Someone mentioned in the comment section yesterday that they wanted Braidy to fall down from the sky while Lalli was pointing at him from the top off a hill. Here's my quick try at drawing the scene:
Oooh, I like it! I think my favourite part is the light - you've drawn it beautifully. Actually, the whole sky is pretty amazing
I hope you don't mind, but I made some adjustments to show how you might make Braidy's fall look a bit more natural c:
You might also want to tilt his upper body a little more backwards, so it doesn't look like he's moving forward ;3 (Wow, I really hope I don't come off as rude ;~; I just wanted to offer some advice, since you seemed a bit unsure about how to improve it)