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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #120 on: July 10, 2016, 08:33:30 PM »
Everyone here is so incredible I'm almost afraid to post some of my stuff as it seems to pale in comparison to all you lovely people.
But, well, here we go...

I sometimes write poetry and other assorted stuff when I'm feeling adequately inspired. I find that I like to write about writing, which is... interesting. I figured maybe I could try posting something here because, well, why not?

Spoiler: show
Inspiration

Waiting
Hands poised delicately
brushing the keys
gripping the pen

Focus wavers and
the blank walls surrounding
tug at your interest
While pondering thoughts
flicker in and out of reach

A fleeting murmur,
not yet an idea
it holds beauty, power
but there are no words
to describe it

It’s a feeling, an emotion
One you long for
but cannot seem to find
With thin lines you can't trace

It is internalized,
existential,
like a maze made
simply to become lost in

And so

The page stays blank
the cursor blinks
expectantly from the screen
As it taunts the swirling threads
Of possibility.

Your hands
slip from the keyboard
drop the pen
tensed in frustration

And suddenly

An idea takes hold-
burning so brightly
It casts shadows across the farthest corners of the mind
It focuses everything
Into pure, intense thought

Those hands
Become just an instrument
Playing out the symphony of the mind
As the words flow across the page

Colors intensify
clarity takes over
and for a moment
you can
see

And just as quickly
the moment passes
leaving you with the beginnings
of something great

A few printed lines or
A blot of smudged ink,
But it means something,
It’s more than what it is-

Born of the thing we call
Inspiration.


So... yeah. There's that.
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #121 on: July 10, 2016, 09:52:10 PM »
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #122 on: July 10, 2016, 10:45:45 PM »
Everyone here is so incredible I'm almost afraid to post some of my stuff as it seems to pale in comparison to all you lovely people.
But, well, here we go...

I sometimes write poetry and other assorted stuff when I'm feeling adequately inspired. I find that I like to write about writing, which is... interesting. I figured maybe I could try posting something here because, well, why not?

Spoiler: show
Inspiration

Waiting
Hands poised delicately
brushing the keys
gripping the pen

Focus wavers and
the blank walls surrounding
tug at your interest
While pondering thoughts
flicker in and out of reach

A fleeting murmur,
not yet an idea
it holds beauty, power
but there are no words
to describe it

It’s a feeling, an emotion
One you long for
but cannot seem to find
With thin lines you can't trace

It is internalized,
existential,
like a maze made
simply to become lost in

And so

The page stays blank
the cursor blinks
expectantly from the screen
As it taunts the swirling threads
Of possibility.

Your hands
slip from the keyboard
drop the pen
tensed in frustration

And suddenly

An idea takes hold-
burning so brightly
It casts shadows across the farthest corners of the mind
It focuses everything
Into pure, intense thought

Those hands
Become just an instrument
Playing out the symphony of the mind
As the words flow across the page

Colors intensify
clarity takes over
and for a moment
you can
see

And just as quickly
the moment passes
leaving you with the beginnings
of something great

A few printed lines or
A blot of smudged ink,
But it means something,
It’s more than what it is-

Born of the thing we call
Inspiration.


So... yeah. There's that.
This is super amazing and I love it. A lot. Please post more!
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #123 on: July 11, 2016, 10:06:44 PM »
Everyone here is so incredible I'm almost afraid to post some of my stuff as it seems to pale in comparison to all you lovely people.
But, well, here we go...

I sometimes write poetry and other assorted stuff when I'm feeling adequately inspired. I find that I like to write about writing, which is... interesting. I figured maybe I could try posting something here because, well, why not?

Spoiler: show
Inspiration

Waiting
Hands poised delicately
brushing the keys
gripping the pen

Focus wavers and
the blank walls surrounding
tug at your interest
While pondering thoughts
flicker in and out of reach

A fleeting murmur,
not yet an idea
it holds beauty, power
but there are no words
to describe it

It’s a feeling, an emotion
One you long for
but cannot seem to find
With thin lines you can't trace

It is internalized,
existential,
like a maze made
simply to become lost in

And so

The page stays blank
the cursor blinks
expectantly from the screen
As it taunts the swirling threads
Of possibility.

Your hands
slip from the keyboard
drop the pen
tensed in frustration

And suddenly

An idea takes hold-
burning so brightly
It casts shadows across the farthest corners of the mind
It focuses everything
Into pure, intense thought

Those hands
Become just an instrument
Playing out the symphony of the mind
As the words flow across the page

Colors intensify
clarity takes over
and for a moment
you can
see

And just as quickly
the moment passes
leaving you with the beginnings
of something great

A few printed lines or
A blot of smudged ink,
But it means something,
It’s more than what it is-

Born of the thing we call
Inspiration.


So... yeah. There's that.

This is a great poem! You really convey what it feels like to be inspired! :D
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #124 on: July 14, 2016, 09:54:16 PM »

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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #126 on: July 15, 2016, 01:36:44 PM »

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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #127 on: July 15, 2016, 11:08:16 PM »
And a conundrum (but not for our hero).

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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #128 on: July 16, 2016, 02:34:27 PM »

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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #129 on: July 18, 2016, 04:13:35 AM »
Everyone here is so incredible I'm almost afraid to post some of my stuff as it seems to pale in comparison to all you lovely people.
But, well, here we go...

I sometimes write poetry and other assorted stuff when I'm feeling adequately inspired. I find that I like to write about writing, which is... interesting. I figured maybe I could try posting something here because, well, why not?

Spoiler: show
Inspiration

Waiting
Hands poised delicately
brushing the keys
gripping the pen

Focus wavers and
the blank walls surrounding
tug at your interest
While pondering thoughts
flicker in and out of reach

A fleeting murmur,
not yet an idea
it holds beauty, power
but there are no words
to describe it

It’s a feeling, an emotion
One you long for
but cannot seem to find
With thin lines you can't trace

It is internalized,
existential,
like a maze made
simply to become lost in

And so

The page stays blank
the cursor blinks
expectantly from the screen
As it taunts the swirling threads
Of possibility.

Your hands
slip from the keyboard
drop the pen
tensed in frustration

And suddenly

An idea takes hold-
burning so brightly
It casts shadows across the farthest corners of the mind
It focuses everything
Into pure, intense thought

Those hands
Become just an instrument
Playing out the symphony of the mind
As the words flow across the page

Colors intensify
clarity takes over
and for a moment
you can
see

And just as quickly
the moment passes
leaving you with the beginnings
of something great

A few printed lines or
A blot of smudged ink,
But it means something,
It’s more than what it is-

Born of the thing we call
Inspiration.


So... yeah. There's that.

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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #130 on: July 20, 2016, 01:04:40 AM »

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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #131 on: July 20, 2016, 10:48:46 PM »
Here is one of my riddle poems to exercise your minds.


"Each in its' turn as the round earth rolls."  John Muir

What spills through the hands like sand or water
Spills through the mind from grief to laughter
Dances a beat and the next beat after?

What is deeper than death's dark river
Still as a shallow where bright leaves shiver
Gone in each instant but here forever?

What can snuff out a star in the dark alone
Crush a mountain to dust and that dust to a stone
And the stone in its turn into dust again?

What is all false and yet most true?
Old forever yet always new?

What is the water the soul swims through?


I was thinking about the patterns of the Anglosaxon riddle poems, and reading John Muir. The two coalesced in my head, and this happened.

The answer shouldn't be too hard to guess - see if you can.
Hint: it's one of the traditional subjects for such things.
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #132 on: July 20, 2016, 11:08:44 PM »
Here is one of my riddle poems to exercise your minds.


"Each in its' turn as the round earth rolls."  John Muir

What spills through the hands like sand or water
Spills through the mind from grief to laughter
Dances a beat and the next beat after?

What is deeper than death's dark river
Still as a shallow where bright leaves shiver
Gone in each instant but here forever?

What can snuff out a star in the dark alone
Crush a mountain to dust and that dust to a stone
And the stone in its turn into dust again?

What is all false and yet most true?
Old forever yet always new?

What is the water the soul swims through?


I was thinking about the patterns of the Anglosaxon riddle poems, and reading John Muir. The two coalesced in my head, and this happened.

The answer shouldn't be too hard to guess - see if you can.
Hint: it's one of the traditional subjects for such things.
Oh, how wonderful!
Spoiler: the answer • show
Is it Time?

Seriously, this is great. A very fine riddle poem indeed!  ^-^
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #133 on: July 20, 2016, 11:10:23 PM »
Tr: yes! Well spotted!
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #134 on: July 21, 2016, 11:41:49 PM »
Here is one of my riddle poems to exercise your minds.


"Each in its' turn as the round earth rolls."  John Muir

What spills through the hands like sand or water
Spills through the mind from grief to laughter
Dances a beat and the next beat after?

What is deeper than death's dark river
Still as a shallow where bright leaves shiver
Gone in each instant but here forever?

What can snuff out a star in the dark alone
Crush a mountain to dust and that dust to a stone
And the stone in its turn into dust again?

What is all false and yet most true?
Old forever yet always new?

What is the water the soul swims through?


I was thinking about the patterns of the Anglosaxon riddle poems, and reading John Muir. The two coalesced in my head, and this happened.

The answer shouldn't be too hard to guess - see if you can.
Hint: it's one of the traditional subjects for such things.

Ooh, I really  like this riddle/poem! Would love to see more of your writing, if possible.
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