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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1380 on: May 14, 2015, 04:11:10 AM »
Hey, I've got a writing idea itching at my brain. I need to know how your S'onas would react to this story, How Raven stole fire.

I'm a skald and I overthink (and probably overtalk) everything.  I'd be intrigued, ask you where it's from, how you heard it, and go off on some tangent about parallels in Greek and Finnish myth (until DancingRanger heads for the door, murmuring about Poor Neglected Responsibilities). 
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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1381 on: May 14, 2015, 05:05:36 AM »
Hey, I've got a writting idea itching at my brain. I need to know how your S'onas would react to this story, How Raven stole fire.
Mine would listen politely, wondering if she had read that before, which would be plausible. She would be more someone who listen than someone who speak, but a part of her mind would still be "As soon as possible, I'll go to sleep". (Yes, she's obsessed.)
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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1382 on: May 14, 2015, 07:37:17 AM »
Hey, I've got a writting idea itching at my brain. I need to know how your S'onas would react to this story, How Raven stole fire.
 
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Long ago, near the beginning of the world, Grey Eagle guarded the sun, moon, stars, water, and fire. But Grey Eagle hated people. He hated them so much that he kept these things hidden away, and the people lived in cold and darkness.

Grey Eagle had a beautiful daughter who fancied Raven, for Raven was a handsome white bird who loved Grey Eagle’s daughter in return. He was invited to the longhouse of Grey Eagle. Raven looked about the walls of the lodge and saw the sun, the moon, the stars, water, and fire.

Raven was ashamed of Grey Eagle for hiding them, and knew what he must do. When no one was watching, he stole all these things from the lodge of Grey Eagle. He flew with them right up the smoke hole of the long house. He flew and he flew, higher and higher.

He hung the sun as high as he could in the sky. It made so much light that he was able to escape all the way to an island far out in the ocean. When night fell, he flew again, this time fastening the moon up in the sky and hanging each star in its own place around the heavens. Then he flew back over the land, still carrying the water and the fire.   

When he reached the right place, he dropped the water, creating the source of all fresh water – rivers, lakes, and streams.

Raven flew on, still carrying the stick of fire in his beak. As he flew, the smoke blew back on him, turning all of his feathers the darkest black. When his beak became too hot, he dropped the fire on some rocks, concealing it within them. Still today when we strike two stones together, drops of fire will spark out.

And still today, we see the black feathers of the raven, darkened forever because he brought good things to this world.


I would probably say something about how my creation story is cooler.

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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1383 on: May 14, 2015, 10:17:58 AM »
I need to know how your S'onas would react to this story, How Raven stole fire.
(FWIW, you might want to clarify whether the SSSSonas hear it from one/few, have it presented to them as truth / traditional belief from many around them, or actually become entangled in the aftermath, "Hannu vs. Kalevala" style.)
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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1384 on: May 14, 2015, 10:41:40 AM »
(FWIW, you might want to clarify whether the SSSSonas hear it from one/few, have it presented to them as truth / traditional belief from many around them, or actually become entangled in the aftermath, "Hannu vs. Kalevala" style.)
Ah, I forgot about that, I was having such a hard time posting last night that it was like my posts kinda deleted when I tried to post them. It seems to be fixed now.

The story would be told over a fire by my S'ona, as it's a Native American story. To him it would be more true than Norse legends, but not by much. He still respects both, it's just he very proud of the forgotten culture that he carries.
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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1385 on: May 14, 2015, 10:59:10 AM »
Hey, I've got a writting idea itching at my brain. I need to know how your S'onas would react to this story, How Raven stole fire.
 
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Long ago, near the beginning of the world, Grey Eagle guarded the sun, moon, stars, water, and fire. But Grey Eagle hated people. He hated them so much that he kept these things hidden away, and the people lived in cold and darkness.

Grey Eagle had a beautiful daughter who fancied Raven, for Raven was a handsome white bird who loved Grey Eagle’s daughter in return. He was invited to the longhouse of Grey Eagle. Raven looked about the walls of the lodge and saw the sun, the moon, the stars, water, and fire.

Raven was ashamed of Grey Eagle for hiding them, and knew what he must do. When no one was watching, he stole all these things from the lodge of Grey Eagle. He flew with them right up the smoke hole of the long house. He flew and he flew, higher and higher.

He hung the sun as high as he could in the sky. It made so much light that he was able to escape all the way to an island far out in the ocean. When night fell, he flew again, this time fastening the moon up in the sky and hanging each star in its own place around the heavens. Then he flew back over the land, still carrying the water and the fire.   

When he reached the right place, he dropped the water, creating the source of all fresh water – rivers, lakes, and streams.

Raven flew on, still carrying the stick of fire in his beak. As he flew, the smoke blew back on him, turning all of his feathers the darkest black. When his beak became too hot, he dropped the fire on some rocks, concealing it within them. Still today when we strike two stones together, drops of fire will spark out.

And still today, we see the black feathers of the raven, darkened forever because he brought good things to this world.


Hey! I've heard that one! That would be my 'Sona's reaction, too. xD
I am of the firm belief that the First Nations peoples of Canada would still be around and kicking, especially way far up North with the Inuit and such, so stories like that would totally get tossed around the grapevine along with others. :)


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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1386 on: May 14, 2015, 12:07:42 PM »
Hey, I've got a writting idea itching at my brain. I need to know how your S'onas would react to this story, How Raven stole fire.
 
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Long ago, near the beginning of the world, Grey Eagle guarded the sun, moon, stars, water, and fire. But Grey Eagle hated people. He hated them so much that he kept these things hidden away, and the people lived in cold and darkness.

Grey Eagle had a beautiful daughter who fancied Raven, for Raven was a handsome white bird who loved Grey Eagle’s daughter in return. He was invited to the longhouse of Grey Eagle. Raven looked about the walls of the lodge and saw the sun, the moon, the stars, water, and fire.

Raven was ashamed of Grey Eagle for hiding them, and knew what he must do. When no one was watching, he stole all these things from the lodge of Grey Eagle. He flew with them right up the smoke hole of the long house. He flew and he flew, higher and higher.

He hung the sun as high as he could in the sky. It made so much light that he was able to escape all the way to an island far out in the ocean. When night fell, he flew again, this time fastening the moon up in the sky and hanging each star in its own place around the heavens. Then he flew back over the land, still carrying the water and the fire.   

When he reached the right place, he dropped the water, creating the source of all fresh water – rivers, lakes, and streams.

Raven flew on, still carrying the stick of fire in his beak. As he flew, the smoke blew back on him, turning all of his feathers the darkest black. When his beak became too hot, he dropped the fire on some rocks, concealing it within them. Still today when we strike two stones together, drops of fire will spark out.

And still today, we see the black feathers of the raven, darkened forever because he brought good things to this world.


My 'sona would probably be intrigued, and eager to learn more (but not too verbal about it!).  I have always had a fascination for traditional myths and legends :)
I hadn't heard of this one before, but I can spot some parallels with greek myth in there
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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1387 on: May 14, 2015, 12:45:55 PM »
Hey, I've got a writting idea itching at my brain. I need to know how your S'onas would react to this story, How Raven stole fire.
Haiz would be all "oooOOOH COOL THAT MAKES SENSE" and try to fit it like a puzzlepiece into all the other myths ze has ever heard, because ze believes in everything at the same time.

Also I accidentally put wayy to much effort into a thing again



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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1388 on: May 14, 2015, 12:52:05 PM »
Haiz, one more time, it's gorgeous ! I particularly like the way ze (Am I right ?) sleep. (There is a word for that, but I don't find/know it in english.)
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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1389 on: May 14, 2015, 12:53:35 PM »
Hey, I've got a writting idea itching at my brain. I need to know how your S'onas would react to this story, How Raven stole fire.
 
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Long ago, near the beginning of the world, Grey Eagle guarded the sun, moon, stars, water, and fire. But Grey Eagle hated people. He hated them so much that he kept these things hidden away, and the people lived in cold and darkness.

Grey Eagle had a beautiful daughter who fancied Raven, for Raven was a handsome white bird who loved Grey Eagle’s daughter in return. He was invited to the longhouse of Grey Eagle. Raven looked about the walls of the lodge and saw the sun, the moon, the stars, water, and fire.

Raven was ashamed of Grey Eagle for hiding them, and knew what he must do. When no one was watching, he stole all these things from the lodge of Grey Eagle. He flew with them right up the smoke hole of the long house. He flew and he flew, higher and higher.

He hung the sun as high as he could in the sky. It made so much light that he was able to escape all the way to an island far out in the ocean. When night fell, he flew again, this time fastening the moon up in the sky and hanging each star in its own place around the heavens. Then he flew back over the land, still carrying the water and the fire.   

When he reached the right place, he dropped the water, creating the source of all fresh water – rivers, lakes, and streams.

Raven flew on, still carrying the stick of fire in his beak. As he flew, the smoke blew back on him, turning all of his feathers the darkest black. When his beak became too hot, he dropped the fire on some rocks, concealing it within them. Still today when we strike two stones together, drops of fire will spark out.

And still today, we see the black feathers of the raven, darkened forever because he brought good things to this world.


Día would probably think "well, that is a beautiful story, although completely unlikely". She would then proceed to point all the things she finds impractical in the plot.

Also I accidentally put wayy to much effort into a thing again




This is amazing!!
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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1390 on: May 14, 2015, 01:14:03 PM »
Hey, I've got a writting idea itching at my brain. I need to know how your S'onas would react to this story, How Raven stole fire.

My sona likes listening to stories a lot, but would probably cut across all the time with thoughts and opinions (and seeing as she's Norwegian and probably hadn't heard this one before she'd speculate at the ending and feel soooooo clever if she guessed something right!). It would probably annoy many people I'm sorry to say  :-\

Also I accidentally put wayy to much effort into a thing again



who knows, maybe I'll even do my art trades soon too ahaha ha

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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1391 on: May 14, 2015, 02:36:01 PM »
Haiz holy wow what have you done, that's amazing! Everything's so swirly and dream-like and the colours are amazing and excuse me, I have to stare at it for hours now!
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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1392 on: May 14, 2015, 02:36:50 PM »
Haiz would be all "oooOOOH COOL THAT MAKES SENSE" and try to fit it like a puzzlepiece into all the other myths ze has ever heard, because ze believes in everything at the same time.

Also I accidentally put wayy to much effort into a thing again



who knows, maybe I'll even do my art trades soon too ahaha ha

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« Reply #1393 on: May 14, 2015, 03:18:41 PM »
Haiz would be all "oooOOOH COOL THAT MAKES SENSE" and try to fit it like a puzzlepiece into all the other myths ze has ever heard, because ze believes in everything at the same time.

Also I accidentally put wayy to much effort into a thing again



who knows, maybe I'll even do my art trades soon too ahaha ha

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Re: Self-Inserts
« Reply #1394 on: May 14, 2015, 04:08:04 PM »
Hey, I've got a writting idea itching at my brain. I need to know how your S'onas would react to this story, How Raven stole fire.
 
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Long ago, near the beginning of the world, Grey Eagle guarded the sun, moon, stars, water, and fire. But Grey Eagle hated people. He hated them so much that he kept these things hidden away, and the people lived in cold and darkness.

Grey Eagle had a beautiful daughter who fancied Raven, for Raven was a handsome white bird who loved Grey Eagle’s daughter in return. He was invited to the longhouse of Grey Eagle. Raven looked about the walls of the lodge and saw the sun, the moon, the stars, water, and fire.

Raven was ashamed of Grey Eagle for hiding them, and knew what he must do. When no one was watching, he stole all these things from the lodge of Grey Eagle. He flew with them right up the smoke hole of the long house. He flew and he flew, higher and higher.

He hung the sun as high as he could in the sky. It made so much light that he was able to escape all the way to an island far out in the ocean. When night fell, he flew again, this time fastening the moon up in the sky and hanging each star in its own place around the heavens. Then he flew back over the land, still carrying the water and the fire.   

When he reached the right place, he dropped the water, creating the source of all fresh water – rivers, lakes, and streams.

Raven flew on, still carrying the stick of fire in his beak. As he flew, the smoke blew back on him, turning all of his feathers the darkest black. When his beak became too hot, he dropped the fire on some rocks, concealing it within them. Still today when we strike two stones together, drops of fire will spark out.

And still today, we see the black feathers of the raven, darkened forever because he brought good things to this world.

She/I would listen to the whole story, and really enjoy it, trying to picture the raven in her/my head while your ssssona told the story.


Haiz would be all "oooOOOH COOL THAT MAKES SENSE" and try to fit it like a puzzlepiece into all the other myths ze has ever heard, because ze believes in everything at the same time.

Also I accidentally put wayy to much effort into a thing again



who knows, maybe I'll even do my art trades soon too ahaha ha
That is gorgeous, Haiz. Somehow what draws my eyes is the fine line between water and mystic light, that is really well done! The boat is beautiful too, it's like ze is born into the dreamworld (I am overanalyzing I know I know)