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Title: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on June 24, 2020, 01:56:39 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 1: Birth

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Welcome to our second ever Chapter Break Filler! As Minna goes on break, us Minnions are kicking into action, and Yeethaw_Gang brings us our first work in response to the (rather suitable) prompt of Birth.

Spoiler: show
(https://i.imgur.com/hG0TOOl.png).


Thanks very much to Yeethaw_Gang for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post your own works down below!

Also a reminder - we still have two prompts left for the taking, so if you want to claim either of them, go over to the organization thread and send me a message.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: muidole on June 24, 2020, 03:22:32 AM
Ooh, I really like this impactful poem with its usage of repetition!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on June 24, 2020, 06:15:37 AM
Awww, under the pustulating skin of a newborn troll, good one.  I like the set-out too. Way to go, Yeethaw!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on June 24, 2020, 06:22:51 AM
What a beautiful, sad, haunting poem! The black leaking from underneath sets the athmosphere even better!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on June 24, 2020, 08:57:38 AM
When the world grows dark,
after sunset ends the day.
Birth is the starlight.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on June 24, 2020, 11:07:59 AM
Chapter Break Filler

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Prompt 1: Birth

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Welcome to our second ever Chapter Break Filler! As Minna goes on break, us Minnions are kicking into action, and Yeethaw_Gang brings us our first work in response to the (rather suitable) prompt of Birth.

Spoiler: show
(https://i.imgur.com/hG0TOOl.png).


Thanks very much to Yeethaw_Gang for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post your own works down below!

Also a reminder - we still have two prompts left for the taking, so if you want to claim either of them, go over to the organization thread and send me a message.

I wander what have happened, because I see a white square instead of a picture or whatever it is supposed to be there...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 24, 2020, 11:51:28 AM
Thanks yeethaw for a chilling piece, and midwestmutt for a gentler one! Strong start!

Annuli, the work is a picture containing a poem. The Forum doesn’t store actual pictures, they are in fact links to other services. Sometimes a user has something preventing them from seeing some of the pics, for example my work computer doesn’t show pictures that are links to imgur because it’s classified as “pornography”...  which some of the content may be, but hardly everything is. But, no voting chibis for mm from work!

Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on June 24, 2020, 02:40:21 PM
Okey, thank you, Jitter, I got the problem. My computer has an app that blocks everything that looks just a little bit like “pornography”, so… maybe that’s why
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on June 24, 2020, 03:10:59 PM
Yeethaw your poem is so eerie and somber and gooood! and a very lovely haiku midwestmutt!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on June 24, 2020, 03:16:12 PM
Yeethaw_Gang, I like this very much! An unexpectedly dark take on the prompt. I think good art generally violates expectations in some way, great job.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on June 24, 2020, 03:25:57 PM
When the world grows dark,
after sunset ends the day.
Birth is the starlight.

I love me a good haiku. Very nice!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on June 24, 2020, 04:41:49 PM
Oooo Midwestmutt, well-crafted!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: yeethaw_gang on June 24, 2020, 10:28:52 PM
Thanks everyone! I had a lot of fun writing the poem, and especially doing the little background.

midwestmutt your poem is wonderful. I love me a good haiku, and I'm always a sucker for stars and space, even if mentioned briefly.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on June 25, 2020, 12:57:16 AM
Those are both lovely, and very suitable!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on June 25, 2020, 01:27:11 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 2: Growth

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Our second prompt of Growth is brought to us by none other than wavewright62!

Spoiler: show

Ingrid Pedersen has become a much-greater-effort hippie since the Rash came to Norway.  She was the one who instituted composting and other ways to increase food production in Dalsnes, but every year is still a struggle.

(https://i.imgur.com/rr2pXmU.png)


May all of your tomatoes grow as impressively as Ingrid's! Thanks very much to Wavewright for today's piece, and if any of you feel inspired by this prompt, feel free to share your own works down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: MollyVampiric on June 25, 2020, 02:05:40 AM
Woahhhh, Wave. That's really pretty. I love the 'much-greater-effort' joke!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on June 25, 2020, 06:44:18 AM
Lovely Art I see, very talented you are!

yeethaw, a quite unexpected, but equally fascinating take on that prompt. I would be thinking on babies and such...

midwestmutt, a great haiku!

Wave, another unexpected and fascinating approach! As on Birth, I would be thinking about a toddler... It seems that my thoughts are a lot human oriented... :)

Sorry for not contributing (yet) but I'm quite busy right now. Butter good, everybody!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on June 25, 2020, 09:33:33 AM
I identify with Ingrid, I've been doing some heavy-duty gardening. The dirty knees are a great touch, wave!

For the past 5 months or so I've been trying to write a daily haiku, here are some recent gardening-related ones by way of a secondary contribution on the growth theme, inspired by wave's lovely Ingrid:

warm day with showers
dig, rake, and level, plant seeds
squash many blackflies

shovel and rake soil
drop seeds in furrows, tamp down
hope for fall harvest

sudden summer heat
haul water to the garden
bright green shoots poke out
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on June 25, 2020, 11:07:05 AM
How did I miss that Haiku yesterday, midwestmutt!? Anyways, it´s really nice!

Wave this will definitly be my new headcanon XoX

And Vulpes, I think your Haikus fit the situation really well! I can practically see the scenes in front of my eyes...

I also didn´t expect the takes on these first two prompts the way they were, but I second Vulpes, art is supposed to be surprising, isn´t it? And both were amazing  :sparkle:
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on June 25, 2020, 12:01:45 PM
In my time of life,
one thing i know about growth:
it's never too late.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 25, 2020, 01:03:59 PM
Wave, great Ingrid! It’s suddenly quite different hen you have no one but yourselves to count on!

Wonderful haikus, midwestmutt and Vulpes!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on June 25, 2020, 04:54:59 PM
Ooo, more loverly haiku! Vulpes, the gardening brings out such a poetic frame of mind, doesn't it?  Midwestmutt, your growth one is sampler-worthy.

I forgot to mention on my image that it is based on the Rider-Waite tarot deck image for the Seven of Pentacles.  My favourite source lists this as Anxiety About Produce, wondering whether your hard work will bear fruit. 

Spoiler: wikipedia of this card • show
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seven_of_Coins (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seven_of_Coins)

I originally had more scrawny green tomatoes, but opted to make them more pentacle-ish.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on June 25, 2020, 05:27:08 PM
midwestmutt, this one´s even better!  XoX

And wave, that fits very well! I don´t know a whole lot about Tarot, so thanks for the source.  :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on June 26, 2020, 12:39:24 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 3: Smile

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For today's prompt of Smile, our piece is brought to us by our very own Róisín!

Spoiler: show
SMILE:

“Oh look, the baby wants to hold my hand!”
Cries Saku, as the tiny fingers close
Around his thumb. The little hand is strong.
For a baby, strangely so. He shivers, once.

But all seems well: a perfect little girl.
Her hair is silver, her sharp eyes are grey,
The grey of stormclouds. Strange, he thinks, how much,
Her slender form reminds him of a blade.

What is he thinking? She is just a babe!
But somewhere in the hollows of his mind
Some voice cries out, some knowledge must be seen.
What name would fit such an uncanny child?

And suddenly he knows. He knows and Sees.
She is the First. The magic that he feels
Flowing through fire and water, earth and air,
Now flows in life, in human flesh and bone.

Her name is Ensi. First in a long, long while
To live in magic. His first and only child,
She may yet save them all! Her fingers loosen.
He looks into her eyes. They share a smile.

My piece for ‘Smile’. Saku understands Ensi. Her name means ‘First’.


Thanks very much to Róisín for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post your works down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on June 26, 2020, 12:51:18 AM
Indeed, Róisín, I headcanon that the magical ability came from Saku's side of the family. (Although I wonder if he wanted a lot of children and didn't get them, for whatever reason.) Lovely.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on June 26, 2020, 02:48:04 AM
Thanks Wavewright! My headcanon for Saku is that he is a mage of the sensing/blessing/protecting kind, more passive/receptive than the kind that can use magic to actively fight. And that Ensi is more of the type that can actively wield her magic as a weapon. Dunno how it is in the Minnaverse, but in those our-world magic systems familiar to me there is quite a strong distinction between the two kinds, with the passive sort being far more common.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 26, 2020, 06:23:26 AM
Róisín, thank you for this lovely piece! It’s touching and describes well something that could very well be canon!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 26, 2020, 07:53:53 AM
Smile

He was always a happy child. As a baby he smiled early and often. As a toddler he was absolutely charming with his puff of bright red hair and emerging freckles. His outlook was always happily interested in everything, and he was full of expectation, always anticipating the best outcome. “Mom, what is this plant called? Why does it grow here? Why does it have such leaves?” His curiosity was endless.

Even when something unfortunate happened, he still saw some good in it. “Mom, my arm really really hurts! But now I know what it feels like to be stung by a bee!” “I didn’t know what I look like under my skin. Now I do! Does everyone look so red inside or is it because of my hair?”

I should have been more strict with him, told him off his foolhardy stunts. I should have made it clearer that things may go badly! But his questions always made me smile. Oh, it was impossible to stay mad at that child.

And now he’s lost in the Silent World! It’s all my fault! I should have raised him more careful! Will I ever see his precious smile again?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on June 26, 2020, 09:33:16 AM
I made you smile
Small things make me smile.
The big things leave me in awe.
Oh, a popcorn fart.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: yeethaw_gang on June 26, 2020, 09:55:17 AM
Róisín, have i gushed about how much I love your writing??? Because I do!! It's really good. Also is that a narrative poem I see before me?? That's amazing!!

Jitter, oh god oh my I can feel the panic. Absolutely riveting and a dark but rather interesting take on the prompt.

midwestmutt, okay yeah you made me laugh out loud. I did not expect that. Your haikus are always so well crafted!

Nothing from me today sorry, head empty no thoughts :(
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on June 26, 2020, 09:58:54 AM
So much awesomeness today!

Róisín, I really like your story! I love stories that focus on the Hotakainens backstory, and this sort of poem format is really nice! (that was a lot of use of the word "story in one sentence...)

midwestmutt, this Haiku sure made me smile, or rather laugh  ;D

And Jitter, your story is lovely too! And I know it´s a kinda sad one, but your description of toddler-Reynir was just too adorable, I had to draw him immediately. So here is smiling kid-Reynir in that plant-situation you wrote about:  :reynir:

Smile

He was always a happy child. As a baby he smiled early and often. As a toddler he was absolutely charming with his puff of bright red hair and emerging freckles. His outlook was always happily interested in everything, and he was full of expectation, always anticipating the best outcome. “Mom, what is this plant called? Why does it grow here? Why does it have such leaves?” His curiosity was endless.

(https://i.postimg.cc/Z5Ccf6Dm/toddler-Reynir-Smile-Mirasol.jpg)

The plant I, at least tried to, draw is called "sheep sorrel" or "Hundasúra" and grows in Iceland, accoring to google. The source I used said that Icelandic kids often eat the leaves as a snack while playing outside, I thought that was kinda fitting.
source: https://guidetoiceland.is/best-of-iceland/plants-in-iceland
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on June 26, 2020, 10:10:22 AM
Wonderful, Roísín! Brava!

Jitter, I like the idea that Reynir's mum might at some level blame herself, and that would go some way to explain her wild reaction on his return - all that suppressed guilt boiling out as blame.

Midwestmutt, that was... unexpected. As I noted the other day, the essence of art is surprise. And I certainly did smile!

Wave, the bonus info on tarot is much appreciated - I think I must've run across it at some time because that pose you drew evoked something, but I couldn't figure out what.

Awwww, Mirasol, that is one cute Reynir!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 26, 2020, 11:08:17 AM
Oo Mirasol, thank you for the lovely illustration! Just as I imagined him!

Yeethaw, I hope it wasn’t that dark, after all he did come back! Although now of course he’s gone again, but at least he now has more experience, he has some magic, and his parents know the people he’s with. I’m sure they still worry, but hopefully much less!

Vulpes it doesn’t say if it’s his mum or dad :)

Midwestmutt haha, you did make me smile :)

:reynir: :reynir: :reynir: :reynir: :reynir: :reynir: :reynir: :reynir: :reynir:
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on June 26, 2020, 11:19:01 AM
Thank you all for the compliments! And Midwestmutt, that was a fine haiku! Jitter, I love what you have done with Reynir and his mum, and we have sheep’s sorrel here. It is a useful medicinal plant as well as a food plant, and pretty! And the picture is lovely!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 26, 2020, 11:19:28 AM
Btw Mirasol, the same plant grows in Finland too. We call them suolaheinä, “salty grass” (and also snack on them when small). The flowers are very good, the leaves are usually a bit smaller in comparison. But I recognized it from the drawing :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 26, 2020, 11:20:43 AM
Thank you Róisín!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on June 26, 2020, 11:36:15 AM
Thank you everyone for the compliments! I actually don´t know whether sheep´s sorrel grows in Germany too, but probably not since I never came across it before. But thanks for the information, that´s really interesting! And Finnish just has awesome names for everything, doesn´t it?  :'D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on June 26, 2020, 11:55:43 AM
Wow, today we have a larger list of awesomeness to talk about!

Róisín, that's truly amazing! I agree that it should be canon :) Let's hope Minna takes a little time to read this thread.

Jitter, that's also a great short piece, that fits so well in Reynir character. Well done! I love the way you take those secondary characters and bring them to life! :)

Midwestmutt, another great (and funny) haiku! It seems that I'll have to reserve a shelf in the next Minnion bookshelf to put your haiku collection next to Jitter's.

Mirasol, a fine drawing! I loved the sheep detail!

Also sorry for not contributing yet, but I must focus on my prompt... You know, 10% inspiration, 90% perspiration...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on June 26, 2020, 07:11:42 PM
Vulpes it doesn’t say if it’s his mum or dad :)

Ah, you got me, falling into sexist stereotypes about which parent would take that role!  :'D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on June 27, 2020, 12:24:17 AM
Mirasol, sheep sorrel does grow in Germany, mostly as a field weed. I think the name was something like kleine sauerampfer? Not sure, I only know a little German, and that mostly the names of plants, don’t know if I have the spelling right? I think kleine means small or little? And the leaves, like most sorrels, usually have that little wing at the base, giving it a sort of arrowhead shape. That was such a pretty drawing!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on June 27, 2020, 01:03:56 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 4: Crawl

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Our fourth prompt of Crawl is brought to us by Phocena!

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“Lalli!” Onni yelled, his voice ringing through the hallway. “Lalli, come out – I know you’re in there!”

Lalli groaned under his breath as he turned towards the wall, wedging himself deeper under the bed.

Ever since Onni turned 17, he was always trying to ‘help’ as much as he could, which usually meant dragging Lalli along every place he and Tuuri went. That was two years ago, and his cousin had somehow gotten even more overbearing after obtaining his promotion at Keuruu military base. Now Onni had Lalli tightly under his wing, with no plans to let him out anytime soon.

The door to Lalli’s sleeping quarters opened firmly and in marched Onni, his anger tinged with disappointment at Lalli’s predictable rebellion. “Why, you little weirdo – what are you doing under there!? Well, it doesn’t matter. The junior scouts want you to be at the commencement today. I expect to see you there”, Onni commanded, summoning as much authority as he could in his 19 year old voice. But it felt pointless, like talking to oneself in a seemingly empty room. “I don’t understand why you aren’t enthusiastic about this!”

Slowly, Onni kneeled onto the floor, sighing, and Lalli prepared to defend himself from being yanked out under the bed.

“I know what you’re going through is hard. But we have a chance now. Don’t you remember where we were before they took us in? We could be dead now. Or worse! You should be glad that we’re safe behind these walls. Grandma would want to see us safe. Grandma-”

“Mrrh!” came the voice from under the bed.

Onni stood back up, thinking hard on what to say next. But no matter how hard he tried to speak, he couldn’t get past the knot that had suddenly been tied across his chest. “Don’t sleep in too late”, he finally said.

And then Onni was gone. Lalli listened closely for a couple moments, feeling his cousin’s footsteps fading into silence.

Why did Onni always care so much about these things? If only Onni had been with Grandma more, then he would know what magic was really like. Lalli missed the days in the woods away from the nosy townspeople, when he could ignore everything and just focus on the forest around him. Just him, grandma, and the sky above, where Lalli could listen to the spirits weaving through the trees. They were faint, almost like the wind, but Ensi told him that one day he could to see them as they truly are. Then, once he had become powerful enough, he could guide the lost or malevolent spirits to rest.

These days the spirits only served to optimize his military reports: a hint of danger there, safety here, anything to help fill out paperwork faster. The military didn’t seem to appreciate his skill. They were always telling him how to do his job, with all this writing and scheduled wake up times, and why did they even give him sheets to fill out when he couldn’t even see them in the dark?

Guiding the lost spirits to rest. Above all, Lalli missed his family, the gatherings, the bakery that used to give out fresh bread every morning, or at least as often as it could. And now? Being a mage felt so difficult, with all the scouting duties he had to fulfill pitted against a river of memories. Onni had promised to help him with his magic training, which would work out, hopefully. Meanwhile, he would keep going. He would continue working for Keuruu, night by night by night. He would eventually get better at scouting and at magic. Then somehow…

And with that last thought, Lalli crawled out from underneath the bed.


Thanks very much to Phocena for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post what you've made down below.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on June 27, 2020, 03:11:16 AM
Young Reynir, and now young Lalli, both doing their best.  Sunshine and moonshadow, two very different ways to come to magic.
Thank you both!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 27, 2020, 05:01:48 AM
Phocena, thank you! A great story and pictures both of them so well.

Vulpes, to be fair, Mom is mentioned in the story as the person Reynir is asking his questions. But the thinker may just remember listening in to a conversation. In retrospect I should have put Dad on one and Mom on the other. When I hopefully get around to putting these together in the Archive I may change that.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on June 27, 2020, 05:22:30 AM
phocena, that's a very interesting take on the subject! Well done!

I keep being positively surprised by the unexpected ways each person finds to approach these themes. We are so lucky to have such talented people with us. :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on June 27, 2020, 07:29:53 AM
Phocena, I second what Grey said! And as I stated before, I love Hotakainen-backstory. ;D I especially like the way you wrote Onni. :onni:

Mirasol, sheep sorrel does grow in Germany, mostly as a field weed. I think the name was something like kleine sauerampfer? Not sure, I only know a little German, and that mostly the names of plants, don’t know if I have the spelling right? I think kleine means small or little? And the leaves, like most sorrels, usually have that little wing at the base, giving it a sort of arrowhead shape. That was such a pretty drawing!

Oh, I actually recognize the name, if not the plant itself! (note to self: this is why you´re supposed to do the research before posting. :-[) You have the spelling right I think, just "Sauerampfer" has to be spelled with a capital letter since it´s a noun (that´s such a weird rule...) and yes, "klein" means small. "kleine Sauerampfer" would mean "small sour-sorrel".
Thanks again! :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on June 27, 2020, 08:41:06 AM
Life moves at a crawl.
'Til you're old when all speeds by.
2020--NOT!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on June 27, 2020, 10:49:19 AM
Midwestmutt, I feel your haiku! Who was that English poet who wrote: ‘The more we live, more brief appear/Our life’s succeeding stages./ A day, to childhood, seems a year,/ And years like passing ages.’ And then later in the poem ‘Why, as we near the falls of death,/ Feel we the current swifter?’.

Mirasol, thanks for the info! The name makes sense, since it is the smallest of the sorrels, and is certainly sour enough to deserve the name. It tastes like lemony spinach.

It always amuses me, when I am teaching bushcraft classes and showing people wild foods, to see their expressions when they taste this plant, usually considerable surprise followed by delight, especially from the children!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: JoB on June 27, 2020, 11:53:54 AM
Mirasol, sheep sorrel does grow in Germany, mostly as a field weed. I think the name was something like kleine sauerampfer?
Yup, sheep sorrel = Rumex acetosella = Kleiner Sauerampfer (https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kleiner_Sauerampfer). Though I have to say that the drawing reminds me more of Rumex acetosa (common sorrel, Wiesen-Sauerampfer (https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wiesen-Sauerampfer)).

And we couldn't get rid of'em if we tried, if I read the relevant parts of those Wikipedia pages correctly. :o

just "Sauerampfer" has to be spelled with a capital letter since it´s a noun (that´s such a weird rule...)
It's a compound noun and both parts get Rashed capitalized, so "a small sheep sorrel" actually is "ein kleiner Kleiner Sauerampfer". ;)

(Q: How do you find out whether a mathematician is famous, or even very famous, among mathematicians?
A: The famous ones have stuff named after them, even though few mathematicians name their discoveries after themselves from the get-go. The very famous ones have their German colleagues put that in lowercase, like a proper adjective: Riemannsche Vermutung, but abelsche Gruppe.)

(Edit to weed out invasive typo)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on June 27, 2020, 12:23:30 PM
Midwestmutt, I feel your haiku! Who was that English poet who wrote: ‘The more we live, more brief appear/Our life’s succeeding stages./ A day, to childhood, seems a year,/ And years like passing ages.’ And then later in the poem ‘Why, as we near the falls of death,/ Feel we the current swifter?’.

Mirasol, thanks for the info! The name makes sense, since it is the smallest of the sorrels, and is certainly sour enough to deserve the name. It tastes like lemony spinach.

It always amuses me, when I am teaching bushcraft classes and showing people wild foods, to see their expressions when they taste this plant, usually considerable surprise followed by delight, especially from the children!
And always remember the longer you live, the sooner you bloody well die.--Isn't it Grand Boys--a very Irish song.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on June 27, 2020, 01:39:01 PM
Yup, sheep sorrel = Rumex acetosella = Kleiner Sauerampfer (https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kleiner_Sauerampfer). Though I have to say that the drawing reminds me more of Rumex acetosa (common sorrel, Wiesen-Sauerampfer (https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wiesen-Sauerampfer)).

Well, I tried  :'D


It's a compound noun and both parts get Rashed capitalized, so "a small sheep sorrel" actually is "ein kleiner Kleiner Sauerampfer". ;)

(Q: How do you find out whether a mathematician is famous, or even very famous, among mathematicians?
A: The famous ones have stuff named after them, even though few mathematicians name their discoveries after themselves from the get-go. The very famous ones have their German colleagues put that in lowercase, like a proper adjective: Riemannsche Vermutung, but abelsche Gruppe.)

One day will come the day where I understand the grammar of my own native language. Today is not the day...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on June 27, 2020, 02:30:02 PM
Phocena, that's a very true-to-Lalli scene. Such a hard road to travel! No wonder he hides under beds.

Midwestmutt, your haiku always make me smile!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on June 27, 2020, 02:31:41 PM
Heh, I know, and sing, Isn’t It Grand. Funny song. Though I learned it in Outback Australia. Along with The municipal Dunny  Cart,  sung to the tune of Ghost Riders in the Sky.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on June 27, 2020, 02:43:11 PM
Had a sudden image float across my mind and tried to capture it:

Mikkel cursed under his breath. He did not have the build for this nonsense! Why had he insisted on this mad errand? He lifted his head, looking ahead at the bobbing backsides of his companions making their way quickly and quietly along the half-collapsed passage. His backpack caught on a beam, reminding him that he was the one carrying nearly all the equipment. He sighed, knowing he had no choice, wanted no other choice, but to stay with this haphazard family he had adopted. He unhooked the pack, tried to make himself as small as possible, and crawled on.

Edited to... well, edit. Made it a drabble.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 27, 2020, 03:02:19 PM
Vulpes, how sweet of him! I kind of think of him like that too. He loves to hate the stunts the four kids around him pull.

Midwestmutt, thank you for another haiku to make us smile!

I'm thinking of the opposite end of life here :) Or two lives to be exact.

Crawl

Oh Mielikki help me with these two! I know they are too young to communicate, or to plan for that matter. But I swear they crawl to opposite directions every single time! Surely it can’t be just coincidence? And how is it possible to crawl so incredibly fast on such tiny plump little hands and feet?

“Jukka, no, you can’t touch that! It will sting! Juha, don’t push the…” *CRASH*

Breath in deep. Repeat: twins are a double blessing. Twins are a double blessing. Twins are a... seriously, if Hilja doesn’t return from her trip soon, I will put them into the firewood basket. With a lid on top!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on June 27, 2020, 03:10:37 PM
Midwestmutt, once again nice Haiku that made me smile too! I´m running out of words to describe it...

Vulpes your story is so sweet, and Jitter, I laughed out loud at yours. :'D For the best of everyone involved I hope Hilja returens soon...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on June 27, 2020, 03:22:26 PM
Ha, Jitter, that's great!  :))

Interesting that you and Mirasol both used "sweet" to describe my little snapshot. Not what I had in my mind, but now that I re-read it, okay, I guess he's being sweet. Thanks for the insight.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 27, 2020, 04:13:39 PM
I first thought she’d threaten to put them into a bag that hangs from a roofbeam, but every way I tried to write it shortly and naturally, it looked like she was planning to hang the kids in the other way  O_O
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: phocena on June 27, 2020, 04:28:26 PM
EEEEE... so many new posts! It's like christmas morning!

midwestmutt, you are so good at capturing everything so succinctly (and with lots of wit I may add)!

Vulpes, Nice to see Mikkel cares about the rest of the group! And admitting to himself that he depends of them is really sweet.

Jitter, that was such an endearing interpretation of crawl! I couldn't have possibly imagined how dark it could've been. Haha, reminds me of how hard it was to care for me as a toddler. My parents told me I was running at 10 months... good thing there wasn't two of me >:D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 27, 2020, 05:56:18 PM
Yeah, I’m a mother of two, so... at least they aren’t twins!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on June 27, 2020, 07:48:57 PM
My five are more spread out, but they kept me busy! Frantic! They are all grown now, in their forties and fifties.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on June 27, 2020, 09:26:09 PM
Heh, I know, and sing, Isn’t It Grand. Funny song. Though I learned it in Outback Australia. Along with The municipal Dunny  Cart,  sung to the tune of Ghost Riders in the Sky.
I wish I could hear that. Sounds hilarious!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on June 27, 2020, 10:43:45 PM
I learned the two songs as part of a set from an old miner in a ghost town in the Snowies. We were up there reviving an old gold mine, which was a tough job but fun. His mind tended to turn to death, since he was in his nineties at the time, and we were working in a mine that had killed his father some sixty years before and was thoroughly haunted. There were several funny or defiant songs about death, plus some utterly scurrilous ones such as ‘Eskimo Nell’ and ‘Cats on the Rooftop’. Old times.....
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on June 28, 2020, 12:29:21 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 5: Walk

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Today's prompt of Walk is brought to us by Keitto-Kettu!

Spoiler: show

Kettu's piece is a song! Click the link to listen to it.

https://soundcloud.com/user-414885552/chapter-break-song-walk/s-SuPhzoVik1F


Thanks very much to Keitto-Kettu for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to share what you've made down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on June 28, 2020, 01:53:27 AM
Keitto-Kettu, this catches well the rhythm of walking! Good. A worthy companion to all the excellent work here.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on June 28, 2020, 02:19:59 AM
dear me, so long ago

before you were grown
before you could know
what life would hold
where you would go

the field where you'd walk
in wintery frost
the woods you'd get lost
exploring at dusk

the horrors you'd meet
between wonders so sweet
and moments of peace
amidst terrible things

dear me, so recently
so joyful in your naivety
somehow you were me
and yet, not exactly

i wouldn't return
not a day unlearn
not a scar un-earn
not rescind a word

because you see, dear me
it is not you or me
instead it is we
who've been through everything
and become who we
are meant to be
and to me, to me
that's worth every damn thing

yes to me, to me
that is everything

--

A little poem from Tuuri's perspective, post-infection, in a quiet moment of reflection. (whoops, that wasn't meant to rhyme. Oh well.)

hi, I've been watching for the last few days but haven't had much time to respond, thus i must leave a general reply because there are too many nice things to comment on. But to Wavewright, Vulpes, Midwestmutt, Róisín, Jitter, Mirasol, Phocena, and Keitto-Kettu, lovely work, all of you! It makes me happy. (I hope I didn't miss anyone)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on June 28, 2020, 02:54:33 AM
Your poem feels very true. And thank you!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: JoB on June 28, 2020, 04:20:18 AM
Well, I tried  :'D
(With my level of of expertise in botany, I could easily be wrong about that. The "humanity is now at war with the kingdom (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kingdom_(biology)) I insulted" level of "wrong".)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on June 28, 2020, 09:48:57 AM
Keitto-Kettu, that's a nice relaxed, swaggery walk you've created.

I thought about who might walk that way, and recalled the suggestion (by Keep Looking? Jitter?) to consider minor characters, and decided that Gunnar looked to have the right attitude. Another drabble:

Dalsnes had been lucky to be cut off from the city. Once they understood the risk from small mammals, there were no more outbreaks, and they suffered out the winter in their well-defended valley. Now it was spring, and they had agreed that Gunnar should make a cautious trip to the city. As he walked down to the dock, he realised how trapped he had felt. For the first time in months, he wasn't rushing to a crisis, or plodding through the snow. He was strolling to his boat, with a relaxed rhythm that was close to a swagger.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thorny on June 28, 2020, 12:33:53 PM
I'm just occasionally lurking here, but wanted to say that I'm much enjoying doing so.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on June 28, 2020, 01:06:15 PM
Oh, scottishnottish, I meant to say, nice poem! Haunting and true to Tuuri.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: muidole on June 28, 2020, 05:55:18 PM
I'm just occasionally lurking here, but wanted to say that I'm much enjoying doing so.

Likewise. Despite mostly lurking, I think it's cool how the fandom is able to organize and create such fun and creative content.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on June 28, 2020, 07:59:06 PM
Another great day in chapterbreakfillerland!

Keittu-Kettu, that's a wonderful soundtrack for their walk!

Vulpes, a nice take on another secondary character that could very well be the start of a fanfic!

scottishnottish, this "little poem" is simply fantastic! I'm out of words to tell how much I love it! :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on June 29, 2020, 12:34:11 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 6: Playtime

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Today's prompt of Playtime is brought to us by MollyVampiric!

Spoiler: show
(This takes place a year before the rash)

It was a bitter cold day in Finland. No one wanted to be out in such dreary weather, which, of course, made it a perfect day for Kirsten to go out with her mother.

Kirsten loved these days with every bit of her four-year-old heart. These were the only times when her mother was home. Combined with the fact that there was no crowd around, these days were the best of her entire life.

Daycare was fine, but it would never compare to the feeling of her mother’s warm hands, or a brush running through her hair while she was sang to, or a snowball fight. The crowd itself was overwhelming, grating her nerves like sandpaper on skin, so she cherished the cold days. Even when her mother made her wear that dreaded, stuffy snow coat, she never argued.

The snow coat was well used on her days out, making snowmen and snow angels. Having dragon breath when she blew out into the cold made her laugh endlessly. While all this was fun, there was something even more exciting they did on these days. They shopped! “To get the work done” her mother had said as an excuse, as if Kirsten understood. The only thing she knew was that she absolutely loved shopping.

From grocery stores, to clothing stores, to the occasional ‘for-fun’ antique or toy store, Kirsten loved all of it. The amount of choices made it an adventure; every object had a story. Every torn pair of jeans was battle armor, every toy with dirt on it was a hidden relic of a past world, every wet stick was a shiny sword.

No one ever minded or noticed when she inspected an old toy, building a world of her own. She liked to think it was because of who she was. Her short height and her quiet voice made her invisible. Her icy blue eyes could shoot lasers. Her platinum blonde, curly hair was a shield.

But no hero was without a sword. Her problem was that she couldn’t find a fitting weapon for herself. Thus, she begged her mother to enter every interesting store she spotted on the street. So far, she had not had luck, but that didn’t matter if she could find something in the shop they stood in front of.

It was a warm, quaint building by the name of “Small World,” advertising on the window that it sold antiques, junk, and knick-knacks. Kirsten had fallen in love with it the moment she saw it, and had nearly cried as she waited for her mother to push open the door.

Rushing inside, she was greeted by the comforting smell of wood, an overhead light that didn’t make her want to cry when she looked at it, and odd little trinkets on every cramped shelf. She adored the shop already, and she found herself drawn around the aisles. She carefully ran around the room, inspecting the shelves as she went. Some objects looked irresistible, others passable, but then she came to a stop at the toy shelf.

Toys had never been particularly appealing to her. They all were made for a purpose, and only ever did a few things. How was she supposed to make a world out of something that already had a use rooted in the real world? She scanned the boxes in front of her, even searching through some of the boxes, but nothing was eye-catching enough.

Suddenly, she spotted it. Sitting all alone was a small, multicolored box of its own. It was filthy, with muted colors. If objects could look sad, this one did. Inexplicably, Kirsten found it immediately alluring.

Her tiny fingers reached for the fascinating little cube. At this point her vision had tunneled, and all she could think about was what this thing was. She was no longer listening to her mother or the woman at the counter she was talking to, or looking at the toys in the other aisles.

The colors on it were all mixed up, but even then, they were pretty. Rather than chipping colors or cheap stickers like all the other toys in the shelf, this one object had beautifully coated paint that had just faded slightly. She twisted the toy lightly, watching delightedly as it turned with her every move.

Then it came to her. This would be her weapon, her sword! The one and only, a magnificent contraption that only she understood the meaning to. She was a genius who would fight artfully to the end. She was a warrior, and now she had a weapon to prove it!

Quietly, she walked over to her mother, tugging her sleeve gently. When she looked down, Kirsten quietly held both her hands up with the Rubik’s cube. She felt a rush of nervousness, quickly shifted her eyes down. Her bottom lip betrayed her, trembling furiously.

If she had a weapon of this strength, if she was an artful genius, no one at her daycare would dare laugh at her again. They wouldn’t talk to her, let alone talk about how she was ‘different’ like she wasn’t even there. She would be regarded as a soldier rather than ‘high-functioning.’

She could feel tears rolling down her cheeks, but she didn’t dare make a sound as her mother sat down next to her on the floor, pulling the Rubik’s cube out from her tight grasp.

Kirsten sniffed loudly, daring to look at her mother. Her mother simply looked back at her with a small smile, brushing a curly lock from her face. “What do you want to show me?” she spoke in the soft voice that always made Kirsten feel like she was at home, being tucked into bed.

“I w-was going to save the world,” Kirsten whispered, leaning into her mother’s hand.

“Why don’t we still do that sweety? Let’s go outside, and you can save me,” her mother replied quietly. She stood up, still holding the cube, and quickly tipped the cashier.

Kirsten wiped the last of the tear tracks off her face, reaching for her already beloved weapon. Grabbing it tightly, she saw another item in her mother’s hands. A permanent marker. Her confusion must have been clear, because her mother explained, “It’s yours now, so you should write your name on it.”

Gently leading Kirsten’s hand, her mother helped her write her name. It was a simple, if not somewhat messy ‘Kirsten – with love’ written on a small red block.

Handing the marker back to the cashier, her mother asked, “Who are we saving the world from today?”

Kirsten smiled, knowing exactly what she wanted to do.

“Trolls.”


The sun shone brightly down on their camp this morning. Lalli, as usual, sat at the edge of their area, inspecting anything that caught his eyes.

He was bored. Infuriatingly, maddeningly bored. He had finished his rounds earlier, and had entirely run out of things to examine in their tiny camp site. Even if he could understand it, he didn’t want to listen to anyone’s irritating chatter.

He didn’t feel ready enough to scout, especially if he were risking running into one of the huge trolls they met earlier. Or maybe something even worse, he shuddered. It was better to have backup than nothing, he guessed.

He couldn’t sit there and do nothing, though, so he decided to check their supplies. Reaching around for the first bag he could find, he pulled out the first thing he grabbed.

It was that multicolored trinket he’d picked up earlier. (Emil had called it a Rubox, or something like that. Lalli didn’t exactly trust his judgement, though, so he hadn’t listened.)

He inspected it closely, wondering how a thing like that had lasted so long. It looked like nothing but a toy. Twisting it carefully, he tried matching the colors (Mikkel had suggested that one. Not much better than Emil, but he didn’t have any other ideas).

Fifteen minutes had passed by the time he got frustrated with it. He threw it down on the ground, scowling down at it. As he looked down, he noticed there was some light discoloration on one of the red blocks. That was kind of to be expected, but Lalli inspected it anyway.

Lalli nearly dropped the block in shock when he saw Finnish scrawled across the block.

‘Kirsten – with love’


Thanks very much to MollyVampiric for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to share what you've made down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Grade E cat on June 29, 2020, 02:09:48 AM
As someone who was super-happy when the old Hotakainen boat made a cameo appearance in Tuuri and Onni's childhood yard, I'm liking that story a lot. I also happen to have encountered a metal Rubik's cube sometime in the first decade of my life, and it being one of those would explain a lot.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on June 29, 2020, 08:49:13 AM
MollyVampiric, your story inspired me to do a little sketch as an illustration for it! 

(https://1drv.ms/u/s!AsSnHPIBASO_pRambgQL36NrB0JP)
(I hope I did it right and you all will be able to see the image... if it’s not working I’ll leave an actual link)
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AsSnHPIBASO_pRambgQL36NrB0JP

I finally caught up! I read everything (and listened to everything) and all the works people did here are wonderful! It is so interesting to see all of them, to see how amazingly different and beautiful, because of the difference, they are! :))
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Alkia on June 29, 2020, 09:30:59 AM
I totally agree with what Annuil said-- i just read through all the prompts and they're fantastic!! So much creativity, and it's only been 6 days!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on June 29, 2020, 09:41:28 AM
Assimilated!
A square peg in it's square hole.
Let your mind run wild.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on June 29, 2020, 09:55:16 AM
Hi, I´m here again!  :) I was busy learning for a classtest yesterday, but now I have free time again. And great, because now I could catch up on so many cool things:

Keitto-Kettu, that´s such a nice song! I can really see a walking cicle animated to it in my head. Makes me wish I had the patience to animate anything...

scottishnottish, I love your poem! When I realized it was about Tuuri it got even better! and because I think I never got the chance to tell you elsewhere before, let me just gush about how much I love your poetry in general right here real quick...

Vulpes, I can only second Grey on that one! It really seems like the start of an interesting story.

And now to todays posts:

MollyVampiric, I just have to say I love your writing style. And this little backstory to Lallis new companion is so sweet! I agree with Kirsten, what worlds can you create with a toy that already has a purpose.

And lastly Annuil, where I sadly have to say that I can´t see the picture. But when I tried to quote your post, I think I saw where the problem is: I don´t know on what programm you uploaded it, but to enbed images here, the link must end with "jpg" or "png". I can only speak for postimages.com, but there it always gives you multiple links, and the one that is called "direct link" has the right ending.

Oh and look, while I was typing, midwestmutt posted too! With once again a beautifully crafted Haiku!

(here I was, thinking the English language had endless possibilities in words to express how amazing you find something, and now I finished this one post and nearly ran out... So I will just settle with seconding Annuil and Alkia with their posts for ending this one. You people are all so talented! XoX)

Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on June 29, 2020, 10:04:04 AM
Annuil, yes, the actual link is working! :)) That´s a beautiful illustration, I love that the cube is the only colorful detail! Also you can draw hands really well, which is something I always admire about people. I really can´t...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on June 29, 2020, 10:21:33 AM
Yepeee! I’m super happy that it worked, because usually I’m so bad at all these links! Thank you, Mirasol!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 29, 2020, 10:32:05 AM
Hello all and thank you for amazing contributions! I can't gush enough about all of them, but I will say that MollyVampiric I was so delighted when I realized what the toy was :) Kirsten became Tuulikki's grandmother, right?

I loved every other piece too! And Annuil, the link works fine and I see the illustration.

One more thing, Gunnar is one of my fave side characters! Vulpes please write about how it went for him? Did he try for Bergen??
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on June 29, 2020, 02:59:23 PM
Hey, it´s me again, for the third time today. :'D
I also got inspired by MollyVampiric´s story, and Annuil´s illustration, so I drew something too:

From grocery stores, to clothing stores, to the occasional ‘for-fun’ antique or toy store, Kirsten loved all of it. The amount of choices made it an adventure; every object had a story. Every torn pair of jeans was battle armor, every toy with dirt on it was a hidden relic of a past world, every wet stick was a shiny sword.

No one ever minded or noticed when she inspected an old toy, building a world of her own. She liked to think it was because of who she was. Her short height and her quiet voice made her invisible. Her icy blue eyes could shoot lasers. Her platinum blonde, curly hair was a shield.
(https://i.postimg.cc/6QKTJvJ7/Playtime-Mirasol.jpg)

I drew Kirsten! You could say it´s the other end of the scene Annuil drew. I also tried to do the "only grey colors exept for the cube (and Kirstens imagination)"-thing, but as you can see... there´s kinda too much color for it to work to begin with. Also I added dragons, because dragons are awesome.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on June 29, 2020, 04:20:18 PM
Yay! I love the imaginary cape! And the dragons fit there very well  ;D
I should add the words on one of the red squares ;)

...

There you are!
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AsSnHPIBASO_pWfIn0Uz0EfYHJ05
Sorry, a regular link again.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 29, 2020, 06:22:11 PM
Content warning: snakes

Playtime

Joni was looking for his daughter. She had wandered off from the home garden. She had just promised him she would stay in the yard, and now she was gone again!

“Sointu! Sointu, love, where are you?” No answer. Walking farther from the garden Joni grew apprehensive. The girl seemed to be fascinated with the craggy rocks to the east of the village. Joni had told her numerous times that it was dangerous to go there alone. She always answered, that there are no trolls or beasts there. But how would she know? She was just a little girl!

Admittedly, there hadn’t been any attacks so near the village for many years, but still. Besides, grosslings weren’t the only danger. What if she fell and broke a leg? She could be crippled for life! Or even die of the complications! Joni sighed, thinking about the health care of his youth. No one needed to fear a simple wound then! Now there was word of some people being real noitas, who could do actual magic. But none of them here, at Kaijatsaari, or any of the western Saimaa islands. If they were real, maybe some would eventually end up coming here too? Sometimes Joni was surprised to find himself contemplating the possibility that magic, or spirits, or the old gods existed. What nonsense! We are on our own! On the other hand, 14 years ago the idea of a troll was nonsense...

He was approaching the crags now. And yeah, there was Sointu, among the rocks! “Sointu! What have I told you? Why are you here again? You know it’s dangerous!”
“Oh, hi dad! They only call me when it’s safe! You don’t need to worry!”
“Call? What are you talking about?” Joni was suddenly alarmed. There had been a few weird attacks on the islands, and some people were saying there was a näkki around. Usually a näkki lured its victims into water, but maybe there were other, similar creatures?
Sick with worry, Joni continued slowly towards his daughter. “Honey, listen carefully. Come to me right now! Please, come to dad!”
“Aww dad, it’s their playtime, and they asked me to join in! I don’t want to go yet!”
“Playtime? What are you talking about? You must...”

Joni stepped behind his daughter, and saw who she was playing with. There were six, no, seven adders, slithering about on the rocks and his daughters lap. The zig zag pattern on their backs confirmed them as the venomous creatures they were, but their movements seemed... friendly? A couple were swaying their heads in front of Sointu, and another two looked like they were caressing her arms. Joni knew he should be terrified, but somehow the entire scene seemed very right.
“Don’t worry dad! They know you are my father. You can come closer!” The snakes were watching his every move, but still the feeling was relaxed. Well then, I suppose there is something in this noita thing after all. Probably comes from her mother’s side though. We have always been very boring.

Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: MollyVampiric on June 29, 2020, 07:48:31 PM
Annuil and Mirasol, I'm so glad y'all were inspired by my story! Both of you have made beautiful drawings.

Midwestmutt, your haiku ability is through the roof.

Jitter, I like your writing style.

Spoiler: show
(Anyone else get that feeling when you're writing a reply where you wanna write an exclamation mark after every statement but it feels weird to write every sentence with one? Idek, I just wish I could send good vibes through my screen to all of you.)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on June 29, 2020, 08:37:37 PM
What delights we have today!  Unfortunately, I can't see one of them, Annuil's link?  It says I don't have permission to view the OneDrive.   :-\
Two amazing stories on the Playtime riff, though - Jitter and MollyVampiric, I love them both.  I'm a sucker for a good origin story.
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Probably comes from her mother’s side though. We have always been very boring.
 
pfffft

Midwestmutt, you've got your haiku groove happening and I appreciate your craft!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on June 29, 2020, 08:41:45 PM
More wonderful creativity! MollyVampiric, having Kirsten imagine a Rubik's cube as a sword is very clever. Annuil and Mirasol, those are great bookend illustrations - teamwork!  :)  How do you come up with so many wonderfully lateral haiku, midwest? Superb. Jitter, a lovely vignette as always. I agree with wave, the bit about being boring is hilarious. Thanks for the various positive comments on my snapshot of Gunnar. I might explore his further ocean-going adventures, but right now I'm thinking more about the Hotakainen boat - Grade E cat, you may get another boat cameo if I can get this out of my head.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on June 29, 2020, 08:59:45 PM
(Anyone else get that feeling when you're writing a reply where you wanna write an exclamation mark after every statement but it feels weird to write every sentence with one? Idek, I just wish I could send good vibes through my screen to all of you.)

Oh man, I feel that all the time. Good vibes to all of you! MollyVampiric your story was lovely and made me smile. And Mirasol, what a nice drawing to accentuate it! Jitter, I started reading yours with intense dread but ended with immense relief, very nice. Vulpes, your vignette made me giggle. And Midwestmutt your haikus are so much fun.

And Róisín, Vulpes, thegreyarea, and Mirasol, thank you all so much! Glad I could capture Tuuri's spirit. I really connected with her final conversation with Reynir--the fact that despite all that had gone wrong, she had no regrets. I've tried to consistently remind myself lately that failure is all a part of the journey of becoming ourselves.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on June 30, 2020, 12:49:48 AM
These are all brilliant! I especially liked the one with the snake-mage. It has long been my headcanon that snake venom is poisonous to grosslings, and I have used the concept in several of my fics, mostly the ‘Far to the South’ tales, in which I have such things as a snake guarding Warri while he works his land magic, or the coast watcher/mage explaining that part of the reason why Tasmania and its islands survived so well was the tiger snakes. Snakes will also enter into Patsy’s story, later. I like snakes, is it obvious?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on June 30, 2020, 01:28:30 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 7: Discover

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Today's prompt of Discover is brought to us by Mirasol!

Spoiler: show
Summary: The Skald who looks through Tuuri´s reports on the mission into silent Denmark finds something unusual.

Discover(ies)

He considered it a great honor that the Nordic Council assigned him to work on the assorting of the expedition´s reports. The research-mission into the silent world last winter had been the first of its kind, and quite successful at that, lots of ancient artifacts were brought home and only one casualty occured. He was anticipating looking into the certainly very interesting finds of the crew.

The first thing he picked up from the box filled with the mission´s papers was the neat, organized folder filled with the daily reports and protocols, written mainly by Miss Tuuri Hotakainen, as a tag on the first page indicated. She more than completed her work, he thought with relief when flipping through it. Each report was long, detailed and often supported by lots of photos showing important places, the crew’s daily routines and even some dead trolls or beasts. One or two of the pictures seemed to have been taken only for the sake of a nice souvenir, but most were for informative purposes. That was good. The Nordic Council would be happy, the photographic paper used in those polaroid cameras was expensive.

Every picture was accompanied by a short explanation written with a typewriter or in a pretty but a little childlike handwriting that had occasionally hearts instead of dots above the “I”. The texts came in Icelandic and sometimes Swedish, but most of the time both. The grammar was so correct that it was obvious Miss Hotakainen hadn´t been a native speaker in either of them, but there were almost no mistakes in the phrasing or vocabulary, which was impressive. Near fluency in two additional languages at such a young age, hadn´t she only been about twenty or so?

The entries after the tragedy that… kept Miss Hotakainen from continuing her work were more… chaotic, to say the least. Much shorter, and the handwriting of whoever took over was so tiny that it was barely readable. To top it off, it looked like they lost their typewriter alongside their researcher, so the entire reports were now scribbled by hand. He already dreaded the day he had to read (or rather decipher) them.

When he reached the back of the protocols, something sparked his interest. There was a bunch of pages that were held together by a paperclip and appeared to be a separate report on a different topic. In the same distinctive handwriting as in the beginning of the folder, these pages were titled with only one word (well, three words, in three languages, but after consulting his trusted dictionary he could tell it was the same word three times over): “Discoveries”.

He removed the clip, expecting to find what he was looking for, a list of important sightings or objects encountered in silent Denmark. Instead it contained a series of photos, each one marked with nothing but a date and apparently showing neither of those things. This was… confusing. There was no noticeable reason for why these photos had been taken. But this entire section looked so important and official. There, he could spot two different handwritings. Multiple people must have worked on it. Besides, Miss Hotakainen had been so responsible with the protocol, he was sure there was a sense behind whatever this was. But… what was it? Why had it been so substantial to use expensive photographing assets on images of a baby cat?

A selection of the “Discoveries”-photos:

(https://i.postimg.cc/C132XrCp/tunaJPEG.jpg)
(https://i.postimg.cc/nhh3Rt8Q/hairJPEG.jpg)
(https://i.postimg.cc/FR5gQM6p/tankJPEG.jpg)
(https://i.postimg.cc/W1x0GRsV/snowJPEG.jpg)


Thanks very much to Mirasol for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to share what you've made down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Grade E cat on June 30, 2020, 02:32:04 AM
Poor Reynir...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: GaelleDragons on June 30, 2020, 04:33:50 AM
Aww that is so sweet! The text is also a tiny bit sad, but the pictures are pure, raw cuteness x3

By the way, I haven't been very active here, but I'd like to thank everyone who has already participated, all your content is lovely. ^^
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on June 30, 2020, 05:38:17 AM
Kitty! Oh, these are so sweet and cute!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on June 30, 2020, 06:23:56 AM
(Anyone else get that feeling when you're writing a reply where you wanna write an exclamation mark after every statement but it feels weird to write every sentence with one? Idek, I just wish I could send good vibes through my screen to all of you.)
I get the feeling every time I write about these amazing contributions!

Molly, your Playtime is wonderful!
Annuil and Mirasol, your pics with the cube are fantastic, each on their own way! (and yes, dragons!)
Midwestmutt, I love to see you inspired! Thanks for giving us a fine haiku each day! Beware, we may grow used to that and start complaining the day you don't do one! :)
Jitter... I can't say how much I enjoy your amazing takes on those characters! You should really create a collection of them on AO3, and will definitively have a book of them the next time I draw a bookshelf!
Mirasol, todays's Discoveries is so sweet! Love it! Also, it seems that the passion for taking cats pictures survived the Rash!

(there you go, exclamation marks all around!)  ;D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on June 30, 2020, 07:45:23 AM
Yes, Mirasol, the text does leave a feeling of light sadness, but I love the idea of drawing the photos so much! You got so close to Minna’s style, beautiful!  :))

(What would’ve our lives been without exclamation marks!.. ;D)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Alkia on June 30, 2020, 09:46:04 AM
Awwww, Mirasol, I love the text-image combination! and the drawings turned out super well (so did the writing of course, but I am a sucker for adorable Kitty art XD)!!

(also, I agree, exclamation marks are the best, even if its very hard to not overuse them. a new punctuation mark that sends those good vibes is needed)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on June 30, 2020, 11:28:48 AM
What delights we have today!  Unfortunately, I can't see one of them, Annuil's link?  It says I don't have permission to view the OneDrive.   :-\
Two amazing stories on the Playtime riff, though - Jitter and MollyVampiric, I love them both.  I'm a sucker for a good origin story. 
pfffft

Midwestmutt, you've got your haiku groove happening and I appreciate your craft!
Thank you. My muse seems to have finally awoken from winter hibernation. We're getting a good mixed bag of art forms this break. Good job everybody and and I encourage the rest of the readers to have a try. 
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on June 30, 2020, 11:47:01 AM
DISCOVER
In my sixth decade.
All's been done and done again.
Oh look! A new thing!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on June 30, 2020, 12:05:22 PM
Thank you all so much for the feedback!!! Cat-pictures will never die! (I mean I´m quite sure they won´t. Old habits die hard.) :'D

(Anyone else get that feeling when you're writing a reply where you wanna write an exclamation mark after every statement but it feels weird to write every sentence with one? Idek, I just wish I could send good vibes through my screen to all of you.)

Yes. All the time. If I run out of places where I can put exclamation marks I´ll add emojiis. :sparkle: Then I´ll delete half the emojiis again because they feel even weirder... But there´s always the reaction image hoard! :'D
Someone really should come up with that good-vibes-punctuation-mark.
So here´s to more exclamation marks:

Jitter! That story is awesome! I also was a bit worried at the beginning, but glad it turned out to be the viper sentinel mage. The last bit had me giggling too.

midwestmutt another great Haiku! I really like this one, it has such a hopeful tone!

Spoiler: show
something that fits this thread (actually this entire forum) really well that I just found on said image hoard:
(http://i.imgur.com/5kWOnem.png)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on June 30, 2020, 05:19:48 PM
Reaction image hoard!! All this time I have thought people have the images saved with themselves!

(http://i.imgur.com/HFoIJdS.gif)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on June 30, 2020, 07:34:20 PM
Lovely story and drawings, Mirasol! All kitty content is Very Good and a Blessing
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on June 30, 2020, 09:34:20 PM
A double-treat from Mirasol with story and art, on my favourite topic, worldbuilding! I am giddy with delight.
Midwestmutt, it is always a good day when you learn something new, although I like the way the phrasing hearkens to a dog or crow.

Spoiler: note mostly to self • show
I have a holiday coming up but am not going anywhere (national band contest was cancelled due to Covid-19).  I have some projects to work on, but I hope to spend some quality time with the Reaction Hoard. We have had so many splendid faces all throughout Adv. II.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on July 01, 2020, 01:22:06 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

.._.._..

Prompt 8: Learning

.._.._..


Today's prompt of Learning is brought to us by Jitter!

Spoiler: show
Learning

2008
“I still don’t understand! Why o why do we need to learn all this? Who cares how the Vikings built their ships or what they wore? I hate studying history, I hate it!”
“Oh don’t be a brat! Yesterday you were complaining about biology.”
“Don’t get me started on biology! Growth zones and plant genetics, oh my god! What could be more boring! I hate school!”
“You should be glad we have such a good school system. In many countries families have to pay and still get much less education.”
“Yadda yadda… you are always so serious and dutiful. Do you like studying?”
“Well, yes. I’m interested in learning things.”
“Auughh! There is an entire chapter on Viking religion! We have put this superstition behind us a thousand years ago, so why am I forced to learn this?”
“What would you rather study then?”
“Something useful for the modern world! Computer science! Marketing! Math is ok, it’s useful in finance. And languages! English is clearly the most important subject, don’t you agree?”

Year 0
“Oh grandma, why do I have to learn to shoot? I’m a pacifist, you know that!
“I am sorry, cupcake, but everybody must learn. So, bag it! And hold the stock firmly to your shoulder. The kick will hurt you if you hold it loose”
“But grandma! I can’t shoot at anything anyways!”
“Dear, I believe you think so now. But if the monsters find us, you will need to be able to protect yourself. Or think of it as protecting us all. Anyways, you are lucky to be around to even think about it. Now, aim.”
“How can you tell if I’m learning anything when we can’t really fire?”
“I can tell your current stance is useless…" *Sigh* "I reckon we must spend one round per each student to make you learn about the kick. Here, try now.”
*BANG*
“Auuuugghhh! That really hurt! Isn’t it supposed to be the other end that hurts?”
“I told you to hold it firmly, puppy. Maybe you’ll remember now. If that happened in battle, the monster would get you while you are moaning!”
“I hate learning to shoot! It’s scary, and unpleasant, and now it’s even painful!”
 
Year 17
“Dad, tell me more about the “computers”! What were they made of? How did they work?”
“I’m sorry, Sigurd. I don’t know much of their workings. I was studying marine biology at the time. Conservation of the southern seas.”
“Why would you study something about faraway places?”
“Well, my plan was to move somewhere warm and work there.”
“Move? What do you mean?”
“Go live somewhere else. Like in the Caribbean. Remember? We looked at the map.”
“You mean you could actually go to those places?! Wow! Tell me more! Have you been outside Dalsnes? For real? You must tell me all about every place you have been! I love learning about the world!”
“I’ll tell you what. You keep up your English studies. Maybe someday someone can find some more books in English, and you can learn from those!”
“Awww, I don’t like studying English! I’d rather listen to you, dad!”
“I know, puppy. But it’s important. If there are any other survivors, English would be useful.”
“Why you say that? Why couldn’t we speak in Norwegian?”
“Not everybody spoke Norwegian, you know. It was a small language.”
“How is that possible? Everybody speaks Norwegian! Even people in the faraway places like Rana!”
“Well, son, I have to go, it’s my rounds today. You study hard and maybe there will be time to talk later tonight.”

Year 40
“Seriously, why do I have to learn this? I don’t even understand what these things are! What is an internet?”
“Well, Asbjørn, you know it’s always useful to know something about the past. Grandma and granddad wouldn’t have survived if they didn’t.”
“Dad, I know the Old World is a big deal for you and granddad, but really. Wake up and smell the sea! It’s not going to come back, no matter how much you dream! Just let me train shooting and hunting an boating! Like everybody else! I want to go work in the Army!”
“But it’s so dangerous!”
“Honey, you worry too much. You always have. I’m sure he’d do well in the Army. I don’t think he’d make a good skald.”
“But, but… ok. I guess you are right. But you have to keep up the English. There is so much information in English, somewhere out there.”
“I want to learn strategy too! I want to become a general!”
“Well, in that case you’ll have to study more than just shooting. Patience, my son.”

Year 63
“… and so I told them I quit school. Now you can finally assign me to a hunting party full time!”
“What’s that now? Quit school? Why would you do that?”
“I haaate school! You know that! Reading is hard, and there’s never ever anything interesting. All the good stuff is out there!”
“But you need to have background studies to learn strategy and leadership!”
“Strategy, blaah! The way to learn is by the soles of your feet! I can’t learn by studying some dusty books! How could anyone write a gook about tracking? Or close range combat?”
“There are other things in life than just shooting and sword-fighting. Your mum and I studied many years in the Academy, just to be able to get our positions!”
“Nahh, I’m not interested in some headquarters leadership anyways. Just give me a troll, a rifle and a blade, and I’ll learn what I need to learn!”



Notes:
I have assumed Aksel is 20 years old* in Y0 and that Y0 = 2013. We know that Sigrun was born in Y58, Between these I decided Sigurd to be born in Y5 and Asbjørn in Y30.

*I asked my son and my husband how old they thought that Aksel is in the prologue. Husband said 15 and son said 30 :) I take he's living on his own so I made him a 20-year old student.


Thanks very much to Jitter for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post what you've made down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: phocena on July 01, 2020, 01:38:33 AM
As someone who just started summer classes, this made me chuckle ;D. I love how you can represent so many different characters from all walks of life!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Grade E cat on July 01, 2020, 02:45:39 AM
My father sometimes mentioned some obscure post-apocalyptic story he read long ago (never caught the name an didn't ask at the time) in which a group of survivors from just after the disaster realize that they don't have the time to both educate the next generation and do what is necessary to keep themselves fed. Because of this, from his point of view, the collapse of modern civilization is a single non-educated generation away from happening.

The piece just made me think of a more slow-motion version of this.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 01, 2020, 08:14:17 AM
Thanks phocena!

Grade E Cat, I’m glad I managed to get it through. Besides the obvious (?) theme of there’s always something kids (or youth) don’t want to learn, although it may be different for different situations (and people), I was trying to show how knowledge slides away. Like, Lalli didn’t know the Earth is round (although Mikkel still did).

Once the survivors lose English completely, so so much is lost. Even if they later learn to decipher it like our archaeologists decipher e.g. Babylonian, the chances of creating a scientific community that can build on our modern science are low (not to mention the way so much is in electronic form only and will be destroyed over a few decades of no power.)

Now I’ve made myself sad, although I tried to make the story somewhat uplifting even though the theme is depressing.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 01, 2020, 09:55:24 AM
Church, state, and TV.
My foundations of learning.
Explains a lot, eh?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 01, 2020, 10:53:08 AM
Wow, that's an unexpected take on Learning, Jitter! I really like it :)
We all experienced it, I believe, questioning, at some point, which use some of that knowledge pushed upon us could possibly have. Sometimes it didn't, but even then it's down there, providing a kind of common ground to build, or not, different things.

Now I’ve made myself sad, although I tried to make the story somewhat uplifting even though the theme is depressing.
Now, don't be sad. Some knowledge would surely be lost*, but other things would be learned back, like boats construction, farming, using plants and, in this case, magic!
And also some (particularly the Swedes and Danes, but also Icelanders) still use old technologies, so it's supposed that they keep and teach then to the following generations.

Magic, alone, opens a whole Universe (or several Universes?) of new and exciting knowledge (that eventually may be combined with the ancient technologies), opening great opportunities for anyone that wants to... write fanfics! ;D

* Unless the government (or someone else), decided to create and maintain a kind of Library to archive the "ancient" knowledge, a bit like Asimov's Foundation**. In the future, when the danger from trolls and beasts are under control and wider areas are recovered, all that information could return to current use.

** That also had it's own agenda, but that's another story... or another fanfic!)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Alkia on July 01, 2020, 11:51:09 AM
wow, Jitter, I'm really impressed by how you told that entire story just using dialogue!! I love the multi-generational timespan as well.


Once the survivors lose English completely, so so much is lost. Even if they later learn to decipher it like our archaeologists decipher e.g. Babylonian, the chances of creating a scientific community that can build on our modern science are low (not to mention the way so much is in electronic form only and will be destroyed over a few decades of no power.)

unless they discover a *insert Scandinavian language*-English dictionary somewhere! a gift of foresight from the ancients  :)
It really would be sad about the Internet and all electronic information, though

Like Grey said though, magic is a new and valuable knowledge! who needs digital info when you can summon luontos and make runes xD
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 01, 2020, 01:31:56 PM
I have always liked the idea of fusing magic and tech/science. Might make for an interesting culture!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 01, 2020, 02:15:43 PM
I have a holiday coming up but am not going anywhere (national band contest was cancelled due to Covid-19).  I have some projects to work on, but I hope to spend some quality time with the Reaction Hoard. We have had so many splendid faces all throughout Adv. II.

Please do! I love scrolling through all those pictures!

(https://41.media.tumblr.com/a3b4396e726b74afb6f0ff7a542b7137/tumblr_inline_nxd1r1HzWD1r2g2kx_540.png)
(I mean, only if you want to and have the time to of course...)

Also Jitter, your take on "learning" is really interesting! Who knows what of the knowledge from the past will be usefull in the future. Makes me rethink not wanting to do homework right now... Plus your characterization of Aksel is hilarious. :'D

midwestmutt, your Haikus get better (and funnier) every day!

unless they discover a *insert Scandinavian language*-English dictionary somewhere! a gift of foresight from the ancients  :)
It really would be sad about the Internet and all electronic information, though

Like Grey said though, magic is a new and valuable knowledge! who needs digital info when you can summon luontos and make runes xD

Yes, if the internet and/or tech broke down, so much would be lost! especially with the current trend to digitalize everything. In the end, physical copies do have a higher chance of surviving an apocalypse.

But yay for more fanfiction-ideas! I agree, mixing tech/science and magic always makes for very interesting stories.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 01, 2020, 04:16:12 PM
No, that’s what I mean by deciphering. If any books have been preserved at all (i.e. not talking about a thousand years or so) there definitely will be dictionaries and books for learning English. In all of these countries study of English is widespread and important. But having to learn it from books only with no one with proficiency to train with, it won’t become fluent. And any case no dictionary contains terminology for all sciences - in fact, Finnish fir example doesn’t have all terminology for all sciences.

But then, I also tried to show how the world is widening again for them too. Sigurd is impressed about his dad having been outside of Dalsnes and thinks everyone has always spoken Norwegian, while Asbjørn has gone to an Academy. They are rebuilding! And yes, I think English has survived to am extent until Y91, in Denmark and Sweden at least.

And Alkia, thank you! I tried to write description first, I was particularly inspired by the picture where Berit is teaching Aksel to shoot. But I didn’t get it to work. Luckily the “circle of life” theme helped me along to consider various learning situations between generations of Eides.


Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Crumpite on July 01, 2020, 08:21:44 PM
To those worried about information loss due to a systematic  cyber crash:
There is one of those multi-gazillianares out in California that is archiving actual physical books in safe vaults, just in case !

Thanks for all the wonderful content here, keeping me interested ! 😀
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on July 01, 2020, 09:12:31 PM
I love it!  I agree with Jitter that Aksel is likely to be in his early 20s at most.  Marine biology is a solid choice.  (once I made a story where Ingrid had protested Norway's whaling practices pre-Rash)

I recently read one of the later Pern books, going through the "prequel" times around Landing, where the specialisms many of the colonists had were negated once the power and gear ran out.  Specifically, advanced microsurgery skills could not be used without the sutures, molecular biology could not be accomplished once the sequencers ran out of consumables.  It was a known effect, since they'd gone to that planet specifically to establish an agrarian society, but the scientists still felt the loss and redundancy of their knowledge keenly.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 01, 2020, 09:15:06 PM
Crumpite, I am so, so glad to hear that! I have a fairly good archive of books myself, and people who know how to access them if something happens to me. Mine includes a lot of science texts, also a lot of practical how-to books covering everything from building to how to make and maintain tools. And a lot of stuff about agriculture, cookery and food. Also a few language and literary things, astronomy, maths, biology and botany. Lots of that, because I am a retired field botanist and botany lecturer.

I guess you might call me a prepper, but I am the kind of prepper who gets my communities involved in what I am doing, plants community gardens, starts produce shares and farmers markets and street libraries and verge gardens, and teaches practical survival skills. My communities are the better for it, and it has helped my small town to do as well as is possible through the Covid19 emergency.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: phocena on July 01, 2020, 09:45:36 PM
Ooh... In addition of all the books on practical topics such as math and chemistry, books from literature would be huge. Would they be mass printing books from the silent world for people to enjoy? To the general public, the silent world is often reduced a terrifying place full of monsters, so to read a book and be reminded that they were people just like us would be so humanizing, and also exciting! And maybe dangerous in the eyes of the government - I wonder what the religious leaders of the community would think of people reading stories written by heathens.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on July 02, 2020, 12:08:19 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

.._.._..

Prompt 9: Child

.._.._..


Today's prompt of Child is brought to us by Alkia!

Spoiler: show
(https://i.imgur.com/mIKEHTm.jpg)
(https://i.imgur.com/PHwWvVL.jpg)
(https://i.imgur.com/zVzQnbx.jpg)
(https://i.imgur.com/ObzUOLI.jpg)


Thanks very much to Alkia for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post what you've made down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 02, 2020, 04:41:52 AM
Mirasol and Alkia, thank you for your wonderful art. I especially like the Reynirs in both! He’s clearly very photogenic draw-o-genic? And little Lalli’s little lynx <3

And Midwestmutt, a solid stream of haiku! Keep it coming!

I have a bit of a tingle in the muses about Discoveries, would you guys mind terribly I add something on it later?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: GaelleDragons on July 02, 2020, 05:08:11 AM
Alkia, these are adorable! Little Emil looks just as epic as his little poodle  :emil: <3
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 02, 2020, 06:15:45 AM
Ooh... In addition of all the books on practical topics such as math and chemistry, books from literature would be huge. Would they be mass printing books from the silent world for people to enjoy? To the general public, the silent world is often reduced a terrifying place full of monsters, so to read a book and be reminded that they were people just like us would be so humanizing, and also exciting! And maybe dangerous in the eyes of the government - I wonder what the religious leaders of the community would think of people reading stories written by heathens.

I´d expect Sweden and especially Denmark to be very interested in that. While I don´t think they´d have the recources to mass-print them, maybe there would be public readings of old-world-literature, a bit like going to a theater in our world. That would reach a lot of people and would be super exiting, as you just said!  XoX A story begins to form in my head right now...

Alkia, your kid-youngsters are adorable! And Emil looks so heroic, I can´t even :'D :emil: I feel very tempted right now to draw more kid-art, I might do that later today. (If you start noticing a pattern with the content I posted on this thread so far, so did I just now. I just really enjoy drawing kids)

And thanks Jitter! Reynir is indeed very draw-o-genic, I find myself doodeling him everywhere. Must be the hair...
I wouldn´t mind at all if you added something to Discoveries later, please do so!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mariiii on July 02, 2020, 06:16:43 AM
Wow it's been a while since I came here, and I'm really happy to see this second chapter break filler ! I went threw the whole thread and all of the contributions are amazing !!

Alkia I love your drawings, Lalli, Reynir and Emil are very cute !
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Grade E cat on July 02, 2020, 06:35:11 AM
Cuties!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 02, 2020, 06:50:34 AM
Oh, Alkia! Our little adventurers look amazing, particularly Emil in his superhero pose! :)

Jitter, how could any of us mind to see more from you?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 02, 2020, 07:26:45 AM
Oh no, I must sadly say, I can’t see todays’ pictures again... I was able to see all the art and texts before but not this one..  :'(

And yes, yesterday’s one! Jitter, those little dialogs are amazing! A wonderful idea, I think writing dialogs is the best way to present the characters  ;D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 02, 2020, 10:06:52 AM
The child I once was.
Still peacefully sleeps within.
His day is complete.

My soul is a child.
Waiting for another try.
Reincarnation.

The prompts are getting harder for me. This was too big a subject for a single haiku.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 02, 2020, 11:40:40 AM
Midwestmutt, those haikus are sooo good! The last one is perfect!

BTW, my friends, I was surprised today by a new set of deadlines to finish a lot of work. That means that I won't be able to complete my prompt in time :(
I already informed KeepLooking and she's working on a solution.

The work will be completed, but maybe in two or three weeks... I'll post it and inform everybody when it's ready.
That doesn't means that I'll disappear. I'll be participating (more or less) as usual.

All the best! :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on July 02, 2020, 06:02:21 PM
Huzzah, new f0oD fanworks! 
Adorable child portraits, Alkia, with an epic wind blowing through them. 
Naturally, Jitter, we are agog for your take, as always.
Awww, thegreyarea, RL deadlines are what they are, no stress from us.  We'll catch you on the flip.
And Midwestmutt, while I'm not entirely convinced your inner child is done in this life, I do feel how appropriate this is for our overall theme on this break.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 02, 2020, 06:19:59 PM
midwestmutt, noone is complaining to be treated with not one but two of your awesome Haikus in one day!

Grey, oh no! :( Good luck with your deadlines!

So turns out "later today" means "much later", because I only finished this now. Sorry for the poor picture quality, I kinda ran out of daylight... (I might take a better photo tomorrow and edit it in.)
Since thanks to Alkias amazing pictures, Reynir, Emil and Lalli already got to be children today, I drew Tuuri and Onni instead.  :tuuri: :onni: So have an about 4-5 year old Tuuri and an about 12-13 year old Onni picking blueberries. Though actually, only Onni is picking berries, Tuuri is mainly eating them.

(https://i.postimg.cc/mDFZfsPb/Child-Mirasolbetterquality.jpg)

At some point I got ambitious and wrote a story to it (I spent way less time on this than I probably should have, so please excuse any crucial mistakes):

She thought she had been subtle about it, but judging by the shocked look Onni was currently giving her, he knew exactly what she just did.
“You ate the whole thing??? We´ve been here all morning, and you ate all of the blueberries I picked???”
“Nooo, I didn´t! Look!”, Tuuri pointed angrily into her brothers basket. There, still half- okay, maybe she ate a bit more than she thought she did, but there still were blueberries in it. And it´s not like she didn´t help! But picking blueberries when you were small and couldn´t reach the good ones at the top was tiring, and naturally she got hungry after a while. And eating the ones already in the basket was easier than eating them directly from the bushes.
Onni gave a very angry sigh. “Why are you like this??? There, go away, I need to pick them again now. I´ve had enough of your “help” for today.” He lifted Tuuri up and put her down after a few steps, her back facing the bushes.
“Stay there!” he exclaimed and tramped back to the hedges. Tuuri heard him grumble about why their mom had made him take her with him.
After a while of huffily staring at the ground, she started regretting having eaten all of her brother’s hard work.
“Onni?”
“What?”
“I´m sorry. You can have the berries I picked. In my basket over there.” For a while her brother went quiet, she could hear him walk over to where she had dropped her basket.
“Those are like ten berries…”, Onni muttered, although he didn´t sound angry anymore. “But thanks.” He went back to berry-picking, and Tuuri went back to staring at the ground. Slowly but surely she started regretting to have eaten all those berries for another reason.
“Onni?”
A sigh. “Yeah?”
“Can we go home soon? My stomach hurts…”

EDIT: changed the picture to a better photo
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 02, 2020, 06:35:53 PM
Patpats Grey. Deadlines are hard but can’t be avoided. Good luck!

And everyone else, awesome work. I especially love the children.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: phocena on July 02, 2020, 06:49:13 PM
Mirasol, I love your story! It feels so real and intimate, and the drawing is adorable. Poor Onni, I wish I could send him a cake and an appreciation card.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on July 02, 2020, 08:31:19 PM
So many good things here aaa

Jitter I love the little peek at the generations of characters, very well chosen moments to show how knowledge changes with the passage of time.

Alkia oh my god they're so cute! I love their little animal-selves as well. And Mirasol I love little Tuuri and Onni, the blueberry stains are a great touch.

Midwestmutt you will never hear complaints from me about more haiku!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on July 02, 2020, 10:04:14 PM
we're learning to speak
like we did when we were kids
one word at a time
"tree" "rock" "river" "flower" "stick"

reading them slowly
out loud from a children's book
simple sentences
"Emma hops across a brook"

you mark out her name
and replace it with my own
draw a stick figure
and tease that I've fallen in

it's gentle, that's new
you don't use the words "dumb Swede"
and you smile a bit
at the crude drawing of me

I steal the pencil
draw a little stick Lalli
he stands on a rock
leaning, looking down at me

you give me a frown
hold your hand out, "give it here"
take the pencil back
and you add something else there

an arm stretched downward
from stick-figure you to me
offer me a hand
to pull me up to safety

give me a quick glance
write five more words in the book
in perfect Swedish
"Give me your hand," so I do

--

A poem about Emil and Lalli learning each other's languages that kind of accidentally turned into a full scene. I didn't just reeeally want to write about Lalli and Emil holding hands nope not at all
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 02, 2020, 11:36:34 PM
Scottish, that is so very like them!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on July 03, 2020, 12:13:35 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

.._.._..

Prompt 10: Err

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Today's prompt of Err is brought to us by MollyVampiric!

Spoiler: show
10. Neverr Have I Everr (If they all spoke the same language - cattank era)

Most people don’t truly understand how important things are until they are gone. The crew was dealing with this full force. That night, it had snowed nearly three feet of additional snow, and they were way too far from anything good to even consider walking anywhere. Even Lalli and Tuuri, who could still do their work, were already feeling the cabin fever. It was kind of disappointing, given that it had been less than a day before they started to separately plan to commit homicide.

Tuuri and Mikkel were almost drooling on their books, they were so bored. Lalli had chosen to sleep rather than listen to anyone’s bickering. Reynir was testing how well he could crochet upside-down. Emil was just hanging off the side of the top bunk. Sigrun’s blood was boiling at just the thought of doing absolutely nothing.

Emil fell off the side of the bed when Sigrun jolted up out of her seat. This, of course, woke up Lalli, and they both started to angrily grumble to themselves. It didn’t matter to Sigrun, though, as she had started to scrounge through a cabinet underneath her bunk.

“Ah-hah!” she smiled devilishly, pulling out a full six bottles of beer. Everyone else was staring at her at this point, but no one there knew where or how she managed to get that much beer.

“How about we play a game?” Patting the ground beside her, she set out cups on the floor. She had already decided what they were playing, and they knew better than to upset her when she was eager. “It’s called Neverr Have I Everr!”

“We don’t exactly have any shot glasses,” Emil complained, but his actions spoke louder than words as he got himself comfortable on the floor. They were all siting down at this point.

“I guess you’ll just have to measure yourself! I won’t be the one telling you if you’re drinking to much, but if you drink too little, I’ll tackle you. Lemme explain the rules.”

Pouring herself a shot, Sigrun chuckled, “Never have I ever played never have I ever. If you have actually never played, don’t take a shot. If you have, drink.” Taking a confident swig from her cup, Sigrun watched everyone else. Only Tuuri and Mikkel drank. “It goes clockwise, so then Reynir would go next.”

Reynir jolted, “Me? Uh… never have I ever broken a bone?” Sigrun gave him a weird look, but everyone else in the circle drank. Reynir felt a rush of enthusiasm for having understood the game.

“So that would be me next, right?” Tuuri continued, “Never have I ever been in a physical fight.” Unsurprisingly, Sigrun drank, but so did Mikkel and Emil.

Not letting anyone ponder on it, Mikkel persevered, “Never have I ever done something I thought I would never do.” To this, Emil, Reynir, and Lalli drank. Reynir cringed at the taste of his first drink, hiding none of his distaste whatsoever.

“Never have I ever bragged about something I haven’t done,” Lalli stated bluntly. Only Emil and Tuuri drank. Figures, was all he thought.

“Never have I ever cut my own hair,” Emil smiled as he thought of one that would get multiple people. True to his thinking, everyone around him (barring Reynir, obviously) drank.

“Never have I ever set something on fire.” For a moment, Sigrun thought that she had gotten no one, but then Emil quietly lifted his cup, daring them to ask with his glaring eyes.

“Never have I ever gotten drunk,” Reynir ended the short silence cheerfully. Everyone except Lalli drank, although Emil looked on the fence about it.

“Never have I ever cheated on a test,” Tuuri stated. Everyone drank. This surprised Tuuri, given that she had always assumed that Reynir was homeschooled.

“Never have I ever hit someone for no reason,” Mikkel stated calmly. Sigrun took a drink. Emil only reluctantly took a drink after Lalli glared at him, burning a terrible feeling in him.

“Never have I ever done something dumb on a dare,” Lalli knew just how to hit home for Tuuri, but it was also great that Sigrun and Emil drank.

At this point, everyone had started to feel comfortable. The beer had loosened them up, and any silences they had were companionable.

“Never have I ever crossed the world border illegally,” Emil was clearly a lightweight, his cheeks shining a bright pink at this point. He had been drinking the most, though, so he looked considerably worse than everyone else. Surprisingly, Lalli, Reynir, Mikkel, and Sigrun all drank.

“Never have I ever learned how to play a musical instrument.” Sigrun’s statement was less of a declaration and more of a question to see who had. Mikkel, Tuuri, and Emil all drank. When Lalli raised his eyebrow at Emil, he indignantly replied, “I’ve had violin lessons since I was four.” Lalli responded by scoffing, “Your parents taught you violin and not Icelandic?” Emil only sputtered, not able to answer before Reynir cut them off.

“Never have I ever been in contact with a troll.” Emil shot Reynir a relieved, ‘I owe you one’ look. Predictably, everyone besides Tuuri and Reynir drank.

Lalli figured he was starting to get the true idea of the game. No, it wasn’t about the drinking or the game, it was about wrenching secrets from people after they were drunk. He wasn’t sure if he loved or hated it.

“Never have I ever had a pet.” Both Emil and Reynir looked sympathetic to Tuuri’s statement, but stopped when they noticed that they were actually the minority in the group.

“Never have I ever broken in somewhere.” For once, Emil didn’t drink. In fact, only Sigrun drank. She was starting to look tipsy.

“Never have I ever had a sibling,” Lalli said, not seeing to care much about how cheap of a question that was. He got a dirty look from Tuuri, and while neither Mikkel nor Reynir showed it, they agreed that easy questions weren’t any fun.

“Never have I ever pulled a push door,” Emil giggled. He was in a world of his own at this point, but he had a surprisingly good memory, thinking all the way back to the day he had shopped with Lalli, Tuuri, and his aunt and uncle. Tuuri humored him, taking a sip from her cup.

“Never have I ever stolen anything,” Sigrun was more curious about any of them than playing a game. Unfortunately for her, not one of them took a drink. Sighing, she picked up her own drink and downed the remainder.

“Never have I ever been out of my country before now,” Reynir seemed to only get more enthusiastic the drunker he got, and practically giggled the whole sentence. Mikkel drank, and the moment he set his cup down, Sigrun grabbed it for herself and took her shot. Mikkel only sighed.

“Never have I ever pretended to laugh at a joke I didn't get,” Tuuri said, looking the best out of all of them. She raised an eyebrow when nobody drank, and sipped her own.

Mikkel clearly doubted this, and he asked, “Never have I ever lied in this game.” Sighing, both Emil and Sigrun drank, although Tuuri seemed to be drinking more just for the fun of it.

Lalli said, “Never have I ever woken up someone with my snoring.” Mikkel, Sigrun, and Tuuri were all guilty and they knew it.

Getting back at Mikkel a turn late, Emil said, “Never have I ever lied in a job interview!” Raising his voice accidentally. Mikkel only chuckled, and he and Sigrun took turns drinking.

“Never have I ever tried to impress someone who hates me,” Sigrun was mostly just glad it was her turn and she didn’t have to drink anymore. Emil and Tuuri had stopped caring about getting drunk at some point for completely opposite reasons, and didn’t bother to measure their shots.

“Never have I ever stolen a friend’s story and pretended it happened to me.” Reynir smiled when Tuuri winced and picked up her cup. Drunk Reynir was scarier than normal Reynir, everyone realized.

“Never have I ever, uh…” Tuuri didn’t even get the chance to think of a comeback before Emil leaned down against the wall and didn’t get back up again. “Did Emil just fall asleep?” Sure enough, Emil had passed out against the wall. He snored quietly, ignorant to the people around him.

At this, Lalli rolled back under the bed, closing himself off from the rest of them. Mikkel assured Sigrun that he would clean up, and watched as she stumbled back to bed. Though Reynir seemed to have endless energy, the moment he touched his bed it was like a crash, and he was asleep in moments.

Mikkel and Tuuri chuckled to themselves for a few minutes as they cleaned up, although neither of them picked up Emil off the floor, as he had started his own lake of drool. Right as Mikkel turned off the last light, though, he felt slightly sympathetic. Grabbing his coat from the front, he laid it under Emil’s head. Mikkel smiled.

He’d had much worse than drool on his coat anyway, and it was still clean enough. Emil was more important than his coat.


Thanks very much to MollyVampiric for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post what you've made down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Remberedink on July 03, 2020, 12:29:56 AM
Ooh that was such a nice piece
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 03, 2020, 09:43:34 AM
I actually did edit my last post to a better photo now! :) Thank you phocena, and scottishnottish for the kind comments!
And now to todays absolutely amazing contributions (aka the one´s I missed after going to bed):

scottishnottish, this poem is the most adorable thing ever!!! I love it!

MollyVampiric, your story had me laughing the entire time while I was reading it. And you portayed all their characters so well!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 03, 2020, 10:22:50 AM
I learn by mistake.
Failed projects litter my house.
So don't be afraid.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Alkia on July 03, 2020, 11:07:29 AM
Thanks everybody!! smol Emil, Lalli, and Reynir were a lot of fun to draw :))

Midwestmutt, your haikus are delightful!

Mirasol, that blueberry picking scene was so cute!! Hopefully little Tuuri learned her blueberry consumption lesson  ;D

aaaaaaaa, Scottishnottish, my heart!!!! Emil and Lalli learning languages together and holding hands has to be one of my favorite imagined moments between them yet

Mollyvampiric, I agree with Mirasol, i was also giggling all through that story!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 03, 2020, 12:32:12 PM
Oo more loveliness! Molly, the story was hilarious! And a great way to demonstrate various ways some of our dear friends have erred in their youth (or in some cases, young to youngish adulthood). Sigrun’s beer is mighty strong!

Scottish, I like all your poetry but this is soooooo wonderful. I didn’t realize who it was until at “dumb Swede”. After that I read with tears* in my eyes, to such extent I had to dry my face afterwards. Lovely, lovely boys!

Mirasol, lovely story and art! And seems just like them, Onni all serious picking and Tuuri not realky helping at all :) aConcerning the art, would you like a botany comment?

* good tears, absolutely!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 03, 2020, 01:29:37 PM
midwestmutt, I definitly relate to that Haiku...

Alkia,Jitter, thank you so much! And take it away with the botany! :'D I hope I didn´t get anything too wrong...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 03, 2020, 01:58:51 PM
Mirasol ok :) The berry that usually are called “blueberries” are in Finland actually a different berry than blueberry in America, it’s called European blueberry or bilberry. Which makes it not a bush but about knee high, and grows in suitable forests as a ground cover. Here is a picture from our hike yesterday at Petkeljärvi National Park. The fresh green ground cover is mostly bilberry. It’s hard to pick if you are small, but not because it’s high, rather because you get just a few from each stem (the berries are located individually) and you have to move around a lot to get any discernible results (guess why I know).

Please don’t feel bad, there was no reason why you should have known that blueberries are not blueberries :) A bush like that could be currants, I don’t think it occurs strictly naturally in Finland but there are a few bushes in most gardens so there will probably be some around in Y75.

(https://i.postimg.cc/XvLNjpbc/44-E20943-5-B56-44-DB-B0-F3-7-C32-A65-B0-E63.jpg)

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vaccinium_myrtillus
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 03, 2020, 03:08:12 PM
So much for that... :'D Looks like I really shouldn´t be entrusted with google regarding botany. The ones in your photo resemble the ones I have in my garden actually much more closely than the reference I used to draw the picture. In hindsight I really could have counted two and two together...

I´m not really sure what to change in the story though. I liked the idea of using blueberries since we´ve actually been told that Tuuri likes to eat them in SSSS. And it´s kind of hard to change an inked traditional drawing...
I´ll probably upload the story to Ao3 later, now that I´ve created an account. Maybe I´ll just add in the notes that this kind of blueberries actually doesn´t grow in Finland. :-[
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 03, 2020, 04:49:29 PM
Ah, so much goodness! I was internetless for 2.5 days, so it was a concentrated dose of creativity. I'll miss someone if I try to comment on individual pieces, so I'll just say wow. Lots of thought-provoking, funny, cute, sweet, wistful, and clever stuff. I'll have to re-read more slowly.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 03, 2020, 06:09:18 PM
Oh noo Mirasol, I asked you not to feel bad! How or why would you know there are several different things quite officially called blueberries? This sort of thing happens a lot! I was surprised by the Australians’ intense dislike of magpies, until I learned the bird called magpie is not the corvid we have at all, and is in fact a pretty nasty bird. The ones we have may cause some irritation occasionally, but they are nor harbingers of evil.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 03, 2020, 06:38:09 PM
Oh noo Mirasol, I asked you not to feel bad! How or why would you know there are several different things quite officially called blueberries? This sort of thing happens a lot! I was surprised by the Australians’ intense dislike of magpies, until I learned the bird called magpie is not the corvid we have at all, and is in fact a pretty nasty bird. The ones we have may cause some irritation occasionally, but they are nor harbingers of evil.

I noticed Mirasol's highbush blueberry, too - you beat me to the explanation! It's a sweet story, regardless - and unless you grow up picking the wretched things, you wouldn't know. I would very much be Tuuri, I spend many childhood days trailing along in my parents' wake, grazing instead of filling the small container I'd been given. They're so small, it takes forever (from a kid viewpoint) to even cover the bottom. Sad to say, little has changed, and I still have a habit of grazing rather than collecting for later!

I made friends with a British exchange student during university, and in spring they pointed out the birds hopping about on the lawn and asked in a tone of disbelief, "Is that what you call a robin??" I am sympathetic to this view, Turdus migratorius (even the name is awful) bears little resemblance to robin red-breast(https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Erithacus_rubecula_with_cocked_head.jpg). To me it reflects desperate homesickness - there are no robins in this hard new land, oh look, a bird with a red chest, let's call it a robin so that there are robins. Sort of like lonely sailors seeing manatees as mermaids!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on July 03, 2020, 10:03:05 PM
Róisín, Mirasol, Alkia, Jitter, thank you all! I am honored to bring joy (and good tears)! I'm glad I could do these good good boys justice.

MollyVampiric this is such a fun story! Very true to the characters, and drunk Reynir made me laugh.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on July 04, 2020, 07:21:14 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

.._.._..

Prompt 11: Young Love

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Today's prompt of Young Love is brought to us by Count Shrekula!

Spoiler: show
(https://i.imgur.com/Tj15A7w.png)


Thanks very much to Count Shrekula for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post what you've made down below!



Hey guy! Sorry for the awfully late post. I thought, since it's about half-way through the Chapter Break Filler now, that I might say that I'm so glad you guys are enjoying this! I haven't been interacting much (or at all, really) since I was still fairly busy with school, but it's been so great seeing you guys all coming together and posting your own stuff and having discussions and all that! I'm really glad that this event could be that for you all. I've also loved recieving everyone's pieces!

Anyway, thanks so much to all of you who have contributed in some way or another to this event, and I hope you enjoy the rest of it!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 04, 2020, 09:16:56 AM
Nature keeps its course.
Amidst the rolling storm waves.
Young love will sail on.

(I surprised myself with this nautical poem. I'm a confirmed landlubber.)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 04, 2020, 09:49:43 AM
Heeee, Count Shrekula, that evokes the h3ll of the solitary, corded, centrally-located phone so well! I can imagine a younger relative in the shadows, waiting to eavesdrop.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 04, 2020, 09:57:41 AM
Midwestmutt, I like your nautical poem! In the spirit of doing things that surprise yourself, I did a haiku inspired by Count Shrekula's drawing that is decidedly un-nautical, which is unexpected for me as I have mostly lived near the sea.

waiting seems endless
like an endless prairie sky
should I call, perhaps?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 04, 2020, 10:12:16 AM
Wow, midwestmutt, all of your poems are great! And always sooo deep. 
And, Vulpes, this haiku cares so much truth in it, excellent!

Count Shrekula, very cute! I like the way you made the light focused in a certain place.  ;D

Also, all the pieces here are amazing! So much creativity! I was a little busy so couldn’t join the conversations but I read all of them!

I love these long talks about plants you have here, it is great! ;D
Jitter, you made me homesick by sending that picture of the woods! I used to live in the more northern part of Russia, so we have forests that look like that (and those smaller blueberries as well). But it’s still good to see a familiar sight  ;)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 04, 2020, 01:48:35 PM
I love these long talks about plants you have here, it is great! ;D

I guess in that case I´ll be happy to provide more reasons to talk about them via my ignorance... :'D

I was busy all day so It´s nice to find so many nice things over here now that I have time!

Count Shrekula, I agree with Annuil, the lighting in your piece is very good and interesting!
midwestmutt and Vulpes, a Haiku on land and one on the sea, but both equally beautiful!

Sadly I´ll probably be busy until wednesday, since I have two more classtests comming up. So see you then!  :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 04, 2020, 03:35:38 PM
I guess in that case I´ll be happy to provide more reasons to talk about them via my ignorance... :'D
It’s not your fault! I thought it was Google who said the wrong thing!  :'D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 04, 2020, 04:20:10 PM
Young love

(https://i.postimg.cc/Dz1SvtVh/1-A50-E585-ED71-43-B2-A2-FE-A61-D39-CC3-A90.jpg)

Midsummer magic
Seven flowers for young love
Who will be the one?

”Oh, good morning Tuulikki! Did you sleep well?”
”Good morning. I did, thanks for asking! A bit shortly but otherwise good. It is the shortest night of the year!”
“So, did it work? Tell me everything!”
“Did what work? I don’t understand!” Tuulikki looked at her friend with an innocently bland expression.
“Don’t even try! I saw you gathering the seven flowers! I know you are not supposed to talk after you start picking them, so I didn’t say anything. But I watched you go around picking them!”
“Oh well, ok! I suppose it did!”
“Aww! Who was it? I want to know! Was he nice in the dream?”
“Well, you don’t know him anyways. He’s not from here.”
“Not from here? How do you know him then? Or was he a someone you haven’t yet met?”
“No no, we have met. He’s from Toivosaari.”
“Ooooo! I see! You did meet someone at Ukonvakka! Why didn’t you say anything in the spring?”
“Well, I wasn’t sure if it meant anything. But after the spell, maybe?”
“Ah, tell me all about him! Right now!”
“Firstly, he was very nice and polite...”
“And handsome, I’m sure!”
“If you don’t let me speak, you won’t hear anything about him!”




Midsummer was prime time for spells for the ancient Finns. Spells to ensure good luck in love were widespread, and especially popular were various ways by which the young (especially women) could foresee who they would marry. Other spells were done to draw the love of a certain someone, or just for general success in love, or also more general luck, prosperity and health. Some of the more  popular spouse prediction spells survive to this day, although nowadays done more as a game as with genuine belief in the results.

The most well known spell is to in the Midsummer night (night between the Eve and Midsummer day) pick seven different flowers from seven different meadows (locations) into a small bouquet, and when one sleeps with this bouquet under one’s pillow, the future husband or wife will appear in a dream. There are different versions, in some places the spell preparation includes stepping over seven different fences, sometimes there are more flowers, or the bouquet should include fern (the fern was supposed to flower only in Midsummer night) . The speller may be required to stay silent altogether or just refrain from speaking about the spell and especially about who they were hoping to see.

Many of the Midsummer spells were undertaken fully naked as well. Maybe for Tuulikki too it would have been even more potent if she had gone about the flower picking in her birth suit, but she’s a sensible girl and considering the mosquito population around Midsummer probably decided she’s not that interested. Good new is, it seems to have worked nevertheless!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 04, 2020, 07:14:11 PM
It’s not your fault! I thought it was Google who said the wrong thing!  :'D

It was google who said the wrong thing. But to be fair it was me who asked the wrong question. Or didn´t ask at all in this case. :'D

Jitter, nice story, and Finnish traditions are super interesting! So thank you for explaining the spells!

I´m way too tired to write anything sensefull right now... So yeah, See you on wednesday :D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 04, 2020, 07:21:53 PM
Much amused by this. Spells of that sort are widespread in many cultures across our world. There are also some done in Autumn or at Midwinter with nuts and what happens when they are roasted in the fire, or with apples, which should be peeled in one long strip and the peel thrown over the shoulder. The thrown peel was then inspected to see if it formed a pattern or letters, which were meant to be the initials of the hoped for lover, or a tool of his trade (like a plough or a sheep for a farmer, a boat or net or hook for a sailor or a fisherman, a hammer for a smith).

Some such piseog, small spells, required that the woman work it while naked (or ‘skyclad’ as the wiccans phrase it, including the seed-sowing spells. The implications are obvious). In those spells the woman would walk three times around some sacred object (originally something like a standing stone or sacred well, in more recent centuries a church) while scattering behind her the seeds of some useful plant and chanting a calling spell, something like ‘Hempseed I sow, hempseed I sow. Now, my own dear, come after me here, and mow, and mow’. At which point, if she looked back, she should see the young man harvesting her crop.

Some English spells invoked saints, for example, the one for inducing a true dream of the lover. Suitable flowers were gathered into a bouquet, tied with a ribbon, and placed under the maiden’s pillow with the invocation ‘Saint Luke, Saint Luke, be kind to me! In dreams, let me my true love see’.

The local Aboriginal tribes have a version which uses the flowers of the meemeei tree woven into the woman’s hair while singing a spell, which is rather lovely. And my folk may comb their hair at a man, with intent.

Have you seen the piece that Unlos and I did a few years back, ‘Nine Flowers’, with her glorious art and and my poetry, in which Tuuri is depicted working such a spell? It should be on both the art and poetry threads, with the skyclad version on the mature board.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 04, 2020, 08:32:07 PM
Jitter, nice vignette and interesting flower tradition - I was very pleased to recognise some word-parts (puna, valko, päivä, koira) and had fun looking up the rest. Strangely, google translate gave me the Latin name for kangasmaitikka, which led me off down an internet rabbit-hole plus trying to remember what was the hemiparasitic plant I used to encounter all the time in Nova Scotia.

Roísín, are you familiar with popping apple seeds as a husband predictor? My mother grew up in rural NS on a mixed farm with a big apple orchard, and did this. She and her sisters would put apple seeds on the stove-top and name each one for some fellow they were sweet on, and whichever one popped first was the one. They also did the apple peel thing you describe. But they were very straight-laced United Church members (no cards on Sunday, etc.), so you can be sure they were not doing any of this in the buff!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 04, 2020, 10:31:10 PM
I know that usage, but in my tradition we used hazelnuts or chestnuts. Both the apple and the hazel were sacred trees to my family, but while hazelnuts were for eating as well as other parts of the tree being important for healing and magic, apple seeds were only for planting or for medicine, being thought too important to waste on piseog. Different traditions.

Edit: are you familiar with the Finnish website ‘Luontoportti’? They have good nature articles, and a useful article on this plant. I remember finding itwhen tracking name changes of its relative Eyebright.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on July 05, 2020, 01:07:27 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 12: Heartbreak

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Today's prompt of Heartbreak is brought to us by Abprallen!

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Thanks very much to Abprallen for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post what you've made down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 05, 2020, 01:13:28 AM
Abprallen, laughing so hard at this! Poor Reynir!
So much awesome work here! We should do this again next chapter break!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 05, 2020, 08:03:04 AM
So much awesome work here! We should do this again next chapter break!
That’s for sure!!

Abprallen, so touching! I like the idea that, when feeling so bad, he tries to pet Kitty. It really helps! And usually, if you’re heart is broken in some way and the cat’s around, it pretty much is your first movement... 
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 05, 2020, 08:07:06 AM
Phahaha! I got it wrong! I missed the “chomp” somehow! Well this is waaay different than what I just wrote in the first post but I still love it!  :'D

(I thought something happened to him so he pets Kitty..)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 05, 2020, 10:12:16 AM
So many great things!

First, and taking on what Róisín said, I'm also expecting this fillers to become a Minnion tradition in the years to come!

Now, since my last comment, we had Mirasol's lovely pic+story, scottishnottish's awesome poem (when did him made anything that wasn't awesome?), Molly's amazing and funny story, (another) great haiku by Midwestmutt, Jitter's illustrated lesson in blueberries, Count's great take on young love, (yet more) great haikus from Midwestmutt and Vulpes, Jitter again doing her magic on us and Abprallen's heartbroken Reynir!

Uff! That's a lot, my friends! You are all awesome! I wish my work was already in that incredible mix... but it will be! Work is going fine, and as soon as I can I will pick where I left.

Butter Good!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Alkia on July 05, 2020, 11:13:32 AM
Count Shrekula, nice drawing! I also like the lighting, and the green phone highlight

Midwestmutt and also Vulpes, more lovely haikus, yay!!!

Jitter, your story about young love and flowers is so sweet! Also makes me think about how the number 7 pops up so often in lore of all kinds

Abprallen, Reynir has suffered the worst betrayal known to humankind! the Kitty bite  ;D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 05, 2020, 12:24:18 PM
My old cat is sick.
She is in her sunset year.
It's a long farewell.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 05, 2020, 12:44:26 PM
Aw, Midwestmutt! Sends a socially distanced but heartfelt hug.
 And Grey, I look forward to seeing your work when you are not being run into the ground with work.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 05, 2020, 02:24:44 PM
My old cat is sick.
She is in her sunset year.
It's a long farewell.
:'( - the feeling that filles me after reading your haiku, midwestmutt, so sad...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 05, 2020, 04:10:43 PM
I know that usage, but in my tradition we used hazelnuts or chestnuts. Both the apple and the hazel were sacred trees to my family, but while hazelnuts were for eating as well as other parts of the tree being important for healing and magic, apple seeds were only for planting or for medicine, being thought too important to waste on piseog. Different traditions.

Edit: are you familiar with the Finnish website ‘Luontoportti’? They have good nature articles, and a useful article on this plant. I remember finding itwhen tracking name changes of its relative Eyebright.

Interesting variations on these traditions! I think I'd run across Luontoportti and then forgotten the name without bookmarking it, so I'll give it another look. Thanks for the reminder!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 05, 2020, 04:15:58 PM
Haha, poor Reynir! Great take on the prompt, Abprallen. One of my cats is like that, she'll be all friendy and happy, and then she gets too happy and bites.
Sad haiku, but so true, lovely work midwestmutt.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on July 06, 2020, 12:13:32 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 13: Family

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Today's prompt of Family is brought to us by Joe Steele!

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It was a bitterly cold night on the lake. The far shore was covered in a thick blanket of snow, and fog covered the water’s surface, hiding whatever was lurking beneath. The sky was clear, free of pollution. Strange lights hovered in the fog and almost seemed to whisper to Saku.

It might have been more beautiful if the world wasn’t ending.

Aino had given birth to a baby girl on the boat last week, and although there had been no complications, Saku still couldn’t shake his anxiety. They would run out of food and water at some point, and then what? Someone might get sick, and then what?

Eino walked out onto the deck and sat down.

“Beautiful night, huh?”
“Yeah. I’m worried though.”
“About what?”
“Just...the world is ending. We had so much more growing up then Ensi ever will. What’s going to be left for her after this?”

There was silence.

“Well, she has us, and we have each other, and maybe that will have to be enough."


Thanks very much to Joe Steele for today's work, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to share what you've made down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 06, 2020, 01:21:52 AM
Joe, that is beautiful.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Grade E cat on July 06, 2020, 02:41:42 AM
"Family" prompts always produce sweet things as far as I can tell.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 06, 2020, 09:34:35 AM
The world is so wide,
You start exploring within,
The family circle.

From birth to the grave,
only one thing remains true,
the family circle.

We pass through our years,
In an expanding bubble,
The circle of life.

Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thorny on July 06, 2020, 09:44:14 AM
My old cat is sick.
She is in her sunset year.
It's a long farewell.

I hope yours, like mine
Rallies unexpectedly
Purrs many months more.

(Not as good a haiku as your excellent one; but the wish is real.)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 06, 2020, 11:43:45 AM
I hope yours, like mine
Rallies unexpectedly
Purrs many months more.

(Not as good a haiku as your excellent one; but the wish is real.)
Thanks for the sentiment. She has a slow growing cancer in a back foot pad. She has had it for over a year now but it is incurable and spreading. So far she is in no pain and can walk, it just itches her. I treat her with a topical hydrocortisone spray for cats and watch for any signs of distress. I will care for her as long as she is happy.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 06, 2020, 07:29:02 PM
Thanks for the sentiment. She has a slow growing cancer in a back foot pad. She has had it for over a year now but it is incurable and spreading. So far she is in no pain and can walk, it just itches her. I treat her with a topical hydrocortisone spray for cats and watch for any signs of distress. I will care for her as long as she is happy.

Oh, that's hard. We had one with a tumour above one eye, she was in no obvious distress and managed for quite some time until it spread to her jaw and interfered with eating. So glad you can do something for yours, even if it's just calming an itch.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 06, 2020, 07:51:16 PM
Joe Steele, what a lovely scene. I wonder if fretting for his daughter made Saku less of a hypochondriac?

Splendid set of haiku, midwestmutt! I wish I could come up with one, but I'm too tired to think.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on July 06, 2020, 11:21:07 PM
the blood of the cuts
the scrapes and the scuffs
we shed side by side
in trenches and roughs

through dark of the woods
and light of the plains
through pain-wailing loss
and joy-whooping gain

is thicker than blood
of familial lines
for ties of respect
take these things to bind:

the mending of wounds
and baring of limps
confiding of fears
and sharing of strength

the never leaving
you to face alone
the things you most fear
the places unknown

It does not matter
if kin blood we bleed
for something thicker
makes us family

--

Inspired by the phrase "the blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb." The SSSS crew has been through a lot together, and I think has become like family. I wanted to write something open-ended that could apply to any of the characters/relationships.

Aaa there are so many good submissions since last I posted. To everyone who's contributed, I don't have the energy to acknowledge you all individually at the moment, but know that this excludes no-one: your work is lovely and brings me joy.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on July 07, 2020, 12:32:15 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 14: In You I See Myself

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Today's prompt of In You I See Myself is brought to us by Wavewright62!

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(https://i.imgur.com/KG1E04U.jpg)

Sigríður Jónsdóttir c.71, enjoying time with her kids, Ólafur and Hildur (playing their favourite game “Rampaging Giant”), Guðrún, Bjarni, and baby Reynir.  Every parent finds themselves reflected in their children, regardless of the origins of those children.


Thanks very much to Wavewright for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to share what you've made down below!

Today's original prompt was Sharing of Knowledge by thegreyarea, but as he's had unexpected work circumstances come up, he'll be completing it at a later date. Best of luck with your work, Grey, and we look forward to seeing your piece when you have time to get it done!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Grade E cat on July 07, 2020, 02:21:56 AM
It must have been something when all five of them were still living at home, indeed.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 07, 2020, 04:50:03 AM
Such lovely families (including of course Wave's art)!

Wave, I deeply concur with Grade E Cat - they must have been a handful! I absolutely love the "rampaging giant"! And the details of the clothing are spot on!

Scottish, another lovely piece. I'm sure they do feel like a family now! Which probably explains why they are all here. With the exception of Emil, none of the others actually had reason to follow Lalli - except that this is how families roll.

Midwestmutt, all your haikus are beautiful! This series of three is perhaps my favorite so far. Also hugs to your poor cat! And yourself.

Jon, I love how you convey the Hotakainens' deep solidarity to one another! Also the mention of the mist almost whispering to Saku is great! It's a common fan theory that the magic comes from Saku's line, and this is a great way of referencing it! I would agree with Vulpes, Saku's various ailments will probably be much lessened by having to deal with raising a baby in an apocalypse.

Abprallen, poor Reynir! But surely he knows it doesn't mean Kitty wouldn't love him anyways! Annuil, I also read it meaning he is otherwise heartbroken and seeks for comfort from Kitty - to no avail, at the moment. But I'm sure he'll soon be happier again!

Count, great piece! So much for privacy! But when will he call! (I'm so old that we had a phone with the round thingy you used to dial :) )

And I have probably forgotten someone again. Lovely content, everyone! I really like this soon-to-be-tradition! And we made it to the forum News! Wohoo!

Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 07, 2020, 09:03:49 AM
You are my mirror.
I see my own life in yours.
Oh you poor fellow.

Back to the the light-hearted stuff. I'm trying to perk myself up in these trying times.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 07, 2020, 09:47:54 AM
Wavewright, as mother/grandmother/great-grandmother of a large and various family, I find that picture so true!

Midwestmutt, I can sympathise with your mirror haiku! Especially at present. I remember, as a tiny child, being fascinated by ‘the baby in the mirror’ and wanting to play with her. Never did catch her though. We could all do with a bit of perking up at present, I reckon! I know I have an anniversary of some wild events I lived through 27 years ago, which is a rather dark memory, but ameliorated by being also the birthday of a dear friend, and of one of my granddaughters, as well as by the company of old friends and companions.

Scottish, that also goes for your poem! No companionship and understanding matches that of the people who have survived horrors with you.

Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 07, 2020, 08:16:19 PM
I like your take on family, scottishnottish. Lovely poem.
Wavewright, have you been spying on my cousins?  :haw:  That is so reminiscent of the chaos in their house when the whole brood was young, right down to mother enjoying the noisy antics.
I snorted at your haiku, midwestmutt, and startled my cat. Good one!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 07, 2020, 08:43:08 PM
Another take on the prompt:

Mia helps her mother in the kitchen sometimes.
"Mum, how long should I cook this jam?"
"Til it's done," says Ulrike.
"How will I know it's done?"
"It will look done."
"Muuuuum! That's no help!"

Ulrike watches as little Torbjörn helps his mother in the kitchen.
"Mum, how long should I knead this dough?"
"Til it's done," says Mia.
She turns and looks at her mother.
"I'm turning into you!"
Ulrike laughs.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 07, 2020, 10:44:16 PM
I love your story, Vulpes! It reminds me of my own mom speaking like her mom, my grandma :'D

All these stories and poems and other works here are so wonderful! I was a little busy, so I didn’t post anything and didn’t get time to make anything, but it’s so great to read all of this when there is a free minute!
 
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Count_Shrekula on July 07, 2020, 10:58:27 PM
Aaah, I've been busy lately, but thanks for all the kind words! Sorry my piece was so late!
I'm taken away by the sheer talent in all these submissions and the extra poetry! It's been great looking through them all.
In particular, Abprallen, I loved your heartbreak piece, and Wavewright62, baby Reynir is sooo cute.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on July 08, 2020, 01:38:02 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 15: Loss

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Today's prompt of Loss is brought to us by GaelleDragons!

Spoiler: show

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Thanks very much to GaelleDragons for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to share what you've made down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 08, 2020, 04:36:21 AM
Just a brief check among a ton of work, so not much writing today... :(

Wave, I love your family portrait! So well done, so vivid! And what a lovely (and big!) baby Reynir was!

Gaelle... Wow! Your talent never ceases to amaze me! Seriously, you are fantastic!

Vulpes and Scottish, great contributions!

Midwestmutt, I'm sorry to hear about your cat. I'm still in my first one, so I can just imagine how bad it is. But yours is loved and cared, and surely loves you back.
*hugs*

Butter Good, people, and sorry if I forgot someone!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 08, 2020, 06:06:37 AM
Hi, I´m finally back again and done with schoolwork (at least for this week)! :)) Hopefully I´ll be able to stick around for the rest of the chapter break.

There were so many great things posted while I was away, so I´ll keep this a bit shorter.

So many nice Haikus by midwestmutt, and may your cat have many happy days left with you! And so many lovely Reynirs (and family!) by Abprallen, wavewright and GaelleDragons! I also loved to read the conversation about different spell traditions. Plus more Hotakainen-backstory by Joe Steele, and another one of scottishnottish´s amazing poems, and Vulpes your story was so cute too and aaahh! I´m in awe! :sparkle:
I missed all the fun...  :(

But I´m happy to be back and hopefully able to contribute a few things again. Butter Good! :))
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 08, 2020, 09:27:17 AM
LOSS
Don't set a thing down.
While thinking of something else.
 Oh no! The remote!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 08, 2020, 10:53:57 AM
Oh midwestmutt, I relate to this a bit too much... It also inspired me to write a little something as well:

Loss

“Sigrun! Sigrun, have you seen my knife??? It was right here! Come on, it can´t just disappear like that?!”

Emil looked around himself hectically. He just had it in his hand. Than a bird or something cried and he looked away for five seconds and it was gone. Sigrun looked up from packing her backpack.

“How´d you manage to lose it? Fell off the rock you were sitting on?” She chuckled.

 “I don´t know! Do you see it somewhere around here?”

Sigrun at least pretended to scan the area around her. Then she got up demonstratively slow and leaned against a tree grinning.

“Sorry little guy. Haven´t seen it.”

She was lying. She was so obviously lying. It made Emil furious. He started spilling out the insides of his half-packed backpack while angrily cursing to himself.



Sigrun watched the Swede´s antics from over at her tree. Should she tell him? She figured no. He would notice eventually. For now it was way too entertaining watching her right-hand-warrior franticly searching for the knife that was exactly where it was supposed to be: in its scabbard, on his belt.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 08, 2020, 03:47:44 PM
My favorite camping game appears to be "Where is it this time?", and one of my camp rules is always put something back where you expect it to be. The 2nd may sound obvious but you wouldn't believe how many odd places I keep things just because they became a habit somehow.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 08, 2020, 04:06:21 PM
I have in some situations resorted to keeping pencils in my hair because I would lose them in seconds otherwise. So "odd places" sounds familliar. :'D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 08, 2020, 05:01:34 PM
Ahah, great story, Mirasol, so true!

And your haiku is wonderful, as always, midwestmutt ;)

The loss of the sheep! Oh, how much I understand your pain and sorrow, Reinir! Beautiful drawing, GaelleDragons!

(I accidentally did the replying in the reverse order...)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: GaelleDragons on July 08, 2020, 05:08:27 PM
Oh Mirasol this is so relatable... I stopped counting how often I go looking for my sunglasses that are on my head, same for pens tucked behind my hear. ^^"

And I'm glad you liked my art! I've been quietly enjoying all the art and writing posted here as well.  XoX
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 08, 2020, 06:10:38 PM
Gaelle that’s so beautiful!

Mirasol, your story gave me an idea but it would work better as art, which I’m rubbish at. I’m thinking of Emil eating something or otherwise engaged in some mundane task, and Lalli pilfering his knife just because :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 08, 2020, 06:27:24 PM
I love your story, Vulpes! It reminds me of my own mom speaking like her mom, my grandma :'D

Thanks! It is, as they say, based on a true story. I love all the little sayings that just bubble up without me trying - at first I felt like Mia (I'm too young to become my parents!) but now it's a welcome tie to them. A few examples:
"You've got to eat a peck of dirt before you die." (What does that mean, even?)
"It sticks like snot to a screen door." (I now know that this would perhaps be bewildering to Finns and New Zealanders due to the rarity of screen doors.)
"Think thrice, measure twice, cut once." (My father was a careful carpenter, as was his father.)
"It's good, clean dirt." (Said when picking up and eating something that dropped on the ground.)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 08, 2020, 06:39:19 PM
Lovely takes on loss! Gaelle's is a literal "circle of life"-relevant interpretation, and so beautiful. Poor Reynir! And two less literal ones from midwestmutt and Mirasol - both spot-on and all too familiar! I was just doing dishes and looking for what I call a "neurosis mug" - that mug that one always drinks coffee from, or it doesn't feel right - and I couldn't find the blipping thing anywhere. Then the penny dropped... I had coffee in town while doing errands, so the mug was exactly where it should be, in the cupboard.  ::)

Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 08, 2020, 07:24:29 PM
A peck in this context is a unit of measurement by dry volume, being about two gallons or a quarter of a bushel in the old Imperial system, if I remember correctly. And I have always taken the proverb to mean that small misfortunes and inconveniences happen to everyone, and the world affects us all, and of course that dirt gets everywhere. The saying always reminds me of that oh-so-true song ‘The Housewife’s Lament’, which has the chorus:
‘For life is a toil, and love is a trouble
Beauty will fade and riches will flee,
Wages they dwindle and prices they double,
And nothing is as I would wish it to be’.

As to screen doors, I am fairly sure I remember them from New Zealand, though I can’t speak for Finland, though I think I remember having seen screened windows there - they certainly have mosquitoes. We have them commonly in Australia, because flies! And the variant I know is ‘Sticks like s*excrement*t to a blanket’.
 
My gran used to say ‘It’s good clean dirt’, when we kids would drop bread or apples in the garden, which amused me, and my grandfather had the one about cutting and measuring, which I took to mean that planning saved work and waste of materials.

I love proverbs and old sayings!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on July 09, 2020, 12:15:28 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 16: Support

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Today's prompt of Support is brought to us by ScottishNottish!

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Mikkel stoked the fire, and tossed another log on. He replaced the fire iron on its rack, and dusted his hands together. The warm light brushed across the bricks of the fireplace, the sturdy centerpiece of the crumbling room. Around it the walls were half rotted away. The parts of the ceiling that hadn’t collapsed sagged halfway to the floor. The furniture was rotten and chewed up, and Mikkel had cleared rats out of the couch before pulling it close to the fireplace. In front of the couch sat a table on three legs and a stack of crates. Two other chairs sat around: solid wooden ones salvaged from the ruins of the kitchen. And above the fireplace, keeping an eye on them all, the skull and antlers of a huge moose.

Mikkel took a seat next to Sigrun on the couch. Lalli was curled on the other side, next to Emil in a kitchen chair but sharing Lalli’s armrest. They were examining a sheet in front of them, whispering in a mix of Swedish and Finnish. Reynir sat opposite on the table, behind a faded cardboard tri-fold with a painting of a dragon on it.

In the middle of the table laid a printed map and several small plastic figurines. Reynir’s tongue stuck out from the corner of his mouth as he flipped through a big book, studying its pages intensely, the flicker of the firelight in his eyes.

Reynir had leapt for joy when he’d found the game. Well preserved beneath a stack of other boxes in the ruins of a general store: a strategy game of wizards and magic and adventure—or so it claimed to be; there seemed to be endless dice rolls and math before the fun could begin. Sigrun had been growing visibly more bored for the past hour as Reynir had studied.

“I swear if we don’t stop doing math soon and start killing dragons like Freckles promised, I’m throwing this dumb game in the fire,” Sigrun whispered. Mikkel stifled a smirk.

All was quiet but for the patter of rain outside the fogged windows, the whispers of the Swede and Finn, and the soft snapping of the fire. Sigrun put down her pencil, and picked up a twenty-sided die from a scattered assortment of other dice. Mikkel picked the pencil up—one of two good ones he’d found in the abandoned house, shared between them all—and marked a few notes on the sheet in front of him.

Character Name __________
Class __________
Background __________
Race __________
Alignment __________

He filled them out one by one, thinking carefully about each of the options, and frequently consulting a dusty old handbook.

Reynir lowered his book, and cleared his throat. “So, I’ve played this a few times with my siblings, although the version we played was a little different I think. But I think I’ve got the rules figured out pretty well. Has everybody rolled their characters?”

Sigrun gave the die another roll, and borrowed the pencil to mark on her sheet. “I keep getting twenties. That’s good, right?”
Reynir squinted. “Erm, I may have to take a look at your stats. What class are you playing?”
“I’m a fighter,” she said, and mimed swinging an axe.
Reynir made a note. “Okay, and your race?”
“Uhh… Norwegian?”
Reynir shook his head. “No I mean for the game. You could be a human, dwarf, elf—”
“Oh! Human.”
Another note. “And your character name?”
“Sigrun.”
Reynir’s pencil hovered in the air. “You’re just playing as yourself?”
“Pssh. Why would I be anyone else?”

Mikkel laughed quietly to himself. It was an amazingly Sigrun answer. So self-assured, no hesitation. It was the core of her being, the drive in everything she did. She knew who she was, what she was about. She never had to pretend to be anyone else, for her sake, or for others. He admired that about her.

“Fair enough.” Reynir said, and leafed through his book again. “Okay, so Sigrun will cover the front-line role. You’ll charge in first and draw the enemies onto you while the rest of your party deals damage. We’ll also need some sort of ranged damage, so maybe a wizard or a druid.”
Emil scraped his sheet off the table. “I’ll be a high-elf sorcerer. Named Fredrik.”
“Okay.”
Emil shrugged. “Naturally gifted and powerful, seems like it’d suit me.”
“You’ll have access to lots of fire-magic as you level up as well.”
Emil brushed his hair back with one hand and looked away. “I mean, yeah, I do other things too, you know.”
Lalli patted Emil’s shoulder gently.

Reynir flipped through his book again, sputtering a little. “Right. Okay, uh, so you’ll need a support class for healing and buffs, and I’d also recommend someone adept in stealth as well, so maybe a rogue or ranger.”
Emil translated in what sounded like broken Finnish. Lalli voiced confusion. Emil voiced explanation, assurance. Lalli, understanding. Then, with slushy Swedish, he said “Ranger.”
“He’ll be a wood elf,” Emil added.
“Character name?” Reynir said.
Again, Emil and Lalli talked quietly for a moment, then Emil turned to Reynir. “Lalli.”
Reynir’s face fell slightly, but he marked it down.  “Okay. So that leaves…”

“Guess that leaves you with the support class big guy.” Sigrun nudged Mikkel with her elbow. It was playful, warm, everything he’d missed in his time after he left the military.

Mikkel nodded. “I will play as a Cleric of the dwarf race. His name is Magnus.” His grandfather’s name, broad and sturdy.

Reynir nodded. “Alright. I’ll give everyone a minute to finish filling out your character sheets.”

Sigrun leaned in conspiratorially close to Mikkel, a little twinkle in her eye, or it may have been the firelight. “We’re all kind of filling the same roles as usual huh? Me, the tough leader, Emil the master of destruction, Lalli the stealthy scout, I guess Reynir is playing a different role than usual, but you being the support, holding the team up eh?” No, there was certainly a twinkle there.
Mikkel raised an eyebrow. Ever tempered. For a moment, just a moment, he considered letting his guard down. “You all would manage without me.”
“C’mon. You do enjoy it, don’t you?”
And there she was, poking at his guard.
“Stitching up your bloody wounds?” It was meant as a joke, but perhaps it was too cool.
Sigrun didn’t seem to mind. “Taking care of us.”
“You flatter me.” He knew it wasn’t true.
“I’m not a flatterer, Mikkel Madsen. It’s tough out here. It’s hard enough staying alive, much less sane.”

That caught him by surprise. Sigrun wasn’t the type to be vulnerable, even in such a small way. He’d often felt they were the same in that way. But if she could let her guard down for him, then perhaps…

He gave her a significant look, which she seemed to notice, just for a moment, but her eyes quickly shifted away. It wasn’t a romantic moment, but there was a small longing in it.

Mikkel’s family had always been utilitarian when it came to marriage. Romance was of little importance, what mattered in the Madsen family was friendship, someone who would come by your side and stay by your side. Someone surefooted, steady. It wasn’t the first time he’d thought of Sigrun this way. He wasn’t getting any younger, and it seemed harder with each passing year to make meaningful connections with other people. Not that he’d ever been a social butterfly, but even so—the years seemed to grow less and less kind, but perhaps not terribly so with someone by his side. Someone steady.

“I don’t often rely on others for that, you know,” she said. “I appreciate your support.” Her guard slipped a little farther down, but he wasn’t quite ready to lower his own. Not yet.
Still, he gave a little smile, just enough for her to see, and no-one else. “I am honored to provide it, Captain.”
“We make a pretty good team, don’t you think?”
He did think. Of course he did.

“Hey, you two,” Reynir said.
“Hmm?” Mikkel said instinctually, breaking from Sigrun's gaze as if nothing had happened. He betrayed nothing, only a perfected calm, cool demeanor, as usual.
Reynir held out plastic figurines for them. “Ready to start?”
Mikkel let Sigrun take one first, then took his own: a short, sturdy dwarf. “Ready when you are, Captain,” he said to Sigrun. She watched him for a moment, trying to read a foreign language she hadn’t quite got the hang of, then turned and placed her figurine on the map.

No, not yet.

Reynir grinned, and leaned over his book, hidden slightly behind the tri-fold. He spoke in a low, haunted tone. “Alright, your party is wandering through a forest at dusk, when you come across an ancient stone bridge over a rushing brook…”



As a bonus, a few interactions that happened once the game got rolling:

Sigrun: “I jump off the roof and land on the bandit.”
Reynir: “Well, it’s a twenty foot drop, you’ll break your legs.”
Sigrun: “No I wouldn’t. I’ve jumped off things twice as tall and been fine.”
Reynir: “I… don’t think so?”
Sigrun: “I’ll prove it. The roof of this house is about twenty feet, if I can jump off it without breaking my legs then you have to let me do it in the game.”
Mikkel: “There is no way I’m allowing this Sigrun.”

Reynir: “The dragon is sleeping on a pile of gold, you approach cautiously, careful not to--”
Sigrun: “I punch it.”
Reynir: “You… punch the dragon?”
Sigrun: “Right in the snout.”
Reynir: “... so the dragon wakes up and has a delicious breakfast of roasted Sigrun.”

Mikkel: “I cast prayer of healing, and heal Sigrun for… 23 points of damage. Of course if this were real life you'd be very dead, Sigrun, as prayers can't heal people and magic isn't real, so I advise you to take a different course of action in any actual combat scenarios."

Emil: “I cast Wall of Fire.”
Reynir: “That’s a 5th level spell.”
Emil: “Yeah I’m level 5.”
Reynir: “No, 5th level means…”
Lalli: “Oh Onni did this once.”
Reynir: “What”
Lalli: “Big fiery bird. Swoop down from the sky.”
Reynir: “...”
Lalli: “You can do it but you’ll sleep for a week after.”

Reynir: “The troll climbs up from beneath the bridge, and blocks your path.”
Lalli: “How big?”
Reynir: “About 12 feet tall.”
Sigrun: “Who in our party is immune?”
Reynir: “Oh it’s not that kind of troll, it’s more like the ones from the fairytales.”
Lalli: “I see. And he will eat me?”
Reynir: “He looks like he might.”
Lalli: “Okay. I tell him to eat Emil instead. More meat.”
Emil: “Hey!”
Reynir: “...”
Emil: “I tell him to eat Mikkel instead.”
Mikkel: “...”
Reynir: “...roll a persuasion check.”


Thanks very much to Scottish for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to share what you've made down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 09, 2020, 05:33:20 AM
Hahaa, wonderful! Thank you Scottish! A brilliant take on Mikkel (and Sigrun), with a little of EmiLalli on the side. I really liked the way you presented Mikkel's musings, it seems very like him.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 09, 2020, 06:10:05 AM
Scottish, that's brilliant! I loved many parts, but “Pssh. Why would I be anyone else?” from Sigrun killed me!  ;D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 09, 2020, 06:12:01 AM
Scottish, this is extremely funny! And I’m with Sigrun:  the few times I have played D&D I constructed a character as near as possible to myself, and had fun.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 09, 2020, 08:13:01 AM
Greeeeat, Scottish! D&D during a camp in a half-standing house, near the fireplace, isn’t it nice? Adventure in an adventure  ;D


I loved many parts, but “Pssh. Why would I be anyone else?” from Sigrun killed me!  ;D

Yes! That was a good way to show her personality, you understand her character so well! (I love writing dialogs just because it really helps to present the characters)  ;D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 09, 2020, 09:56:07 AM
Support comes in many forms, from one's loved ones, teammates, community, family... Being surrounded by a supportive environment can be very healing. Let's hope the Hotakainens will find their peace!

Support

Emil was getting accustomed to country living. It was very beautiful at Toivosaari, and he enjoyed the work at their building site. Sometimes it was just the three of them working either on Emil and Lalli’s house, or Onni’s. Other times they helped some of the other people of the village putting up ridge beams or very large timbers. Similarly they received help whenever more strength or hands were required. The people were friendly and supportive of his attempts at so far quite broken Finnish.

And most importantly, Lalli flourished among his own. He definitely wasn’t a social butterfly, but he was clearly comfortable with most of the neighbors, as long as there weren’t too many people together. He went so far as to make the effort to arrive at the village meetings or occasional feast, even if he soon slipped away to watch from a little distance. Even Onni was… well, not relaxed, but less tense here than Emil had ever seen him. Being back to Finland really was good for both of them.

He really did want to build his life here, and he was making steps towards it. Sometimes some of the neighbors may turn up to ask just for him, if they needed only one person. And after he’d taken to the habit of playing with the kids (there weren’t many yet), he was sometimes asked to come help with them, which he loved to do. Two of the kids were even interested in learning some Swedish from him.

But. Toivosaari was small. In fact, it was a tiny village. The good side was everybody knew each other well, and you could always trust to receive help from anyone you asked. The bad side… sometimes it was a bit boring. There were no shops, no events, no radio. Even the newspaper came about 1-2 times a month, and was of course in Finnish.

Sometimes Emil felt isolated and frustrated to not know anything about the comings and goings of the Scandinavian capital. Or fashion! Lalli made clear they can take the trip to the capital island to shop for clothes or whatever Emil wanted, but it was hardly the same.

One Wednesday in late September the weekly post boat arrived again. Emil happened to be at the village waterfront, so he heard the postman yelling: “Paketti Emil Västerrstrröömmille! Asuuko täällä joku Västerrstrrööm?”
“Oi, that’s me! Thank you!” The parcel was fairly large, about the length of his lower arm each way. The postal markings on top said MORA. Oh, what could it be!

Back at the home sauna, Emil sat on the porch and pried open the parcel. It was a treasure chest! There were two really nice shirts, some cookies and sweets in glass jars (Emil made a mental note to turn those over to Lalli... well, most of them at least), newspapers and even a fashion magazine. And best of all! Three bottles of Emil’s favorite shampoo, and one of conditioner!

The enclosed long letter gave him news of how things were in Mora and Sweden in general, as well as about how his cousins, uncle and aunt were doing. In closing, Siv had written: “I enclose a few items you may find hard to come by in Saimaa. I know your hair may get tangly in wintertime, so I added the conditioner too. With love, your aunt”.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 09, 2020, 10:01:23 AM
I'm sure you worked out this is direct continuation to "Warmth" from last break. They are living in the sauna until the houses are up.

The postman just says "Parcel for Emil Västerstöm! Is there someone named Västerström living here?". I can't show in English all of the differences in pronunciation when a Finnish-only person says his Swedish name, but maybe you get some of the idea. It sounds funny to Emil, but understandable :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 09, 2020, 10:22:35 AM
Ah, scottish, that's brilliant very clever - just noticed everyone else said brillant, let's get some variety in our praise, here! You captured their characters so succinctly. And such a lovely scene.

Jitter, I like your continuation of the EmilLalli story, it works by itself but I did remember the previous bit, too. As someone with very tangly hair, I've sometimes wondered how I'd cope in the apocalypse, because I'm sure there would be no more conditioner. Then I discovered half-strength apple cider vinegar - it works surprisingly well.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 09, 2020, 10:35:30 AM
A peck in this context is a unit of measurement by dry volume, being about two gallons or a quarter of a bushel in the old Imperial system, if I remember correctly. And I have always taken the proverb to mean that small misfortunes and inconveniences happen to everyone, and the world affects us all, and of course that dirt gets everywhere. The saying always reminds me of that oh-so-true song ‘The Housewife’s Lament’, which has the chorus:
‘For life is a toil, and love is a trouble
Beauty will fade and riches will flee,
Wages they dwindle and prices they double,
And nothing is as I would wish it to be’.

As to screen doors, I am fairly sure I remember them from New Zealand, though I can’t speak for Finland, though I think I remember having seen screened windows there - they certainly have mosquitoes. We have them commonly in Australia, because flies! And the variant I know is ‘Sticks like s*excrement*t to a blanket’.
 
My gran used to say ‘It’s good clean dirt’, when we kids would drop bread or apples in the garden, which amused me, and my grandfather had the one about cutting and measuring, which I took to mean that planning saved work and waste of materials.

I love proverbs and old sayings!

I figured you'd recognise these! I had to do math skills tests with gallons, bushels, pecks and the rest (no idea why, we had gone metric by that point), so that's no mystery to me, it's the general meaning that's obscure - could mean a little dirt won't hurt you (which is what I figure it means) or the opposite, that once you've eaten a peck of dirt, you die, so don't eat dirt! That'd be a heckuva lot of dirt...  O_o

The comment about screen doors was a bit cryptic, it related to a side-conversation on the video discussion thread. I was struck that Minna was chasing mozzies in her house (mentioned in one of her videos), and Jitter said that screen doors are rare in Finland. Wavewright chimed in that NZ has few screens also. I am still reeling from this information!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 09, 2020, 01:01:28 PM
Thank you all! Looks like I´m not alone with my inability to keep track of objects. :'D

Mirasol, your story gave me an idea but it would work better as art, which I’m rubbish at. I’m thinking of Emil eating something or otherwise engaged in some mundane task, and Lalli pilfering his knife just because :)

Aaaaah... I tried to draw that but I apparently spontaneously forgot how drawing works, so that probably won´t be happening... At least not today. :P If someone else wants to try their hands at it, please do, I would like to see that scene! (if you´re ok with it, Jitter)

scottish, your story was sweet and hilarious. Very in-character, and Sigrun was an entire mood all the time. :'D I wish I had someone to play DnD with, I never got the chance before...

Jitter, lovely story! Was it...
I'm sure you worked out this is direct continuation to "Warmth" from last break. They are living in the sauna until the houses are up.

Ah yes, I was just about to ask. And aww, that package by Siv was so sweet! :siv:
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 09, 2020, 01:40:28 PM
I have scant familiarity with gaming and D&D except what I learn from gamer based webcomics. Our heroes turncoat playing style seems straight out of Full Frontal Nerdity. Well played Scottishnottish.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 09, 2020, 02:12:35 PM
Mirasol, I’d love someone to art it!

And thanks all. It’s not within my 300 word limit, but then I have only written a couple.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 09, 2020, 06:28:49 PM
We help each other
through the long, dry chapter break
Three more days, Minnions.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 09, 2020, 06:56:17 PM
Jitter, I love your story! It's so well done! I must learn to make short stories like that!

And it gave me an idea. I don't know if they still have that kind of advertising in Y91, but anyway I will draw Emil as posterboy for some shampoo brand! :D (I just don't know when I'll be able to do that, but I will...)

Midwestsmutt, you are truly inspired on your haiku series! 
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 09, 2020, 07:42:37 PM
Jitter, lovely story! And yeah, diluted cider vinegar can work as conditioner, but with Emil’s golden hair I would use chamomile tea with a splash of rosewater or even add a handful of rose petals to the tea, or he could add some nettle tips to strengthen the hair. Let it steep for ten minutes, strain out the herbs, massage it into the hair and scalp and let it stay in the hair to scent it and make it shiny. And while he is creating a new beauty routine perhaps he could start washing his face in fresh cold dew from the clover plants - that was what I learned as a girl on a farm as a way to keep my skin nice. Or he could even do it with dew from the hawthorn tree, but that works best on the first of May. I wonder whether Finnish magic has a spell to go with that, as do French, English and Irish magic? English has a little rhyme about it:

‘The maiden who, on the first of May
Goes to the fields at break of day
And washes in dew from the hawthorn tree
Will ever after lovely be’.

I can just picture Emil getting up early to do that, with Lalli tagging along and thinking it was sweet! Such a pity that I totally lack the art skill!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on July 09, 2020, 11:23:38 PM
Jitter, you know I gotta have a little EmiLalli on the side. For self care. And a very nice story from you, I love your cozy take on domestic-life EmiLalli.

thegreyarea I was definitely inserting a bit of myself when Mikkel was admiring Sigrun's self-confidence!

Róisín ah I can never play a character too like myself, I'd be bored so quickly!

Annuil I give all credit to Minna for such clearly-defined characters heh, I find them very easy to write.

Vulpes but brilliant is a brilliant word!

Mirasol I've played a handful of times but always enjoy it! I hope you can find a good-natured group to play with.

midwestmutt I actually got into D&D because of a podcast called The Adventure Zone, which features lots of goofs and shenanigans so I was very inspired by that hah. And a very encouraging haiku, thanks!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on July 10, 2020, 12:26:55 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

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Prompt 17: Contentment

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Today's prompt of Contentment is brought to us by none other than event organiser Keep Looking!

Spoiler: show

Beneath the reaching arms of mountains tall
In valleys far from swift and shifting seas
No dock-sides where the seagulls screech their call -
Where craggy slopes are grass-clad, there I’ll be

And I will build a home where rivers wind
Through gravel-beds of rolling, shifting stones
Where dancing lambs the springtime slopes do climb
To look upon the valleys where they roam

Though monsters cry in lands beyond our shores
And all that we had known has come to fall
This home is safe - I could not ask for more
I’ll find contentment here, despite it all

The ghosts I left behind may haunt me still
The thunder-drum of gunshots on the waves
Does echo on, my heart and mind to fill
With hopeless, helpless guilt upon my name

And in my dreams I walk an endless sea
Where twisting demons lie beneath my feet
And wake, and watch the ripples as I flee
With vain, vain hope that someday land I’ll meet

But cradled by the mountains when I wake
I rise and let my past be left behind
So life can give as much as it will take
And all that I have here will come to mind

To feel the ground stay firm beneath my feet
And watch the colours of the land and sky
That paint the blueing edges where they meet
While seasons change and year on year goes by

Yes, I will stay here in these grass-clad halls
And find contentment here, despite it all.


Thanks very much to Keep Looking for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to share what you've made down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 10, 2020, 03:20:53 AM
Keep Looking, a very touching take on Árni! I often find myself thinking about what it would be like. How fundamental the survivor’s guilt would be, especially for the Icelanders (and Árni of course personally participated). No wonde Iceland turned away from the world and decided to take a fresh start! But the human mind cannot bury things as well as a society maybe can, when it puts all efforts on it.

Also cool reference to the magic!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 10, 2020, 04:24:40 AM
Emily, that is beautiful! And I love your take on Arni’s magic, and the strangeness of the Dream Sea. In some ways that concept of the space where the magic rests is very like that of the Celtic and native Australian cultures. Eventually in my fic set in the far future I am going to cover the Celtic one, and in ‘Year 3, very far to the South’ we will cover what happens to Singer and Warri there.
Thank you for a good Arni poem!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 10, 2020, 04:29:38 AM
KeepLooking, that's so beautiful, and touching. As Jitter said, survivor's guilt must have been strong... Also , I loved the glimpse of Reynir already showing in his ancestor on "And in my dreams I walk an endless sea | Where twisting demons lie beneath my feet"! Very well done! :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 10, 2020, 09:45:53 AM
If you want to see
the apex of contentment
look at a fed cat
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 10, 2020, 09:57:38 AM
Have just fed my two after dropping my stuff off at the market hall and coming in for the night. About to have dinner myself, hopefully before midnight! Lovely haiku!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: JoB on July 10, 2020, 10:05:21 AM
I don't know if they still have that kind of advertising in Y91, but anyway I will draw Emil as posterboy for some shampoo brand! :D
Even if the other stuff looks more like a wall newspaper instead of an ad poster, the cleansers sure do it (http://www.sssscomic.com/comic.php?page=134).
(I'm unclear whether that scene is supposed to take place in Mora, or Östersund. It's a bit in the past in either case.)

My laptop's currently acting up, so I can't check, but Y91 Iceland does at least have ads in their newspapers (memento un-skunking your cat) ...

... places with really low population densities (rural Finland) might still make ad posters a non-starter, of course ...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 10, 2020, 11:07:33 AM
Even if the other stuff looks more like a wall newspaper instead of an ad poster, the cleansers sure do it (http://www.sssscomic.com/comic.php?page=134).
(I'm unclear whether that scene is supposed to take place in Mora, or Östersund. It's a bit in the past in either case.)

My laptop's currently acting up, so I can't check, but Y91 Iceland does at least have ads in their newspapers (memento un-skunking your cat) ...

... places with really low population densities (rural Finland) might still make ad posters a non-starter, of course ...
Well noted, JoB! I had that idea too. As far as I remember, however, we just saw institutional/governmental ads and also service ads in the comic, but not product advertising to consumers (like shampoo ads). But just because they are not show doesn't means they don't exist, particularly in newspapers and magazines.
I'll try to make something black&white, 50's or 60's style... something like this:
(please note that it's a link to a commercial page. I never bought them anything, and I'm not selling nor endorsing it in anyway. it's here just because it's well done, and funny)
Spoiler: show
https://www.etsy.com/listing/163737498/vintage-social-media-posters-set-of-4?ref=shop_home_active_14 (https://www.etsy.com/listing/163737498/vintage-social-media-posters-set-of-4?ref=shop_home_active_14)

:)
but, as I said, not now, neither soon, I'm afraid.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 10, 2020, 11:57:10 AM
In Iceland there were ads for the cat spa and the horsey cafe at least!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: GaelleDragons on July 10, 2020, 01:19:49 PM
Mirasol, your story gave me an idea but it would work better as art, which I’m rubbish at. I’m thinking of Emil eating something or otherwise engaged in some mundane task, and Lalli pilfering his knife just because :)
Aaaaah... I tried to draw that but I apparently spontaneously forgot how drawing works, so that probably won´t be happening... At least not today. :P If someone else wants to try their hands at it, please do, I would like to see that scene! (if you´re ok with it, Jitter)

I took the liberty of drawing that scene, so here goes

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/b341db75-28ed-416a-bd81-a49fbce10349/de13iz2-52afa860-6c01-431c-a644-c433b65f83ea.png?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOiIsImlzcyI6InVybjphcHA6Iiwib2JqIjpbW3sicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvYjM0MWRiNzUtMjhlZC00MTZhLWJkODEtYTQ5ZmJjZTEwMzQ5XC9kZTEzaXoyLTUyYWZhODYwLTZjMDEtNDMxYy1hNjQ0LWM0MzNiNjVmODNlYS5wbmcifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6ZmlsZS5kb3dubG9hZCJdfQ.cABoLOEVVtsKZxreEiuks4p2e9zpETwFSj2dP2oF3Rs)

I know it's pretty Not Nice of Lalli to pilfer Emil's sword while he's working on his Finnish, but I wouldn't qualify Lalli as someone particularly Nice, so... ^^"
Now the question is: where will Lalli hide the knife? What would be the last place Emil would go looking for it? Mhhh... O:-)

Also I didn't know what the word "pilfering" meant in english until now, so thank you Jitter for helping me expand my english vocabulary ^^"

Edit: the image disappeared for a moment, oops! I've resized it, it should show up now. ^^"
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 10, 2020, 01:33:46 PM
Don´t mind me just patiently waiting over here for artblock to pass~  And of course reading through all of these lovely contributions!

midwestmutt, yes! We will get through the dreaded chapter break! :) And I don´t have a cat but I can imagine it vividly in front of my inner eye. Wonderful Haikus!

Róisín I could totally see Emil doing this. Hm... should I draw this? But it involves plants again...  :'D

KeepLooking, that is an awesome poem! I can´t really put into words what I like about it so much, but I keep rereading it.

Grey, that sounds like an amazing and hilarious idea! I hope you have the time to draw it soon.

And GaelleDragons, ahaha, this is hilarious! :'D And beautifully drawn. Thank you for bringing the scene to life!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 10, 2020, 02:16:57 PM
Gaelle, that is wonderful! I love the word "pilfer", and it seems more in the right tone than e.g. "steal". Which Lalli certainly would never do!  O:-)

Midwestmutt, another brilliant haiku! I love your series!

Contentment

Walking back towards Spirit House, Reynir felt a passing uneasiness. He closed his eyes and cast his spirit forward. The students, the members of the Circle… they were all right. But – Onni wasn’t. He was in pain again. His unwavering beacon for all these decades. Well, there must be endings, to make room for new beginnings. This new pain seemed to be the beginning of an end.

Approaching his old companion, Reynir smiled warmly. “How are you feeling?”
“I’m fine. Stop fussing!” Onni’s voice was terse, but his smile revealed he didn’t mind Reynir asking.
“Onni, I felt it, coming in. It’s a new one, isn’t it?”
“Yes. I think it is. In the lungs, I think. My luonto is even more tired than before.” Casting his spirit again just for a second, Reynir saw the old owl sleeping on Onni’s shoulder. He hadn’t been awake much for months now.
“Do you think… surely it’s not time yet?”
“No, not yet. But the time is coming. I know it, you know it… and again I feel it too.”

“Shall we bathe? Maybe it won’t help with the lungs, but it sure helps with the bones.” Reynir was old, and he’d been walking for hours. Not to mention carrying the lamb, who had felt light when he picked her up, but soon reminded him of his years.
“Oh, all right. If you insist!” Reynir knew Onni loved the hot spring just as much as he did. He beckoned two students over to help them to the bathing hall.

Sitting in the soothing heat, Onni sighed, both wistful and content. “Building the House here at the spring was your best idea ever, freckles.”
“Thank you, I like to think so myself as well. Although I have had some other moments too!”
“Well, maybe… once or twice.” Onni closed his eyes and grimaced, but soon his face relaxed.

“So, Onni… do you regret coming here? To live with us? With me?”
“Oh Mielikki help me! How can you still be so stupid? How could I regret it! My life has been so… so much more than I ever imagined, even as a proud kid, the gifted grandson of the great Ensi Hotakainen. I couldn’t regret it, even if it was just half of this!”

After a moment’s silence Onni added “But I am sad that I won’t see the forests anymore. Should have visited when there was still time. And don’t even try, the birch woods don’t count. You know that.”
“I will contact Lumi. Last time we talked, things were peaceful in the East. I’m sure she can spare Kaapo for a short while, to carry your spirit to Koli once more.”
“That would be good. That would be very good… Thank you. For everything.”

Under the warm water Onni took Reynir’s hand. Reynir squeezed back. He would hold on till the end.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 10, 2020, 05:57:06 PM
Jitter, that is so sad and beautiful!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 10, 2020, 07:19:09 PM
Jitter, that's so beautiful and bittersweet! I'm out of words!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 10, 2020, 08:13:57 PM
Woo, have a busy day and internet down for a few hours, and look at all the stuff that happens! More spot-on midwestmutt haiku, Keep Looking's beautiful main contribution, some excellent heart-string tugging by Jitter, and something from Gaelle that I can't see for some reason.  :(  Plus the usual great banter I've come to expect here.

I semi-promised a cameo appearance of the Hotakainen boat, and actually managed to find time to edit down a great rambling mess of vague ideas into something not too long, so here's my take on contentment. It popped into my mind as soon as someone suggested focusing on secondary characters, and I really wanted to include the boat!

The boat had been on blocks in the yard since the autumn of Year 0, but every spring Aino still cleaned the cabin. She always said it was to make sure nothing was nesting in it, but really it was her last link with Before. On this fine spring day, then, she leaned a ladder against the hull, and climbed stiffly onto the deck once more.

She stepped into the quiet cabin and stood a moment, transported back to that rainy autumn. She and Saku had been planning, their minds leaping years ahead. She smiled at the image of little Ensi taking piano lessons, with plump child hands, frowning over the keyboard. But memories intruded - little Ensi, her hands gripping the edge of the table, frowning.

"Can't you hear them? They say they want me to help them, but they're lying."

Aino shook her head. She grabbed her dusting rag and began wiping the table. Ensi strode by, little Jukka and Juha trotting in her wake. Aino watched, stilled in mid-wipe, great pride welling up for her strong, skilled, and respected daughter. So respected that when she returned from a scouting trip visibly thick around the middle, and gave birth to the twins five months later, nobody dared to pry. Not even Aino had managed to get more than "Ukko-Pekka" out of her!

The boys lacked Ensi's... gift? Curse? They were happy-go-lucky children, full of laughter. Aino smiled again, this time for the present - for her tough, competent daughter, and her cheeful, loving grandsons. She looked down at her hand, still holding the rag.

"You know," she said aloud, "this is kind of pointless. Nothing has got in here in 40-odd years, and old dreams aren't worth dwelling on."

She stepped out into the warm spring air and climbed back down the ladder for the last time, feeling... happy? No, this was deeper and more lasting. Content. That was it.


Edit to fix misspelled name that everyone was too polite to point out. And then re-edit to put the quotation marks, apostrophes, etc. to rights... why do those get changed on edit??
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Róisín on July 11, 2020, 01:00:47 AM
Good story. Full of contentment!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on July 11, 2020, 01:40:28 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

.._.._..

Prompt 18: Death

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Today's prompt of Death is brought to us by Annuil!

Spoiler: warning for canon-typical gore • show
(https://i.imgur.com/gCtnTt4.jpg)

No words to be said.


Thanks very much to Annuil for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post what you've made down below!



(and I'm glad you guys liked my poem! Thank you!)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: GaelleDragons on July 11, 2020, 05:51:43 AM
Oh Annuil this is pretty and scary at the same time. Now I'm wondering who this grey hair might belong to...

Jitter, what a beautiful, sad story! I too am out of words ^^"

Vulpes, very nice! Always good to read stories about the Hotakainen family.
Oh and my picture did disappear during the night (do trolls eat pictures on this forum?). I replaced it with a smaller version, and it seems to be visible now. ^^
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 11, 2020, 06:12:05 AM
Vulpes, a great vignette! Very good characterization of everyone involved and very... lifelike? Her tradition would explain how intact the boat still looked at Y80.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 11, 2020, 06:15:52 AM
Oh Annuil! Beautiful and utterly horrible. Just like the comic. Very like Minna’s, while distinctly your own style.

BTW I’m glad we have Rebirth to end with, and it coincides with the first page of new chapter too!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 11, 2020, 08:50:04 AM
WALK THE NATURAL PATH
If man weren't mortal
we would need to invent death
godhood is stifling

what is there to face
when all has been said and done
dull eternity

life is incomplete
that has always been the plan
die and try anew

Two for one kinda/sorta. Since I was unable to come up with a haiku for the prompt "walk" I snuck it into the title here.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 11, 2020, 02:56:19 PM
Midwestmutt, very beautiful. “That has always been the plan”, yes indeed.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 11, 2020, 03:00:11 PM
Jitter, what a sad but beautiful story!

And an a lot more hopeful and equally beautiful one by Vulpes!

Annuil, this is stunning! (and will totally not haunt me for the rest of today noooo)

As well as another batch of mistwestmutts wonderful Haikus! You just taught me a new word: "stifling" is a very nice word I think. Negative, but nice.

In other news, I can draw again! Hooray! And I actually did start drawing that extra scene Róisín came up with, it just needs to still be colored. I went just a liiiittle bit overboard with the background, so I probably won´t be able to finish it today. Is it okay if I still post it tomorrow? I mean the prompt it was ment for is now a few days passed anyway...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 11, 2020, 03:20:30 PM
Annuil, great drawing! Terrifying, but great! I love the detail of the little plant...

Vulpes, lovely story, and also very thoughtful! Should be canon! :)

Midwestmutt, excellent haiku sequence, that even connects with the next prompt! Well done!

Mirasol, that's good to hear! I'm looking forward for your drawing, and I see no problem in anyone posting works a few days after the respective prompt, as long as people refer which prompt inspired them.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 11, 2020, 03:20:51 PM
Thank you all. Mind you, I could have posted it for today, but didn’t. It’s not a sad story, they have had a wonderful life. There must be endings to make room for new beginnings. They are wise old men (who would have thought?) and have already have time to find acceptance. The lung thing is not a completely new one, but another one.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 11, 2020, 06:58:43 PM
Ooh! Hi everyone and thank you all!  ;D
I love the detail of the little plant..
Yay! You saw it, Grey! :haw:

Well, the prompt is kind of terrible itself, so...


I read everything that was posted here and everything is so amazing!

Your artwork, GaelleDragons, is lovely! Lalli, little burglar...  ;D

Keep Looking, that poem is wonderful! How do you, people, write such nice poems?

Midwestmutt, haikus you write are always awesome ;)

Vulpes, your story made me a little sad, because it is so... natural? Or just true... I have a few things, like that boat, that remind me about the life “before”, when I had a friend in the house on the next street (now we are separated by, literally, an ocean) and a completely different life...
Huh, I got an interesting thought about that “before”. Now the whole world has that “before” and “after” life, you hear more and more often: “Oh, I’ve done that! Well... before COVID happened”
Isn’t it a little scary to understand that our own world is facing a strange disease now?.. O_o

Mirasol, can’t wait to see your drawing!!  ;D

I hope I didn’t miss anyone, if I did, I beg your forgiveness... And sorry for a lot of text  ;D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 11, 2020, 08:03:00 PM
Annuil, great take on the prompt, right down to the dead plant. As Jitter said, you've managed to evoke Minna's style while keeping it your own.

Vulpes, a great vignette! Very good characterization of everyone involved and very... lifelike? Her tradition would explain how intact the boat still looked at Y80.

Yes! That was what got me started on the idea. It looked in pretty good repair, and Lalli said only that they had a cool old boat in the yard, not that the kids played in it or anything. I thought about why it was kept up - no hope of getting fuel for it, probably not able to retrofit it to the current technology, so why is it there? Aino was the one most clinging to the idea that "this will all blow over in a few weeks," so it was easy to imagine her lingering on the past. I'm glad you liked it, and that it fits believably.

Gaelle, I see your drawing now, it's wonderful.

I love the linked haiku, midwestmutt. Very beautiful and true.

<snip>
Vulpes, your story made me a little sad, because it is so... natural? Or just true... I have a few things, like that boat, that remind me about the life “before”, when I had a friend in the house on the next street (now we are separated by, literally, an ocean) and a completely different life...
Huh, I got an interesting thought about that “before”. Now the whole world has that “before” and “after” life, you hear more and more often: “Oh, I’ve done that! Well... before COVID happened”
Isn’t it a little scary to understand that our own world is facing a strange disease now?.. O_o
<snip>

Sorry I made you sad, but that sort of thing was also in my mind as I thought about and wrote it. There are a lot of befores and afters in life, mostly little personal ones, but here we are with a global Before. It will be interesting to see what After turns out to be like!

It just occurred to me, I have a boat that connects me to a time before. Well, a half hull - these were scale models used by boat-builders back in the day to design the shape of the hull. We had one at the family cottage. When my father decided to sell, he told us all to take whatever we wanted. I took the half hull, which now hangs on my living room wall, and serves as a reminder of many happy times. Maybe that's why the Lumilintu caught my fancy.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 11, 2020, 09:26:53 PM
Sorry I made you sad, but that sort of thing was also in my mind as I thought about and wrote it. There are a lot of befores and afters in life, mostly little personal ones, but here we are with a global Before. It will be interesting to see what After turns out to be like!

No! It's a good kind of sadness, the one that comes from the happiness of passed days as you said there. (I love to be sad this way because it inspires me to draw and write cool things sometimes). Yeah, our "after" is still unsertian...


It just occurred to me, I have a boat that connects me to a time before. Well, a half hull - these were scale models used by boat-builders back in the day to design the shape of the hull. We had one at the family cottage. When my father decided to sell, he told us all to take whatever we wanted. I took the half hull, which now hangs on my living room wall, and serves as a reminder of many happy times. Maybe that's why the Lumilintu caught my fancy.

That's interesting! And cool! I have a little grey sharpner for pencils in a shape of an elephant that my friend gave me on one of my birthdays a few years ago. It no longer works as a sharpner, but it's still there, on my desk.  ;)
Isn't it nice to have such things in our lives?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on July 11, 2020, 11:34:09 PM
wow i missed a lot!

Keep Looking, the imagery is wonderful as always, I really feel like I'm there along with Árni and feeling what he's feeling.

GaelleDragons I love your drawing! You captured the body-language well and I really enjoy your painterly style.

Jitter what a lovely scene, melancholy and nostalgic and sweet all at once. And I like how you characterized aged Reynir and Onni.

Vulpes this is a nice little moment of reflection, so much conveyed it just a few paragraphs!

Annuil very nice illustration, a perfect mix of gory and strangely beautiful.

midwestmutt I love the trio of haiku, an interesting reflection on mortality--so many thoughts explored in just a few words.

You all keep blowing me away!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on July 12, 2020, 12:46:22 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

.._.._..

Prompt 19: Decay

.._.._..


Today's prompt of Decay is brought to us by Helium Owl!

Spoiler: show
(https://i.imgur.com/tDg0woD.png)


Thanks very much to Helium Owl for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post what you've made down below!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 12, 2020, 05:01:01 AM
A W E S O M E !   XoX

(little time now, will add more later)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 12, 2020, 05:48:34 AM
Oo that is... I don’t have a good word but I absolutely love it. I would put it on my wall despite the gruesome aspects! Wonderful piece, HeliumOwl!

Also it’s very topical with the Book 3 just out with Sleipnope as the cover art.

Scottish, I’m glad you like the characterization. I was worried Onni became too soft. But he’s had 60 years (many of which were good) to mellow :onni: :reynir:
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: GaelleDragons on July 12, 2020, 07:05:09 AM
Wooow Helium Owl, this is hauntingly beautiful! I love the colors you used, they really fit the "decay" theme, and those bright yellows and oranges on the mane and tail... lovely  <3

Scottish, thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'm trying to get better at watercolors, letting the colors flow around freely like Minna advised, and it really pays off x3
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 12, 2020, 07:21:17 AM
Oh no, everyone is so excited and I cannot see a thing... for some reason there is only a blank instead of the image again...  :-[
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 12, 2020, 07:58:32 AM
Hi,

I’m taking the liberty to repost from PostImage to help Annuil see it.

So, here is HeliumOwl’s absolutely stunning Sleipnope art again (EDIT: under the cut). HeliumOwl, please let me know if you don’t approve and I’ll take it down. This is just to help Annuil and possibly others too.

Spoiler: show


(https://i.postimg.cc/g0cKdmXq/Helium-Owls-Sleipnope-art.png)

Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 12, 2020, 09:44:36 AM
No! It's a good kind of sadness, the one that comes from the happiness of passed days as you said there. (I love to be sad this way because it inspires me to draw and write cool things sometimes).
<snip>
 I have a little grey sharpner for pencils in a shape of an elephant that my friend gave me on one of my birthdays a few years ago. It no longer works as a sharpner, but it's still there, on my desk.  ;)
Isn't it nice to have such things in our lives?

I'm glad it's the good type of sadness - we need a word for that. Wistful sort of works, but misses the inspirational aspect.

It is indeed nice to have mementos! I like your elephant ex-pencil sharpener.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 12, 2020, 10:19:15 AM
THE COSMIC CIRCLE
All matter transforms
decay sounds so negative
Nature recycles
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 12, 2020, 10:58:44 AM
Hi,

I’m taking the liberty to repost from PostImage to help Annuil see it.

Oh, Jitter, thank you so much!

Yes, HeliumOwl, that is most impressive and most beautiful! Wow...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on July 12, 2020, 12:12:37 PM
oh wow, HeliumOwl what an amazing illustration! Your brush-work is very strong, and the color contrast is so crisp and vibrant.

THE COSMIC CIRCLE
All matter transforms
decay sounds so negative
Nature recycles

ooh I really love this one. "Nature recycles" is such a simple yet powerful statement.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 12, 2020, 12:15:16 PM
Great! I’m glad I could help you Annuil!

 I’m sure it has to do with some image sharing site(s) being blacklisted by your organization, network provider or something like that.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Helium Owl on July 12, 2020, 04:29:25 PM
Thank guys! I really appreciate all the love and loving all of the submissions even though I've been lurking a wee bit!

thegreyarea haha thank you very much!

Jitter Glad you enjoyed it! I've been trying to think of a phrase that "Decay is but an unwelcome change that comes to us all" or "the souls of those who cannot move on end up with rot and decay" but it was sounded silly or pretentious, so just left it as is. You are most welcome to repost if it has any technical difficulties, thank you for doing that!

GaelleDragons Thank you! Some of the colours did get lost in translation (and many many filters), but I did reference the colour scheme from that one part of the comic that felt most thematic. Not to mention it's such a good colour combination anyway haha!

Annuil Yaaay thank you! I'm sure there will be a higher resolution image somewhere at some point! I have uploaded it through Imgur, might that have caused the issue for you?

scottishnottish The secret ingredient to good brushwork is crime several layers of file compressions haha. Contrast is starting with colour composition, then switching to grey scale and working on values there, switching colour plan layer on again and finding it absolutely wrong. Several hours later you've got yourself a neon piece!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 12, 2020, 04:44:09 PM
Wow Helium Owl this is stunning! XoX The ghostblood(?)-drops look so realistic! (or what I mean by that they flow really naturally? I´m not sure how to phrase it... But drawing liquids is hard and you captured it really well.) I too would hang this on my wall if I still had space on it and this was a poster or something.

midwestmutt, "nature recycles" is a really nice way to phrase it. Beautiful Haiku, as always.

I'm glad it's the good type of sadness - we need a word for that. Wistful sort of works, but misses the inspirational aspect.

Thesaurus.com gave me "musing". It has the inspirational aspect, but now less of the sad/happy one... Hm, somewhere there must be a better word...

What exactly happened to my "don´t do anything you can´t finish in a day for the chapter break when it´s not supposed to be an entire promt"-rule? And where did the daylight go? So my drawing is done, but the only photos I managed to take look terrible because the lamplight is weirdly reflecting on them, so I suppose I´m taking better photos tomorrow... Sorry! :-[
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on July 12, 2020, 05:08:04 PM
I really haven't had much of a chance to comment over the last week, but this break has had some stunning work!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 12, 2020, 05:44:00 PM
Bah, I got distracted earlier with a reno job I'm working at and didn't get around to saying, wow, Helium Owl, that's creepy-wonderful!

And in the meantime, midwestmutt nailed it in a haiku as usual. :)

<snip>
Thesaurus.com gave me "musing". It has the inspirational aspect, but now less of the sad/happy one... Hm, somewhere there must be a better word...

What exactly happened to my "don´t do anything you can´t finish in a day for the chapter break when it´s not supposed to be an entire promt"-rule? And where did the daylight go? So my drawing is done, but the only photos I managed to take look terrible because the lamplight is weirdly reflecting on them, so I suppose I´m taking better photos tomorrow... Sorry! :-[

Hm. Agreed, "musing" loses the sad or wistful aspect. One of those things for which perhaps English doesn't have a word.

Haha, I know the "bit off more than you can chew" problem! The drawing will still be lovely tomorrow, no need to apologise.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on July 12, 2020, 05:50:27 PM
scottishnottish The secret ingredient to good brushwork is crime several layers of file compressions haha. Contrast is starting with colour composition, then switching to grey scale and working on values there, switching colour plan layer on again and finding it absolutely wrong. Several hours later you've got yourself a neon piece!

Ah I see we have a similar process and crime is the secret ingredient to all good art

crime and swearing
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 12, 2020, 06:00:50 PM
Ah I see we have a similar process and crime is the secret ingredient to all good art

crime and swearing

Ahaha yes I totally do not yell at my pencil/computer, hand and/or thing I´m currently drawing or writing whenever something doesn´t work out the way I want it to...

Hm. Agreed, "musing" loses the sad or wistful aspect. One of those things for which perhaps English doesn't have a word.

I´ve been thinking about that too. There should be a website for finding a word that means exactly what you want it to mean in any language where it exists. Kind of unrealistic, but it would be cool. And really handy in situations like this. :'D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on July 13, 2020, 12:26:42 AM
Chapter Break Filler
'Circle of Life'

.._.._..

Prompt 20: Rebirth

.._.._..


As Minna posts the first page of the new chapter, our final prompt of Rebirth is brought to us by scottishnottish!

Spoiler: show
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Death
In water and stone
Broken flesh and bone
Sunken to the depths
Void of fragile breath

Rebirth
In fire and wind
From gentle spark within
Arisen from the deep
Arisen from your sleep

Awaken
Sleeper of Saimaa
The swan of Tuonela
Beckons step outside
Enter your new life

Breathe
Deep the morning air
At the edge of everywhere
The precipice of fire and wind
And feed the spark within


Thanks very much to ScottishNottish for today's piece, and if any of you are inspired by this prompt, feel free to post what you've made down below!



And as this is the final day of the Chapter Break Filler, I have some of my own thanks to give! Thanks so much to Jitter, who did a huge amount of the initial organisation with the prompts and selections, to thegreyarea, who sent out the reminders every day, and to wavewright62 who posted the pieces on the days when I wasn't available - it was great working with you guys and I cannot express how much easier running this was when it was a team effort! Also, thanks as well to everyone who made the prompt list!

And a big thanks to all of you guys who participated, whether it be by claiming a prompt (and the things people have made have been so amazing!), or making something on the day (midwestmutt's daily haikus duly noted) or just participating in all the interesting discussions you guys have had here. It's been so great seeing what you guys have made, and watching all the different things that have been happening in this space! I'm really glad this event could give that to you guys.

And yeah, I think it'd be great to keep this running for the next chapter break - by what people are saying, it seems that the Chapter Break Filler may be becoming a bit of a tradition. This community means a lot to me, so it's honestly so amazing that this idea I had could have a lasting impact.

Anyway, butter good to everyone as we go to the next chapter!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 13, 2020, 06:06:59 AM
What a fantastic work, Scottish! Both drawing and poem took my breath away! ;)

We are so lucky to have such amazing people among us! I'd like to thank everyone that was involved, and particularly our great KeepLooking for sparking this new tradition! May it last for a long. long time!

Also, I was very happy to help \o/ and hope that my messages weren't too annoying to our dear artists.

Finally, I want to promise, again, that my prompt will be finished, as soon as I have the peace of mind/some free time. Then I'll see with our dear skald how and where to post it.
Now it's time to enjoy the new chapter. See you soon! :)

And Butter Good!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 13, 2020, 06:15:43 AM
scottish! Such tremendous words again! And I didn't know you had such a fine visual artist in you as well! We are lucky to have you in our community!

I would also like to repeat all of Keep's thanks. And yes, it would be good to keep this going. The first one was themed specifically to have happy prompts, and this one mostly was as well, but at some point we can of course take a more somber theme. Grey also suggested at some point that as it's very interesting to see different takes on a theme, we could at some time have shared themes. Such as have six themes with three slots each, or something. But this will be a discussion for a later time, now we can concentrate on the new chapter for a while :) Although let's start planning in good time so that no one is terribly rushed with the first prompts.

Anyways, we have a little something to wait for here still. Grey has promised to post his Sharing of knowledge later, when his real life duties allow him to finish it. Mirasol probably has some art for us, and I would be surprised if Midwestmutt didn't complete his series (although no pressure of course). And I have one last silly bit, I'll put it into another reply as this is quite long already.

EDIT Ps I changed the font in my extra works to larger, I like to use a different font for the story parts but the other fonts look so small to me. So if they look different to you despite having read them before, never mind, it's just typography.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 13, 2020, 06:35:29 AM
So this isn't quite a rebirth rather than a return, but maybe we can say it will be the rebirth of the old ways?

Rebirth

“Augrharrrgh” Oðin spluttered awake and sat up in his bed.
“What is it, husband of mine?”
“Oh, Frigg! I had a terrible omen! A great horror descended upon the land and all peoples succumbed to it!”
“Shuhs, husband. It was just an omen. Go back to sleep. What time is it anyway?”
“It’s still that guy with the pompous name, what was it? United Nations.”
“Ok good, I’d like to sleep a few more centuries yet…”

Settling back, the two gods tried to go back to their slumber.
“Seriously tho, it felt very bad. I’m worried.”
“Truth be told, husband of mine, I feel a bit strange too. Maybe you should send the ravens out?”
“Huginn, Muninn! Go to Midgård and take a good look. I had a pretty nasty omen.”

“Ach, I’ll make us some nettle tea while we wait. No point waking up the boys, right?”
After a moment or a decade, the ravens were back.
Muninn spoke first: “Allfather, things are bad. Battles rage in many places and United Nations is weak, he cannot keep the peace. But our lands are peaceful.”
Huginn’s message was even more alarming: “Allfather, an ill wind blows. Many are worried about a pestilence, growing rapidly although beyond our shores. A red shadow rises.”

“I don’t like this, husband mine. Let us look.” She went into the throne hall, which had a bit of a musty smell, not having been aired for centuries. Sitting upon the high seat Hliðskjálf, she cast her eyes to Midgård. “I see the red shadow, and… giants! There are terrible beasts about to attack all humans!”

“Oh, by my beard! The Ragnarök is upon us! And here we slumber! Must be some ploy of Loki’s again! Run, wife of mine, rouse Thor, Balder, Tyr, Hod, Heimdall, Höder, Hermod, Bragi, Vidar and Vali! And send someone to Freya’s halls…”

The one-eyed god stormed off, shouting for his servants to waken and bring him Gungnir the spear. “And Sleipnir better have been well fed or there will be consequences!” The servants were running around and bumping into each other. The Allfather wasn’t nearly as grumpy at home as he often otherwise was, but he also wasn’t happy to be woken early and in the middle of a mess.

Soon the One-Eyed One galloped out of his gates, yelling: “My sons, Aesir, Vanir, to me! Ragnarök has come! And if anyone sees that snake Loki, I want him caught and brought to me at once!”
A general commotion broke out with all the Aesir and Vanir having been slumbering and now suddenly awake.

To everyone’s surprise, Loki peeked out of his house. “What is all the noise! Some of us are trying to sleep!”
“Loki, you traitor! Setting the Ragnarök upon us when we sleep! Do you really have no honour?”
“Ragnarök? What is this nonsense? Have you been at the mead of “wisdom” again, Old One?”
“Giants walk Midgård and an ill wind blows! Don’t try to talk your way out of this, Trickster!”
“Well, if it really is Ragnarök as you say, may I respectfully inquire how come Fenrir is still in his chains?” As if on cue, the monstrous wolf howled and rattled his chains.

Freya had also come out of her halls and walked up to Oðin and the assembling Aesir. “Loki is right. Fenrir is still bound, Yggdrasil is standing still, the ocean is calm. It doesn’t look like Ragnarök.”
“Hmmm, I guess you are right, O Fair One. But something is afoot in Midgård! I had a terrible omen, and Frigg saw it from Hliðskjálf. Huginn told us that a red shadow rises.”

“Well, hold on. I’ll take a look. Don’t do anything rash while I’m gone.”

Grumblingly, Oðin conceded. “But I’m not letting you go, Loki, before we get to the bottom of this!” Oðin grabbed his “brother” by the elbow and beckoned a few of his sons closer to make sure the Trickster wouldn’t escape by changing shape.

Freya flashed her falcon feather cloak and was gone. Soon she returned, alarmed.
“I am certain it’s not Ragnarök. Jotunheim is quiet. But in Midgård there really is a red shadow rising. It is looking very bad. I think our people may need us. That coward United Nations is powerless.”

Sighing, Frigga said “Well, there goes the sleep… but OK, since we are awake anyways, maybe we could keep an eye on our people until this passes? Whatever this is. Go get washed and dressed, and for our sake, air your rooms!” Asgård was swiftly coming alive again with the gods and their friends, troops and servants awakening from their slumber.

Privately, Frigg talked with her husband. “Old One, maybe you should have a private word with our folk in Iceland and Scandinavia. I noticed there is even a temple being built for us in Iceland, but the Scandinavians seem to have forgotten… but still, clearly this United Nations character is failing. Warning our own is the least we can do now.”

Sighing, Oðin put Gungnir away, put on his wide grey hat, and took Sleipnir by the reins “Come on, friend. We have a message to deliver.”




This was also inspired by some discussion a while ago about how come Iceland closed their borders so very early. There had been no deaths (reported) by the time they closed with only hours in warning, and remarkably, not letting even their own citizens, who just happened to be abroad, to return. In that discussion there was speculation about them getting warned, perhaps by some more mundane agency with surprisingly accurate information, or maybe they had some other type of Friends in High Places?

In reality the construction works for the new Asatru temple in Reykjavik were commenced in 2015. But maybe a couple of years here or there doesn't make that much difference for a goddess.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 13, 2020, 08:00:52 AM
TO REBIRTH
I'll have another.
To toast you all once again.
See you down the trail.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: JoB on July 13, 2020, 08:51:00 AM
I have a little grey sharpner for pencils in a shape of an elephant that my friend gave me on one of my birthdays a few years ago.
Spoiler: show

... please tell me that it's holding its trunk alift and its head risen to allow the pencil in ...
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 13, 2020, 10:03:41 AM
Wow, scottish, your artstyle is beautiful! I love the dress you gave Tuuri! And of course the poetry is beautiful too.

Jitter, the huge mythology-nerd in me is a big fan of your story! I have often wondered how the people in the SSSS-world started believing in their old gods again, and your take on it could as well be canon.

And midwestmutt, I really like this one! Made me laugh once again. Your series of Haikus over the course of this break was an absolute delight to read every day!

And art I did promise, so here goes, now with daylight and a proper photo:
‘The maiden who, on the first of May
Goes to the fields at break of day
And washes in dew from the hawthorn tree
Will ever after lovely be’.

I can just picture Emil getting up early to do that, with Lalli tagging along and thinking it was sweet!

(https://i.postimg.cc/6Qqw81SY/support-Mirasol.jpg)
featuring Lalli and Emil on their way to search for a hawthorn on Toivosaari on the first of May, while Emil tries to explain what exactly he is trying to accomplish by getting up barely after sunrise to look for a specific bush (or tree).
(While I was drawing, I started wondering who would have told Emil about this tradition. Any ideas?)
I placed it in the timeline of your support-story Jitter, but I couldn´t find whether you described what they were wearing in that one or the warmth-story, so I took the liberty to design their outfits here. I know Emil´s sweater is technically an icelandic one, but I figured Iceland probably has the largest fashion-industrie at this point since they don´t have to use most of their capacities for immediate survival. And Emil seems like exactly the kind of person that would go for every trend. :emil:

So funny story. This time I decided to do actual research on the plant in question, so I did a bunch of research on hawthorns, until I realized that the scene I wanted to draw didn´t even require me to draw a hawthorn. So I sneaked in the branch in Emils speech bubble, just to put this newly-gained knowledge to use. :'D

It´s supposed to be a "Crataegus monogyna", one of two kinds of hawthorn that grows in Finnland (and the rest of Europe). Since this is the kind that always comes up first when I google it, it seems to be the more common one. There are another few kinds that only exist in America. This specific kind gets 2-6 and sometimes up to 12 meters high, and blooms between April and June according to one source, and Mai and June according to another. I´d interpret this as "there is definitly a chance that it blooms at the time where the scene I drew happens".


And now to make this already gigantic post even longer, I would also like to say :sparkle:thank you so much!!!:sparkle: to all of the organizers of this chapter break, and especially to Keep Looking for comming up with this awesome hopefully-soon-to-be-Minnion-tradition. I had so much fun participating and reading through the beyond amazing contributions by all of you! You people are great, and so talented!
I´m almost a little sad the chapter break is over, but very much looking forward to the next chapter!
And last but not least that´s it from me today, more classtests to come (two more weeks. Only two more weeks of school for this schoolyear...). So while I´ll be studying, butter good to the rest of you!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 13, 2020, 10:23:57 AM
Mirasol, I’m honored that you used my setting!  Didn’t describe their clothing other than mentioning sweaters (in Warmth), your choices look very good! I agree that Icelandic styles will most likely be widespread, they are somewhat popular even now :) (understandably as they are great, and the overall style is traditional in Scandinavia too).

As for the hawthorns, the one you mentioned does grow here although it’s currently rare. One of the American varieties is very commonly used in gardens ( http://www.luontoportti.com/suomi/en/puut/crataegus-grayana ), so would likely also be around. And it has the same look of flowers. I think the differences in blooming times have to do with the high variety of climate from Southern Finland (not to mention Denmark) and Lapland. In any case it does bloom in the early summer, and if not then the saying would be adopted to the climate!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: midwestmutt on July 13, 2020, 10:40:23 AM
Today is the grand finale, Minnions. Last chance to join in and keep the art going.
Jitter-great story. I'm a little grumpy waking up too, especially if things are already going awry.
Mirasol-I love the beautiful dawn colors and story about hawthorns which I hadn't heard before.
Once again kudos to everybody who joined in to this chapter break filler. I enjoyed them all.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 13, 2020, 11:44:19 AM
midwesmutt, thank you for the comprehensive work throughout the break!

Mirasol, on your question: in Support, I mentioned how Emil is getting acquainted with the villagers and is for example doing child-minding for some of them. I suppose he would make some friends there and some of those would be interested in sharing beauty tips with him :) This would in any case be at least the following spring after Warmth, because they arrived in the late summer / early autumn ("after a summer apart" I think).

So he would have had time to make friends. On the other hand as Lalli is less interested in beauty (except that of Emil's) the discussions could well include some Swedish vocabulary (especially if the said friend was to interested they wanted to borrow the fashion magazines sent by Siv) and therefore would be mysterious to Lalli despite Emil's Finnish having improved.

Ok so another scene, Emil reading fashion mags with his friend(s) :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: GaelleDragons on July 13, 2020, 12:55:24 PM
Another chapter break successfully filled with amazing creations! I definitely agree that this has the potential of becoming a long-lasting tradition in the fandom!

:sparkle: Let us applaud once again our dear inventor Keep Looking and everyone who helped to make this chapter break filler happen! :sparkle:
(https://40.media.tumblr.com/2daea9894c099c47465a570fc6cb4814/tumblr_inline_nlmsb11uhy1r2g2kx_500.png)

Scottish, both the poem and the art are beautiful. Excellent use of watercolors and gouache (is it gouache? it looks like gouache ^^"), and I love how you did Tuuri's clothes.  <3

Jitter, great story! Your take on Nordic mythology as related to the SSSS world is very interesting, it makes me want to read more things like that. ;)

Lovely drawing, Mirasol! The tiny broken finnish flag is a great idea to convey Emil's broken finnish, I wouldn't be surprised if something of this kind was used by Minna in the future of the comic... x)

midwestmutt, a big bravo for all your Haikus!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 13, 2020, 02:19:05 PM
I would have preferred to write about the Finnish gods, but the Finnish “pantheon” is a total mess :) And anyway Raganarök worked well here. If you like to read more about Odin the Wise (??), Neil Gaiman’s Nordic Mythology is good and easy :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: GaelleDragons on July 13, 2020, 05:15:15 PM
If you like to read more about Odin the Wise (??), Neil Gaiman’s Nordic Mythology is good and easy :)
I know about Neil Gaiman's work but I've never read Nordic Mythology, maybe I should look into it! Thank you for the recommendation!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 13, 2020, 05:48:15 PM
Yeah, it’s great! It’s based on the actual sagas but written into stories so slightly easier to read than the sagas themselves:)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on July 13, 2020, 06:50:31 PM
Thank you all so much!! I went back and forth on how to handle Tuuri's dress, so I'm glad you all like what I settled on. I confess I fudged the hem pattern a bit, I'm not very familiar with Finnish patterns and what I could find online was vague at best so I just kind of emulated some of what Minna has drawn.

And a big thanks to Keep Looking, Jitter, thegreyarea, and wavewright for all you did to make this happen! It's a tradition I would love to see continue for sure, it really makes the once-dreaded chapter breaks a delight.

midwestmutt what an excellent sendoff, a toast to you as well.

Ahh what a cozy drawing, Mirasol! The broken Finnish flag in Emil's speech bubble is a clever touch.

Jitter what a fun scene! And a great explanation as to why Icelandic and Finnish magic re-emerged as well.

And I didn't know you had such a fine visual artist in you as well!

Believe it or not I actually went to school for graphic design!

Excellent use of watercolors and gouache (is it gouache? it looks like gouache ^^"), and I love how you did Tuuri's clothes.  <3

It's actually very pigmented watercolor! It was made by Poemsaboutyou on Etsy, very nice quality. It's hard to tell in the scan, but the gold is really sparkly.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: thegreyarea on July 13, 2020, 07:32:23 PM
Mirasol, that's a lovely drawing! :)

Jitter, another great story! Really well done, down to that fantastic detail of a moment or a decade later! I love the way you highlighted how their perception of time would be so different from ours...
"Honey, it's time to wake up!" "what, now? Oh, just give me five more decades!" :D

Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Vulpes on July 13, 2020, 08:35:57 PM
Ah, the last day and I got very busy and distracted and only now have got to either this thread or the comic itself! Wonderful work as always, and as always I could never have anticipated what folks came up with. Scottish, the poem and illustration are just lovely. Superb colours, graceful words. Wonderful mythology, Jitter - what a clever way to account for the return of magic. And yay, midwestmutt finished the set! Great haiku. Mirasol, such a sweet scene, Emil looks suitably thrilled to be about to supersparkle his hair.

Kudos to Keep Looking, Jitter, grey, and wave for getting this going and running it so smoothly. It's made the break fly by.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 13, 2020, 11:52:10 PM
Oh, I’m late! This was an amazing Chapter Break, I support the idea of making it a tradition for the Breaks to come!  ;D

I love today’s pieces, Scottish, that is a great drawing, I really like the feathers..  :D

Jitter, I love your story, I bet the beginning of that illness did seem like Ragnarök! O_O


Mirasol, lovely picture (I really like the light and you did well with the drawing of hands ;))


Midwestmutt, I truly respect the way you did it all the way through the Break... that’s great!


And also I’m joining everyone with giving thanks to all who worked on the break, so I did a little drawing to do so:
(https://www.dropbox.com/s/3el00dpe449l7pt/%D0%A4%D0%BE%D1%82%D0%BE%2013.07.2020%2C%2023%2032%2031.jpg?dl=0)
(If it doesn’t work again, here is the link to OneDrive)
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AsSnHPIBASO_pj1IM6bvsj48vZ_l


Thank you everyone and especially you, who did the organisation and planning! It would’ve never work this wonderful without you!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: GaelleDragons on July 14, 2020, 05:03:21 AM
It's actually very pigmented watercolor! It was made by Poemsaboutyou on Etsy, very nice quality. It's hard to tell in the scan, but the gold is really sparkly.
Oh interesting! I didn't know watercolor could look so opaque, anyway you did a very good job with it!

Annuil, what an adorable drawing! There's even little sparkles!  :sparkle:
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 14, 2020, 10:58:52 AM
Thank you all! :)) I was hoping someone would notice the broken Finnish flag, so I´m so happy that you did!

And Annuil, that drawing is so pretty! And a great way to honor our amazing organizers.

Mirasol, on your question: in Support, I mentioned how Emil is getting acquainted with the villagers and is for example doing child-minding for some of them. I suppose he would make some friends there and some of those would be interested in sharing beauty tips with him :) This would in any case be at least the following spring after Warmth, because they arrived in the late summer / early autumn ("after a summer apart" I think).

So he would have had time to make friends. On the other hand as Lalli is less interested in beauty (except that of Emil's) the discussions could well include some Swedish vocabulary (especially if the said friend was to interested they wanted to borrow the fashion magazines sent by Siv) and therefore would be mysterious to Lalli despite Emil's Finnish having improved.

Ok so another scene, Emil reading fashion mags with his friend(s) :)

Oooh, I would really like to draw that (unless someone else started already of course)! But I had to study yesterday so I didn´t have the time. Since even if I start now the chapter-break-special is already over (technically, except for Grey´s piece), should I post it here or in the regular art thread when it´s done?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 14, 2020, 11:53:10 AM
Scottish, I have no trouble believing in your graphic design studies! It’s just that I didn’t know you have visual as well as the verbal arts in your repertoire. And the dress trims look very good! Your take on the subject also became extraordinarily topical with today’s page :tuuri:

Mirasol, maybe if you want to tie it into one of the prompts, post here, and if not, in the general art thread? Either is good. While the chapter break is over, there are always Wednesdays and weekends!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Alkia on July 15, 2020, 11:41:00 AM
oop, I'm also a bit late seeing as we're already three days into the chapter, and i have been lurking a bit much, but i would also like to say THANK YOU SO SO MUCH to everyone who organized this!! and contributed things!!! and commented! it actually (gasp!) makes the Chapter Breaks really enjoyable  :)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Noodles on July 20, 2020, 02:55:48 PM
Jitter, I love that story! I really enjoyed the writing style, it definitely has Neil Gaiman Norse Mythology vibes :D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 22, 2020, 05:26:06 AM
Thanks Noodles! I have read it in English, so it's definitely the "source" for the story :) The names of the things such as the high seat (which is Odin's, but Frigga may also use it, no one else can) I just googled.
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 28, 2020, 10:49:26 AM
Not wednesday or a weekend, but I finished your scene, Jitter. :)) I don´t really know how to quote things from a different thread, so I guess I´ll post it here anyway, even if it´s not specifically tied to a prompt:

Ok so another scene, Emil reading fashion mags with his friend(s) :)
(https://i.postimg.cc/L8qvBY87/Fashion-Magazines-Mirasol.jpg)

(No fancy background this time, I sadly didn´t have a lot of time for drawing over the past few days.)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: scottishnottish on July 28, 2020, 12:42:03 PM
Mirasol that's such a cute scene!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 28, 2020, 01:37:43 PM
Ooh so lovely! Thank you Mirasol!

Are those hair sparkles on the child sitting in the lap of the adult, or are they just that impressed with the high modes of the Capital of Scandinavia?
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 28, 2020, 04:05:17 PM
Thank you, scottish! And thank you too Jitter, also for giving me drawing ideas! :))

Are those hair sparkles on the child sitting in the lap of the adult, or are they just that impressed with the high modes of the Capital of Scandinavia?

More being impressed, along the lines of this:

(https://40.media.tumblr.com/be0e1d04ef09ea6d13dbff70e7d0744c/tumblr_inline_nlhgjuuVpW1r2g2kx_500.png)

Hair sparkles are Swedish magic after all. :'D
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Annuil on July 28, 2020, 07:35:57 PM
Ooh, that’s a lovely drawing, Mirasol! The sparkles are great ;D

Good job, guys, team work! ;) (ideas are very important)
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: wavewright62 on July 28, 2020, 07:37:37 PM
Splendid stuff!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Keep Looking on July 28, 2020, 10:15:16 PM
Aaa, Mirasol, that's so lovely!
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Jitter on July 29, 2020, 02:56:48 AM
Annuil, thanks! I love having someone illustrate my stories, and I have had the honor to get several illustrations already. I have imagination but no drawing skills at all  :))
Title: Re: Chapter Break Filler - Round 2
Post by: Mirasol on July 29, 2020, 04:39:26 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you all! :))
Yes, ideas are important! I sometimes run out of them, so it´s great when someone gives me more.