I feel like that there's something missing but I can't figure it out >.<.
a lantern's the missing thing
looks pretty good to me
. Maybe the only think I can find that's off is a lack of depth, the background seems a bit mushed too close to the foreground and draws attention from the character. It's not as strong in the wider shot tho, where there's space for the eye to breathe (yes, eyes do that). But yes, if I have anything to suggest, it'd be to put more emphasis where you want the viewer to look, possibly by toning down the forest a little, or lighting the character a little more (the leaves seem to get more light than her?). Not sure my propsed solution is right, tho: I couldn't do something half as good-looking if my life depended on it