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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #75 on: June 29, 2020, 09:30:59 AM »
I totally agree with what Annuil said-- i just read through all the prompts and they're fantastic!! So much creativity, and it's only been 6 days!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #76 on: June 29, 2020, 09:41:28 AM »
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #77 on: June 29, 2020, 09:55:16 AM »
Hi, I´m here again!  :) I was busy learning for a classtest yesterday, but now I have free time again. And great, because now I could catch up on so many cool things:

Keitto-Kettu, that´s such a nice song! I can really see a walking cicle animated to it in my head. Makes me wish I had the patience to animate anything...

scottishnottish, I love your poem! When I realized it was about Tuuri it got even better! and because I think I never got the chance to tell you elsewhere before, let me just gush about how much I love your poetry in general right here real quick...

Vulpes, I can only second Grey on that one! It really seems like the start of an interesting story.

And now to todays posts:

MollyVampiric, I just have to say I love your writing style. And this little backstory to Lallis new companion is so sweet! I agree with Kirsten, what worlds can you create with a toy that already has a purpose.

And lastly Annuil, where I sadly have to say that I can´t see the picture. But when I tried to quote your post, I think I saw where the problem is: I don´t know on what programm you uploaded it, but to enbed images here, the link must end with "jpg" or "png". I can only speak for postimages.com, but there it always gives you multiple links, and the one that is called "direct link" has the right ending.

Oh and look, while I was typing, midwestmutt posted too! With once again a beautifully crafted Haiku!

(here I was, thinking the English language had endless possibilities in words to express how amazing you find something, and now I finished this one post and nearly ran out... So I will just settle with seconding Annuil and Alkia with their posts for ending this one. You people are all so talented! XoX)

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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #78 on: June 29, 2020, 10:04:04 AM »
Annuil, yes, the actual link is working! :)) That´s a beautiful illustration, I love that the cube is the only colorful detail! Also you can draw hands really well, which is something I always admire about people. I really can´t...
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #79 on: June 29, 2020, 10:21:33 AM »
Yepeee! I’m super happy that it worked, because usually I’m so bad at all these links! Thank you, Mirasol!
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #80 on: June 29, 2020, 10:32:05 AM »
Hello all and thank you for amazing contributions! I can't gush enough about all of them, but I will say that MollyVampiric I was so delighted when I realized what the toy was :) Kirsten became Tuulikki's grandmother, right?

I loved every other piece too! And Annuil, the link works fine and I see the illustration.

One more thing, Gunnar is one of my fave side characters! Vulpes please write about how it went for him? Did he try for Bergen??
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #81 on: June 29, 2020, 02:59:23 PM »
Hey, it´s me again, for the third time today. :'D
I also got inspired by MollyVampiric´s story, and Annuil´s illustration, so I drew something too:

From grocery stores, to clothing stores, to the occasional ‘for-fun’ antique or toy store, Kirsten loved all of it. The amount of choices made it an adventure; every object had a story. Every torn pair of jeans was battle armor, every toy with dirt on it was a hidden relic of a past world, every wet stick was a shiny sword.

No one ever minded or noticed when she inspected an old toy, building a world of her own. She liked to think it was because of who she was. Her short height and her quiet voice made her invisible. Her icy blue eyes could shoot lasers. Her platinum blonde, curly hair was a shield.


I drew Kirsten! You could say it´s the other end of the scene Annuil drew. I also tried to do the "only grey colors exept for the cube (and Kirstens imagination)"-thing, but as you can see... there´s kinda too much color for it to work to begin with. Also I added dragons, because dragons are awesome.
« Last Edit: June 29, 2020, 03:28:20 PM by Mirasol »
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #82 on: June 29, 2020, 04:20:18 PM »
Yay! I love the imaginary cape! And the dragons fit there very well  ;D
I should add the words on one of the red squares ;)

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There you are!
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Sorry, a regular link again.
« Last Edit: June 29, 2020, 04:30:32 PM by Annuil »
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #83 on: June 29, 2020, 06:22:11 PM »
Content warning: snakes

Playtime

Joni was looking for his daughter. She had wandered off from the home garden. She had just promised him she would stay in the yard, and now she was gone again!

“Sointu! Sointu, love, where are you?” No answer. Walking farther from the garden Joni grew apprehensive. The girl seemed to be fascinated with the craggy rocks to the east of the village. Joni had told her numerous times that it was dangerous to go there alone. She always answered, that there are no trolls or beasts there. But how would she know? She was just a little girl!

Admittedly, there hadn’t been any attacks so near the village for many years, but still. Besides, grosslings weren’t the only danger. What if she fell and broke a leg? She could be crippled for life! Or even die of the complications! Joni sighed, thinking about the health care of his youth. No one needed to fear a simple wound then! Now there was word of some people being real noitas, who could do actual magic. But none of them here, at Kaijatsaari, or any of the western Saimaa islands. If they were real, maybe some would eventually end up coming here too? Sometimes Joni was surprised to find himself contemplating the possibility that magic, or spirits, or the old gods existed. What nonsense! We are on our own! On the other hand, 14 years ago the idea of a troll was nonsense...

He was approaching the crags now. And yeah, there was Sointu, among the rocks! “Sointu! What have I told you? Why are you here again? You know it’s dangerous!”
“Oh, hi dad! They only call me when it’s safe! You don’t need to worry!”
“Call? What are you talking about?” Joni was suddenly alarmed. There had been a few weird attacks on the islands, and some people were saying there was a näkki around. Usually a näkki lured its victims into water, but maybe there were other, similar creatures?
Sick with worry, Joni continued slowly towards his daughter. “Honey, listen carefully. Come to me right now! Please, come to dad!”
“Aww dad, it’s their playtime, and they asked me to join in! I don’t want to go yet!”
“Playtime? What are you talking about? You must...”

Joni stepped behind his daughter, and saw who she was playing with. There were six, no, seven adders, slithering about on the rocks and his daughters lap. The zig zag pattern on their backs confirmed them as the venomous creatures they were, but their movements seemed... friendly? A couple were swaying their heads in front of Sointu, and another two looked like they were caressing her arms. Joni knew he should be terrified, but somehow the entire scene seemed very right.
“Don’t worry dad! They know you are my father. You can come closer!” The snakes were watching his every move, but still the feeling was relaxed. Well then, I suppose there is something in this noita thing after all. Probably comes from her mother’s side though. We have always been very boring.

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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #84 on: June 29, 2020, 07:48:31 PM »
Annuil and Mirasol, I'm so glad y'all were inspired by my story! Both of you have made beautiful drawings.

Midwestmutt, your haiku ability is through the roof.

Jitter, I like your writing style.

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(Anyone else get that feeling when you're writing a reply where you wanna write an exclamation mark after every statement but it feels weird to write every sentence with one? Idek, I just wish I could send good vibes through my screen to all of you.)
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #85 on: June 29, 2020, 08:37:37 PM »
What delights we have today!  Unfortunately, I can't see one of them, Annuil's link?  It says I don't have permission to view the OneDrive.   :-\
Two amazing stories on the Playtime riff, though - Jitter and MollyVampiric, I love them both.  I'm a sucker for a good origin story.
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #86 on: June 29, 2020, 08:41:45 PM »
More wonderful creativity! MollyVampiric, having Kirsten imagine a Rubik's cube as a sword is very clever. Annuil and Mirasol, those are great bookend illustrations - teamwork!  :)  How do you come up with so many wonderfully lateral haiku, midwest? Superb. Jitter, a lovely vignette as always. I agree with wave, the bit about being boring is hilarious. Thanks for the various positive comments on my snapshot of Gunnar. I might explore his further ocean-going adventures, but right now I'm thinking more about the Hotakainen boat - Grade E cat, you may get another boat cameo if I can get this out of my head.
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #87 on: June 29, 2020, 08:59:45 PM »
(Anyone else get that feeling when you're writing a reply where you wanna write an exclamation mark after every statement but it feels weird to write every sentence with one? Idek, I just wish I could send good vibes through my screen to all of you.)

Oh man, I feel that all the time. Good vibes to all of you! MollyVampiric your story was lovely and made me smile. And Mirasol, what a nice drawing to accentuate it! Jitter, I started reading yours with intense dread but ended with immense relief, very nice. Vulpes, your vignette made me giggle. And Midwestmutt your haikus are so much fun.

And Róisín, Vulpes, thegreyarea, and Mirasol, thank you all so much! Glad I could capture Tuuri's spirit. I really connected with her final conversation with Reynir--the fact that despite all that had gone wrong, she had no regrets. I've tried to consistently remind myself lately that failure is all a part of the journey of becoming ourselves.

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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #88 on: June 30, 2020, 12:49:48 AM »
These are all brilliant! I especially liked the one with the snake-mage. It has long been my headcanon that snake venom is poisonous to grosslings, and I have used the concept in several of my fics, mostly the ‘Far to the South’ tales, in which I have such things as a snake guarding Warri while he works his land magic, or the coast watcher/mage explaining that part of the reason why Tasmania and its islands survived so well was the tiger snakes. Snakes will also enter into Patsy’s story, later. I like snakes, is it obvious?
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Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
« Reply #89 on: June 30, 2020, 01:28:30 AM »
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 7: Discover

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Today's prompt of Discover is brought to us by Mirasol!

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Summary: The Skald who looks through Tuuri´s reports on the mission into silent Denmark finds something unusual.

Discover(ies)

He considered it a great honor that the Nordic Council assigned him to work on the assorting of the expedition´s reports. The research-mission into the silent world last winter had been the first of its kind, and quite successful at that, lots of ancient artifacts were brought home and only one casualty occured. He was anticipating looking into the certainly very interesting finds of the crew.

The first thing he picked up from the box filled with the mission´s papers was the neat, organized folder filled with the daily reports and protocols, written mainly by Miss Tuuri Hotakainen, as a tag on the first page indicated. She more than completed her work, he thought with relief when flipping through it. Each report was long, detailed and often supported by lots of photos showing important places, the crew’s daily routines and even some dead trolls or beasts. One or two of the pictures seemed to have been taken only for the sake of a nice souvenir, but most were for informative purposes. That was good. The Nordic Council would be happy, the photographic paper used in those polaroid cameras was expensive.

Every picture was accompanied by a short explanation written with a typewriter or in a pretty but a little childlike handwriting that had occasionally hearts instead of dots above the “I”. The texts came in Icelandic and sometimes Swedish, but most of the time both. The grammar was so correct that it was obvious Miss Hotakainen hadn´t been a native speaker in either of them, but there were almost no mistakes in the phrasing or vocabulary, which was impressive. Near fluency in two additional languages at such a young age, hadn´t she only been about twenty or so?

The entries after the tragedy that… kept Miss Hotakainen from continuing her work were more… chaotic, to say the least. Much shorter, and the handwriting of whoever took over was so tiny that it was barely readable. To top it off, it looked like they lost their typewriter alongside their researcher, so the entire reports were now scribbled by hand. He already dreaded the day he had to read (or rather decipher) them.

When he reached the back of the protocols, something sparked his interest. There was a bunch of pages that were held together by a paperclip and appeared to be a separate report on a different topic. In the same distinctive handwriting as in the beginning of the folder, these pages were titled with only one word (well, three words, in three languages, but after consulting his trusted dictionary he could tell it was the same word three times over): “Discoveries”.

He removed the clip, expecting to find what he was looking for, a list of important sightings or objects encountered in silent Denmark. Instead it contained a series of photos, each one marked with nothing but a date and apparently showing neither of those things. This was… confusing. There was no noticeable reason for why these photos had been taken. But this entire section looked so important and official. There, he could spot two different handwritings. Multiple people must have worked on it. Besides, Miss Hotakainen had been so responsible with the protocol, he was sure there was a sense behind whatever this was. But… what was it? Why had it been so substantial to use expensive photographing assets on images of a baby cat?

A selection of the “Discoveries”-photos:







Thanks very much to Mirasol for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to share what you've made down below!
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