.
Mikkel: Sarcasm
Tuuri: Enthusiasm
Sigrun: Stabbing
Lalli: 'k


Jitter, a fine doublet.  I wondered if LooNEY's Tall Ships had something to do with the pirate dream.  Arrrr, 'tis me swash proper buckled, matey.
Also le Gasp! Colic! More like Reynir getting colic in his frustration!
I love your drawings, Mirasol - your studies of water are paying off, as is also evident in the lovely imagery for Ensi & Tuuri.  And I so feel that scene of gamers - so very apt.
thegreyarea - you don't have to match prompt, after all. Little bitty Kitty perched on the dragon's horn, meep.
Opaque - ugh, quarantine - yep, you nailed it. 

Day 26 - Tried & True - Need a change? We know a tried & true method for transforming your look! You'd be amazed at the difference just a little snip makes.
(https://64.media.tumblr.com/953dcb115830ae5ffbf02ceb7ac74c42/7da24ee5e565e4c9-4b/s2048x3072/59557c2da3f45a073344ec95f2aebd8170f00e68.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on October 27, 2021, 02:45:50 PM
I´m a bit busy right now so I´ll just drop these off here and comment tomorrow. :)

25: Community

Playing music together always gives me a sense of community, so here´s a symphony orchestra with a few extra solists (Harp and French horn) because I still had space (and am for sure not drawing any more violins :'D ).

(https://i.postimg.cc/8kLZqgWF/October25-Mirasol.jpg)

26: Tried and True

This one´s fanart for another Studio Ghibli movie, Nausicaä of the valley of the wind. Burning the spores of the toxic forest is the tried and true method for getting rid of its poison. Unfortunately that doesn´t solve the problem for good, because it´s not the plants themselves which are poisonous, but the ground they grow in. This was discovered by Nausikaä when she raised some of them herself.

(https://i.postimg.cc/J4mp8Ycp/October26-Mirasol.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 27, 2021, 04:09:12 PM
21.10.2021 Glow-up

Back to the wedding, which is getting ridiculous. And making me wish I were a good enough artist to draw several of the attendees...


Spoiler: show
Onni spent the rest of the wedding feast in a daze. He tried to tell himself that it was because of his increasingly enthusiastic drinking, but it was no use. He knew the real reason, which was the shock of discovering that Reynir was not only kind, and helpful out in the field, but also competent at a normal, solid job, and quite ridiculously attractive.

As far as he could remember, anyway: as he ate, he made a concerted effort not to look at Reynir at all. It was just a meal, he kept telling himself. He could get through it.

At least, until they announced the dancing.

“Excuse me, I need the toilet,” said Onni to the whole table before running off into the colourful crowd of dance-enthusiasts who had responded to the announcement. He carefully avoided eye-contact as he made his way through, but still, he soon noticed that one of the gaudily-dressed figures seemed determined to pursue him. He speeded up.

“What the hell, Onni?”

The familiar voice, speaking a familiar Finnish phrase, made him stumble. He turned around.

“Why are you running away?” asked Lalli, frowning: another familiar detail, but that is where all familiarity ended.

The Lalli Onni knew wore practically-cut tunics the colour of dirt, or shadow, or (occasionally) snow. This Lalli, meanwhile, was dressed in something voluminous and iridescent in sea-green, held in at the waist by a gold-embroidered sash. It was cut very dramatically, too, in a way that almost bared one of his shoulders. Even his hair looked weirdly smooth and shiny.

“What--” Onni couldn’t stop staring: was there something, some sort of dark smudge, around his cousin’s eyes? “I thought you were planning to dress as a tree?”

“I was planning to camouflage myself. After careful thought, I decided that a tree would stand out. This is much more appropriate.”

“But how did you manage to find such a thing?”

“It’s Emil’s. He packed three sets of clothes to choose from. So, he encouraged me to take one, to make his choice easier.”

Now that Onni had spent some time inspecting the outfit, the explanation made sense. “Well, it’s the wrong size. And what’s with your… face?”

“Oh, Mikkel did that. And my hair.” Lalli shrugged, his tunic slipping further off his shoulder. “It amused him.”

“Yes, he made fun of my clothes, too.” By doing a double-take, staring, and then asking Onni how many hearts he was planning to break. “Anyway, have fun. I am leaving now.”

“What? Without saying goodbye to your date? Isn’t that rude?”

“What date?” asked Onni, even as understanding dawned. “Reynir is not my date!”

“But you’re sitting at a date table together.”

“As friends… or friendly acquaintances, at least. The idea of us dating is absurd. He’s far too…” Young? Likeable? Attractive? No, naming these reasons out loud would be far too humiliating. “Seriously, nobody but you could think us a good match.”

“Oh, I don’t.” Lalli scowled. “It’s all him. He’s always coming by my haven, talking about how dreamy you are, with your sad, aloof air, and how oblivious, or asking me about your likes and dislikes… I was hoping this date would put an end to it. Can’t you try to make it work? He’s not that bad, you know.”
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 27, 2021, 04:14:31 PM
Art art art!

Opaque: Quarantine. I suppose most of us know the feeling of waking up to yet another day inside. Sigrun doesn't seem enthused. Reynir might be starting yoga?

wave: I am cringing in horror. Hair grows back so slowly! But look at those angelic faces, and not-at-all-forced grins... Maybe I should risk it?

Mirasol: Also a Studio Ghibli fan (I mean, I guess almost everyone is! I have been to the museum a couple of times, though) and loving the plantlife in the Nausicaa picture. Also, the little instruments. They remind me of dollhouse miniatures, which I always find very satisfying to look at.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 27, 2021, 05:06:59 PM
Glow up

”Help! Michael! Emergency!”
Emile was running towards Props and Costumes, cradling something black in his arms. Michael was immediately ready to assist. “Who here needs attention?”
“Lawrence’s costume! You have to fix it!” Emile was spreading the black fabric between his hands, revealing a nasty tear.
“I see. I will dedicate my time and effort to repairing this. It must have been a wild and feral stunt to have caused this to happen.” Michael took charge of the situation. Firstly he ripped out a decorative fringe.
“What! You didn’t even try!” Emile was shocked.
“Trying isn’t always a beneficial course of action.”
“I tried so hard! A lot! Earlier!”

The remaining garment was still torn. “I think it needs a stitch.”
“It may need more than one. I hope you don’t mind a couple of wrinkles from this. Stitchwork isn’t one of my strongest suits.” Michael set to work nevertheless.

“And this is finished”
“So, you were not kidding. You suck at stitches.” Emile was shocked.
“They serve their purpose regardless.”

***

The singers’ dressing area was a chaos. Lawrence was hiding under Emile’s jacket, scratching his neck furiously and hissing. His costume was wrinkled on the floor. “Come on, you’ll be late soon!” Lucky was trying to get Lawrence back to operational state.
“He can’t wear it. It itches his neck!” Emile was wringing his hands quite theatrically. He had already spent a while trying to get Lawrence into his costume.

Suddenly Rowan, normally so friendly, was yelling at Lawrence. “How can you just sit here and do nothing and not go insane! Because I am! I can’t go out there and sing your part! Don’t you understand that you’re the only one who can!”
Now Lawrence was looking livid, pretty much like he was about to bite Rowan. Emile was also about to join the ruckus, when Lucky stepped in to fix the situation.

“Okay, let’s all calm down and not act insane?” She grabbed Lawrence’s black turtleneck, cut the neck part loose and gave it to Emile. “Make him wear this under the costume, it will shield his skin against the stitches”.
“Oh, yeah, that might work!”

Emile talked Lawrence into it. He promised the extra fabric didn’t show, and he made Lawrence’s hair and make up extra fabulous. “I swear, no one will notice, everyone will be looking at you, not your costume!”

And he was right. Lawrence was practically sparkling on the stage.
“I may have saved the immediate situation, but Emile really gave him some extra glow up!”
What a most best team!

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 27, 2021, 07:07:13 PM
Day 27 - Glow-Up - Emil is ready to SLAY (Onni, not so much)
(https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/178217443737600000/902861706076782592/20211027_225607.jpg?width=406&height=577)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 28, 2021, 01:12:29 AM
Mirasol, your Nausicaä picture is all kinds of amazing.Those plants look so great! That movie is great too. <3

Wave, that Emil looks ready to kick some butt! The fire in his eyes is a fantastic effect. (Poor Onni in the back)

I don't know if this really fits with "glow up" but with all the wedding adventures recently maybe it's time to allow Reynir to let his hair down.
(Glow up... maybe?)

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/detks7o-061294d3-4e1e-4c93-8b07-84a47f5f8e3d.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzdkODFhOTEyLTg0YTUtNDJlMS1hYWRkLTYxZmFmNjY4N2RmZFwvZGV0a3M3by0wNjEyOTRkMy00ZTFlLTRjOTMtOGIwNy04NGE0N2Y1ZjhlM2QuanBnIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.bqHF15EeAZED6GKaUiWWmqCncSkgZ2IKkEHFnJbi9Nw)

I know, very lazy flower.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 28, 2021, 03:59:38 AM
Opaque, two fine Reynirs! One about to go to bed (is the despairing one Emil?) and I suppose out celebrating? Maybe on a date? Who with? Definitely someone who appreciates his lovely hair, luminous eyes and slender form, not to forget the sweet effect of the freckles!

Wave, I’m not sure which one is more terrifying, the terrible triplet or fire-crazed Emil. And both are after Onni! The poor man can’t get a break!

Although I hope Onni will after all have a nice date and otherwise lots of quality time with someone special. Maybe he can find someone (in addition to the crazy “unknown” Finnish lady who wants to learn sex runos) at the wedding? Here’s hoping!

Mirasol, I’m repeating myself and everyone else, but it bears repeating. Your art is lovely. Do you draw these daily? They don’t look like quick sketches to me! Especially lovely is the vegetation in the Nausicaä piece. Im fact it is so lovely that it got me wondering if you’d be willing to make me a commission piece?

Grey, I’m really not much of a GoT fan, but it would be sweet if Emil could have a dragon. Kitty sounds like a great companion (assuming the human has the blood to keep her somewhat in control) and you describe her very sweetly. And it was very brave of him to protect Sigrun against Balerion, by your description it wasn’t 100% certain she wouldn’t just blow him up to get to the monster who had the audacity to bother her daughter!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 28, 2021, 08:31:19 AM
Responses first, today!

Jitter: Very clever: I see your references! Hopefully all of them: cats, more cats, Sigrun's arm, and the bite-punch sequence. Or are there more? And I would like to see a pic of the glowed-up Lawrence...

wave: Amazing flames, in the eye and outside, and Emil himself looks so confident. And also oddly... seventies? I guess the uniforms always had a bit of an Abba vibe, especially on him.

Opaque: He's beautiful. Definitely a glow up. (And who's looking at the flower?)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 28, 2021, 08:37:49 AM
28.10.2021 Made to Measure

Another relatively low-effort lunchtime piece of 150 words. It fills an important plot-hole though. And Reynir does end up wearing a spare uniform once the tank breaks down...

Whiny musings spoilered below...
Spoiler: show
Eep, I am feeling very conflicted about my Yoinktober output. My Yoinktober doc stands at 8k of content now (there are a few half-finished pieces I gave up on), including 2k of wedding shenanigans, and I have started going through it. I think some of it is fun and worth posting, but a lot is barely a first draft. The wedding, for example, is very one-note, and I find Onni's psychology weird in it. I am wondering whether it wouldn't have been better to participate only when very inspired, and work on WIPs otherwise...




Lalli was the first to come in for dinner, which worked out well: when Tuuri asked him to stand still while she measured him, he complied without objection. She was almost done, with only calf circumference left to note down, when Onni slouched in.

He dropped into a chair. “What’s going on?”

“Hi, Onni!” Luckily, she had her excuse all ready. “It’s the new population census. For work.”

“It’s not enough to count us, they have to measure us too? Ridiculous.”

“I know!” Tuuri stuffed Lalli’s details into an envelope. “I’ll do you next, okay? And then the two of you can measure me the same way.”

Onni grunted a reluctant agreement.

***


Tuuri congratulated herself on a job well done: the expedition uniforms fit perfectly, even Lalli’s frankly insane leather boots. It was a shame that Onni wasn’t there to wear his.

(It sure came in handy for Reynir, though!)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 28, 2021, 12:04:11 PM
Tehta, the idea of YoinkTober is to sketch every day. So very much drafts is exactly the thing! The original idea of inktober was to encourage artists to practice. Practice, not create polished content daily! Not that there were anything wrong with moe finalized work! But really putting out low-effort drafts is not failing YoinkTober!

Besides, all of your drafts have brought joy to us, not a useless feat in itself! Also I agree that Those Boots are insane.

And about the wedding story. Onni’s surprise good feels towards Reynir and others in his table could be caused by the runes working on him! He just likes people more for no particular reason.

I made more but smaller references, you got all the lines :)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: moredhel on October 28, 2021, 12:41:07 PM
Tehta, the idea of YoinkTober is to sketch every day. So very much drafts is exactly the thing! The original idea of inktober was to encourage artists to practice. Practice, not create polished content daily!

Creating polished content every day in my opinion needs either lots of 90% ready works, or some sort of superpowers.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 28, 2021, 01:20:47 PM
Moredhel, my point exactly!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 28, 2021, 01:36:00 PM
Oh, I don't think I am failing, or that everything put here needs to be polished. I just want to optimize how I spend my limited writing time, and I find that writing when excited and inspired goes about three times as fast as when not. (I have no idea whether the pieces come out worse, but I suspect so.)
Also I am a huge whiner. My favourite character is Emil.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on October 28, 2021, 01:53:16 PM
Okay, here come the belated comments:

Opaque, eeeee Avatar! And you did great on the water! The quarantine-picture is nice as well, you captured the (by now familiar :P ) feeling of being stuck in boredom perfectly, especially in the despairing Sigrun! And Reynir truly did glow up!

Grey, I´m really enjoying how this continues! (And yes, the mental image of tiny Kitty upon the gigantic dragon-horn is adorable.)

Wave, this, it scares me... :'D My condolences to whoever the three little devangels have chosen to be their victim! And the Fire-picture looks awesome! (Though poor Onni! Getting hit by lightning... INSIDE the house!)

tehta, yay for the fixed water pipe and heating! :sparkle: I hope the triplets´ fire wasn´t too big yet... And that´s a really interesting form of riddle, I also wasn´t familiar with it before. But you chose very fitting true answers for everyone! Ridiculous or not, I´m still enjoying the wedding-story! Lalli seems to have found the perfect disguise. :'D Tuuri thought of everything indeed. I´m surprised though that Onni bought this immediately. Good that he had just come home and was probably very tired.

Jitter, now that´s a good dream! (For everyone but Lalli...) Hehe, Emil seems completely in his element. :emil: As for the sentence that inspired it all, I would guess the following (under a spoiler if others still want to guess):

Spoiler: show
I´d say either "To Davy Jones' locker with 'em!" or “Fire in the hole!” At least I thought both of those were great.


That mage-instructor seems to have an interesting perception of danger, if that´s the worst thing she can think of... And once again the day has been saved by the combined forces of the most-best opera-group!

Mirasol, I’m repeating myself and everyone else, but it bears repeating. Your art is lovely. Do you draw these daily? They don’t look like quick sketches to me! Especially lovely is the vegetation in the Nausicaä piece. Im fact it is so lovely that it got me wondering if you’d be willing to make me a commission piece?

Ah oh wow thank you! *blushes deeply*
Yes, I draw these daily, or nightly would be more acurate. They´re not really sketches, I´m not confident enough with markers yet to simply start drawing, so they´re a bit more complicated by default. That´s why I´m trying to keep the subject relatively simple so it doesn´t take ages. If I have a bit more time on some days I go more ambitious. Or I think it will be easy and suffer the consequences... :'D They tend to take between 2-5 hours, rarely more, each.
As for commission, ehm, maybe? I haven´t really done commissions so far (beyond the odd illustration for a fanfiction). But feel free to PM me! I´ll see what I can do. :)


I have one more piece for you:

27: Glow-up

Look at this glowy little fella! <3
You see, my mind was dead-set on turning this prompt into a horrible monster based on an anglerfish (they already look a bit nightmarish), but then I found this really cool picture of one that had lots and lots of glowing parts while looking up references, and I simply had to draw that instead.

(https://i.postimg.cc/tg3510y1/October27-Mirasol.jpg)

One more thing: I´ll be on a trip starting tomorrow over the weekend, and the place I´m staying at supposedly only has limited Wifi. So I´m afraid I won´t be able to post the rest of my contributions until Tuesday or so. I hope the thread is still open then, if not I´ll find another one to post in. See you then! :squirrelcookie:
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 28, 2021, 03:54:52 PM
Mirasol, the fish is perfect as is :) I will PM you, I have something in mind about the Ghibli flowers.

As for the inspiration quote from my son, neither of those was the one. They are both excellent pirate quotes indeed, but from elsewhere (actually my son hates it when I pass by when he’s playing and I yell something “pirate” such as “shiver me timbers” or (most often) “release the kraken!”. He’s learned to mute when he sees me coming. I wonder why, wouldn’t it be only cool that his gamer friends hear his mum participating ;) )

And I forgot to answer you earlier, I don’t have a specific play or opera in mind, just a general idea what the roles might be like.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 29, 2021, 06:06:44 AM
Still busy, but made a quickie for today's prompt, "Judgement", more exactly Judgement Day...

I'm enjoying so much all your works, and quite glad that you are enjoying my crossover, including Kitty perching on Balerion's horn. A lot of my CGI budget was spent on that scene. :)
Episode Four is alread being filmed, and will feature Mikkel and Reynir!

(https://i.postimg.cc/D01SrwVV/Judgement-Day.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/V0Ls11L4)

It's really a quick one, just pencil, no colour, no afterwork.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 29, 2021, 06:51:48 AM
29/30.10.2021 Judgement/Cats

I have loads of free time today, will have very little time tomorrow, and this double-prompt idea amused me. It might be a bit obvious as a concept, but thinking of specific scenes involving our three named cats was fun. So, here are three tiny vignettes: three times when cats changed the course of SSSS history...


Spoiler: show
The moment Michael left to milk the cows, Signe stopped feigning sleep and slid out of bed. She dressed in her pre-prepared clothes, fumbling a bit in the dark, then climbed a chair to retrieve her pre-packed suitcase from the top of the cupboard.

And came face-to-face with two golden, glowing eyes right above where the suitcase should be.

“Shoo, Magnus.”

The eyes glowered, accusingly.

“I am a free spirit. I cannot be chained: not to a job, and certainly not to a man.”

No change.

“I know he cares. So what?”

Still no change.

“And yes, he is kind, and also rude enough that his kindness is not nauseating.”

The eyes blinked, slowly. Signe found herself blinking tiredly in response.

“Fine, you win. I wanted to sleep in, anyway.”

And so she did. Above the cupboard, Magnus slept as well.


***

“So… two percent for the leaders, and half a percent for the regular members, including Emil?” suggested Siv.

“Hmm.” Torbjörn stroked his beard. “How about… one percent, and half a percent? That’s already a huge bonus, compared to their base pay.”

“True.” Siv did some mental arithmetic, then started filling in the pay column. At the third entry, she paused. “Tuuri Hotakainen… it’s not like she needs the money.”

They looked at each other.

Bosse chose this moment to jump up onto the table, and walk across it before collapsing in a sunbeam, right on top of the income report. He blinked up at them, his expression mild.

“The contracts say that the salaries of any deceased members will go to their next of kin,” said Torbjörn. “I know a bonus is not salary, but, still…”

“Still,” agreed Siv, feeling quite virtuous. “The poor girl does have living next of kin.”

Bosse yawned, and slept.

***

Lalli came out of the bathroom, his hair no longer annoying now that it had been shortened by between zero and two centimeters, depending on the strand. As he walked through the living room, he spotted Reynir, asleep on top of one of his weird picture-books of Icelandic magic. (Reynir was very bad at studying, even when he cared about the topic.)

Reynir’s braid dangled annoyingly, falling to the floor. Just last night, it had fallen on top of Lalli’s mattress, hitting him on the shoulder and provoking a moment of panic.

Lalli looked down at the scissors in his hand, so much handier for cutting hair than his knife, and stepped closer.

He froze as something moved behind Reynir’s wool-clad shoulder: the cat. She must have been asleep back there. Now, she yawned, then fixed Lalli with her suspiciously innocent gaze.

He stared back, hissing.

She meowed pleadingly. Then blinked.

Lalli was not going to let a stupid cat judge him. He turned around and headed outside, to see if Emil noticed his new haircut.


Notes: Yes, Siv and Torb are still evil in my stories, sorry.
And I am not sure that Lalli's last impulse is in character. I expect that he doesn't care about how people perceive his appearance. However, I do see him as someone who sets people secret tests, then judges them in his mind: look at the whole post-coma scene. So I guess I meant the last line as a setup for yet another moment of judgement by a (pseudo-)cat. I wonder if Emil passed? 2cm is not a lot.


Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 29, 2021, 07:04:14 AM
Mirasol, I absolutely love this fish! It's an animal, and also a universe.

Grey, a very quick drawing, pshaw. I love the detail of the plants creeping in wherever they can. And omg, bullet holes. Something happened here...
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on October 30, 2021, 01:12:28 AM
Mirasol, your glowy fish critter looks so fun. And glowy. I don't want to be on the wrong side of those teeth though.

Grey, that is an amazing drawing. There's so much detail in it. Everything about it is perfect.

Theta, Lalli with those scissors. ;D Haha. He should go ahead and do it before that cat wakes his victim. :lalli:

Well, my allergies have made me a bit sick. The wind as been blowing very heavily over here making it hard to get out of bed. So no more drawings for the last two days.

(Made to Order)
The beginning of the Cat Tank.

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/detoyz5-ed9c5549-1266-4fd2-b324-724809d3c055.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzdkODFhOTEyLTg0YTUtNDJlMS1hYWRkLTYxZmFmNjY4N2RmZFwvZGV0b3l6NS1lZDljNTU0OS0xMjY2LTRmZDItYjMyNC03MjQ4MDlkM2MwNTUuanBnIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.OIIPatnWhEFi8yWYfYHM_x181Y-1fifo37olt63Pia8)

For very minor nudity I'll put this behind a spoiler although is just butts. If I need to edit it and black out some parts I will. Let me know.
Spoiler: show

(Judgment)
This one is based on the tarot card.

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/detoz7n-1ce3fcdf-666b-451d-91f8-1c2f7095298d.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzdkODFhOTEyLTg0YTUtNDJlMS1hYWRkLTYxZmFmNjY4N2RmZFwvZGV0b3o3bi0xY2UzZmNkZi02NjZiLTQ1MWQtOTFmOC0xYzJmNzA5NTI5OGQuanBnIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.uWcbG_p8HNY8saBbHsssRbBxxnqTY_cryzYjcK9hBf0)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 30, 2021, 04:58:34 AM
A bitova catch-up?
Day 28 - Made to Order - Ása Harđardóttír knits & knits, sometimes capelets for her crew, and sometimes long long pieces, but no one knows why....
(https://64.media.tumblr.com/caef585f35f438cfcac80a2187ba1417/6e614aad1bbd1906-f0/s400x600/2de9bd0e209c2ec5a6b06d2f80d2e957a17ca6df.jpg)  (https://64.media.tumblr.com/21d7361c4fcefffdae4f0c206230ace4/6e614aad1bbd1906-31/s2048x3072/5aba29980c1980134891c01d754422e2a32b3e91.jpg)
Day 29 - Judgement - ...except Trond Andersen

Day 30 - Cats - well, here she is, a couple of studies of Kitty of the many names.
(https://64.media.tumblr.com/e2443c9b6cf5c727712e88a87e6a0575/76f21235c4266915-09/s2048x3072/d7457a33303385f5f61c76d389c6488ed88c0ef0.jpg)
(https://64.media.tumblr.com/a94ebdbcb97b1c2c2953c4a316e4aa1d/76f21235c4266915-85/s2048x3072/4f7b27b9afbf7d768c1a120d1f11a28668fd6c55.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 30, 2021, 11:53:34 AM
29.10. Judgement

"I believe you wished to see the newspaper?" Michael was proffering the mentioned object.

"Yes! I think the critique should be out today!" Victoria quickly turned out the Culture section. "Did you check it already?"
"I would never!"

"Hmm, lessee… 'Strong opening for the Victorious Company's new piece'… 'the Hotchingsons' voices do not let the audience down'… 'new talent apparently self-educated'… they loved it! Another success!"

"Let me see let me see let me see" Lucky stormed into the room. Victoria finished reading and then offered the paper to the much shorter woman.
"So… yeah… superb singing… like transported to another world… costumes yadda yadda… haa! 'Many touching moments throughout'! 'Excitement intensifies towards end of Act 1'… but what's this? 'Many humorous scenes'… 'great secondary characters sometimes steal the show'… 'lighthearted fun'… Fun? Lighthearted? It's a tragedy!" Lucky was staring at the page incredulously.

"The main point is that the paper liked it!"
"The main point is that the critic has completely misunderstood my text! It's a… it's a disaster!"
*It's a total win! The audience loves good entertainment!"
"But… but… my play!"
"Chin up, Brainy. Today we celebrate again! Michael, champagne please!"
"Coming right up."
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 30, 2021, 12:23:49 PM
25.10. Community

Dust. Dust gets everywhere. Dust builds up in the empty hallways and hangs in the air of venues no longer used. We have sealed off several wings of empty space. We don’t have the resources to man it all. It's down to the force fields now, they are all that's keeping us safe. The Tesla coil lies in disrepair (we assume - no one dares touch it). The brewery equipment has lost its sheen.

Yet not all is lost. The Bakery is still in production. The Moose still comes every now and then. Promotion Celebrations still take place on the Main Square, and every now and then the Inner Door opens, and we welcome another one. We have lost many, but we have gained many. And we still do.

New shops are opening on the World and Stories Alley. Some of them are already fairly popular, and we hope to see more. The Creative Corner remains lively, with Haikus traded back and forth and art still gathering crowds. Events Street is currently brightly lit with YoinkTober lanterns, and hopefully it will soon see yet another Yuletide.

We have lost much, but we have gained much. Where there is life, there is hope. The Blanket Fort is the symbol of our hope and our community. Today, again, we dust the used areas, let in the fresh air, and turn on the lights. All are welcome! We have cookies! And cake! And confetti! Not to forget hope.



First I just had the beginning and didn't want to post that. With some time, it brewed this. Maybe there is hope :)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on October 30, 2021, 01:39:30 PM
28.10. Made to order
Lalli was cooking. He had been suspicious of the weird pies at first, but he had taken quite a liking to them. He had the pasties ready, and the sauce was spread, and he was starting to lay down the fillings. Emil had once put onion on them, and he had liked it, but Lalli didn't (the onion retained it's consistency, yurgh) so they hadn't done that any more. But now it occurred to Lalli that he was making two pies - he could well put onion on Emil's. After some consideration he made the two pies completely different.

Later, when they were eating, Emil remarked "Thank you Lalli, this is very very good! I thought you didn't like onion in pizza, though."
"I don't, but it's only in yours. As is artichoke."
"Hey, that's a good idea! Thanks for thinking about me."
"I think about you always."
"I know. But you know, this really is a good point. It would be good for cooking for many people. Everyone could get what they want, with no extra work! Someone should make these pizza pies to order!"



This is a bit meh but I mostly wanted to have Lalli cook once in a while - my snippets have tended towards Emil being "a homemaker" in their relationship, and I don't mean that.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 30, 2021, 03:36:14 PM
wave: the Ása piece is a brilliant gap-filler, and your cat definitely looks like Kitty, with her cheerful dopey face.

Opaque: Another artistic gapfiller with the cat tank! What a pity they did not think to reinforce the mirrors. And as for the butts, I have no issues with them (well, I have written about butts here before) apart maybe from the fact that they are very good butts and I do not expect mine to look anything like that at the time of my death.

Jitter: Oh, artists! It's not enough to enjoy their work, you have to enjoy it in the right way, sigh. And I feel your point about homemakers -- one of the attractions of slash for me is that there is no need to fight against/fall into expected roles, so one can have sun figuring out what works for the couple (as is the case in many RL couples, even het ones). The pizza idea is great, and could be one possible way for Emil to regain his fortune? (Maybe with Lalli coordinating a crack team of fask-delivery scouts.) Finally, the community one... I have not been around long enough to know what this place means to all of you, but it does feel special, and I hope it will continue!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 31, 2021, 04:08:11 AM
31.10.2021 Costume

The last day! Although I am still missing one entry, for community. Will this thread stay open for a bit, for stragglers?

This story was definitely of the 'inspired' kind, because the concept amuses me immensely. I hope someone else gets a giggle out of it too.
It's 500-ish words dedicated especially to people who think Lalli is super cool, but also to those who are less easily impressed.


Spoiler: show
“First day of school, kids!” shouted Torbjörn up the stairs. “Come on, you don’t want to be late!”

Siv hovered below the stairs, wondering whether she should go up and see what was taking so much time. The moment she had decided that she should, Håkan finally appeared, racing down at breakneck speed. Siv would have chastised him for it, but…

“Håkan, dear,” she asked instead, “what ARE you wearing?”

“I-am-sixteen-I-wear-what-I-want!” Håkan reached the cloakroom, and started to pull on his galoshes.

“Yes, yes, of course,” said Torbjörn, a bit too permissively, in Siv’s opinion, “but what is it?”

“A second-hand fur cloak. It’s part of my new look.”

“But it’s so…” The cloak looked rather moth-eaten, especially around the unseasonal hood, which Håkan had decided to wear up for some reason. “Wait, what new look?”

“Finnish mage-scout! It’s the absolute coolest thing, you know. Everyone will just die when I explain how cool it is.”

Siv sighed. They should have known that sending the kids off to spend the summer with Emil would bear karmic consequences. She was about to say something--her first idea was ‘think of our family’s reputation’, but she quickly realized that this would not work--when Anna joined her brother.

At least her cloak was less shabby. But it was definitely eye-catching, a strange patchwork of assorted furs.

“That’s very… interesting, my treasure,” said Torbjörn. “Are you dressing as a Finnish mage-scout, too?”

“Thanks, I made this myself, out of scraps! Lalli gave them to me, because I can shut up, unlike SOME,” she added, with a glance at Håkan. “But no, I am more of a scout-mage, I think.” As she reached for her boots, Siv could see that she had added fur there, too, in fluffy strips just below the knee. The effect was… well, barbaric was not a nice word to use about another culture. What could Siv say instead, to sway her rebellious children?

“Ah, Sune! Good to see you at last.” Torbjörn sounded relieved. When Siv turned towards their last child, she saw that he, at least, was wearing a pretty ordinary cloak, over a rather plain tunic. Old-fashioned, yes, but nowhere near as bizarre as his siblings. “Are you not interested in dressing like a scout-mage, or a mage-scout, like your brother and sister?”

“No, scouting is boring. All that waiting. I am simply a mage. But just wait till everyone at school gets a load of these!”

Sune plopped himself down on the cloakroom bench and pulled something out from below it. Then, he lifted up one leg and started to pull on the item, which quickly resolved itself into an absurdly shiny thigh-high boot.

“Urk,” said Torbjörn. “Sune, really?”

"I know, they're scouting boots, which is ironic. But aren't they the coolest?” Sune picked up boot number two.

“I think,” said Siv, finally struck by inspiration, “that what your father means to say is that it seems a little unkind to use the Finnish culture as a ‘cool’ costume. How would Lalli feel about this? Have you even asked him?”

The kids exchanged glances.

“I am 99.9% sure that he does not care,” said Anna, tossing back her cloak. “About any of this, on any level. That’s what makes him so super cool.”

“We could ask him, if you like,” added Sune, working the wrinkles out of his boots. “In a letter. It will give me a chance to practice my written Finnish.”

“But we can’t change now,” finished Håkan, brushing some suspiciously pale strands of hair back under his hood. “Or we’ll be late!”


Note: this is part of my continuing revenge against Siv and Torb for how I had them treat Lalli in my fic Future Imperfect. Take that, you two!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on October 31, 2021, 05:02:07 AM
Day 31 - Costume - not my first choice to fulfill this prompt (I got too ambitious), but a nice bit of silliness to end the month.  These are from the Miraculous Ladybug TV show, two costumes our protagonists used at different times as a 'clever' disguise.  If you're not familiar with it, it is a show that relies very heavily upon the 'no one recognises the hero out of costume' in their daily lives trope.  These are not their hero costumes as Ladybug and Chat Noir, btw.
Marinette sneaks into a boys-only party as Mario, a super Manly Man with lots of Manly Muscles, and ends up drafted to do a thinly-disguised version of YMCA.  The other is Mr Banana, a recurring character, a television personality whose costume Adrien once had to borrow to fight in.  In both cases, ya kinda hadda be there. 
(https://64.media.tumblr.com/05bb9dbc851e54b92caa2038ad5e21ce/55819f31c5dc6ac9-b9/s2048x3072/c95d5fcd94bad89175f9f01e3e655a6665a9eff8.jpg)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 31, 2021, 05:44:41 AM
25.10.2021 Community

I got inspired! To continue the 'costume' story. I think it counts for community, because there is a community helping the triplets with their teenage rebellion?
Warning: this epistolary tale is a bit longer than my usual, at almost 1k words. But it's the last thing I will post here, apart from reactions to others' content.



Spoiler: show
Dear Anna, Håkan, and Sune,

I have just received a rather strange letter from your parents. They have asked me to tell you two things:
  • It is not okay to mock the way Lalli dresses by dressing up like him. He will be upset.
  • Magic is not an appropriate hobby for young Swedes.
I would like to say quite a lot on both topics, but I won’t, because I am far from the most qualified person to do so. (Although slightly more qualified than your parents, I think.) I have asked Lalli to reply instead.

Moving on, I am glad that your school year is off to such a good start...


...
...

Love, Your cousin Emil


***


To Sune,

Thank you for the letter in Finnish. I am sending it back with some corrections. It was not bad, but I will reply in Swedish, so you can show this to your siblings. Emil has asked me to write to all of you, on two topics.

First: I do not care what you wear in Mora. The idea that I would is weird.

Secondly: Your parents are right for once. Magic is not a hobby. It is a very serious pursuit which requires a strong connection to the gods. As Swedes, you have no such connection, and I cannot help you find one, since my gods are different from yours. But if you are truly interested, I have some friends I can ask for help.

Be well. And make sure that your new clothes are right for the weather.
 
Lalli


***


Dear children with names!

I sort of remember one of you, who made horrible faces at me a few years ago. That one seemed like a proper Viking. So, awesome job, that one!

Anyway. Lalli says you want to learn more about my gods, because they could be yours too. That’s a great idea! We have the best gods, with the best stories. That’s how I learned about them: from the stories told at feasts. Of course, you can’t do that, because Sweden is godless and your fancy restaurants are too boring for loud storytelling. But maybe you will want to visit us here? Do any of you have any troll-killing experience? The Viking one, maybe?

But if you can't, never fear, feasts are not the only way to learn. There are also books about the gods, of which I was given several. I hardly ever read them, except for the dirty bits, so I have no regrets about sending them to you now. Enjoy! (But maybe not too much. How old are you kids, anyway? If you are too young, please avoid the dirty bits. You will recognize them because they are the ones where the books open most easily.)

Gotta go now, there’s a beast attack! Can’t miss that!

Major Sigrun Eide

***


Hello Anna, Sune, and Hákon,

Did you know that Hákon is a common horse name in Iceland? Cool, no? Do you have horses in Sweden? What do you call them?

Sorry, I got carried away and forgot to introduce myself: my name is Reynir and I am a very good friend of your cousin Emil! And I heard about you from my other very good friend, Lalli, so you must know him too! It’s very nice to meet friends of friends, isn’t it?

Anyway, I am sending you this surprise letter because Lalli told me that you are interested in magic, and I would love to help! He doesn’t think any of you are mages, but that’s fine! I only found out that I was one when I was twenty. And then nobody wanted to teach me anything, because Finnish magic is so different. (That’s why Lalli can’t help you himself. It’s not that he hates you or anything! It’s easy to misunderstand Finns and think they hate you. I myself like to always assume the best and it’s usually true. Finns are such sweethearts really.) And even later, after I got back to Iceland, I had to teach myself, because the government has such disappointing views on non-immune mages. (I forgot to ask: are any of you immune?) But the good news is: I have taught myself a lot now, and have plenty of notes you could look at if you are interested. Of course, you would have to come to Iceland, first. Do you think you could manage it? You can stay with us at the farm, as long as you help out with the sheep a little.

Your new friend,

Reynir


***


Dear Emil,

Just what did you say to the children?

Håkan got sent back from school today for reciting tales of the Nordic gods at lunch. Highly inappropriate ones, apparently. When we questioned him about this, he said that we don’t understand him but he will be appreciated in Norway. Apparently, he wants to drop out of school to move there!

His siblings laughed at this idea, thankfully, but in other ways they are just as concerning. Sune has been making exceptionally fast progress with his Icelandic, which was a great relief at first (he had been neglecting it, in favour of Finnish, and it is so good for business), until he told us that he is only doing so because he plans to do some sort of sheep-related internship in Iceland next summer. Where did he even get such an idea?

Anna, meanwhile, our sweet Anna… at least she has no surprising plans: all she talks about is visiting you in Finland again, next summer. We were seriously considering letting her do so, until last Saturday, when we found her out in the garden, skinning a squirrel she had apparently trapped herself. She says she needs a squirrel-themed hat for the winter. Can you imagine?

In conclusion, we have a request to make: considering what your last letter led to, please don’t write to the children again until further notice,

Your Uncle Torbjörn and Aunt Siv.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: lwise on October 31, 2021, 07:44:40 AM
@tehta, that is glorious!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on October 31, 2021, 02:43:57 PM
wave: that is hilarious! I love their poses.

lwise: oh, thank you so much! I don't even know how to respond.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on October 31, 2021, 07:56:33 PM
Hi! Again I'm on debt to all of you for not commenting all your awesome works. Sorry. I will try to catch up tomorrow.

Meanwhile, here's another crossover episode, this time featuring Reynir and Mikkel. It will be continued on next episode. Filming of the next episode is already happening in Dubrovnik (where King's Landing scenes were shot). I hope you enjoy it! :)

An Adventure of Fire and Ice

Episode 4 - A Walk on King's Landing


Spoiler: show
The Red Gate's guards sheltered themselves from the rain on small alcoves on both sides of the large iron doors. The main access to the Red Keep was open on daytime, allowing the usually constant movement of people entering and leaving Westero's center of power and decisions. However presently, under the pouring rain and just after lunch time, the place looked empty.
Crossing the gate, Mikkel nodded to one guard, that nodded back on a lazy way, and pulled the ample hood of his black coat over his head. He stood there, under the arch, waiting.
Seconds later Reynir arrived, his crimson coat flapping on the wind. He reached Mikkel and smiled. "So, are we going anyway, even with all this rain?"
"I have to go anyway, Reynir. We are leaving tomorrow, so today is my last chance to find the shop I've been told about, which may hold interesting things. Also I want to make sure all our provisions have been loaded into our ship."
Reynir's eyebrows raised. "You had almost three weeks, Mikkel."
"Some very busy weeks, I assure you. Sigrun had a good part of her time taken with teaching our prince, and since he decided to travel on our ship we had to make some adjustments, as you know."
"I can imagine... Thankfully his dragon is still small, unlike her mother, or so I've heard."
"Please don't remind me that day. I'm not easy to impress, but having Balerion almost eating Sigrun still makes me shudder." Mikkel made a gesture towards the street. "Shall we move? We can talk while we walk."
King's Landing was shaped almost as a square, with corners pointing North, South, East and West. The city's main street crossed from the Gods' Gate, on the West corner, to the Red Keep, set atop the hill on the Eastern corner, where the Blackwater river meets the sea. The street ran straight until it winded up the hill towards the Red Keep.
Mikkel and Reynir walked down, trying not to slip on the wet stones, or stepping on piles of dung dropped by horses.
"Ah! King's Landing! Westeros' greatest, and filthiest, city!" Mikkel said, while pushing Reynir sideways to avoid stepping on a large mound.
"Oh! Thanks! And what about Sigrun? Why didn't she come?"
"She wanted to rest this afternoon to be ready for tomorrow."
"Hum, doesn't sound much like Sigrun... She never gets tired! Perhaps all those water dancing lessons are wearing her."
"I also found that very unlike her." Mikkel replied. "But I guess she's been taking her teaching very seriously since that... incident, when Emil saved her life. She grew very fond of the young prince after that, as you surely noticed."
"I did." Reynir answered, moving closer to Mikkel. "As much as you surely noticed we're being followed."
A smile lightened Mikkel's face under the hood. "Of course. The kid. I suppose it's one of Ukko-Pekka's notorious "little birds"... I've been followed every day since our arrival. The Master of Whispers must be a very curious man. But then, he's doing his job."
They walked in silence for a while, and Reynir observed the city. It was his first time in King's Landing. He had been in several cities besides Braavos, including Myr, Pentos and Volantis, but none was as large as Westeros' capital, with so many buildings seemingly climbing on each other. There were wealthy palaces along the ample main street, but between them, or sometimes from archways under them, numberless alleys gave access to more and more houses, stores, bars, brothels, workshops and so on, all mixed up without any visible order.
Soon they came to the base of the hill, where the main street continues on a straight line and, to their left, the curved street called The Hook begins, providing the best access to the harbour. As they walked that way Reynir noticed the boy being replaced by a younger girl, but didn't bother mentioning it to Mikkel. "This place is a true maze, you know? I mean, beyond theses few large streets. I got lost a few times myself."
"Is that what you've been doing? Getting lost, eventually robbed, or worse?"
"No. I only got lost twice, and just once two lads tried to rob me. People seem to respect the Red God's attire."
"And what happened?" Mikkel asked, giving some space between them to let a horse and his rider pass.
"They backed away when I put down the hood and they realized I'm a man."
"Lucky guys."
"I guess so. Anyway, I wasn't wandering, but looking for a temple of R'hllor. A servant on the castle told me there's one here on the Hook, hidden on one of those alleys."
Mikkel noticed that Reynir was looking around while they walked, searching. "This is all very different from your home, isn't it?"
"You mean Lys? So different!" He looked up. "This kind of rain is similar, though. Sometimes I miss it, being in the fields with the sheep, feeling the rain, free from worries... But that's not the path I, or perhaps R'hllor, chose."
Mikkel nodded. "And the temple, did you find it?"
"No, not yet. I'm hoping to find it today, since I don't suppose we will have time to look for one in Oldtown... If it exists."
After some time the Hook led them to a larger street, the aptly called Muddy road, that proved an even bigger challenge to walk without stepping into something unpleasant. Before long they arrived at Fishmonger's square, the largest open area on King's Landing, framed by many impressive buildings that house guilds, navigation companies, inns and public offices.
Just ahead they saw the city's outer wall, which at that point would be some forty feet high. There,  between two towers, stood the great arch of the River Gate, flanked by a multitude of stalls and a dozen guards from the City Watch. They crossed the gate to the harbour, turning left towards the Navy's wharf.
"Oh, I also spent some time with Grand Maester Taru." Raynir said. "She's an... interesting person. Knows so many things. She noticed my Lyseni accent and wanted to ask things about Lys and, of course, the Lord of The Light."
"Hum, I see. And you asked her about the Kingdom."
"Sure. But it's easy to see that her interest in Lys was a lie. An excuse to ask me about R'hllor priests and temples. How many and where."
Mikkel's eyebrows raised. "Curious... And what else did you..."
"GOOD TO SEE YOU, LORD MIKKEL! SINCE THAT DAY ON THE THRONE I WANTED TO TALK TO YOU!"
Reynir and Mikkel turned to find Admiral Olsen Greyjoy, Master of Ships, breaking through a host of commanders, officials and representatives of many guilds.
Bowing slightly, Mikkel and Reynir removed their hoods. Mikkel cleared his throat and spoke a bit higher than his usual tone. "Admiral Olsen! A pleasure to see you! We came to check if everything is ready for our departure tomorrow. I suppose you're doing the same. How unfortunate that we didn't cross each other's path along these days."
"UNFORTUNATE? I SAY AMAZING! I COME HERE EVERY DAY SINCE THE KING DECIDED TO GIVE FOUR OF MY BEST SHIPS TO THIS CRAZY ADVENTURE OF YOURS!"
"I understand that you disagree with our enterprise."
"NOT AN ENTERPRISE, MADNESS! NO ONE RETURNED TO THE SUNSET SEA! NOT EVEN DAMN BRANDON THE SHIP BUILDER!"
"We can review our docum..."
"I DON'T WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT! THE KING DECIDED, EVEN SENDS A PRINCE WITH YOU. ALL I CAN HOPE IS THAT YOU DECIDE TO COME BACK BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE. NOW, LORD MIKKEL, TELL ME. HAVEN'T WE MET BEFORE?"
The rain was getting heavier, and Mikkel pulled the hood over his head. "I'm sorry, Admiral, but I don't recall having the pleasure to..."
"OH, BUT I THINK I DO! ON WHITE HARBOUR, FOUR YEARS AGO. WEREN'T YOU SELLING SOME "MAGICAL" ELIXIR THAT CURED ALMOST EVERYTHING, FROM CRAMPS TO SNORING?"
"I'm afraid my good Admiral is confusing me with someone else."
"I HAVE A GOOD MEMORY FOR FACES, AND I'M QUITE SURE IT WAS YOU. EVEN THOSE WHISKERS WERE THE SAME."
"Admiral, I've never been at White Harbour! I can't possibly be that person." Mikkel came closer to the man. "However I do have a twin brother, and he's a merchant. Perhaps it was him. We haven't met in many years."
"WELL, I HAVE TWO MEN THAT WERE WITH ME. THEY BOUGHT THAT ELIXIR... AND JUST GOT LOOSE BOWELS FOR DAYS. WOULD YOU COME WITH ME TO MEET THEM? SO WE CAN SETTLE THIS?"
"Loose bowels? I've... heard about a such elixir before, and if I'm not mistaken that would happen if the person drank during the treatment..." Reynir said, attracting Olsen's attention.
"PRIEST, DID YOU EVER MET A SAILOR THAT DOESN'T DRINK? AND HOW DO YOU KNOW THIS?"
"I don't... but... It's just... a story I've heard."
Mikkel stepped forward. "Admiral, I'm sure it's just a misunderstanding."
"YES, MUST BE! WHY DON'T YOU BOTH COME WITH ME SO..."
At that moment someone shouted. "FIRE! HELP!" and everybody turned to see the sails of the closest ship on fire, a fire that spread fast to the ship's rigging.
"DAMN!" Olsen put both hands on his head and started to ran towards the ship, shouting orders, being followed by everybody else, except Reynir and Mikkel, that looked at the fire, startled.
"Let's move, fast!" Reynir said, tapping Mikkel's shoulder, and they walked away from the wharf as fast as they could.


Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Opaque on November 01, 2021, 02:24:33 AM
These are the last two poems for Yoinktober. And there both about cats! Yay! Everyone likes cats right?

Lazy Cat
(Cats)

Yet another day to sleep in
For a cat I'd say that's a win
My bed is made of soft clean wool
And my food bowl is always full

Although I do not ask for much
I would love lasagna for lunch
It keeps me satisfied for now
I much prefer it than cat chow

As night falls I ready for sleep
I stretch and into bed I leap
Mountains of food fill up my dreams
Until daylight breaks through the seams

I'm not ready to wake just yet
No use changing. My ways are set
Cozy in bed is where I stay
Honestly, I do hate Monday

This one here is about Emil dressing up Bossi with fake bird wings for Halloween.

Wings
(Costume)

I dread this time of year
Folks go looking for fear
And I hide from the clear
But he always comes here

Trying to hiss and growl
Giving him my best scowl
His idea is most foul
Holding wings of an owl

I try to sneak away
But I am forced to play
It's only for one day
The wings upon me stay

These uncomfortable wings
Are not the worst things
I dislike the tight strings
It's still better than slings

It complements my mane
I think this to keep sane
I will endure this pain
I'll not be caught again
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on November 01, 2021, 03:37:51 AM
Yay, it's a Västerström mischief kinda day!  Personally, I think sending them to Norway is a splendid idea (Iceland not so much), and I applaud their cross-cultural stirrings!  (I hope instructions on how to treat and tan the squirrel hide were forthcoming, though. Yuck.)
Patient Bosse. Time to ready the Cat Spit Revenge?

Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on November 01, 2021, 04:51:27 AM
Opaque: Your Garfield poem is reminding me of my own complicated feelings regarding Mondays. And lasagna, which can be done well or poorly...
And is Emil trying to dress Bosse as Onni? (Their facial expressions do have some similarity...) Or is this set when Emil was little?

grey: I will comment later as I am saving your story for a low-morale moment.

wave: I have strong headcanons on these triplets now. Anna has (quietly) watched Lalli handle a variety of hides over the summer, so she kinda knows what to do. (She might still mess it up, of course.) As for the ickiness, she currently calls the process less 'disgusting' and more 'actually real, unlike the fake, meaningless life of my parents'. And I think Sune will adore Iceland! Even if he can't become a mage (although in my headcanon at least one triplet will end up finding mage powers) he will fall in love with Reykjavik and its many fancy shops. Just imagine, the boots he can buy there...
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Róisín on November 01, 2021, 07:06:14 AM
I grew up on subsistence farms so learned to tan hides when quite young. It is a useful skill.

 And when I have done storytelling gigs at Mediæval Fairs I am usually placed in or near the Viking Encampment, which has a number of displays of real-life Viking-era skills. We have people demonstrating everything from making dried and smoked meat, camp cooking, blacksmithing, weaving and spinning, making looms and musical instruments, ship-building, making buckets and barrels, and the kids’ absolute favourite: the tanner! His work is messy, gross and smelly and grosses out their parents, so of course the kids love it!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on November 01, 2021, 11:38:19 AM
grey: Reynir helped! If in a rather Emil-ish way. The bit with Olsen Greyjoy was pretty hilarious overall. And ugh, what a realistic medieval city.  No place for long robes...
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on November 01, 2021, 12:54:27 PM
Opaque, as a Garfield fan I loved the poem! I even ate it twice! Also lovely one with Bosse. What a patient cat to endure that without scratching anyone at range!

Wave, Jitter, Roisin, Mira, I'll comment later 'cause didn't have time to catch up properly.

Tehta, I'm very happy to find that you enjoyed this episode, and even more that my stories can have a positive effect on your moral! Thanks!
And yes, this Reynir has a capability that would make the SSSS Emil quite envious... Let's see what more he can do on the next episode, that will continue with Mikkel and Reynir's adventures on King's Landing, a lovely place as long as you keep your eyes open for any "obstacles" that may be on your way... :)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on November 01, 2021, 03:34:12 PM
So here is one more!

30.10. Cats

One day, and this happened very long ago, when the world was still young, much before the Difficult Times, long before the Old Cities were built, one day Mielikki and Tapio called all of the emuus into their halls. "I have seen a beautiful thing" Tapio explained to the emuus. "There will be great forests all over the Earth, and trees will grow there, and they will be grand."

"And in the forests" Mielikki, his lady and wife, continued, "in the protection of the trees, there will be so much different life. There will be animals of all sizes, and they will live in the forests and make them their home." But then a sorrow darkened Mielikki's face and she continued, "For a long time, the forests will be in peace, and all beings will live there and follow their own nature. But there will be others, who will come, and they will not make the forests their home. They will fell the trees and build their homes and many things of the wood. And they will dig the ground, and break rock. They will bring many wonderful things to the world, but they will also bring destruction. But this time will pass."

"To make this beauty real, we ask of you" and now Tapio was talking to the emuus Tuometar, Pihlajatar, Hongatar and others, "to go to the Earth, and grow your trees everywhere, and make them strong and beautiful."

The emuus of trees responded, "We will do as you ask, as we see warm sun, and cool waters, and wintertime that will give us rest. We will grow strong and numerous, and the others cannot harm us."

In thanks, Tapio gave them his presents. Hongatar's trees would be tall and straight and always see the sun. Tuometar's saplings would have flowers with the loveliest scent imaginable. Pihlajatar's seedlings would grow to graceful trees that fill with berries every summer. Other trees received different gifts, but all received something beautiful. Tapio sent also flowers, berries and different plants and mushrooms to make sure the forests were beautiful and healthy.


When the trees had grown into forests, Mielikki asked the emuus of animals to go there to make the forests their homes and make them lively. And the emuus responded, "We will do as you ask, as we see the forests are beautiful and full of bounty. The trees will protect us from the others."

Hearing this, Mielikki was both happy and sad. She told the emuus that the trees would not be able to protect all of them, because the others were resourceful and also greedy, and needed so very many things. But again she reminded them, that after the others had come and gone, the forests would be peaceful once more.

The emuus agreed to go, and they received their gifts. The Bear received strength and her offspring would be the mightiest of all. The Squirrel got a lovely and warm tail. The Wolf's gift was the pack to run with and the howl to honor the Moon. The Moose was given long and strong legs, to be able to move swiftly in the forests, through snowbanks and across lakes. The Fox rejoiced in the promise that there will be colorful lights in the sky for her. And so on, all a animals received something that made them special and beautiful.


Finally, Mielikki spoke to the Lynx. "To you, Mother Lynx, I have a special request. The others, humans, will need a companion. I ask of you to give some of your children to go live with the humans. They will need your eyes and ears to keep watch in the night. Without you, their food will be eaten by vermin, and they will starve."

The Lynx was wary. "What you have told us about these humans, does not sound good. I am not willing to live with them."

Mielikki responded "Please do not think the humans are nothing but bad. I spoke in haste in my sorrow, for I have seen they will hurt many forests. But they will also bring many things into the world, that no one else could. Our brothers and sisters have asked us to ask you to help them."

Still the Lynx was unwilling. "I am a free spirit, and so will be my children. We do not wish to be tied to the humans. We refuse to be owned!"

"This I promise you" Mielikki spoke solemnly "You and your children will never be owned by the humans. You will be equal companions, and as you help them, they will love and cherish you. They will not be given power over you, to tell you what to do. Those of your kin that go live with them, will always make their own decisions. If you do this, you will receive a boon."

So the Lynx agreed to ask some of her children to go to the humans. But the decision was given to each of the children individually. Some loved the forests and the hunt, and they decided to stay. Others went to humans, and found that they liked the warmth of the fire and the friendliness of the hand more than the hunt.

Mielikki spoke once more to the Lynx "For this, I bless you and all your kin. There will be a time when a terrible blight will hurt all the world. But you and your kin will never contract the plague, and while you will not fully escape suffering, as the entire World will weep, you will not be touched by it like the others. This is my word and my blessing."

And that is how cats came to live with us humans, and this is why they are immune. It is all thanks to decision of the Mother Lynx, and Mielikki's blessing, very very long time ago, when the world was young.



An emuu is a concept of the Finnish mythology, it is the original source of something. So the emuu of foxes (Käreitär) is the Mother of all Foxes. Most of the emuus known today are of animals or trees, but also some lifeless natural things would have an emuu. Most of them are considered to be female, but not all, so it's more like the Parent of X.

The named ones are Hongatar for the pines, Tuometar for bird cherries (that have flowers with very strong scent, peculiar in the Finnish nature) and Pihlajatar for rowans. The ending -tar indicates female, so Pilhajatar = Lady Rowan perhaps. Pines have many names in Finnish, Hongatar is from honka, but the common name is mänty, also petäjä is pretty usual. There are some known names for emuus of animals too, but not for the emuu of lynx.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on November 01, 2021, 05:06:36 PM
Jitter, I'm without words! What a beautiful story! And I feel a touch of Silarillion here too!
I can see this being told around a fire at night when young Finns ask why cats are immune. Perhaps it's the story being told among our team on the chapter cover...
Well done!  <3
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Jitter on November 01, 2021, 06:03:30 PM
Thanks Grey :) It is intended as part children’s story, part legend. We would probably tell about dogs, but for them cats are obviously most important.

And yes I am reading the Silmarillion, much to my dismay! Further whining in the relevant thread.

Everyone, I’ll try and find time to comment on the rest of the contributions. I have read and enjoyed all! Currently busy!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on November 02, 2021, 04:32:57 AM
Jitter, I enjoyed this as well! The language flows so beautifully. And I can definitely see the Tolkien influence: I was half-waiting for someone to say "still, they will have need of wood". (It also reminds me of the rabbit legends of Watership Down, but I guess those are part of the same tradition as the Silm.)
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Mirasol on November 02, 2021, 12:06:39 PM
Eeee, most wonderful contributions for the final days! XoX And so many! Forgive me for not commenting on all of them individually, I´d write an entire novel at this rate... ^^' But I read and looked at them all! I enjoyed them very much!

I´m home now, so here come my final pieces: (Going back to spoilers for not clogging up the thread)

Spoiler: 28: Made to Order • show

One final witch for this YoinkTober! An air-witch enjoying a teabreak after having finished her new, made to order cloak (soaring through the skies gets cold after a while, you know).

(https://i.postimg.cc/Fs9sMw0z/October28-Mirasol.jpg)


Spoiler: 29: Judgement • show

I asked for my brother´s help for ideas with this one again. He told me to draw the playable character Kayle from League of Legends. Without going into too much detail, she´s half of a justice-deity, but convinced she´s the only relevant half since she does the actual judging and keeping of the laws. Me and the other half of the deity, responsible for forgiveness and the entire empathy-part, beg to disagree.

(https://i.postimg.cc/m282BVSw/October29-Mirasol.jpg)


Spoiler: 30: Cats • show

This one would have worked for the next prompt too, but I chose to draw it for "Cats" since I knew I wouldn´t have much time on the next day.
Grey, I know the great Kitherion the red is an actual dragon-hatchling, but I just can´t shake this mental image... :'D

(https://i.postimg.cc/J4qLVqLQ/October30-Mirasol.jpg)


Spoiler: 31: Costume • show

As usual, one of the worst pieces is the last one... :P
I started playing Animal Crossing recently and there was a Halloween-event you were supposed to wear a costume to. I couldn´t decide which of these two to wear. In the end I wore one for half of it and then switched. :'D

(https://i.postimg.cc/7YDkWRp6/October31-Mirasol.jpg)


Thank you again Wave for coming up with the prompts!!! I had a lot of fun drawing these! :)) And everyone else´s works were so amazing!!! I´m glad I got to see them! I do hope we´ll have another YoinkTober next year!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on November 02, 2021, 03:23:56 PM
Mira, really loved each one! Whichever the inspiration, you always manage to make them look cute and beautiful!

But of course Kitty is my favorite!  :3  <3
And Kitty's costume is not only a costume, right? It's a self-powered set of wings that allows her to fly! And that tail extension, I'm sure, allows Kitty to control the flight with her own tail!  ;D
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: tehta on November 02, 2021, 03:55:51 PM
Mirasol: As usual, I feel a bit weird commenting on characters from video games I don't know, but the costumes in particular look so sweet. I can see why you had a hard time choosing. Also, I too love Kitty, and see it as an echo both of Kitherion and Bosse-dressed-up-by-Emil. (Although Kitty is of course a much appropriate subject for silliness and magic than grumpy Bosse.) But my absolute favourite is the sky witch! So cosy and stylish! She'd be a fashion icon in our world.

wave: I am still processing how Yoinktober affected my life (for all my whining about lack of daily inspiration, I had more inspiration and fun than I thought possible) but I can already say that I thought the list of prompts was excellent. So varied and creative and open-ended. Would you mind sharing how you came up with them?
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: Róisín on November 02, 2021, 07:10:57 PM
Jitter, the cat story is beautifully made! I tell some of the origin stories of the creatures of several cultures I have lived in, and this has the proper feel of such things.
All of the works so far have been a delight, but I especially liked this story!
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: JoB on November 03, 2021, 04:27:54 AM
And Kitty's costume is not only a costume, right? It's a self-powered set of wings that allows her to fly! And that tail extension, I'm sure, allows Kitty to control the flight with her own tail!  ;D
... uhhhh please bear with us while we do some more R&D (https://www.geekxgirls.com/article.php?ID=1607) ... >:D
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on November 03, 2021, 10:00:09 AM
... uhhhh please bear with us while we do some more R&D (https://www.geekxgirls.com/article.php?ID=1607) ... >:D
Definitively needs a bit more R&D, but looks pretty good so far, ready for D&D (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dungeons_%26_Dragons)! :D
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: wavewright62 on November 06, 2021, 04:21:55 AM

wave: I am still processing how Yoinktober affected my life (for all my whining about lack of daily inspiration, I had more inspiration and fun than I thought possible) but I can already say that I thought the list of prompts was excellent. So varied and creative and open-ended. Would you mind sharing how you came up with them?
(http://i.imgur.com/9WzJLW4.png)
Thank you.  Thank you so much, and I'm glad you found them useful for tapping into your creativity.
Having done the original InkTober for a few years, I appreciated how the prompts were often single words that could be viewed in many different ways.  I'd been doing the Forum prompt lists on my own for a few years, then last year several of us mods contributed to the YoinkTober list, and some of those were phrases instead of single words.  Instead of insisting on single words, I decided to go with it, and I'm glad I did because it worked beautifully.
This year, a few weeks beforehand, I just sat down and riffed on the topic of transformation and change, which was the most best suggestion from @thegreyarea .  Took me maybe half an hour?
Some perennials (Cats, Food & Sigrun) were obvious, but others were just general inflection points in people's lives, where change occurs.  The fact that it was no longer tied to the Minnaverse opened up new angles. So many stories surround topics like Birth, Marriage, and Death, that are not confined to a fandom.  Others, like the Magical Girl Transformation, occur regularly in other fandoms but are not a part of SSSS per se, so now were fair game. 

Others, I can't tell you where they came from because I don't remember! XD  I never seem to have trouble coming up with ideas. 
But because I don't remember, I often found myself puzzling each day over what I would do with the day's prompt.  I certainly didn't have anything specific in mind when I made the list!

Now, what y'all did with those prompts, is nothing short of amazing.  A whole month of top-quality work! A special shout-out to the stories by tehta, lwise, LooNey and especially Jitter, Opaque and thegreyarea's double-treat of both words and pictures (speaking of Both is Good), and Mirasol's lovely drawings!  The whiplash between comedy and tragedy was especially satisfying.
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thorny on November 06, 2021, 11:26:29 AM
... uhhhh please bear with us while we do some more [url deleted] ...

That cat is clearly saying, 'WTF do you think you're doing? Get me out of this thing!'
Title: Re: YoinkTober 2021
Post by: thegreyarea on November 11, 2021, 01:40:50 PM
Hi everyone!
Here goes, two (!) episodes of the SSSS/ASOIF crossover! It took a long time because we shoot them in a row, trying to keep in line with the budget, and also because Reynir is very shy and it was hard to shoot that scene...  :reynir:  ;)

After these two (ep. 5 and 6) I'll post future episodes (and the previous ones) on the SSSS scriptorium, because this yoinktober, wonderful as it was, is done.

BTW thanks to every one that contributed, and a very special thanks to Wave for the innitiative and for the excelent prompt choices. I'm very glad that I could contribute and help a little bit.  :reynir:

EDIT: Found some mistakes. My apologies.
Currently working on corrections. An updated version will be posted soon.

An Adventure of Fire and Ice

Episode 5 - Antiques


Spoiler: show
The commotion caused by the ship's fire grew around them. Soon there were people running, carrying buckets and axes, followed by dozens of merchants, sailors, beggars, guards and so on, all crowding shoulder to shoulder to watch the fight against the fire. Mikkel saw two persons being pick-pocketed, and heard bets being made over the outcome, with people trying to guess if there would be casualties and how many. Two obviously drunk sailors started their own fight, prompting a harsh intervention from the City Watch.
As they passed under the great arch back to Fishmonger's Square, walking with haste, but as casually as possible, Reynir turned to him, worried. "I hope nobody gets hurt. All I wanted was a distraction."
"Don't worry. With all this rain everything will be wet on that ship. I suppose they won't have much trouble to put out the fire." Mikkel replied. He stopped briefly at the middle of the square and turned right, leading Reynir to a much narrower street. "Let's go this way. If Olsen sends someone after us they will probably think that we, foreigners, took the Muddy Way, the fastest route back to the Red Keep."
"Yes, well thought." Reynir replied while removing and turning inside out his red coat, in a swift and skilful move, without stopping or even slowing down. He closed it, leaving his long braid out of sight, and anyone looking would only see two tall men with black hooded coats.
"This is the River Row." Mikkel commented. "It runs side by side with the City Wall along the river. We should find a store, or a bar, and get out of sight, just in case. The store I was looking for is somewhere here... It's called "Gorzach's Antiques".
Reynir looked at Mikkel, still worried. "I wish I could make the rain heavier so no one gets hurt."
"I told you not to worry. They probably solved the situation by now." He turned discreetly to check if someone was on their tail. "By the way, I didn't know that you could start a fire just like that. It will be very useful if we ever need to light a bonfire."
"But I can't! There was already a fire under a tarp, didn't you notice? I've just given the fire a little boost."
Mikkel started to laugh. "Ha-ha! You always say that as if it was easy! You must teach me, my friend!"
"Told you! I wish I could. It's just something I can do. I don't really understand how."
"And you told me that it's not something Red Priests can usually do, right?"
A bunch of children came on their direction, running after a ball. Reynir pushed Mikkel aside but that wasn't enough to prevent their coats to be splashed with mud.
Reynir swore angrily something in Lysenni and looked at his coat. "Damn! This is the inside! I'll have to wash it now! Good thing I have a spare." He looked again at the coat, disgusted. "And no, as I told you before, the Lord of the Light does grant some... capabilities to those that dedicate their lives to the faith, but this... control over fire is unheard of."
"Oh, I remember. You could already do it before joining the faith, right?"
"Yep! That's actually why I began to get interested on R'hllor. I believe he chose me for some reason, or some destiny..."
A beggar approached them, his bowl filled with rain water and a few small coins. Mikkel sighed, offering a silver quarter and being rewarded with promises of prayers to all the Seven Gods, so he and his friend were safe on their travels and tireless on their beds.
"Well, we will probably need all the blessings available, whatever the god involved." He looked at Reynir. "No offense, I hope."
"None taken. Believing in the Lord of Light doesn't imply refusing the others."
"Good, good. So, remind me, you never told anyone, except me and Sigrun, about your... talent."
"When I was learning with the priests, back on Lys, I was very young, and afraid of what they, and the other students, would think about that. You know, calling me a freak and all that."
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Away from the busy square, the street became quieter. Mikkel began to doubt if they would find the antiques shop. Seeing a young boy sitting idle on some steps he asked if he knew well the street. Soon the boy was offering his services as a guide. "Lords, you can trust in Petri! Petri can take you to the best places in the street, or the whole city! Petri knows all the important places! And also the cleanest brothels, shops with best deals, places with good wine and ale... My lords name it, Petri takes your exellen... excellencies there!"
He was dirty, and his hair uneven, but smiled all the time. His eyes went wide when Mikkel showed him another silver quarter. "Do you know a place called Gorzach's Antiques?"
Petri scratched vigorously his head, leading Reynir to wonder if his motivation was just thinking or there were lice involved. "Hum... Sorry lord, never heard about."
"It must have a sign. A friend told me it's close to this street."
"But Petri can't read, my lord!" He kept looking at Mikkel's coin. "What do they sell?"
"Antiques, of course." Mikkel replied, however the lack of understanding on the boy's face was evident. "Old things, frippery."
"Wait! I know!" Petri said, jumping. "You mean the guy that sells old junk?"
"Not junk! Things not everyone knows how to use, or what they mean. Things..."
"Yes, Junk!" Said Reynir, interrupting. "Take us to the guy that sells old junk."
The boy started to walk towards a passage between two buildings. "Come! This way!"
Reynir followed, and so did Mikkel after a long sigh. The alley turned slightly left, leading them to a few slippery steps, and after that to a small square where the rainwater accumulated at the middle, forming a large puddle. On the opposite side a faded sign read
"Gorzach's Antiques - King's Landing best deals."
Petri had a large smile on his face and his hand, palm up, near Mikkel. "Is this the place? Can I have my coin?"
"Hum... We just walked for a minute, and it was pretty straightforward. You could have just pointed us the direction." Petri kept his arm extended, waiting, and Mikkel slipped the coin on his hand. "Anyway, you did your part on the deal, smart lad."
The kid bowed to them and began to walk back to the alley when Reynir, holding his own silver piece, stopped him. "Do you know if there's a temple of the Lord of Light somewhere around here, boy?"
Petri looked at the coin, and faced them with a serious expression for the first time. "I... I know, but what will the Seven think of me? Better not risk their wrath!" And with that he left, running.
Reynir's eyes followed the boy for a second. Then he pocketed the coin and turned to Mikkel. "Well, at least we know the temple exists. It seems the Seven don't appreciate concurrence. So unlike Braavos, with temples standing side by side."
"Don't worry, we will find it. I'll ask the shop owner. Shall we enter? I'm tired of all this rain."
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Crossing the narrow door they found the store so filled of things that Reynir didn't know where to look. It was a large space, lightened by two small windows and some oil lamps, making the place rather dark. Large tables, covered with dozens of objects, stood without any apparent order, creating narrow passages that forced him and Mikkel to be very careful to avoid toppling over things with their coats. They made their way through the maze the other side,  to a counter also covered with things.
There was a curtain behind the counter, but no one on sight. Reynir realized the walls were also covered with frippery, some on shelves, others hanging directly. Even the ceiling  was used to hang things, including a large stuffed reptile, as long as a man, that Reynir had never seen before. It was like a dragon without wings.
Mikkel knocked on the wooden counter. "Hello! Anyone here?". Someone shouted from behind the curtain on a language Reynir didn't understand. Mikkel turned to him, smiling. "He's coming." Noticing Reynir's interest on a hand fan he showed him how to unfold it, revealing a strange dark pattern. "Curious thing, isn't it? Those are from East. Asshai, I'd guess, considering the pattern. But the boy was right, most of this is junk."
"Who says I sell junk?"
They both turned to find an old woman behind the counter. Her hair was short and white, and she wore a brown dress with many collars, including a thin black string with many dangling keys.
"I beg your pardon." Mikkel said. "I was about to add that this is junk for those that don't understand it's value."
"Hum, I see that you know how to talk your way out. I like that." She smiled. "I'm Gorzach. What can I do for you? Looking for something specific? A gift perhaps? I just received some old jewels from Volantis, and be sure any of them would make a woman..." She looked at Reynir, and then back to Mikkel, winking. "...or a man, very happy."
Mikkel moved closer to her. "Thanks, but I'm looking for something different. Really old stuff. Maps, instruments, books. A friend from Braavos told me this is the best place on Westeros to ask."
"I see. Did your friend warn you those things are quite expensive?"
A loud thump could be heard when Mikkel deposited a heavy bag over the counter. He dug his fingers in the bag, retrieving a golden coin. He gave it to Gorzach. "Yes, he did."
She bit the coin, looked at it and pulled the curtain aside. "Follow me."
There was a fairly empty room on the other side, and some stairs leading down. They descended, and Gorzach unlocked a door with one key from her collar.
The basement room had a low, curved ceiling and shelves along all walls. A single lamp stood over a table at the center. "You ask about maps? Take a look at this." She took several rolls from a shelf, placing them over the table.
They spent a long time down there. Mikkel, filled with enthusiasm, discussed with Gorzach about each thing, trying to find its origins, age and sometimes possible uses. He had, however, little disposition to explain why some objects were important and others not, and soon Reynir, terribly bored, walked around the room, inspecting the many weird and curious things on the shelves.
Mikkel was already arguing about prices when a small object captured Reynir's attention. It was a small square block as large as his palm. It's height was the same as the sides, so it looked the same whichever way Reynir placed it, without a clear top, or bottom. And each face was cut, on both directions, by two dark lines, creating nine smaller squares on each face. Each small square had a different, albeit quite faded, colour, with no clear order.
When Reynir returned to the table where Mikkel and Gorzach sit it had just a few objects over it, the results of the bargain. "So, what did you find?"
"Two maps of Sothoryos, including a good part of its Southern coast. One said to be from the Summer Islands, and the other, with annotations in High Valyrian, that allegedly belonged to Jaenara Belaerys. Few things match between both, but interesting anyway."
"Interesting? These are treasures!" Gorzach interrupted.
Mikkel's face was serious. "Considering the price you was asking they would indeed be treasures."
Reynir could see by the look on the old woman's face that Mikkel has already hammered down the price. "And those other things?"
"A bow divider, a ruler and a protractor, all doubtless old..." He looked at Reynir's puzzled face and added. "These are drawing tools, each very useful if you have the knowledge."
Mikkel grabbed a knife with a curious white blade, almost a palm long. "And this is a present for Sigrun. The blade, Gorzach says, comes from the mouth of some giant sandworm that lives deep in the great Sand Sea of Essos."
"hum... interesting." Reynir didn't know what to say. He didn't want to speak anything that might disturb the deal they already reached, but was too curious about the coloured object, and placed it over the table. "What about this? Do you know what is it for?"
Gorzach took the object and studied it near the light. "I have no idea. Didn't even remember to have it. Probably has some ritual use."
Mikkel's laugh echoed in the room. "Which means you don't have the slightest idea about its utility!"
"Do you, smart lass?"
Mikkel took the object and rotated it in his hands. "No. I don't. Where was it found?"
"I can't recall. I must have been here for a long time, and my memory is no longer the same..." She turned to Reynir, and then back to Mikkel. "Aren't you the ones from Braavos that will set sails to the West tomorrow? That will try to cross the Sunset Sea?"
Looking around as if to confirm they were alone, Mikkel nodded.
"Than you can keep it. As a gift from Gorzach."
"You don't strike me as one to offer gifts."
She gave him a wry smile. "Indeed, I'm not. But it's a custom from where I came. We give gifts to those that will never return."


An Adventure of Fire and Ice

Episode 6 - The Red God's Temple


Content Warning: There's some nudity mentioned. Way less than in Game of Thrones, anyway. :)

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The rain had stopped when they left the shop. Mikkel, carrying a small bag with their acquisitions, looked at the dark clouds. "Seems this is just a pause. So, do you still want to find that temple?"
"You think that we have enough time before the sunset?"
"I guess so. And if Gorzach's indications are correct it's on our way back to the Red Keep."
They took a narrow passage that climbed between houses that looked grey and poor. There was less people around, but the proximity allowed them to hear all the domestic chatter from inside. People were talking, fighting, complaining, begging, making love... A few faces looked at them from windows, probably asking why were those hooded strangers on black coats crossing their neighbourhood.
After a few turns and hesitations they arrived at another small square where an indistinct building had a painted heart surrounded by flames over the door. Reynir smiled. "The old lady was right! This must be the temple!"
The door was open, and they found inside an empty round space lightened by several torches on the wall. There were two small doors to each side and a larger one just ahead. Soon the sound of small paws told they weren't alone in the room.
"Meow."
Reynir found the cat next to the door on their right. It was mottled, with many patterns of brow and beige over white. It came closer, hesitantly, green eyes reflecting the torch's flames.
"Meoow!"
"Perhaps he's hungry." Said Mikkel. "I might have something for him." He removed a small package from one pocket and unfolded it, showing Reynir three strips of dried meat.  Reynir took one and crouched, offering the strip on his open hand.
The cat got closer and closer and finally pulled the strip from Reynir's palm. Soon the strip disappeared.
"It's not a he, but a she."
Reynir and Mikkel turned to see a small woman on the left door. She was wearing a red coat and looked very young.
"Welcome to the temple of the Lord of Light. I'm Lith, daughter of Lieth, the priestess that cares for this temple, and I'm studying to become a priestess myself. May I ask what brings you here?"
Reynir noticed that he still had his coat turned inside out and swiftly reversed it. He kept it open, showing a red jewel that hang over his white shirt. "I'm Reynir Vhassar, a priest of R'hllor myself, and I came here to pray to our God before our departure tomorrow. And this is my friend Mikkel Forel."
Lith bowed. "Welcome priest. May your light endure, for the night is dark and full of terrors. This is your house too. We will have a small celebration when the sun sets, and you, and your friend, will be welcomed to join us."
Before Reynir could say anything he felt something touching his feet.
"Meow."
"Oh, you gave her food, and now she wants more." Lith was smiling." She lives on an abandoned house at the alley behind the temple, and since last week has three kittens to feed, so she always wants more."
It was Mikkel's turn to crouch. He placed the paper with the remaining meat on the ground. "We had one a lot like her when I was a child. What's her name?"
"Beast." Answered Lith, prompting a deep frown from Mikkel.
"Always been a fighter, this one. You must see her fighting anything that comes closer to her kittens. Then you will understand."
Meanwhile the cat came closer and began to lean her soft fur against Mikkel's hand. "Well,  lady, you're quite adorable for a beast."
Reynir moved closer to the large door. "Lith, forgive me, but we don't have time to wait for the sunset. I'll go say my prayers. Mikkel, you can stay here playing with the cat if you want."
Mikkel petted the cat's head once more and raised. "No, thanks. If you don't mind I'd like to go inside with you."
Reynir looked at Lith, that nodded. "I didn't count you as a religious person, my friend, despite all the things we shared in these years."
"I wouldn't say religious, but I see only advantages in keeping a good relation with any God."
The room beyond the door was also round, but larger, some 30 feet across, and had stone benches all around. Reynir, Mikkel and Lith stood on a platform, since the floor was almost a man's height below. The stone walls curved at the top, creating a dome that had a circular opening on its center. The skylight's stained glass depicted a red heart surrounded by a circle of yellow flames, the symbol of the Lord of the Light.
They descended some steps and Mikkel noticed a narrow circular channel at the center of the stone floor, some 10 feet across. In the middle, at the room center and exactly under the skylight, stood a single burning brazier. There were no other light sources, making the room quite dark.
"Here, my friend. Please sit while I prey. It won't take long." Said Reynir, pointing at the stone bench. Meanwhile Lith went to sit on the opposite site and began muttering some prayers.
Reynir removed his coat and folded it carefully. Then he removed his shirt, boots, pants and underwear, also folding each one. Naked, apart from the string which held the red jewel, he took his clothes and placed them on a niche under the entrance platform.
Mikkel observed with curiosity. He was sure to have seen Reynir naked before, taking a bath perhaps, but didn't recall well how he looked. Maybe he had never paid attention before. Reynir stood close to the brazier, and Mikkel could see that despite being lean and tall his friend wasn't weak. The strong contrast between light and shadow revealed firm muscles with almost no fat, together with many freckles that spread over his chest, back, arms and legs. The long red braid reached his knees. Mikkel didn't feel attracted to men, but had to admit that presently Reynir looked gorgeous.
He noticed that Lith was also observing with attention, and wondered if it this kind of nakedness was usual on their celebrations.
Reynir took a small wooden stick from under the brazier and set the tip over the fire. He held the burning stick straight and came closer to the channel on the floor. When Reynir bent with his improvised torch Mikkel realized that the narrow gap was filled with some liquid, that ignited as soon as the flames touched it.
The fire spread fast along the channel, and in a moment Reynir was surrounded by a circle of fire. He looked up to the skylight and raised his arms, and began to sing on a language Mikkel didn't understand, except for the word "R'hllor". Reynir's pale skin looked as if he was in flames himself, and suddenly the fire became stronger and higher, creating a curtain of intense light around him.
The spectacle lasted for a minute or two, and Mikkel was already sweating from all the heat, when the singing stopped and the fire suddenly receded and seemingly extinguished itself, leaving a sweaty Reynir smiling at the center of the chamber.
Lith, on the opposite side, was startled, mouth open in amazement, while Reynir walked to retrieve his clothes as if nothing had happened. "It's done. I believe that R'hllor will send his blesses upon us on our adventure."
"Oh, that was... something! I've never seen the fire behaving that way! "Lith said, and there was a reverential touch on her voice. "The Lord of Light must have you on high account, priest, and we were blessed to have you on our humble temple."
There was little light in the room, but Mikkel could swear that Reynir blushed.
---
Leaving the temple, Mikkel looked around for the cat, but couldn't find her anywhere.
"She must be at the back alley, feeding her kittens." Said Lith, still looking respectfully at Reynir. "I wish you safe travels, priest. May R'hllor always cast his light over you and your friends, to push away the darkness and show the right path."
"Thanks, Lith, to you and your mother. Stay under the Lord's light."
"Will you come back? I mean... one day, after your voyages? I would like that... very much." She said, with a smile that clearly told that Reynir could expect a particularly warm welcome if he ever comes back, and bringing to Mikkel's imagination an image of Reynir and Lith both naked, together inside the circle of flames.
Mikkel shook his head, trying to focus. "We should go, Reynir. It's already raining again and looks like it will be pouring down soon."
They left Lith and the temple behind, but hadn't walk much before hearing a commotion from a very narrow alley. It involved people shouting and intense barking, clearly from a large dog. Seconds later they heard a whimper, followed by silence. Two men from the city watch came out of the alley, their uniforms spilled with blood.
"Damn animal! Did it bit you?" The older guard said. He kept his sword out, and it dripped blood on the stones.
The other, carrying a spear, replied. "Bless be the Warrior, no, it didn't! You?"
"I'm fine. One must be careful. One bite and you're over."
Mikkel approached the duo. "Forgive my curiosity. What happened?"
"A rabid dog! Big one! Some residents called us to deal with it, and now it's done."
"You mean you killed it."
"Yes, before it killed someone, like that cat on the alley."
Reynir could hear Mikkel gulping. He thanked the guards for their bravery and walked fast, almost running, into the alley. Reynir followed, already guessing what happened.
Soon he found Mikkel crouched on a corner, his hand caressing Beast's fur. The cat remained immobile. He could hear the soft meows from her kittens coming from a hole on a wall. Fallen next to the opposite wall he saw the lifeless body of a fairly large dog, covered in blood.
"She's gone. I think it just threw her, or stepped over her, I don't know... I see no bites. Maybe it broke her neck... Poor thing." Mikkel stood up. "And the kittens will probably die too, without their mother. They are too young."
Reynir knew Mikkel for a long time, and they have faced many troubles together, but this was the first time he saw that massive and cool-headed man shed a tear.
"Let's go, Reynir. I need a drink." He wiped his eyes and started to walk away, while Reynir stood there, looking at the dead cat.
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"Tell me how you did that." Mikkel's tankard was almost empty, and he already ordered another one. Reynir, on the other hand, felt to tired to drink.
"I don't know. I never did anything like that before. I just heard... stories, but they all seemed unbelievable... Before today."
Mikkel emptied his cup. They were sitting on a dark corner of the half-empty tavern, away from other customers, and nobody seemed to care about them. Still he moved closer to Reynir and spoke on a low tone, almost a whisper. "The cat was dead. I saw it. However I also saw you knelling by her, saying some prayers and breathing over her, and she started to move! And when we left the place she was feeding her kittens as if nothing had happened!"
Reynir tried to recall exactly what he had done. "All I did was to pray to R'hllor, asking him to send his light and his fire... And I imagined the cat as we saw her before, healthy and full of life... that was it. I felt an intense heat inside of me, and blew over the cat and... and I think something like... a shadow came out of my mouth and fell over her and... Well, you know the rest."
Mikkel looked around, as if afraid that someone might be hiding, and spoke even lower. "You can't just go around resurrecting dead cats as if it's normal, Reynir! Think on the implications! If you, or your god, can do that with a cat..."
"Yes, I see! I've heard about some high priestess doing that to persons a long time ago, but thought it was just a legend!"
The waitress arrived with a filled tankard, interrupting them. "M'lords, let me remind you that we have another room on the back where you can put your luck to test."
"Thanks, but we don't gamble."
"Your loss, charming man, I feel that this could be your lucky day. Is there anything more I can do for you?" She said, winking to Mikkel.
"No, we're fine." He gave a coin to the woman. "You can keep the change."
"Oh, not only charming but generous! I hope you both come back tomorrow, maybe on a better mood."
"I'm afraid that it won't be possible. Thanks anyway."
She made a disappointed face and left. Mikkel and Reynir drank in silence for a few moments until Mikkel, having finished his beer, decided to find a place to pee before walking back to the Red Keep. The waitress pointed to a door at the back, close to the gambling room.
On his way back to their table Mikkel heard a familiar voice.
"Yeah!!! I won!"
He crossed the curtain to the other room and found a group playing cards around a table. To his astonishment Sigrun was among them, and judging by her expression had just won big time.
"Hello, gorgeous! You arrived just on time to see my crushing victory!" She said, collecting a large pile of coins from the table while the others, all men, whispered among themselves.
"Didn't you tell me this day would be dedicated to rest, getting ready to our departure?"
"Well, I got bored with resting, and since you and Reynir were away..."
Mikkel smiled. "Sig, I know you. This was your plan, one day of gambling and drinking before we get on the ship... unless you lost it on some bet!"
Sigrun stood up and hugged Mikkel. "Silly, I don't do that kind of thing anymore! Tell me about your afternoon. Is everything loaded? You found that shop? Where's Reynir?"
"You don't do that kind of thing because we don't let you, my dear. Now let's go."
"Just one more turn! Lucky is on my side!"
Mikkel just stared at her, and she stared back. They held each other's gaze for a few seconds, but this time it was Sigrun who gave up. "Fine, we go now! I'm already getting tired of winning."
The four men around the table stood up, looking angry. "That's true, winning most of the time. Nobody has such luck." Said one of them.
"She must have been cheating us!" Said other. "And now your henchman comes to tell you  it's time to go! I say it's all set up!"
Another man draw a knife. "And I say you go, but leave our money. We won't get intimidated by that guy. We are four against two!" And with that the others also drew their knives.
Sigrun looked at them while her hand moved to grab her own knife, just to find it was missing. "Oops. I guess my knife stayed at home. You don't happen to have a spare one with you, my dear?" But when she finished asking Mikkel was already holding the knife he bought on the antiques shop. "Oh! What's this?"
Sigrun took a sip from her tankard while grabbing the knife on her right hand. The men around the table paused for a moment when they saw the strange white blade gleaming as crystal. She examined it, smiling. "Is this what I think? From the great Sand Sea?"
Mikkel nodded, and Sigrun gave him a brief kiss. "You're awesome! I love it! Now keep being a good man and hold my beer, please?"
"Just try not to kill anyone, right?"
She gave the tankard to Mikkel and winked, turning to face the four men, knife ready.
"You said it's four against two? You're wrong. It's four against me! Now, who wants to dance?"