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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1215 on: March 05, 2023, 02:34:44 PM »
Speaking of Tenacity...

I guess Ensi's story has lots of it, and my readers, that waited for so long for the second part, surely have too, :)

Here it is, on AO3: Winter, Part 2
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1216 on: March 05, 2023, 05:13:43 PM »
Here’s finally something on Tenacity. I think a lot is needed from both of these two:

Mieleni minun tekevi, aivoni ajattelevi…Onni, this is gibberish! Why do I have to memorize this? It’s not even Finnish!
”It’s poetic Finnish. Just keep at it.”
“But the order of words is all crooked!”
“I told you Finnish has free word order. You could say it like that in normal speech. You just… don’t.”
“You are to blame when my Finnish gets all bad!”
“Gets? I don’t think that’s possible.”
”Oh, isn’t it Mr Polyglot himself! With your Icelandic I wouldn’t…”
“Get back to the recitation or we’ll be stuck on the first one forever!”
“Shees, all right all right…”

”So, what’s with the vi? TekeVI? I don’t understand.”
”I told you. Poetic.”
“Yeah, but what does it mean? My mind is inclined to… vi?”
”It doesn’t really mean anything.”
“Then why is it there? As if Finnish wasn’t difficult enough with the bits that do mean something. You add more just because why not?”
“Shut up! Keep reading!”
”Well, I can’t do both simultaneously!”

”Mielikki help me…”
”By Freya’s beauty…”
“YOU ARE INSUFFERABLE!”

Reynir is trying to learn some runos because the spirits have told them there are more linkages between Finnish and Icelandic magic than meets the eye. Or the ear. Onni has the great pleasure of helping him.



Thanks to Grey for this :) It occurred to me when I was commenting his runo, which is almost completely his own doing! I didn’t even have to yell!
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1217 on: March 06, 2023, 04:29:48 PM »
This week’s prompt is Tuuri and Reynir, because their shared birthday was on the weekend just past.
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1218 on: March 07, 2023, 05:22:29 PM »
I am working on a Tuuri and Reynir. 

Here is a little something from last week's prompt. 

https://archiveofourown.org/works/45121762/chapters/114682006

(There has been so much wonderful work being posted, I hope it at least will entertain.)
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1219 on: March 07, 2023, 05:24:37 PM »
BTW, Thanks to Jitter and Tehta

For the works posted here. 

All good and they made me smile

THANKS
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1220 on: March 07, 2023, 08:16:17 PM »
Tehta, I really loved your "Erik the Real Viking" story!

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I believe you're not going that way, but in line with my comment on AO3, I wouldn't be surprised if Emil's friends, one by one, stopped talking to him, and even ceased to see him, while his newfound twin takes over his life, bit by bit, and worse, doing everything better than he does...

EDIT: It just ocurred to me: How was it possible that someone so amazing like Erik wandered Dalsnes for days (?), meeting Emil's friends, and he didn't notice? The sunshine reflected on Erik's hair would be enough to draw Emil's attention...


Still reading the rest. :)

And thanks Jitter for the new prompt! Really great! And I think that I have one nice idea for that...
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1221 on: March 08, 2023, 08:37:55 AM »
Dmeck, great work! Using that situation for the prompt was an excellent idea

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and adding Ukko-Pekka to it was icing on the cake! Is your idea that he was taken by the Kade soon after their encounter and that’s why they never met again? Both would’ve wanted to but couldn’t?
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1222 on: March 08, 2023, 09:39:29 AM »
Dmeck, great work! Using that situation for the prompt was an excellent idea

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and adding Ukko-Pekka to it was icing on the cake! Is your idea that he was taken by the Kade soon after their encounter and that’s why they never met again? Both would’ve wanted to but couldn’t?


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Yeah I could never make up my mind on Ukko

Yeah I have a few ideas about that (ooooh I think I will write a story about that!!)

One idea was something I did in another prompt of the week (Ukko forced himself)

It could have just been a one-night stand

But I kinda like the idea that they zinged (A la Hotel Transylvania) He never came back which could be her resentment with being a single parent. That could explain her coldness that was implicated in the comic.

I think the kade thrives and enjoys the pain and suffering of others.  So any sadness or negative feelings it could generate would be utilized.

Fate gives all of us three teachers, three friends, three enemies, and three great loves in our lives. But these twelve are always disguised, and we never know which one is which until we've loved them, left them, or fought them.

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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1223 on: March 08, 2023, 11:13:00 AM »
Fate gives all of us three teachers, three friends, three enemies, and three great loves in our lives. But these twelve are always disguised, and we never know which one is which until we've loved them, left them, or fought them.

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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1224 on: March 09, 2023, 11:23:34 AM »
Hey, I did it! Another story, and this one is quite short, so you won't waste too much time... :)

It's for the Tuuri and Reynir prompt, and is on AO3: Something He Just Does

I hope you like it!

Tonight I'm going to try to read all those recente stories. They look very promising
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1225 on: March 09, 2023, 01:58:28 PM »
Tuuri and Reynir

”Tuuri! Tuuri!” Reynir was yelling in his sleep. Again.
“I’m here. Wake up! Everyone else has!”
“Tuuri… uuff.. I’m so sorry guys. Another nightmare!”
“Your dreams seem remarkably focused on someone. Just saying.” Mikkel didn’t have heart to scold Reynir. It was no wonder the lad had nightmares, what with the recent snow troll attack and narrow escape from the city. And he shouldn’t have been in the Silent World to begin with. But it was getting tiring to have him trash about and moan every night.

“I can’t help it! There’s always some danger to Tuuri in my dreams!”
“Maybe you should try to think about something else?” Mikkel suggested. “Now go back to sleep!”.

In the morning, Tuuri asked Reynir about the dreams. He insisted he never used to dream, but now he did all the time. Many of the dreams were nice (something about a happy place, and a dog, and water?) but in between there were also horrible nightmares about bad things happening.

“There’s an army of shadows, and they attack me and Lalli and all of us, and I cannot do anything to stop them! And a scary horse that is not a horse! And often something bad is happening to you. I hope I’m not a mage after all. I don’t want to have premonitions about something like that.”

The nightmares seemed to evolve, but they always included something horrible happening to Tuuri. There was the sound of breaking, splintering of wood, teeth and claws rending tender flesh. There was filth and disease. There was Tuuri becoming covered in blisters and deformations, Tuuri turning into a monster. He didn’t want to talk about it anymore, but everyone knew because of his nightly yelling.

Finally, several days and nights of relative peace during their overland trek towards Odense helped. The nights in the Cattank were peaceful again. Except for the snoring. And the smell. After a couple of quiet nights, Tuuri brought the issue up with Reynir.

“So, the nightmares have stopped?”
“Yeah, mostly. I still see the dark army. But the dreams about you are better now”
“Oh, you still dream about me?” Tuuri was blushing a little.
“Yes! They used to be really bad! You turning into a gross monster! But now they are much nicer! Now you turn into a bird!”



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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1226 on: March 09, 2023, 02:03:19 PM »
Grey, reading something you've written is never a waste of time! Still chuckling over this one!

Jitter, that's a lovely dark combination of humour and poignancy.

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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1227 on: March 09, 2023, 02:09:05 PM »
Grey,
That is definitely something Reynir would do!!

Jitter,
I love it.  It is sad, but oh so poignant
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1228 on: March 11, 2023, 02:08:02 AM »
Oh no! I got sucked into real life stuff just as this thread recovered, and now I am so behind! I am catching up on AO3 now and will comment on there where appropriate, to drive up comment counts.

Jitter, I enjoyed both the stories, but the Tuuri one is especially. clever. In terms of how it hits one right in the feels when one doesn't expect it. (But hmm, wouldn't Tuuri know that a bird is actually a little ominous?)

In general, that Tuuri prompt is proving very feelings-intense.
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Re: Prompt of the week!
« Reply #1229 on: March 11, 2023, 02:33:48 AM »
That could explain her coldness that was implicated in the comic.

I think I may have commented on this already, but I am not sure that Ensi was meant to appear cold. I know she doesn't rush to hug her kids, but it could be that she's just not a natural hugger, like her grandson.
(And like me! I find casual hugging mildly unpleasant because it's such a sensory overload.  It's a bit like someone screaming in my ear, which is okay at a concert or something where it's part of the vibe, but feels very odd when it's, like,  polite greetings -- EAR SCREAM -- back to polite greetings. I definitely have to remind myself--or even be reminded--that other people actually find hugs pleasant and comforting. And I don't think I am a cold person, or particularly traumatized!)
Anyway, I kind of enjoy the idea that characters in the comic are allowed to have various social quirks, and it doesn't explicitly imply that they're broken.
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