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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #285 on: April 14, 2022, 05:49:52 PM »
Regarding what you just said about Emil...

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I don't think Sigrun's words should be taken 100% seriously. She was exaggerating as usual. Anyway, this Emil isn't trying to play people. He likes it when people find him attractive, and doesn't need to catch feelings to enjoy hooking up with someone. And he doesn't think about those other people's feelings much, because he is too insecure to believe that people could develop meaningful feelings for him. If he found that they did, he'd feel awful. Well, a bit gratified too, but mostly just horribly guilty.


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I kinda thought that.  But does Lalli? 
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #286 on: April 17, 2022, 03:23:39 PM »
Hey, I finally completed my contribution for the "Courtship" theme. I warned you, but you wanted me to do it anyway so... here it is.

Courtship

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A chime came from Lani's door. It was soft, but startled her anyway. She looked at the clock on the screen-wall, where a small tagged image showed Rivi's face. Yep, she was late.

"Just a moment!" She said, speaking a bit loud so the door system would know her reply was meant for the person outside. Rivi's small image nodded an ok.

She'd lost herself on reading, again! Now Rivi was behind that door, waiting, while she was still on her underwear.

A part of her entertained the thought of welcoming him with just that and a smile, meanwhile another part of her brain slapped and protested. Rivi didn't make any gesture that meant he wanted to be more than a good friend... She added a hopeful "yet" at the end of the sentence. So she didn't want to do anything that might embarrass him.

While searching for her trousers she recalled how cute a degree of embarrassment looked on him the other day, at the canteen, and decided that a "yet" would go well at the end of second sentence. Yes, nothing to embarrass him, yet!

Lani hurried to fit her legs on the trousers. One, two, three... and the fourth got stuck, forcing her to pull out the third. "Of course! Always happens when you are in a hurry!"
She finally managed to fit all legs and ensure her tail was also firmly set in place. Presently she envied the Earthers. How simple it would be having just two legs! And no tail! They probably never had problems with their legs being stuck in their trousers! On the other hand keeping balance seemed awfully difficult. She wondered how long they could stand...

Next Lani selected a colourful, sleeveless shirt. She knew her arms were nice, with well-defined segments. There's nothing wrong in showing them a bit, right? She put on the shirt and spoke to the door. "I'm coming! One minute!"

Now just a touch of makeup, straighten the antennae.. and that's it! Lani gestured a half-turn with her hand, shifting the screen-wall into a mirror. She looked ok, not like someone that just crawled out of the bunk!. She switched the wall to one of her preferred paintings and opened the door, wearing her best smile.

So far she had only seen her friend in casual or working clothes, however this time Rivi was all in black, standing elegant from those upright antennae to what anyone with two pair of eyes could guess as a strong and well-developed tail.

Rivi was looking down, seemingly distracted with his thoughts, and then his sight shifted up and focused on her. Lani observed his expression turn into surprise, and briefly panicked inside, imagining that something terrible happened with her makeup. Then Rivi smiled warmly, showing those three rows of regularly spaced, perfectly pointy and translucent teeth.

Before she could think on anything to say her mouth let go a "Wow!", and next Rivi was holding a beautiful nosegay with a mix of flowers on one hand, and a small box with tiny cubes in the other. The cubes were wrapped with glossy paper in several colours, and smelled delicious.

Lani wasn't really used to gifts. "For... For me?" The part of her brain that wasn't flabbergasted by Rivi's good looking was slapping her. What a stupid question! She managed to take her presents and bowed slightly, signalling acceptance. It was a tradition, but traditions held important cultural codes, or so her mother used to say.

Rivi bowed back. "Lani, you look amazing!"

"So do you!" Lani replied, and took a mental note to ask later if the younger Rivi used braces to achieve that beautiful smile. She brought the tiny cubes closer and inspired, feeling their delicate smell, and then placed the open box over a small table so it could perfume her cabin.

Lani, as tradition demanded on these situations, invited him to come inside. Accordingly to her mother that gesture was meant to show any visitors how able she was to keep a home tidy and clean... as if they didn't have cleaning drones to do that! Well, Lani held no grudge against those ancient costumes, foolish as they may seem, so she gave Rivi the usual time to look around and then, opening her mouth just a bit, so not to scary him, ate the flowers.

His eyes were on her, trying to gauge her reaction. The flowers were delicious. She liked them on the sweet side, so she would've added more Makeus and had less Suolainen, but overall it was a good, balanced mix. Rivi was tense while she advanced, putting her arms around him.

"I like it!" Lani said, bending and turning so her mouth came closer to the sound sensitive areas behind his head. "I do like it.", she whispered. Sometimes she wished males were the same size of females. A silly thought, of course. Males always had been smaller, and no amount of civilization or technology would change that.

Rivi's own smell was more evident there, closer to his neck. Good, even if the base was mixed with a touch of sweat, a hint of tension. Lani came even closer, gently landing a soft kiss. She wanted to say that he looked appetizing, but refrained from doing that. No need to make him even more nervous.

"I guess it's time to eat." She said, still whispering to him. "Ready?"

"Yes." Rivi replied, with just a hint of fear on his voice.

"I'm feeling in a good mood now!"

Rivi relaxed a bit. "Right! Let's do it."

A small groan came from somewhere deep inside Lani. She was getting hungry. "What had you tought?"

"What do you say to traditional Kiinalainen?"

She felt her mouth watering. "Kiinalainen? Sounds great, if properly done."

"I made a reservation at the new place on deck Four. My colleague says the food is excellent."

They started to move, and Rivi extended his arm. She was sure her antennae were blushing a little as she took his hand and they walked down the corridor towards the lift, smiling to each other.


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I hope you enjoied it as much as I did... or did it became too scary? ;)
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #287 on: April 17, 2022, 05:43:03 PM »

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I hope you enjoied it as much as I did... or did it became too scary? ;)


Very good.  It *does* make me nervous :)
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #288 on: April 17, 2022, 06:04:10 PM »
I'm not nervous at all! This is exactly how I prefer to enact my own courtships...

I loved the reversal with the edible flowers. And the mother's sage but old-fashioned advice.

Do we have a prompt for next week?
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #289 on: April 17, 2022, 06:27:29 PM »
We don’t have a prompt yet. When suggesting, maybe keep in mind Sigrun’s birthday is this starting week.

I also have a draft for Courtship but haven’t finished it because of having been otherwise engaged (reading our excellent Comic of the Month, mostly) but Grey’s treat reminds me about it. Monday is still a holiday so I’m mentioning it now in the hopes I’ll finish it!
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #290 on: April 17, 2022, 08:08:16 PM »
Very good.  It *does* make me nervous :)
Thanks, dmeck! Even I was nervous when she came closer to his neck!
I'm not nervous at all! This is exactly how I prefer to enact my own courtships...
Hummm... I'm afraid to ask for further details... :)
I loved the reversal with the edible flowers. And the mother's sage but old-fashioned advice.
Thanks! I had fun with that part, and all the small alien details, particularly the "legs and trousers" section! :)
BTW would you all be more relaxed if I pointed that she mentions her mother but not her father...? ;)
Do we have a prompt for next week?
We don’t have a prompt yet. When suggesting, maybe keep in mind Sigrun’s birthday is this starting week.
What if we select "Sigrun" as our prompt for next week?
I also have a draft for Courtship but haven’t finished it because of having been otherwise engaged (reading our excellent Comic of the Month, mostly) but Grey’s treat reminds me about it. Monday is still a holiday so I’m mentioning it now in the hopes I’ll finish it!
Looking forward to read it, dear friend!

And now that I finished my story I can read your contributions! :) I'm sorry for not doing it before but the combination of work+holiday+writing my story left me with no time/energy to do that. Expect comments!
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #291 on: April 17, 2022, 09:19:52 PM »
I'm not nervous at all! This is exactly how I prefer to enact my own courtships...

The flowers were an excellent touch.  Though the "jaws" theme kept playing in the back of my head.
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #292 on: April 18, 2022, 02:43:30 AM »
We don’t have a prompt yet. When suggesting, maybe keep in mind Sigrun’s birthday is this starting week.
What if we select "Sigrun" as our prompt for next week?
Considering your .sig, you don't need the occasion to base your proposal on, do you? :P
(Still, would Sigrun know about ancient Easter customs to ever ponder how to weaponize the Easter bunny ... ?)

I also have a draft for Courtship but haven’t finished it
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #293 on: April 18, 2022, 05:02:13 AM »
I think the Sigrun thing was a typo? It's Lalli whose birthday falls on the 20th of April. (And Tuuri died around this time; at least, that's how I figured it in a story I wrote once.)
If we go with a Lalli prompt, I will write something in which nothing bad happens to him.

(Finally, yes, I enjoyed the alien trousers moment as well! And I did notice the lack of mentions of a father.)
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #294 on: April 18, 2022, 06:51:58 AM »
Oof yeah, sorry, my bad!

Prompt for this week is Lalli!

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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #295 on: April 18, 2022, 07:37:23 AM »
I think the Sigrun thing was a typo?
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Freudian slip? After all, 20-Apr is a marked leader's birthday ... :-X
(Sorry for the weird association, but dad pointed out my birthday falling exactly in the middle between his and Smoky Adi's more often than I'd care for ...)

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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #296 on: April 18, 2022, 07:40:29 AM »
The combination of Lalli and .. the other birthday boy... suggests to me that the best way to celebrate the day will be by posting pics of kitlers.
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #297 on: April 18, 2022, 07:53:58 AM »
The combination of Lalli and .. the other birthday boy... suggests to me that the best way to celebrate the day will be by posting pics of kitlers.
I'll bark to that. :P
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #298 on: April 18, 2022, 08:16:27 AM »
I think the Sigrun thing was a typo? It's Lalli whose birthday falls on the 20th of April. (And Tuuri died around this time; at least, that's how I figured it in a story I wrote once.)
If we go with a Lalli prompt, I will write something in which nothing bad happens to him.

(Finally, yes, I enjoyed the alien trousers moment as well! And I did notice the lack of mentions of a father.)
I'm glad that you liked it! And since we will go for the "Lalli" prompt I'll second you and promise not writing a story where he's eaten by Emil ;D

Also I had to google "Kitlers".  O_O The things we learn here...
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #299 on: April 18, 2022, 09:44:49 AM »
Now I suddenly think I have read a story where Lalli WAS eaten by Emil. I don’t want a repeat of that experience!
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