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Title: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: thegreyarea on August 06, 2021, 05:27:50 AM
Hello everyone! :)
Again we've been surprised by the sudden arrival of a chapter break! We didn't plan anything, and now have to face two (at least) long weeks.

But we faced that challenge before, and survived, even thrived! How? By the sheer will and talent of the amazing people that populate this space!

So, just like in the previous Break, here goes a challenge! Participate, if you want! The theme will be...

War / Peace

Since this chapter has been a long fight, some might feel inspired to create War (or fight) related artwork. Others might feel tired of the constant struggle and rather let Peace inspire their creations.

Or you may want to contribute with something completely different! Up to you, if you decide to join!

As per usual, anyone is free, no, extremely welcome to participate. The work can be anything that can be relayed via Forum. We have had visual art, stories, photographs, photos of craft projects, music, poetry, recipes, cosplay, multimedia, botany lessons...
You can try to get out of your comfort zone, or stick to your most comfortable form and style.

Just post your work here when it’s done. Let’s hope we get a nice number of works, despite the lack of warning.
Now I have to go work on my contribution... ;)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: wavewright62 on August 06, 2021, 05:10:26 PM
*thinking*  Yep, I can see ideas brewing, but cannot work on any until tomorrow at the earliest.

Also coming up during this break is the canon birthday of Mikkel and Michael Madsen, on 11 August.  We could do worse than honing in our focus on one or both, related to the theme.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: thegreyarea on August 07, 2021, 06:32:53 AM
I guess it's up to me to start. A modest haiku, because... time.

Killing time before
The dreaded Killing Time comes
Is my fate written?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: thegreyarea on August 07, 2021, 10:47:47 AM
My fate was written
Or maybe it was just luck
Will I find peace now?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: wavewright62 on August 08, 2021, 05:28:32 AM
Welp, here goes, a bit of a triple drabble for Peace, albeit the Peace that follows War.


Emil stared at the plate of spaghetti in front of him.  When he was a young man, he dreamt of tucking in to a big plate of noodles and meatballs, just like this one.  When he was young, this was one of his favourite meals (because even then, he knew perfectly well cake wasn’t really a meal).  Now it reminded him of …he looked away.

This house held so many memories, coming to visit Aunt Siv and Uncle Torbjörn and his little monster cousins in Mora back then.  He could still hear them clamouring to play hairdresser with him.  When he was young, he tried to show little Sune, whose hair was most like his own, how to get his hair perfect too.

So long ago, so much had happened, just so much.  It was a wonder he had any hair left.  He cast a morose gaze upon Sune, who was cheerfully helping his mother bring in the dinner.  Sune had grown, as children do.  Håkan, too, who had easily polished off his own plate and was now eyeing up Emil’s untouched portion; Emil pushed it toward him with a finger.

Emil wondered when he had gotten so introspective.  Cheating certain death when he was young would have done that, he decided.  And when he was young, he had cheated death so many times, even when others di…were directed elsewhere.

Siv came back to the dining room with a pitcher of buttermilk, and frowned at Håkan wolfing down Emil’s dinner.  Emil held up his hand to forestall her admonishment.  “No, it’s all right.  My appetite has never recovered to what it was, before,” sighing dramatically, “I was young then, but a lifetime of privation has left its scar upon me.”

Siv’s smile was lopsided.  “A lifetime, Emil?  That was last year.

Spoiler: wth wave • show
Inspired by a flippant comment I made on Discord about the worst cryptic fast-forward ending to SSSS Minna could possibly make - Emil arriving back at Mora, alone.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 08, 2021, 07:37:33 AM
Oh no Wave! This Peace doesn’t make me feel peaceful at all!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 08, 2021, 12:59:59 PM
Haven’t done one of these for such a long time! This is a song Onni sings to ask for deities and local spirits to help him. The Finnish is some semblance of the Kalevala meter (a type of trochaic tetrameter, in which everything is repeated in different words, and alliteration is common), but I do it by ear and counting of syllables, so it’s not 100% pure (although neither is the Kalevala). The English is just translation, not even aspiring to being poetry.


Keihästä kysymässä ……..  Song of the spear

Taian tästä taisteloihin……………….I intend to start a fight
Käynen tästä kamppailuihin…………I am walking into war
Isoäitini iloksi………………………….To make my grandmother happy
Sukukuntani suojaksi…………………To protect my kin

Paha on perheeni purrut……………Evil has eaten my family
Koko kansani kateissa……………….Kade has taken my people (all my people are lost)
Apu minun annettava………………..It is up to me to help them
Poloset pelastettava…………………Their poor souls are mine to save

Siksi pyyän parastanne……………..This is why I ask for your best
Toivon teiltäkin tukea……………….Seek support from you
Annattehan apuanne………………..Hoping that you will help me
Vahvistatte voimiani…………………Sure you will support my strength

Ihmeellinen Ilmarinen……………….O wondrous Ilmarinen
Suurin kaikista sepistä……………….Greatest smith of all
Tao terä tulestasi……………………..Forge a blade of your fire
Ahjosta ylin astalo…………………….Form a weapon in your forge

Ukko taatto taivahainen……………..O Ukko father in the sky
Ylin olija ylisen………………………..Highest in the highest plane
Kaa-a keihäs kumustasi………..……Pour a spear of your thunder
Seiväs salamoistasi…………………Join your lightning into a javelin

Kuule Kokko kultalintu……………….Hear me Kokko golden bird
Vaskinokka vaakalintu………………Brazen beaked brazen bird
Voimat varren vahvistele…………….Loan your strength to spear’s shaft
Keihäänkärki koristele………………..Make my blade beautiful

Huuan teille hienot henget……….…I call you o fine spirits
Anon outoiset oliot……………….…I beseech you curious creatures
Mustarinnan murhat miehet…….…Great men of Mustarinta
Kolin kulkijat komeat……………….Handsome people of Koli

Kohottakaa keihästäni……………..Raise my spear
Iskekäätte iskussani………………..Strike in my strike
Lyötävä on luonnottomat………….I must undo the unnatural
Pieksettävä pahat henget………….Succeed over evil spirits

Kateen kätköön kadonneitten…….Those lost within the Kade
Pahojen piilottamien……………….Those hidden by evil
Joutsenelle jouvuttava……………..Should make haste to meet the Swan
Kuolon kehtoon kiikuttava…………Should sleep in death’s cradle

Linnunrata raivattava……………….Birds’ Path must be opened
Tuonen polku tunnettava………….Path to Tuoni mut be known
Kateen käskyt kumottava………….Orders of Kade undone
Vangitut vapautettava……………..Prisoners (must be) released

Minä poika pannahinen……………I am just a poor boy
Kulkijainen köyhänlainen………….Wandered with no wealth
Ei minusta mestariksi……………….I’m not fit to be a master
Kauhistuksen kaatajaksi……………I’m not fit to beat this beast

Siksi pyyän parastanne……………..This is why I ask for your best
Toivon teiltäkin tukea……………….Seek support from you
Annattehan apuanne………………..Hoping that you will help me
Vahvistatte voimiani…………………Sure you will support my strength

Tao terä tulestasi……………………..Forge a blade of your fire
Kaa-a keihäs kumustasi………..……Pour a spear of your thunder
Voimat varren vahvistele…………….Loan your strength to spear’s shaft
Keihäänkärki koristele………………..Make my blade beautiful

Tao terä tulestasi……………………..Forge a blade of your fire
Kaa-a keihäs kumustasi………..……Pour a spear of your thunder
Voimat varren vahvistele…………….Loan your strength to spear’s shaft
Keihäänkärki koristele………………..Make my blade beautiful

Tao terä tulestasi……………………..Forge a blade of your fire
Kaa-a keihäs kumustasi………..……Pour a spear of your thunder
Voimat varren vahvistele…………….Loan your strength to spear’s shaft
Keihäänkärki koristele………………..Make my blade beautiful

Tao terä tulestasi
Kaa-a keihäs kumustasi
Voimat varren vahvistele
Keihäänkärki koristele

Tao terä tulestasi
Kaa-a keihäs kumustasi
Voimat varren vahvistele
Keihäänkärki koristele

Tao terä tulestasi
Kaa-a keihäs kumustasi
Voimat varren vahvistele
Keihäänkärki koristele

(Repeat until spirit spear is strong)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: thegreyarea on August 08, 2021, 03:00:27 PM
Wow, two great contributions!

Wave, yours is terrifying! Even if it has a comic touch, so very Emil! Not, at all, the kind of peace we hope for.

Jitter, yours is amazing! I wish I knew Finnish to proper appreciate it, but the translation does a good work anyway. I hope Onni does something like that, and may the spirits guide his spear! (because he should throw it with eyes closed :)  )
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: moredhel on August 08, 2021, 07:22:53 PM
I tried to do a haiku too, but I am more a painter than a poet.

(https://moredhel.is-a-geek.net/peace.png)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: thegreyarea on August 08, 2021, 07:31:54 PM
That's beautiful, moredhel! I love the hair, shadows... everything! Well done!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: wavewright62 on August 09, 2021, 02:58:58 AM
Thank you so much for kicking off this party, thegreyarea!  Your fate is well-written in this instance.

oooOOO a wistful portrait of Reynir in the lehto!  Lovely, moredhel!

Gosh, I hope Onni evokes a runo nearly as nice as yours, Jitter.  And by 'nice' I mean thoroughly deadly to the evil magicks wrought here.
('I'm just a poor boy' nobody loves me... no no that's not right!  Bismillah...)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 09, 2021, 03:23:27 AM
Wave, from a poor family too! I noticed that but it is the translation so I had to leave it in :)

The point is to show humbleness to the deities and spirits. It is my understanding that in the Finnish tradition the singer is very proud and haughty towards the opponent, but when speaking to the spirits it’s more of the “poor little me I so need help” kind of rhing. Also it’s important that he stresses he’s not asking for himself really, but needs help in helping his kin.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 09, 2021, 03:25:30 AM
Moredhel, sweet boy Reynir in his after-sauna-peace (and after sauna hair)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: wavewright62 on August 11, 2021, 04:09:44 AM
Well, I thought I was going to maybe do a picture for Mikkel's b-day, but this popped out instead. A bit of angst, though.

:mikkel: :mikkel: The Thinker  :mikkel: :mikkel:

Mikkel grimaced as he laid the fresh cowpat onto one side of the pile.  He gave it a rough shaping with the shovel, before adding a sprinkling of dust and small pieces of straw from the bottom of his wheelbarrow.  With the hand trowel, he smoothed the edges of the pat to blend with the contour he was creating.  Then he poked the trowel into the holes he was slowly enlarging through the more dry parts of the pile.

Stepping back to scrutinise his work, he adjusted the crude headband he was using to keep the sun and sweat out of his eyes.  Taking advantage of the still-lengthening days, the lump of straw and cow manure was drying reasonably quickly.  He could expect to have the emerging sculpture largely roughed-out within the next few weeks.  Whether he'd have time to refine it was still unclear.

------ :mikkel:

"Hey, that's coming along!"

Mikkel looked up with a start, but relaxed as he saw his sister Mette approaching, smiling under her broad-brimmed hat as she made her way across the paddock.  "Hrm, I suppose so.  We'll see," he swatted at the flies gathering on glistening surface of the more freshly applied areas of the sculpture.  A small chunk fell from the surface Mikkel had been smoothing as the trowel grazed it.  "Perhaps I shall feed the girls some stones, to ensure a firmer material?"

"I wouldn't," Mette laughed, "actually, please don't.  I don't want to blunt my arrowheads."  She gestured across the paddock to another misshapen pile of manure and straw, surrounded by broken chunks.

Mikkel sighed, "I never got to finish that one, and now I never will.  You know, you could set up a different target for archery practice, you don't have to use my sculptures.  It's not as though we have a shortage of hay bales for you to shoot at."

"This is more of a challenge.  You  may have difficulty hitting something the size of a hay bale, dear brother, but the rest of us don't have that problem."  Seeing Mikkel wince, she cooed, "Sorry, but it's true.  Anyway.  What is this one going to be?  One I've heard of?"

"Not likely, knowing your penchant for scholarship."

Mette dramatically clutched her chest as though mortally wounded.  "What?  After I looked up who Henrik Moore was and everything?  That was your best one, even if it didn't look anything like a woman.  I shot a rabbit right through that hole in her head."

"Henry Moore.  Your heart's on the other side, Mette," Mikkel chuckled.  She hurriedly switched her hand.  "And, this one is going to be Rodin's 'The Thinker' - at least, assuming I get to finish it.  Hopefully, I won't."

Mette shrugged.  "Nope, never heard of it.  I thought it was another one of those Henry ones."  She cocked her head to the side.  “Or maybe a troll.”

"I haven't put in any sort of detail yet.  There's only so much I can do with..."  His hands fell to his sides as he frowned at Mette.  "Still no messages for me?”

Mette shook her head.  “Maybe after Midsummer, yeah?” 

Mikkel did not reply.  He crossed his arms and stared intently at the sculpture in progress.

-----  :mikkel:

Mille marched through the paddock, lifting her leg high with each step through the high grass, not bothering to follow the wheelbarrow track ahead of her.  “Mikkel!,” she called, “Hoy, Mikkel!”  Her brother was facing away from her and did not acknowledge her call.  Mille swung her basket savagely in front of her as she advanced, scything the grass and raising clouds of gnats and flies to impede her progress.

Mette followed serenely behind Mille, walking in the wheelbarrow rut.  “It doesn’t do any good, Mille, he won’t even know you’re there until you’re right there in front of him.”

“I. Don’t. Care!”  Mille punctuated each word with a swipe of her basket.

“Then it’s just as well we haven’t gathered the berries yet, or they’d be fly fodder now.” 

They reached Mikkel, his broad back still turned away from them as he sat hunched on a tree stump.  Facing him was a large dusty grey figure nearly as large as he was.  Mille’s mouth dropped open as she realised both Mikkel and the figure were in roughly the same pose, hunched over with one elbow on his knee, supporting his head as he stared.  Mille tried to follow his gaze, but could see nothing but trampled grass and small blobs of the same grey material scattered on the ground.

“Hey, Mikkel,” Mette called out, “I found that book you had the statue in.  It kinda looks like your one.”  Mikkel grunted but did not look up.  “That’s a lot of cow pats right there.”

Mille wrinkled her nose.  “Listen Mikkel, we’re going down to get some berries, okay?  Do you want to come with us?”  Mikkel grunted again.  “For your birthday cake?,” Mille tried again, with no response.  The sisters exchanged a look. 

Mette walked over to the statue and bent over to look at its face.  “Good thing it’s been a dry summer.”  Peering more closely, “You know, it does kind of look like you.”  She picked up some yellowed stalks of grass and held them on either side of the figure’s head.  “There, sideburns like yours.  Now you’re tw-“  She gasped and dropped the grass suddenly.  “Oh, Mikkel!  Oh look, I’m sorry, that was thoughtless of me!”  She looked to Mille for support, but her sister was cringing, with a stricken expression.

Mikkel’s expression betrayed no emotion as he got up and brushed bits of grass off his pants.  “Did anything come for me in today’s post?,” he asked dispassionately. striding away from the statue.

Mette smacked her forehead.  “Yes!”  Mikkel turned sharply back toward her.  “Sorry, I forgot, yes, a letter did come in, Ole brought it right over.  It’s from Norway.  Was…that the one you were waiting for?” 

“We’ll see,” Mikkel said as he strode away toward the Madsen farmhouse.

“Crap, and double crap,” Mille said, watching him go.  “Right.  Mette, come on, let’s go get the berries, anyway.”  She put her arm around her stricken sister and led her away from the scene.  “It’s still Mikkel’s birthday.” 

The flies landed on The Thinker again as they walked away. 
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 11, 2021, 08:31:45 AM
I’m going to try doing a sketch of Saku, Aino and Ensi as a little girl. Might be some time before I post it. There’s really only one good picture of Saku’s face and that’s on the character family tree.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: thegreyarea on August 11, 2021, 11:11:34 AM
Excellent story, Wave! Hopefully the letter carries good news! Also the idea for this... recyclable sculpture is hilarious!

Queen Yoko, I'm looking forward to see it. I love the idea of Ensi in her youth (and the stories that her magical powers could inspire).
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 11, 2021, 12:59:58 PM
Wave, why is he using cow dung? Is this a thing?

Queen Yoko, please do! Sounds like something that’s worth waiting for!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: wavewright62 on August 11, 2021, 05:37:17 PM
Cow manure, because it's plentiful on a dairy farm.  It's something to do.  Digging clay is hard.  It's a metaphor.  Take your pick?

Looking forward to it, Queen Yoko - Saku's looks are also strongly echoed in Ensi's twin sons, Jukka & Juha.  We got a short but reasonably good look at them during Lalli's shared dream flashback (http://www.sssscomic.com/comic2.php?page=124).

Edit:  Well, who knew?  I Googled references to a thriving ceramics scene in present-day Bornholm, based upon the various types of clay naturally found there.  Buuuut, I maintain that digging it is hard.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Róisín on August 12, 2021, 05:38:42 AM
Good story! And at least Mikkel didn’t take up bellfounding as a comfort/hobby. About thirty years ago a friend scored a Churchill fellowship to study that, managed to get herself a place with a famous and very old traditional English bellfounder, then arrived in England to discover that the old chap had died while she was in transit. She was left frantically scrambling to find another teacher, and eventually located a similarly old and famous bellfounder in the backblocks of Poland who was willing to take on an apprentice who was not only Australian but female. She learned a lot of amazing stuff, including how to cast a bell in an old-style mould made of sand and pulverised cowdung. This worked surprisingly well, and she was later able to adapt the technique to the making of Tibetan and North Indian style singing bowls, some of which are cast by similar methods.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Mirasol on August 12, 2021, 02:04:24 PM
Oooh this is going on already? Very nice contributions, everyone!

Grey, nice Haikus! May there be peace and please no Killing Time!

Wave, I enjoy both of your stories a lot! They´re a nice blend between so in character that it´s funny and being sad stories! I don´t like the implications about some characters´ lives (meaning their deaths...) in either story, but now I´m stuck imagining what happened...

Jitter, I love your songs! (I totally didn´t start singing Bohemian Rhapsody at Onni being humble... :'D) I even tried pronouncing the Finnish version while reading with mediocre success. I like what you did with the verse that´s repeated in the end! The lines rhyme among each other yet were interwoven with previous verses. Very nice connection!

moredhel, a beautiful painting! It looks so lush and bright, and very peaceful!

Róisín, that sounds like a very interesting hobby though! Thanks for sharing that story!

Maybe I´ll contribute something if I get struck by creativity...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 12, 2021, 03:40:11 PM
Thanks Moredel! I guess I should record of these to give you an idea of the rhythm. Maybe someday.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 13, 2021, 10:16:08 AM
I'm looking forward to see it. I love the idea of Ensi in her youth (and the stories that her magical powers could inspire).

Thanks thegrayarea and Jitter. The sketch is coming along nicely. I’ve got the poses worked out. I’m working of the faces now.   I was trying to copy Minna’s style but I just can’t seem to do it. I’m going to go for something that’s halfway Minna’s style and halfway mine.  Also I just realized that I have no idea how to post jpegs on this forum.

I was going to post a picture of my work in progress but, yeah I have no idea how to do that from my phone.
😓
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 13, 2021, 11:09:23 AM
Queen Yoko, you can't post directly here. The picture must go to a picture hosting site, and the forum actually only links to it. I and some others use Postimg but you can choose something else too. It must allow you getting the url for the image itself (not the page that shows the picture), and Postimg is convenient because it has "share" button that provides various ways to share, including direct link to the image. On Flickr for example you have to go into the page code to find the image address.

Anyways when you have the image url, you click the Insert Image button (underneath Bold button) and post the link between the brackets.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 13, 2021, 01:33:30 PM
Thank you so much Jitter!

Here’s what I’ve done so far. I’m practicing drawing every ones faces on a separate page in my sketchbook.  But this is what I have so far. I’m really happy with how it’s turning out so far.
https://pin.it/4kCn68h

Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 13, 2021, 04:37:33 PM
The poses look very natural! It’s going to be great!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 15, 2021, 07:08:09 PM
My sketch is looking great so far. I’m just finishing up some details with Aino’s face. I’m having fun putting in a background too.  <3
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: wavewright62 on August 15, 2021, 08:55:04 PM
I'm looking forward to it as well, Queen Yoko.  Only Pinterest members can see items on Pinterest (I do not have an account nor wish to sign up).   
We do have a thread outlining instructions on inserting images (https://ssssforum.com/index.php?topic=429.0) (so they display inside your message). I like to use tumblr or imgur, but I've also seen flickr, Google docs (have to work out your permissions, I think), and others. 

(Note to self, compile a list of acceptable websites and add it to the inseting images thread, as I guess the suggestions are scattered within other threads.)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 16, 2021, 05:26:01 AM
Thanks for pointing this out Wavewrite62. Here’s a google dock with my initial sketch. Tell me if you can see it now. https://docs.google.com/document/d/16oRy2UnNNGvxQDXFQW54_OUHHlPVwV8luPtrWM-Wdx8/edit

A more finalized sketch is on its way.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: moredhel on August 16, 2021, 05:33:56 AM
I can not see it. Maybe the publish to the web option does help.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 16, 2021, 05:46:30 AM
I think I’ll have to make an account on tumbler. 😓
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 16, 2021, 06:00:09 AM
https://queenyoko.tumblr.com/post/659667330881683457


Sent from my iPhone

Okay here’s my rough draft. This time brought to you by tumbler! I hope this works. Sorry for all the posting drama everyone. The final version is on its way soon promise. 🙏
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: moredhel on August 16, 2021, 07:40:42 AM
I like the sektch
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Maglor on August 16, 2021, 10:23:35 AM
O-o-okay, so I've been all busy last week, but now I'm officially on the road of becoming psychology magister. I just hope the Chapter Break didn't end, and I manage to made it in time)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 16, 2021, 10:25:18 AM
Maglor, the break will end one week from now. But even if you don't make it by that date, your work is welcome!

Make sure to include the content warnings and post under spoiler, if it's the same style as the previous, ok?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Maglor on August 16, 2021, 10:49:56 AM
Of course.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 16, 2021, 01:50:35 PM
https://queenyoko.tumblr.com/post/659696154326532096/ensi-and-her-parents-final-sketch-for-stand

Yay! It’s finished! I probably should have used a scanner but I couldn’t wait to show everyone! 

Here’s Saku, Aino, and their adorable daughter Ensi!

 Form what I saw of Aino and Saku in the prologue I can’t help but think that they must have been awesome parents.  Who knows maybe Saku stopped “dying of something” and got in touch with his inner Simo Hayha. That would be a cool story!

If you look to the right  corner you’ll see a wading bird ( that may or may not be someone’s luonto).

 Also you’ll notice that Ensi is wearing a sweater that is way too big for her.  I’m not sure what they would have done about clothing for Ensi during the early years. Making clothes from scratch is super difficult.

Anyway I hope everyone enjoys this pic. I’ll definitely scan and color this pice later. Who’s up next?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 16, 2021, 01:58:02 PM
Oh you did very good! They look like themselves, while not being an exact imitation of Minna's style. Thank you Queen Yoko!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 16, 2021, 02:01:59 PM
I like the sektch

❤️Thanks moredhel!❤️

I hope you like the finished version I posted too. ☺️
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 16, 2021, 02:09:03 PM
Oh you did very good! They look like themselves, while not being an exact imitation of Minna's style. Thank you Queen Yoko!

🥰 Thank you so much Jitter.

There’s no way I could have copied Minna’s style and made it look good. Only Minna can draw like Minna. ✍️

I had to do a lot of practice drawings to get everyone’s faces just right. I’m really happy with how this turned out.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: moredhel on August 16, 2021, 03:02:28 PM
❤️Thanks moredhel!❤️

I hope you like the finished version I posted too. ☺️

I do like it. And it looks peaceful. As someone who tried I say it is quite tricky to paint peace. Well done.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 17, 2021, 07:09:25 AM
I do like it. And it looks peaceful. As someone who tried I say it is quite tricky to paint peace. Well done.

Thanks. I’ll post a proper scanned version on later today. I’ve been thinking about Ensi and her family a lot since chapter 5. A picture like this just fit with the theme. I want to see what other people submit next. No idea when I’ll be able to color this. I haven’t done much digital painting at all. It’ll probably get posted long after the new chapter starts.   
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 17, 2021, 07:13:53 AM
I do like it. And it looks peaceful. As someone who tried I say it is quite tricky to paint peace. Well done.

By the way I thought you did a great job painting peace ✌️. Between the serene look on Raynir’s face to the the largely pastel color scene I thought it was great!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 17, 2021, 07:23:29 AM
O-o-okay, so I've been all busy last week, but now I'm officially on the road of becoming psychology magister. I just hope the Chapter Break didn't end, and I manage to made it in time)

Hay congratulations on becoming a psychology magister. (That sounds super important) I’m sure that whatever you contribute will be awesome! 👍
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 17, 2021, 07:42:03 AM
I really liked your story wavewright62. I always saw Mikkel as the sort of person who would be board with farm life. In my head cannon he’s held so many jobs as a way to avoid returning to the family farm.

I also liked the was you ended the story.
 

“Sorry, I forgot, yes, a letter did come in, Ole brought it right over.  It’s from Norway.  Was…that the one you were waiting for?” 

“We’ll see,” Mikkel said as he strode away toward the Madsen farmhouse.
The flies landed on The Thinker again as they walked away.

The ending leaves it ambiguous as to weather this takes place before the expedition to the Danish mainland or weather this takes place after the current adventure has come to an end. If this is before the expedition leaves, than this letter would be from Trond and he’s writing to recruit Mikkel. If this is set after everyone gets back from Finland than this could be a letter from Sigrun, possibly asking him to visit her in Norway and meet her parents. (FYI I totally ship Sigs and Mikkel)
  :sigrun: ❤️ :mikkel:
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 17, 2021, 08:02:48 AM
Sorry I haven’t said much about the other submissions here up till now. I was kind of focused on my own thing.   But I’ve really enjoyed all of them. I can’t wait to see what gets posted next.  ^-^
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: wavewright62 on August 17, 2021, 10:56:16 PM
I really liked your story wavewright62. I always saw Mikkel as the sort of person who would be board with farm life. In my head cannon he’s held so many jobs as a way to avoid returning to the family farm.

I also liked the was you ended the story.
 
The ending leaves it ambiguous as to weather this takes place before the expedition to the Danish mainland or weather this takes place after the current adventure has come to an end. If this is before the expedition leaves, than this letter would be from Trond and he’s writing to recruit Mikkel. If this is set after everyone gets back from Finland than this could be a letter from Sigrun, possibly asking him to visit her in Norway and meet her parents. (FYI I totally ship Sigs and Mikkel)
  :sigrun: ❤️ :mikkel:

It is meant to be pre-canon, but somewhat ambiguous as to whether the letter is for this mission, or some other job.  (Trond knew Mikkel from *somewhere* before all this, after all.) 

NB The portraits we have of Michael show him as an adult, clean-shaven and smiling broadly (as Mikkel certainly does not).  The only other piece of info we have is that he's the older twin.  It's up to us to spin out the rest, since I'm fairly well certain Minna no longer will.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 18, 2021, 06:48:19 AM
(https://queenyoko.tumblr.com/post/659851389986553856/this-is-my-final-version-of-ensi-and-her-family-i)

As promised here’s a proper scan. It looks a lot better now . Cel phone cameras are great for somethings but not everything.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 18, 2021, 06:51:33 AM
Oh crud imbedding the image didn’t work sorry everyone. I’ll get the hang of this eventually.

https://queenyoko.tumblr.com/post/659851389986553856/this-is-my-final-version-of-ensi-and-her-family-i
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: moredhel on August 18, 2021, 09:42:18 AM
I a not an expert for tumblr, is it possible to embed the pictures here with
Code: [Select]
[img][/img]?

For test purposes: do you see the picture Queen Yoko uploaded?

(https://64.media.tumblr.com/85f47baaa495648ea6d598056f6d5e67/39f4ec7a3889d4a4-ba/s2048x3072/58b8d6aa789f0e57683c1e40ae2cf713f656ad61.jpg)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: thorny on August 18, 2021, 11:16:58 AM
I see it.Nice!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 18, 2021, 11:49:39 AM
I see it on moredhel’s post but not Queen Yoko’s
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Mirasol on August 19, 2021, 06:36:07 AM
I see it on moredhel´s post too. Nice one, Queen Yoko! Young Ensi looks adorable, you can definitly see the resemblance to the younger Hotakainens!

As for pictures, try quoting moredhel´s post, then you can see the bb-code with which they embedded the image in the preview.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: wavewright62 on August 19, 2021, 07:04:14 PM
I find that I have to access tumblr on a desktop, and right-click on the image to copy the image's address, not the url of the whole post.  I cannot do that on a mobile.

That said, these are lovely Hotakainens!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Opaque on August 20, 2021, 02:10:42 AM
I wanted to do something a little different. These are some warriors ,who are not our heroes, fighting trolls.

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/7d81a912-84a5-42e1-aadd-61faf6687dfd/dephsl3-0396b521-3518-4766-85ff-33ea0f151b2b.png/v1/fill/w_800,h_534,q_80,strp/hunters_battle_by_opaque0_dephsl3-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9NTM0IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvN2Q4MWE5MTItODRhNS00MmUxLWFhZGQtNjFmYWY2Njg3ZGZkXC9kZXBoc2wzLTAzOTZiNTIxLTM1MTgtNDc2Ni04NWZmLTMzZWEwZjE1MWIyYi5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9ODAwIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.8o7uqvItGghwYhKcDSAA5aVYp8XmiP5H0eOqdEPNZ3c)

I wish I had time to actually make it look good but I haven't had much free time recently.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Mirasol on August 20, 2021, 06:03:53 AM
Wow, Opaque, I think that does look really really good! XoX (Glad to see someone leaning into the war-topic again too.) And those are some really interesting troll-designs! I particularly like the one that kinda looks like a praying mantis.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: moredhel on August 20, 2021, 07:20:25 AM
Very interesting trolls Opaque.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 20, 2021, 08:03:10 AM
Wow, Opaque! Great work!

Your trolls also remind me of the kalmahinen monsters in Year in Hereafter (it’s a webcomic). Which incidentally you might like.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Opaque on August 20, 2021, 09:23:10 AM
Thanks! Glad y'all like it! And Jitter, I have been reading Year in Hereafter for a few months now. It's a really great comic!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 21, 2021, 11:16:17 AM
I a not an expert for tumblr, is it possible to embed the pictures here with
Code: [Select]
[img][/img]?

For test purposes: do you see the picture Queen Yoko uploaded?

(https://64.media.tumblr.com/85f47baaa495648ea6d598056f6d5e67/39f4ec7a3889d4a4-ba/s2048x3072/58b8d6aa789f0e57683c1e40ae2cf713f656ad61.jpg)


Okay so it’s [img width= X and then hight =y   Then the URL OF THE IMAGE    Then another img to cap off the code .  Okay thanks moredhel!  :))
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Queen Yoko on August 21, 2021, 11:21:48 AM
I wanted to do something a little different. These are some warriors ,who are not our heroes, fighting trolls.


I wish I had time to actually make it look good but I haven't had much free time recently.

Opaque, your picture looks awesome! Your original characters look really cool as do your troll designs. Your trolls have this gross goopy Kathulu-eque quality going on that really works. I don’t know what your talking about when you say you didn’t have time to make it look good.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Opaque on August 21, 2021, 01:12:37 PM
Queen Yoko you're sweet! Thank you. Really what I wanted to fix was the lighting effects. I'm terrible at figuring out how to do that. But the rest of it looks good enough. For now. I love drawing and really want to keep improving. Maybe make my own comic someday.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: moredhel on August 21, 2021, 01:59:14 PM

Okay so it’s [img width= X and then hight =y   Then the URL OF THE IMAGE    Then another img to cap off the code .  Okay thanks moredhel!  :))

I am glad if I could help.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 21, 2021, 06:16:19 PM
I'm feeling a bit bleak so I'm spreading the mood.



War

"Headquarters, this is Þór. Multiple vessels approaching from the south and eastwardly directions. Please advise."
"Headquarters. Þór, stand by, prepare to take action. Ægir has been dispatched and is coming towards you. Ægir will take the east, you are to cover the southern direction. Report when you have visual."
"Headquarters, this is Þór. We have visual of the first vessel. It's British, but they are not fishing. They have steady course towards north, no equipment in the water. They are raising flags.
They rise Victor ("I require assistance") and Kilo ("I wish to communicate with you")."
"Headquarters here. Raise November ("Negative") and Lima ("Stop immediately")"
"Þór. November and Lima raised. They raise November.
Headquarters, this is Þór. The boat is keeping course northward."
"Headquarters to Þór. Intercept their course."

"British vessel, this is the Icelandic Coast Guard vessel Þór. Icelandic waters are off-limits for all craft. Iceland is in lockdown. Please adjust your course accordingly!!"
"British vessel, this is the Icelandic Coast Guard vessel Þór. Do not approach Icelandic waters. Turn back immediately!"
"British vessel, this is the Icelandic Coast Guard vessel Þór. Do not approach Icelandic waters. Turn back! Turn back!"


"Headquarters, this is Þór. The British vessel is not responding to orders."
"Þór, this is hedquarters. Fire warning shots."

"British vessel, this is the Icelandic Coast Guard vessel Þór. Do not approach Icelandic waters. This is your final warning. Turn back!"

WARNING SHOTS


"Headquarters, this is Þór. They are not responding. They are keeping course."
"Þór, this is headquarters. Take any action necessary to stop approaching craft. Repeat, take any action."
"Headquarters, this is Þór. They are keeping course. People are coming out to the deck."
"Headquarters, this is Þór! There are people on the deck, at least four children! Please advise!"
"Þór, this is headquarters. Stopping the vessel is utmost priority. Take any action."
"Headquarters, this is Þór! They are not turning despite warning shots. Advise!"
"Þór, this is headquarters. Fire at the vessel."
"Headquarters, this is Þór! There are children on the vessel! We cannot fire!"
"Þór, this is headquarters. Fire at the vessel. Under no circumstance can we allow any incoming craft."
"Headquarters, this is Þór. With all due respect but have you lost your mind? This is a civilian craft with civilians on board."
"Þór, this is headquarters. Fire at the vessel. Under no circumstance can we allow any incoming craft."
"Headquarters, we… this is not…"
"This is headquarters hailing all ICGVs. Authorisation to fire at any approaching craft if they refuse to alter course."
"What!? Sorry… headquarters, this is Ægir. We have several civilian craft flying Norwegian, British, German and other flags. We cannot…"
"Headquarters, this is Þór. Another vessel approaching. They are flying… they are flying Icelandic flag!"
"This is headquarters hailing all ICGVs. Your orders are to fire at ANY approaching craft if they refuse to alter course."
"But have you… headquarters, this is Ægir. These countries are NATO allies. Have you talked to NATO."
"No, they didn't… Headquarters here. We tried to reach NATO. They are not answering. We are on our own."
"Headquarters, this is Þór. We are preparing to fire. This will be considered an act of war!"
"Yes."
"We cannot be at war! We are Iceland! We don't go to war!"
"This is headquarters hailing all ICGVs. Your orders are to fire at ANY approaching craft if they refuse to alter course."

SHOTS
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Opaque on August 21, 2021, 07:49:26 PM
Wow Jitter! That had me hooked.  I'm getting flashbacks of the Icelandic battle cruiser.
Firing on the boats from neighboring countries would be hard enough but sinking a boat with their own people is just... rough.
Very compelling story!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: moredhel on August 22, 2021, 04:04:20 AM
Great Story Jitter.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 22, 2021, 05:17:47 AM
Thanks guys :) I always worry whether the all dialogue format works. I hear and see it in my mind, but I can’t forward that to the reader :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: JoB on August 22, 2021, 07:09:02 AM
Okay so it’s [img width= X and then hight =y   Then the URL OF THE IMAGE    Then another img to cap off the code .  Okay thanks moredhel!  :))
(Actually, you can omit both parameters (image will be inserted at its original size), and if you do want to resize it, IIRC there's a bug affecting some clients that is best countered by only giving width= and not height= (the missing parameter is then calculated so as to keep the proper aspect ratio).)

SHOTS
"Gee, seems they really don't want to buy our ice cubes anymore ..."

(I heard on the radio lately that most ready-made ice cubes sold on Iceland are imported, as the transport cost is less than the difference the higher domestic wages would make.)

(Hey, they got involved in naval wars about other commercial goods (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cod_Wars) before ...)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on August 22, 2021, 07:52:25 AM
Yeah, I checked to make sure before putting in the “We don’t go to war” :) Iceland was invaded by the British during WWII but apparently happy about it (Denmark, part of which Iceland was until 1944, were invaded by Germany).

Iceland as a country has never had an army. The Icelandic Coast Guard is a civilian security force, although it is the closest thing they do have to an army. Since 2006 the military defense has been carried out by various allies doing a rotation, prior to 2006 there was an American-manned Nato base at Keflavik.

So the Cod Wars is the closest thing to a military conflict Iceland has been involved in basically ever. Some altercations happened and there was some material damage, including ramming attacks by vessels of either side, but only one life was lost and this was an accident.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: moredhel on August 22, 2021, 01:22:05 PM
Thanks guys :) I always worry whether the all dialogue format works. I hear and see it in my mind, but I can’t forward that to the reader :)
As one of the mor visual people I say I see pictures that intense that I consider painting at least one of them, but I might lack the abilitie to do it appropriately.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: thegreyarea on August 22, 2021, 04:14:11 PM
Wow! Some many amazing contributions!
I'll comment later, because I'm doing my best to finish my story, that turned a bit more complicated than I thought but...

("And when they haven't, Grey? Tell me just one story that was simple and streightforward.")
("Shush, conscience!")


...but I'll publish it very soon, even if the break is over, proofread or not.

("you're so stuborn!" Never happy with the first draft, always trying to improve it! Should have published it as it was and... hmm...hmm!)
(*putting hand over conscience mouth* "Shh! OK you may be right. Let me finish this. We talk later.")


So I'm very happy with this break! See you soon! :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: tehta on August 23, 2021, 04:52:14 PM
I am a tiny bit late, but in my defense I just joined and got permission to see this board and this challenge.

The Art of War, on a Peaceful Evening (An Adventure One Story)

Spoiler: show
“Reading a book again, Mikkel?” asked Sigrun, throwing herself down onto one of the folding chairs arranged by the fire. “Have you been having trouble falling asleep?”

Mikkel stretched. “This one might interest you, actually. It’s called, ‘The Art of War’.”

“What, like pictures of war? Let me see.” Sigrun shifted her chair closer and grabbed the item in question. “Ugh, no, it’s writing. With some extra-small writing on the side.”

“Annotations, yes.” Mikkel retrieved the book. “And it’s not an art book; it’s a book about how to be a good general. A very ancient one, apparently.”

“A good general, hmm? Well, what does it say? Anything interesting?”

“Let’s see…” Mikkel leafed through the pages. “How about: ‘All armies prefer high ground to low and sunny places to dark.’”

“What? Is this a book for complete idiots? Even Braidy knows that.”

“You are right, it does seem rather obvious… Although, I would not have expected that to be so important back in ancient times. Perhaps they--” Noting Sigrun’s glazed-over expression, Mikkel searched the book again. “So, what would you say to: ‘In war, the way is to avoid what is strong, and strike at what is weak.’ That, too, seems obvious, and yet…”

“Right,” Sigrun nodded. “That’s a tricky one. Took even me a while, and a few scars, before I learned it. Want to see?”

“Maybe later,” said Mikkel. “Oh, here’s one you might like: ‘Let your plans be dark and impenetrable as night, and when you move, fall like a thunderbolt.’”

“You are right, I do like that! A thunderbolt. Makes me think of Thor. And, you know, my plans have been called impenetrable before.”

“I… do not doubt it. So then, how do you feel about: ‘Ponder and deliberate before you make a move.’?”

“Sounds fine, as long as you don’t deliberate too long.”

“Oddly enough, the book agrees: ‘Cleverness has never been seen associated with long delays.’”

“What’s odd about that? It seems like a pretty clever book. Maybe you should show it to our young warrior; he might learn something. Hey, EMIL!” Sigrun shouted.

There was a loud crash from the other side of the tank, followed by a second, quieter crash. “I’ll be there in a minute!” shouted Emil’s voice.

Mikkel kept leafing through the book. “Oh, here’s a good one: ‘If there is disturbance in the camp, the general's authority is weak.’”

When Sigrun failed to reply, he glanced up to see her disappearing around the vehicle. Sighing, he turned back to his reading. What he found gave him pause...

‘At the critical moment, the leader of an army acts like one who has climbed up a height and then kicks away the ladder behind him. He carries his men deep into hostile territory before he shows his hand. He burns his boats and breaks his cooking-pots; like a shepherd driving a flock of sheep, he drives his men this way and that, and nothing knows whither he is going. To muster his host and bring it into danger:--this may be termed the business of the general.’

Could it be… Could it be that General Trond had made it his general’s business to damage that bridge, locking them in the danger of the Silent World?


(I put it behind the spoiler because it's > 500 words, and that seemed too long for a post. But wow, while writing this I learned that several of the quotes I associate with The Art of War are not even in the book! Thanks, Mikkel, for improving my education.)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Grade E cat on August 29, 2021, 03:15:57 PM
I had missed this going past the planning phase. Nice work, everyone who contributed.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Róisín on September 07, 2021, 06:30:22 AM
WAR AND PEACE: ONNI

Peace is the lehto. For a little while
To sleep in safety, deep enough to dream.
Even if dreams are dark and full of pain
That still is better than the watching sleep
Resting the body, yet not soul or mind
That’s needed in the forest, just to live.

Leaving that sanctuary, I return
To war, in what was once my childhood home.
These lakes and forests, precious to my heart,
Now overrun with monsters, bleak and drear.
My family and friends gone many a year
But for the few who still may hunt me down.

Yet must I live, and gain the victory
So those I love may live, or be set free.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Opaque on September 07, 2021, 10:10:13 AM
This was soo nice to read. The solemn tone is probably how Onni narrates his life in his head. It's a very inspiring piece you have there.  :onni:
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: thorny on September 07, 2021, 10:46:21 AM
Róisín, that's very good!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: tehta on September 07, 2021, 11:08:17 AM
I love this poem so much. Several parts hit me hard: the knowledge that even Onni's most peaceful dreams are dark, the fact that seeing the childhood forest he once belonged to overrun and empty, his really very humble goals.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: wavewright62 on September 07, 2021, 10:54:41 PM
Lovely cap-off to the topic, I think - cap off to you!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: moredhel on September 11, 2021, 07:23:06 PM
I tried to paint an image inspired by the story written by jitter. It does not look realistic but this is from my mind i. e. an oversimplyfing and exaggerating one.
(https://moredhel.is-a-geek.net/kids_on_board.png)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on September 12, 2021, 08:19:43 AM
Moredhel, thank you! Is this the one saying “with all due respect have you lost your mind?”
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: moredhel on September 12, 2021, 08:50:48 AM
exactly
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: thegreyarea on September 13, 2021, 03:04:07 PM
WAR AND PEACE: ONNI
...
That's excellent, @Róisín ! Poor Onni, It has been a hard life since that day in his home island...

@moredhel, I really like this one! And your story, @Jitter ! Very well done! The all-dialogue format seems challenging, but it turned out fine!

And I also enjoyed your story, @tehta ! I hope we see a lot more from you!

I know I should close this thread... But I have my story almost ready after some just-too-much-work time, so if you don't mind I'll keep it open a few more days. :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: Jitter on September 13, 2021, 05:29:25 PM
Your stories are always “almost finished” you perfectionist :lalli:

Good to have you back!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
Post by: thegreyarea on September 13, 2021, 06:14:36 PM
Your stories are always “almost finished” you perfectionist :lalli:

Good to have you back!
Guilty as charged!

It's good to be back!!!  ;D