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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #585 on: July 27, 2024, 02:34:27 PM »
Just updated this with a new doc of fragments of stuff I've been working on.

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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #586 on: August 17, 2024, 10:12:11 AM »
Believe it or not, I've planned a sequel trilogy to the Dragonhost Saga; a fantasy/steampunk crossover with the provisional title of the Aetherworld Saga.
Here's the beginning of the second chapter of Book One, Mageborn. The first chapter is the short story The Girl And The Fox, which I posted here in January 2023.

BLOODLINES

The man sitting quietly in the corner of the tavern had several qualities that made him very useful to his masters. Among them were a face that did not draw attention and would not be remembered, the ability to pick out words and phrases from overlapping conversations, to listen without appearing to be listening, and to pretend to follow another conversation while he listened.
- I’m telling you, it’s true! Drago’s bastard son! Think what it could mean! -
The speaker was a trader of some kind, not prosperous, or else he would not be drinking in a tavern in the poorer district of Belogra. But he had the attention of half a dozen others, and they did not react with outright disbelief.
- But Prince Drago... he hunted and killed Veelas! To father a child on one of them... -
- I heard tell that he rutted a couple of them. Didn’t kill them. -
- That’s right! - the first speaker said. - Just think! This... Yastreb is Vaslav’s ward. If Vaslav died... he could take the throne. Give that Veela b**** the Death of Nine! -
- He couldn’t do that to his sworn sister! -
- If he’s truly Drago’s son, he’d never have sworn that! -
- Could be, he doesn’t know his bloodline. Has to be told. Made to understand the proper way of things. -
- Who’s going to tell him? You? Us? -
- There has to be a way... -
The man in the corner listened for a while longer, until he had heard enough. But as he made ready to leave to report to his masters, he noticed someone else who had been listening to the discussion, but was less adept in hiding his interest.
When that one slipped out of the tavern, the man in the corner discreetly followed him.

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Sir Lukor Vuzrok, stoiyatnar of Paladins, swept watchful eyes over the nobles gathered in the audience chamber and reflected again on the changes of the past two years as the Dukes of the kingdom and their families made homage to King Vaslav, First of His Name.
A king had taken the throne after ten years of the Ownership’s rule, and taken a woman of the Veela for a bride and Queen Consort... and then a man of the Veela had in turn married into one of the highest Human families in Rashka...
Approaching the thrones as the Herald loudly announced them were Baron Dorian Wolfkin of Eastguard, Baroness Yerina Wolfkin… and after a noticeable pause, the Baron’s consort, Lady Soraine Ska-Vargr.
Consort! His mistress, and openly acknowledged! There had been open shock and dismay at such blatant flouting of marriage and morals.
“Veelas! What do you expect?”
“But... by the Saviours, he let his sister marry one...”

Leka Kapillan had weathered the storm, but then he was a Duke, with power and status that could survive such a scandal.
“Baron Wolfkin, Baroness Wolfkin, Lady Ska-Vargr,” King Vaslav said urbanely. “Your journey was without mishap, I trust?”
“Indeed so, Your Majesty,” Baron Wolfkin replied.
“Welcome, cousin,” said Queen Myrallea.
“My pleasure, Your Highness.”
Baron Wolfkin’s vassal knights came forward and bowed before the King and Queen, were duly acknowledged and moved to stand with him.
As they moved away, a lone figure approached the throne and bent the knee as the Herald announced, “Yastreb Veela’s Son!”
Veela’s Son… Something that had often been whispered about, yet had never been seen to anyone’s knowledge; a man born of the union of Human and Veela.
No-one had known what to expect of such offspring. The reality was, to some, disappointing. Yastreb the Veela’s Son was a young man of almost ordinary appearance, lacking the most obvious outward signs that made Veelas most notable, namely the pointed beast-like ears, and large eyes slanted like those of a cat. If not for his beardless face, with no sign of ever being shaved, he might have been taken as fully Human. Then again, if he looked as a Veela should, would anyone have known of his Human parentage?
King Vaslav smiled. “Yastreb... so you not yet found the answers you seek?”
“Sadly not yet, your Majesty. But I will keep searching.”
“Good fortune, my sworn brother,” Queen Myrallea said.
“My thanks, your Highness.”
As the Veela’s son bowed and then moved to stand with Baron Wolfkin and his retinue, Baron Marko Ervanok was approaching, and Lukor frowned briefly as the Baron shot a glance towards Yastreb; a glance that radiated anger.
"Life is all we are. Life is what defines us. In the end, Life is the answer."

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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #587 on: August 17, 2024, 11:24:02 AM »
Read that, Yastreb, and went back to read The Girl and The Fox. I really liked both! And I'm looking forward to see how this will develop.
I particularly appreciated the way you inserted magic through the ability use runes. And all the bits on court and race's politics/relations... all of that is quite interesting.
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #588 on: August 17, 2024, 11:29:31 AM »
Just updated this with a new doc of fragments of stuff I've been working on.
I'll take a look. I love to see pieces / fragments that will (or not) become full stories. And of course I'll give feedback  ;) Thanks for sharing it!
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #589 on: September 07, 2024, 12:42:25 AM »
As mentioned in the Forum Art Museum, I have participated in this year's Tolkien Reverse Summer Bang, as both an artist and a writer.  You could do worse then making yourself a cuppa, settling into a comfy chair, and having a nosy through the works on offer.

My offering this year encompassed an artwork contributed for BardCoyote's work called All but the Brightest Stars.

I also wrote a fic for the event which I proudly present to you here, Sam Crashes the Wedding.  This was a collaboration with artist AllyThistle, in which I was inspired to write for her drawing of the titular event of Sam Gamgee returning to the Shire after the War of the Ring and finding his crush Rose Cotton getting married to another bloke!  I set up the situation leading up to the image, and then I got to let all hell break loose.  The Scouring of the Shire was just a leeeetle weee bit different from canon.
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #590 on: September 14, 2024, 10:58:07 PM »
I've been doing a bunch of writing, so I turned this into a table of contents doc.

Anything anyone has to say about the content would be appreciated.

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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #591 on: September 17, 2024, 04:17:51 AM »
I've dived in and out of a few of them.  It's really intriguing how you have so many fragmentary snippets, I can see why you've resorted to some manner of filing system.  Since I don't write regularly, those times I do sit down I tend to lay down reams.

I particularly liked the bits of observations about actors and the craft of acting, and fame; there are insights which parse as though you have lived them either yourself or been close with someone living them.

But what is the B at the end of each file?  Is it a coding like old-school Excel 'eof' cells?
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #592 on: September 17, 2024, 07:40:15 AM »
It's my note-to-self that it's the Bottom of the text, so that's where I can (and eventually will) paste whatever more I'm putting in the file; sometimes I put an "S" at the end of a Section, bot that's more of a rarity these days.

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« Reply #593 on: October 13, 2024, 10:27:33 PM »
It occurs to me that I never posted my writing contribution for the Tolkien Reverse Summer Bang.  At the end of the claims process, there were a couple of pictures that no one had picked up.  I thought I could do something with one of them, so I was a late addition to the writers.  Refreshing my memory, I realised that the situation pictured contradicted canon.  Since I had to bend canon anyway, I decided I could make a balloon animal out of it!
If you're in the mood for Tolkien Done Stooopid, have a gander at Sam Crashes the Wedding.

Edit some weeks later: D'oh, I actually had posted that, a month earlier, just a few messages up. *headdesk*
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #594 on: October 30, 2024, 06:52:14 AM »
I've taken a break from writing Book 4 of the Dragonhost saga (Lifebearer), for a couple of reasons, and returned to re-reading the first two for proofing, especially for continuity. Just as well!
I soon noticed something in Book 1 (Earthfire) that had got past me.
The major character (Yastreb) had arrived with his friends in a town beset by an evil force, and they go to a tower inside the town to get a view from there so Yastreb can use the Sight to look for clues to the nature of said power. But I realised that between asking questions, and the characters going to the tower, I'd left out any discussion of that. They'd stopped talking and headed for the tower without explanation.
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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #595 on: February 22, 2025, 04:35:45 AM »
I'm back to working on Book Four (Lifebearer), and I thought I'd share a part from an early chapter that doesn't involve the main characters; rather, it's about setting the scene for later complications. There are always complications throughout the series; for example, in Earthfire, everyone with a plan finds it going wrong.

Incidentally, the setting for the early part of Lifebearer is a homage of sorts to Sir Arthur Conan Doyle's historical novels Sir Nigel and The White Company, and the style of speech therein.

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“I worry greatly for you,” Lady Melangell said quietly. “Your father… his temper grows ever more foul by the day. All around him are fearful of his moods, and dare not raise their voices to him or offer counsel unbidden, lest he take their words amiss and order them thrown in the dungeons or dragged to the block.”
Princess Losira, heir to the throne of Kaldor, only living child of King Eddard, sat with her handmaiden and closest friend in the solar of the Royal Palace in Camlann. A half-finished tapestry sat on a frame between them.
Losira looked carefully at the tapestry, shifting her gaze from different angles to assess the work, as memories crowded in.
The King’s bouts of temper when she sought to understand what she would one day need to do as Queen of Kaldor; his equally angry responses when she tried to suggest clemency for what seemed to her to be minor crimes; and the way he would ignore her at table, whether feasting or simply sitting with him in the evenings…
He had increased taxes at whim, given attention to all manner of charlatans and mountebanks, and inflicted savage punishments for lesser crimes by noble and commoner alike.
Yet the raids by Sevlosha on the borderlands had been disregarded, and pleas to help resist the marauders were ignored at first, and then resulted in prison or floggings, even execution, for daring to raise the matter at all; punishments were ordered without regard for rank or age.
“I will not gainsay you. Because I cannot. He is no longer the father I knew. Since my mother passed… the light has gone from his heart. More and more many of those I would see daily, I see no longer, and none will tell me of their fate. I see the fear in their eyes if I ask. And how they bid me by gestures to stay silent and ask no more.”
Melangell lowered her eyes. Losira heard the sound of a muffled sob.
“Please, your highness… save us. He will listen to no-one else.”
Losira took Melangell’s hand and whispered what words of solace came to mind, but her heart shrank as she thought of how her father would react…

When they left the solar, it was late in the day.
Losira nodded to the two warriors of the Citadel Guard waiting at the door. They left their post at the door and fell into step behind them.
Losira knew them well; hulking figures in plate mail with helmets that hid all but their eyes, with great shields on the arms and swords at their sides, wearing red cloaks that billowed behind them as they walked. She had seen them every day since childhood; the guardians who stood and watched and never spoke.
She had often spoken to them, acknowledging their presence and giving thanks for their service, but they had never replied, though sometimes there was the slightest nod or shake of the head, and occasionally a gesture that seemed to be apologetic.
They walked the short distance to the Lesser Hall, where dinner would be served, to find two Guards at the doors. Losira could not help but frown; normally there would be servants by the doors to admit them.
Inside, King Eddard was seated at the head of the dining table, with scrolls and parchments spread out before him, peering at one page and scowling. A scribe sat nearby, holding a quill in trembling fingers, and a Citadel Guard stood in each corner of the room.
The King did not look up when they entered. It seemed an age before he put the parchment aside and turned to look at them.
“You are late. You, leave us.”
Melangell curtsied and left the room without a word.
Losira said, “My father, I hope all is well.”
“It will be. Sit. There are matters to discuss.”
She took the seat at her father’s right.
“Speak then, father.”
“It is time to discuss your wedding. You are eighteen, and a suitable husband has requested your hand. I see no cause to deny him.”
She had known that the day to come, but not like this; announced with no feeling whatsoever in his voice.
“Who has requested my hand?”
“Prince Airik of Sevlosha.”
“And… you see no cause to deny him, father.” The words came out slowly as she struggled to comprehend his words.
“None at all.”
“He is unworthy of even the dirtiest peasant trull!” Now the words came out in a rush. “An enemy of Kaldor and its people. Detested even by the court of Sevlosha. A brute, a savage renegade, a…”
“Be silent!” her father roared. “You will not speak of him in such a dishonourable manner! I find him worthy, and that is enough! All that remains is to raise the dowry and…”
“A dowry?” Why would he speak of raising the dowry?
“Yes, a dowry!” King Eddard jabbed a finger into the parchment before him. “A suitable dowry. Four hundred thousand gold marks.”
Losira could feel the blood drain from her face. Such an incredible sum could not come from the royal coffers. Surely…
“That mandates a special impost. To that end I have instructed Chancellor Clergis to prepare the proclamation for my signature and seal. All that remains…”
“NO!” Losira thrust back her chair and rose. “What has happened to you? How could you do this to me? To the people? To Kaldor itself? I do not consent!”
King Eddard stared at her, and his face was like stone.
Finally he said, “Guards, take the princess to her chambers. She is not to leave them without my authority. We will talk again when Prince Airik’s emissaries arrives. Go.”
The last that Losira saw of her father, he had turned back to looking at the parchments as if nothing had happened.

Three days later, Losira heard the clatter of many horsemen entering the palace courtyard.  She peered out of the solar as Melangell joined her.
“See there, your highness!” Melangell gasped. “The arms of Sevlosha!”
Losira’s heart sank as she took in the sight of the black bear symbol on the shields and tabards of the fifty horsemen.
“I must prepare to meet them.” She turned away from the window. “But I will not hasten to do so. Let them tarry a while.”
“As your highness wishes.” Melangell opened the garderobe that held Losira’s finest gowns and dresses, then paused as if gathering strength. “I saw them… the Chancellor was greeting those brutes as if they were… honoured guests!”

Losira waited for the third summons to emerge from her rooms with Melangell, to be confronted by a red-faced Chancellor Chemlen, who was clad in his formal robes.
“You have insulted our guests!” he hissed.
“Oh?” Losira raised an eyebrow. “In what way?”
Chemlen seemed to be grinding his teeth before he finally said, “They should be greeted with all due ceremony, not… left kicking their heels waiting!”
Losira could not help but imagine another meaning of the Chancellor’s words, but confined herself to a blatantly false smile. “I must be suitably attired for the guests. Do you not agree, Chancellor?”
Chemlen had no words. He simply gestured to follow, a cursory flick of the hand, and started off down the hallway, looking back angrily as Losira followed at a measured pace, Melangell at her side.
Chemlen led them to the Greater Hall, where there were servants waiting to admit them, but as before two Citadel Guards. And inside, at the table of conference, the King was seated, but not as one end as was usual, but on one side, with a dozen courtiers and knights; on the other side were twelve men with the symbol of Sevlosha on their tabards and jupons. At the sight of those men, Losira could not hold back a shudder of revulsion.
My father is greeting enemies of the kingdom as guests! Two years ago we would have laughed at the very thought!
“I am here as you request, my father.”
King Eddard looked at her with clear anger. “You did not come promptly. But let us move on from that… for the present. Sit and meet our guests.”
Losira moved to the empty chair at the King’s side, and as Melangell duly seated her, she took stock of those her father called “guests”.   
The one opposite her father was stout, clad in courtier’s clothing of sober colours and little in the way of ornamentation. He was hard-faced and clean-shaven, looking as if he rarely if ever smiled, with thinning brown hair and harsh brown eyes; only slightly younger than her father, she guessed.
To his right was his opposite in most every way; slim of build, dressed in bright colours, mainly yellow and green, with gold chains and other jewellery on display. He had a prominent beard and moustache that did not hide his confident smile, blue eyes and long fair hair styled in the most fashionable manner. He was younger, perhaps as old as she was.
“Pray greet our most honoured guests, my daughter,” the King said. “Baron Kovar…”
The older one smiled and bowed his head slightly, much less than custom demanded.
“Baron Rupar.”
Rupar smiled even more broadly and raised the goblet before him… a gesture closer to an insult to one of her rank.
Losira responded with a nod, and “Welcome, Baron Kovar, Baron Rupar.”
Out of the corner of her eye she saw her father glare at her two, no three heartbeats, and then turn back to the nobles of Sevlosha.
“You have ridden hence on a matter of high importance, and I trow you would all rather settle the matter ere we feast. So, I would ask, is Prince Airik still of mind for the marriage to proceed, in accordance with the agreements reached between us?”
Baron Rupar smiled, and Losira felt her lips tighten, for that smile was more of a leer…
“Very much so, your majesty,” said Kovar. “He sees no reason for any delay. Unless you are having… difficulties with the dowry?”
King Eddard flushed slightly, but it was not in anger. Losira sensed embarrassment, even as her disbelief was growing.
“Then nothing remains but for Princess Losira to travel to Sevlosha for the wedding…” said Rupar. “It will be…”
Losira’s disbelief could not be contained.
“My father, something has been forgotten.” She struggled to keep her voice calm. “Is it not a fact that my consent must be freely given ere any marriage take place?”
Rupar’s smile had faded suddenly; Kovar’s lip curled.
“You will consent. My honour demands it!” Eddard slammed both hands on the table. “You will consent!”
Losira fought down a growing fear and finally said, “I do not consent, father. I cannot consent to marry a man no better than a leader of brigands and cut-throats…”
Eddard’s rage cut her short. He leapt to his feet.
“You bring shame upon me and upon the kingdom with this insult to our guests!”
Losira kept her eyes on her father, but she could see that Kovar’s face showed cold rage.
“The shame is not mine, father. Not mine.”
“Out!” Eddard roared. “Guards! Take her to her chambers! By the Lord and Lady, by the Holy Lamb, think well upon this insult!”
Losira rose from her chair, made an immaculate curtsy to her father, and left without looking back at those from Sevlosha.

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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #596 on: March 21, 2025, 01:36:45 PM »
I don't know if this is the right place to suggest this, but is anyone interested in a Python script and some CSS files that make it easy to turn an AO3 html download into a PDF file that looks like a regular book?  If so, I will provide them.

I used them on my "The Watcher on the Water" work, and here are some samples of the output.

Title page:
Spoiler: show


Table of Contents (I had to fill in the page numbers by hand, but the format is all generated by Python and CSS):
Spoiler: show


Main text with chapter heading, justified, single-spaced lines, and first line indented:
Spoiler: show


The Table of Contents has pages numbered with lower-case Roman numerals, and the main text has regular Arabic numerals.  There's code for a cover page, too, but that's just an image.  Everything is editable, obviously.

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Re: The Forum's Scriptorium
« Reply #597 on: March 23, 2025, 09:43:20 AM »
Wow that looks really smart! Can it combine a series of works (that are a series on AO3) into one?
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« Reply #598 on: March 23, 2025, 10:31:10 AM »
It can't do that specifically, but once you've converted the work to a simple html file instead of the complicated AO3 html, you could easily copy the body of one file into the body of the other, and string them together that way.  You can make a table of contents pretty easily as well.  My "Into Silence" text is so big that once I'd converted it, I split it into Volume I and Volume II.  That's not difficult.  I also have some other little scripts to make it easier to fix the page numbers.  If you have images in your text, the formatting can get messed up on printing.  I have some code in the CSS file that's supposed to fix that, but you might have to fiddle with it to get your images to look right.

Would you like me to put all this up on Google Drive or something?
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« Reply #599 on: March 23, 2025, 10:56:15 AM »
Well, I said it would be easy to string texts together, but I was thinking about stringing together short texts with no separate chapters.  If you want to merge in some that do have chapters, the table of contents would have to be more complex.  I'll look at that in a few hours when I get back from a family occasion.
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