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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #105 on: February 22, 2016, 11:08:52 AM »
I started writing as a little kid, because it really never occurred to me not to. I loved poetry, folklore, stories and songs, had read everything in the house by the time I was maybe ten, and most of it well before that. My brother and I, and a couple of the kids from the next farm, used to make up plays and act them. I started making poetry and songs very early, because the patterns of it were in my head and needed to be let out. Almost as if the poems and songs had a life of their own.

Everybody around me wrote, be it a collection of recipes for a neighbour, letters to a newspaper, or articles, nature observations, journals, diaries, farm records....and of course letters, letters and letters - no email back then, and no phones either, most of the places I lived as a child. One of the great-uncles was a moderately famous poet, an uncle was a humorous poet as well as a serious writer about the First World War, one of the aunts wrote gardening articles for a newspaper. One of the grandfathers had political opinions, and wrote a lot of articles and a couple of books on the subject.

So, I mostly wrote poetry and technical articles, the greater part being of a botanical or geological nature. A few songs. Also scads of articles on gardening, folklore, nature conservation, bushcraft and wilderness survival, archaic arts and crafts, brewing, dyes and perfumes, wild food.... but very little fiction, a few SF stories. A few years back I decided that I had been neglecting fiction and started writing a few short pieces in the local writers' workshop. Then last year I discovered the concept of fanfic, and here I am.
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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #106 on: February 22, 2016, 01:37:39 PM »
I don't know, it's just a thing I do; I have lots of thought in my head and I put them down on paper.
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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #107 on: February 22, 2016, 02:09:41 PM »
Why do y'all write? What made you start? Was there a certain event or did you always just like it?
What is the first thing you can remember writing?
I began to write when I understood I was now able to read stories by myself AND to create mine. A few years after, I assume the "real" answer to a "Why are you writing ?" would have been a "To stay alive.", but I wasn't able to understand it. Today, writing is for me something as normal as breathing, and I have stories living inside my head I want/need to put on the paper, because... how to explain... they "deserve" to be shared even if I'm frightened every time I let someone enter inside one of my stories. Sharing them make them live a little further, and if I had good time with the characters, maybe some other persons could like them and like to follow their story too ? Also, if I don't write at all or don't work on a project even a little, there is a problem somewhere.
I was five or six year old when I wrote my first story, with a lead pencil, in the kind of notebook in which you have a blank page and a lined one. I still have the notebook in a drawer of my desk. (It says so many things with child's words that I can't understand how no adult had noticed it *Shivers*)

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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #108 on: February 22, 2016, 02:20:14 PM »
It's really interesting to see how many approaches and experiences with different styles are out there.

Q: I have a question that might be a tad existentialist.
Why do y'all write? What made you start? Was there a certain event or did you always just like it?
What is the first thing you can remember writing?

I didn't see this earlier, but I started writing because of one of my friends who wants to be a writer. She was writing several things and she let me read them, so one day I just wondered, "Could I do that?" It wasn't long until I had an idea, wrote it down, and now it's really taking form! I really enjoy writing, too, for the same reasons I like reading- it's another story, another world to explore.
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« Reply #109 on: February 22, 2016, 03:14:03 PM »
When it comes to HP Fanfiction I am a complete philistine. The only work I am familiar with is the almost indescribable My Immortal.

Years after its creation debate still rages over whether it's the worst fanfic ever written, or a brilliant piece of trollery disguised as the worst fanfic ever written. It's so horrible that it goes beyond bad, blazes through so bad it's good into so bad it's unreadable, powers through there into just bad again and then finally crashes like a radioactive, dinosaur killing comet back into so bad it's good and utterly destroys it.

The first time I read it I laughed so hard I hyperventillated for ten minutes and almost passed out.

You can attempt to read it here, but be warned - it features sex scenes, drug scenes, casual self harm, spelling that would make Webster stab out his eyes and burn down a library, My Chemical Romance, Dumbledore in an Avril Lavigne cloak and (for some reason) Tom Bombadil.
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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #110 on: February 23, 2016, 09:45:29 AM »
Oh, the stories you think up during teenage years! *shiver* Usually too embarrassing to even look at it yourself, much less share it. At the same time it might still have potential and you believed in it at one point, so you keep it around in some form...
And that thing with (somewhat) inappropriate awe of ages between ten and twenty. Really, people that are over twenty are creatures of myths! It's like trying to imagine 10 000 000 coins! Parents and grandparents? Pah! They aren't human! They don't have an age :P
I can still remember an eighteen-year-old visiting my kindergarten and thinking: "When are her teeth going to fall out?" I contemplated this at some length ::)

Well, then I shall answer my own questions. For the first one:
I don't know. I usually hate writing while I do it and it's an awful struggle to produce a sentence most of the time... but I kinda like it at the same time? I like looking back and thinking: "I wrote all this, even though it was soo~ difficult."
My absolute maximum output is 300 words per hour, whatever I write. Doesn't matter if it is a research paper, one of my stories or a comment (I also read very slowly).
When I get really into storytelling, I start being affected by the character's behavior, too. For example, I once wrote a scene in which a character threw up and it made me feel nauseous the whole day. I wouldn't mind, but the scene didn't even turn out well! D:
But it is free entertainment! And the little films plying out before my inner eye have to go somewhere - it would be a pity to throw them away.

The first thing I can remember writing was a story for school in first year. We had to write these short essay-like things and I had seen a documentary about deforestation in the Rainforest the evening before. It led to me writing a three part story about an old wolf protecting a flower and a girl from a nearby village trying to stop bulldozers, or something. The wolf could talk and taught the little girl some nifty stuff and in the end everyone was... getting on with their lives, I think?
The words in this story aren't separated and you have to read it out loud to know what they mean.

I really like reading things children wrote.
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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #111 on: March 01, 2016, 11:14:14 AM »
*Something elsewhere reminded me -

If anybody ever wants a second pair of eyes to look over their work before it's posted, I am totally willing to help with that. I've found from experience that no matter how many times I re-read something I wrote, there will always be typing mistakes or weird grammar that I forgot to fix, and usually someone else finds it. I expect it's the same for others. So, just drop me a PM. As long as there's adequate time for revisions and it isn't super long (like, 20k or something), I can do it.

I usually prefer to do this using googledocs, because making suggestions/revisions with it is easy, but we can find some other way if that doesn't work out.
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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #112 on: March 02, 2016, 07:27:33 PM »
So...I started writing this a year ago as a prank for my Creative Writing teacher, who forgot to specify the length of the piece we should turn in for Midterm. A whole lot of editing and world-building later, and this resulted. Still unfinished, but I will update as much as I can.
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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #113 on: March 02, 2016, 08:43:33 PM »
Ragnarok, that has the promise of a good tale. The atmosphere reminds me of early Michael Moorcock. That's a compliment.
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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #114 on: March 02, 2016, 08:49:19 PM »
Ragnarok, that has the promise of a good tale. The atmosphere reminds me of early Michael Moorcock. That's a compliment.

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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #115 on: March 02, 2016, 10:14:31 PM »
So...I started writing this a year ago as a prank for my Creative Writing teacher, who forgot to specify the length of the piece we should turn in for Midterm. A whole lot of editing and world-building later, and this resulted. Still unfinished, but I will update as much as I can.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OgTbjepUbnlnYXtM0P2uKDvWWOjgE83u3DQBmXobY1w/edit?usp=sharing
Not bad so far, seems like a pretty standard fantasy epic, but certainly one that I would read. Have you ever read the Wheel of Time? I'm picking up very strong Perrin Aybara vibes in your blacksmith.

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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #116 on: March 03, 2016, 05:21:32 AM »
Yup. Paid a bit of homage in the world-building, but that hasn't come up yet in the story.
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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #117 on: March 03, 2016, 12:36:50 PM »
Ragnarok - I've just read this, starts really interesting. I absolutely love the prologue, and the rest in fascinating as well. I'd certainly be interesting in reading on if you continue to write this after all.
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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #118 on: March 03, 2016, 11:25:15 PM »
Anybody have good tips for writing dialogue? That's by far my biggest weakness as a writer. I've tried to listen carefully to how people talk in everyday conversation but it never comes out right on paper.

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Re: Writers' Corner
« Reply #119 on: March 04, 2016, 02:42:45 AM »
Anybody have good tips for writing dialogue? That's by far my biggest weakness as a writer. I've tried to listen carefully to how people talk in everyday conversation but it never comes out right on paper.

I've actually heard that you don't want to write exactly how people irl talk, because it comes out very messy; false starts, stuttering, changing trains of thought in the middle of a sentence, forgetting words. That isn't to say that listening to real life people won't help, but don't try to make your characters talk like real people. Try to have your characters talk like people think they talk or how they wish they talked.

Even if you have a character with a stutter, it's better to leave most of that in the speech tags. Instead of:

"I-I-I-I was j-just go-going t-to th-the st-tore," she said.

it might be better to write

"I-I-I-I was just going t-to the tore," she said/stuttered.

And even then that might be too much really. And remember that just like everything in the story, the dialogue is there to move the story forward or tell us something about the characters or world.
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