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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1215 on: April 24, 2019, 03:12:31 AM »
Wow! Adge, I know the feeling. Most elegantly described.
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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1216 on: May 01, 2019, 04:32:42 AM »
And the next chapter as promised. Very quiet chapter - the lull before the storm.

Chapter 2

Mora city, matriarch, railhub,
Welcomes the train, washes its riders
Safe from bringing sickness to town
In body or clothes. But cleaning splits
The league fellowship: Lalli night-scout
Delayed, confused, a false way takes
To strange technology and new draught-beasts,
Carriage haulers, highway pacers,
He takes for moose till Tuuri skald
Clepes them horses. Cleanser Emil
Pleads to be left his explosive stock,
His professional bag, but bureaucrat rules
Confiscate the lot. Released as cleansed
The team reforms; Torbjörn offers
The six task-friends the city to explore
Safely enwrapped from the rash sickness.
Tuuri hopeful for horse-nuzzling
For a carriage begs; but cost forbids
Though Torbjörn hides his hoardlessness
For shame of loss, and lets them browse
The goods in the shops. Gaping, Tuuri
Wanders the mother-town wowed by the riches
In the shop windows: the shining cakes
Unwrap her purse, revelling in the safety
Of the Swedes' high-stead. Suaded by Emil
She recounts the tale of her cold childhood
When the three sibs in Saimaa dwelt
Among isle villages vanishing to trolls –
Tuuri, unimmune, tells the story
As a cold fact that could happen.
Then Västerströms invite them back
Home for a briefing, to their brats' welcome –
Changelings labelled by a child-ward's wrath
Abdicating her cure as nanny
Spite Torbjörn's pleas – Tuuri, maldict,
With her tongue thrashes the three bratlings.
In the clutter within, clear-eyed book-maid
Curious Tuuri, technical skald
Uncovers facts on the cast members
Still to join them – sturdy the two
From distant lands; for the deeds ahead
Well-seasoned folk. Word on comrades
Opens confidence; Emil haughty
Narrates the tale of his rich upbringing,
Private tutor, prideless schooling
And cleanser post; closed in mindset,
Sceptical Swede, skiting Emil
Quiet to Tuuri a question frames –
Lalli’s magery a mindless tag?
Noita a folkmark, nothing beyond?
So Lalli’s sib, loyal Tuuri,
Hests her cousin Hotakainan
A skill to show; scout-mage stubborn
Lalli point-blank blocks her sayneed.
Torbjörn leader the talk disrupts,
The mission’s head moves to depart,
Handing across the hoard of maps,
Papers and lists prepared for the trip
To wise Tuuri. Wakeful she notes
A stead prepared for a purpose sealed
From kingfolk minds: accumulate lost
Books of old days and bear them home
To change for gold and charge their purse.
For this Torbjörn his tene labours
Quit for silver-greed; Siv abandoned
Her inept vaccines; to this veiled cause
Subtle Taru and soldier Trond
They suaded to join, so Suomi lakes
And a Bornholm farm are the birth-cradles
Of three of five. The threatened rain
Drenches the group dragging their luggage
To Mora staithe for military trains
To Öresund Bridge through the evil lands.
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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1217 on: May 02, 2019, 06:17:15 PM »
Adge, Adge, Adge...will you never cease to amaze me? I don't know if I've ever really explained why I love your writing so much, but you just have such a way with language that is as unique as it is awesome. Aside from having a clearly very extensive vocabulary, the way you use words, weaving them together like a tapestry, and hyphenating and combining words to make new, cool words, and shortening or abridging words, makes your writing really interesting and fun and beautiful to read, and basically I really just love your poetry a lot and I'm so glad you're here and writing.

Also have a poem:

Words have wings and yours are soaring
Through the rain alight with sunsparks
From the star of mental clearness
To the lofty hill of stories.
May you dwell there in the greenness
Of perpetual tomorrows,
Clouds and songbirds gathered closer
Waiting, breath held, for your verses.
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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1218 on: May 04, 2019, 09:54:27 AM »
Tiny question for you, Adge: might I inquire about the style? Only it seems familiar, but I can’t quite put my finger on it...
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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1219 on: May 11, 2019, 01:44:33 AM »
Pg 90

So Further Go The Searchers

Along and around,
The country abode.
Further the crowd,
Climbs the winding road.

Deeper and higher
Into Finn territory.
To be ever nigher,
The team exploratory.

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Pg 91

Can Someone Translate? Just Past The Gates

They'll be at the docks,
In half an hour's time.
Please take care not
To leave your things behind.

Some more distance to go,
Just some barriers to clear.
Reynir asking "Sooo...?"
There's no quarantine here?

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Pg 92

Where Do They Find? Somewhere In Mind

Islands with inhabitants,
Portions non-immune.
In numbers significant,
Not scattered and strewn.

If Mikkel saw it correctly,
This island's not one of them.
Not quarantine subjected,
So it will not punish them.

Where do they begin
Looking for the guy?
They should follow him,
He has somewhere in mind.

Thinking of places
Where cousin could be.
Looking for traces,
No signs it would seem...
A man left his Icelandic home
Escaped to Denmark to freely roam
With hair braided red
He got hit on the head
With a crate lid slammed onto his dome

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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1220 on: May 13, 2019, 08:07:31 AM »
Pg 93

He Learns He Won't Get His Return

In a store for fishing,
"You rent boats?", asks he.
Depends where you're wishing
To go, potential lessee.

He points to a spot,
Over... there... ish is the site.
In that case he's got
To purchase it outright.

The shopkeeper will repurchase,
If he returns, at a discount.
Lalli scowls at the merchant,
As his impatience mounts.
A man left his Icelandic home
Escaped to Denmark to freely roam
With hair braided red
He got hit on the head
With a crate lid slammed onto his dome

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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1221 on: May 13, 2019, 09:49:20 AM »
Sonnet for a Seal-Beast
Adventure II, Page 88

Beware, and watch the murky waterway!
For gaping maw and whip-tongues undulate
Beneath the waves, where quiet seaweeds sway
And seal-beasts full of spear-teeth lie in wait.

Their giant flippers stir the blue-green deep
With darker tones, the muddy-reds of death,
And wash the tide with sickness as we sleep,
In wary, fraught repose (still drawing breath).

Where seabed ends and rotting limbs begin,
And whether seaweed sways from flesh or sand,
We cannot know or tell--its toothy grin
Devours all, so stay upon the land.

A seal-beast latent lies just off the shore;
We'll wander in the waterways no more!

~~~

Sonnet for the Chapter Break
Adventure II, Page 89

There is a time that weighs upon our hearts--
The heavy weight of absence, empty void--
A deprivation of the vital arts
That make us feel great joy (or else destroyed).

Some wander through the comments every day,
Some vanish--silently, they leave us here--
And others, as they brim full of dismay,
Press F5, praying one rogue page appear!

Still more, to pass the slowly-ticking time,
Endure by illustration or by pen,
By story or with meter and with rhyme--
A game they play each time, and time again.

Despite our sorrows, though, we all agree
This break brings Minna rest, so let it be!

(Because I just had to write a sonnet. :-P
Thank you, @ILoveMySocksAndSweater, for the prompt!! <3

And seriously, although I greatly dramatize our alleged "suffering," we all really know that Minna deserves this break so, so much and I wouldn't actually want her to not take it!!!)

~~~

Sonnet for Separation
Adventure II, Page 90

One leads the group through winding gravelled streets,
No guiding chatter, not a friendly sound,
With eyes averted from all those he meets,
Fixed straight ahead upon the stony ground.

His soulmate lags behind their fellow friends,
With coat held at his side and searching eyes
That ponder every doorstep as he wends
A solemn, quiet way, and softly sighs.

They walked, companions, once, through war and waste,
Defending and protecting, side by side,
Through wilds and through wilderness they raced,
Fair fire and fell fire's quiet guide.

Now separated threefold, speaking not,
They wander, sharing silence, seeking, sought.

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Sonnet for an Entourage
Adventure II, Page 92

The silent scout with catlike grace proceeds
Afront the group, to help them find a sign;
With pond'rous frown and not a word he leads,
By faithful feline followed, first in line.

The red-haired mage comes after that, his grin
Undimmed by time and lost naïveté,
And next the medic, stoic as he's been
Since first they took their job and drove away.

And after him, the reckless captain dear,
Exuberant unto a fault and fray,
And last the fire-fiend, who's always near
To ward the shadows and the trolls away.

Through streets unknown, unwandered, unexplored,
They search the town, precautions left ignored.
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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1222 on: May 13, 2019, 09:51:13 AM »
Sonnet for Over...There...ish
Adventure II, Page 93

An island doesn't seem so far away
Until you trawl the distance in between,
Through dire straits, 'neath skies of blue and gray,
O'er waves of purple and of em'rald green.

I need to rent a boat, to chart a path
To find my cousin, vanished in the night.
I'll face a giant or a duskling's wrath
To save him from Its rusty ruby light.

But where to travel on the darkening sea?
Over...there...ish, that's all I can say.
With eyes shut up in peace, he says to me,
He'll sell, not rent, there is no other way.

(Unless of course, it comes back in one piece.
Of all the likely outcomes, that is least.)
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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1223 on: May 15, 2019, 04:09:32 AM »
Pg 94

Counting Cash, Not So Rash!

Reaching into the coffers,
Through the cash the cat flips.
The store man then offers
The keys to the ship.

Quickly, there's no nonsense,
Out the door the scout turns.
Departing from there hence,
"Hi. Nice box of worms."

They climbed all those stairs,
Just to go right back down?
Really, this whole affair
Has the Swede in a frown.

With the vessel on a ramp,
The feline prepares to depart.
Both hands upon it clamped,
Singular actions are his art.

The cat trying to heave
The boat, going solo.
Hold on now! He can't leave,
The Dane grabs on just like so.
A man left his Icelandic home
Escaped to Denmark to freely roam
With hair braided red
He got hit on the head
With a crate lid slammed onto his dome

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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1224 on: May 19, 2019, 10:13:42 AM »
Pg 95

He Mistranslates, Dirt On His Plate?

Is he sure they're all set?
No equipment or tent.
What food will they get,
Can Emil translate what he meant?

"Are you stupid?" asks the Finn,
There's food in the forest.
Ground berries therein, and
Under a tree he will rest.

There's a mistranslation,
Sleeping under a rock.
And instead of vegetation,
He'll eat dirt. What a shock!

So they take time to gather,
All the equipment they need.
Complaining rather
So much is the young Swede.

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Pg 96

Items Requisite, Shopping Delegates

They split up to scavenge,
All the items requisite.
It won't be a challenge,
Even with language deficit.

With drawings they can manage,
And wildly gesticulate.
Their art skills an advantage,
They can still articulate.

Some better than the others,
Sigrun louder than the rest.
The lack of Finnish of hers,
Only shouting she expressed.

Even Reynir has a sheet,
Though simple, all is clear.
For utensils with which to eat,
The friendly volunteer.
A man left his Icelandic home
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With hair braided red
He got hit on the head
With a crate lid slammed onto his dome

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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1225 on: May 20, 2019, 01:38:48 AM »
Pg 97

Elder Not Noted, Very Well, Out-voted

Still scratching his neck,
He heads to a clothes shop.
Casually out, decked,
His coat for pelt swapped.

The boat loaded thus,
A lengthy journey ahead.
Discuss it Mikkel must,
To suggest they stay in bed.

To sleep in an inn, as
They won't make it in a day.
Others jumping in, alas,
He's been out-voted, betrayed.
A man left his Icelandic home
Escaped to Denmark to freely roam
With hair braided red
He got hit on the head
With a crate lid slammed onto his dome

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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1226 on: May 20, 2019, 10:29:03 PM »
Pg 98

Appreciate Knowing, How What We Going?!?

Can Emil inquire as
To where they are headed?
He can try, the guy has
Language skills dreaded...

"Ehhh... how what we going?"
As the words the Swede mangles.
At least Lalli knowing,
Or the Swede'd be strangled.

To his old home location,
The cat calmly replies.
Relaying the information,
The gist he supplied.

A place sensible
To look for the cousin.
Only boat accessible,
The far Finnish basin.
A man left his Icelandic home
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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1227 on: May 21, 2019, 03:59:02 AM »
(Serpent fish-thing wallpaper)

Maneater by Daryl Hall and John Oates (with a few small changes)

Virtually out of sight
The lean and hungry type
Under the crew, was never here before
Lurking and baiting
Ooh, not aiming for you but it's on the river floor

So many have paid to see
What you think, the river is free?
The serpent is wild, a giant beast in a water reservoir
Something's the matter
Think you're safer above
You ain't gonna get too far

(O-oh here it comes)
Watch out boys it's coming up
(O-oh here it comes)
Beastie maneater
(O-oh here it comes)
Watch out boys it's coming up
(O-oh here it comes)
Freaky maneater

I wouldn't if I were you
You know what it can do
They're deadly man, it could really rip your boat apart
Mind over matter
Ooh, it's barely all there but a beast, it's in the heart

(O-oh here it comes)
Watch out boys it's coming up
(O-oh here it comes)
Feasting maneater
(O-oh here it comes)
Watch out boys it's coming up
(O-oh here it comes)
Sneaky maneater

Ooh,
(O-oh here it comes)
Here it comes
Watch out boys it's coming up
Whoa here it comes
(Watch out)
Beastie maneater
Oh here it comes
(It's a maneater)
Ooh, it's coming up
(O-oh here it comes)
Here it comes, it's a maneater
(O-oh here it comes)
(Watch out)

Virtually out of sight, ooh
(O-oh here it comes)
Here it comes
Freaky maneater
(O-oh here it comes)
(It's a maneater)
The monster is wild ooh
(O-oh here it comes)
Here it comes

Watch out boys, watch out boys
(O-oh here it comes)
Oh, watch out, watch out, watch out, watch out
(O-oh here it comes)
Yeah yeah it's a maneater
(O-oh here it comes)
(It's a maneater)
It's watching and waiting ooh
(O-oh here it comes)
Oh beastie maneater
A man left his Icelandic home
Escaped to Denmark to freely roam
With hair braided red
He got hit on the head
With a crate lid slammed onto his dome

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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1228 on: May 28, 2019, 01:28:10 AM »
Pg 99

Islands Of Hazard, Settlements Scattered

The Saimaa lake district,
Scattered across the lake.
Settlements have been inflicted,
Lost to illness outbreaks.

An inhabited cluster
Of the settled populous
The population adjusted, even
Tentatively prosperous.

Those with non-immune inhabitants,
Require quarantine control.
Other islands, on the other hand,
Free to trade and come and go.

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Pg 100

Cover Below Waves, Marine Fences Raised

The waters o' the lake,
Give protection increased.
No danger they make
From land-borne troll beasts.

To those thriving under waves,
Giving cover beneath.
All island efforts raised,
On those beings, to police.

Many layers of walling,
Precautions sub-marine.
Underwater fence installed in,
With wire and spikes between.

Initially used netting,
Causing fish-death famine.
The balance upsetting,
So other methods were examined.

Baited sea mines planting,
Cause much noise to be made.
More trolls attracting,
So only for giants are they laid.

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Pg 101

With Map And Compass, Overnight Camps Thus

Rowing all the while,
On islets they break.
Row the nautical miles,
Overnight camps they make.

Reading maps and bearings,
While they navigate.
Tortuous water-faring,
For many days straight.

At least they have food on board,
And they're somewhat competent,
In the direction of the oars,
They can be thus confident.

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Pg 102

Fort, Pier To Fjord, Port, Not Starboard

Under the crossing,
Past the lonely fort,
The Finn firmly bossing,
He's waving to port.

On the water still,
To a barren wood pier.
Whatever they will,
Can they find it here?
A man left his Icelandic home
Escaped to Denmark to freely roam
With hair braided red
He got hit on the head
With a crate lid slammed onto his dome

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Re: Poetry collection
« Reply #1229 on: May 31, 2019, 04:56:48 AM »
Pg 103

Was It His Gear, Not Onni, It's Clear

Is this his gear?
Onni? What's his name?
It was not him here,
Fishing's not his game.

Inside the covered boat,
Look at reels and baits.
Bucket, nets and floats,
Negative the scout states.

These were not his goods,
Fishing does Onni hate.
While he walks to the woods,
Saying to them straight.

After he mutters,
Seeing the tree bark.
To the wooden huts there,
Observing the marks.

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Pg 104

Mask And Capes, Clasped And Draped

Face-mask needed,
On cloaks are pinned.
Stumbling Swede
Did bang his shin.

Along the paving,
The group traverse.
Wood huts decaying,
Occupants dispersed.

Scattered, his thoughts.
Reynir anxious-eyed.
Wishing this is not
Where hope goes to die.
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A man left his Icelandic home
Escaped to Denmark to freely roam
With hair braided red
He got hit on the head
With a crate lid slammed onto his dome

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