I have to be honest I am SO confused abiut the Elie -> Ellie timeline. It seems like Elie expected it to just be a few minutes, maybe a few hours, in the real world.
But she went to sleep in a world consumed by plague and woke up with only vague mentions to the avian flu, no one seeming to be worried about catching it, and this new sci fi villain mind controlling all the men.
Which we're going to need an explanation of how the men got psi-whatevered since it seems to be a difficult and somewhat time consuming process?
I'd expect Elie/Ellie to have been out for, like, at least a few weeks.
And back to your previous comment about apocalypses - so they had Martian war, Martian made killer flu, and ice age/tsunami.
It's a bit much!