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tehta

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Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
« Reply #75 on: September 07, 2021, 11:08:17 AM »
I love this poem so much. Several parts hit me hard: the knowledge that even Onni's most peaceful dreams are dark, the fact that seeing the childhood forest he once belonged to overrun and empty, his really very humble goals.
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Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
« Reply #76 on: September 07, 2021, 10:54:41 PM »
Lovely cap-off to the topic, I think - cap off to you!
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Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
« Reply #77 on: September 11, 2021, 07:23:06 PM »
I tried to paint an image inspired by the story written by jitter. It does not look realistic but this is from my mind i. e. an oversimplyfing and exaggerating one.
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Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
« Reply #78 on: September 12, 2021, 08:19:43 AM »
Moredhel, thank you! Is this the one saying “with all due respect have you lost your mind?”
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Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
« Reply #79 on: September 12, 2021, 08:50:48 AM »
exactly
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Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
« Reply #80 on: September 13, 2021, 03:04:07 PM »
Quote from: Róisín on September 07, 2021, 06:30:22 AM
WAR AND PEACE: ONNI
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That's excellent, @Róisín ! Poor Onni, It has been a hard life since that day in his home island...

@moredhel, I really like this one! And your story, @Jitter ! Very well done! The all-dialogue format seems challenging, but it turned out fine!

And I also enjoyed your story, @tehta ! I hope we see a lot more from you!

I know I should close this thread... But I have my story almost ready after some just-too-much-work time, so if you don't mind I'll keep it open a few more days. :)
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Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
« Reply #81 on: September 13, 2021, 05:29:25 PM »
Your stories are always “almost finished” you perfectionist :lalli:

Good to have you back!
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Re: Chapter Break Challenge - War / Peace
« Reply #82 on: September 13, 2021, 06:14:36 PM »
Quote from: Jitter on September 13, 2021, 05:29:25 PM
Your stories are always “almost finished” you perfectionist :lalli:

Good to have you back!
Guilty as charged!

It's good to be back!!!  ;D
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