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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #915 on: September 18, 2015, 07:22:47 PM »
The Oldest Law
A “Stand Still. Stay Silent” fanfic
Part 9
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Red ‘Eric’ and His Fate

“No, you won’t.”

‘Eric’ smiled nastily at Emil, his eyes bright with an insanity eerily reminiscent of the dead woman’s. “It takes more than you all have combined to kill me: the Cleansers staked me out, half-dead from the beating already, so that a giant could feast on me, and I survived it! They knew I was alive after it was long dead, but still they left me there, and so they all deserved to die! That’s why I’ve been killing them off, one by one, here on this island. Why else do you think I egged our dear girl into bringing you here, Emil, if not to get my revenge on you?”

Emil was so tremendously angry that he had trouble speaking for a moment. “All those good Cleansers you slew are dead only because you hunted them down as a Vätte would; are you man enough to face this Cleanser as he stands ready to fight you, or have you lived like a troll for so long that you’ve become one, a coward crouching in the dark until its prey has turned away from it?”

*

‘Eric’ lay dead on the floor, his face twisted into an expression of disbelief. From the center of his chest sprouted Emil’s knife, surrounded by a slowly spreading stain of scarlet.

Emil was sweaty and shivering, and had obviously lost his breakfast over in one corner, but he bore not a cut nor a scrape nor even a bruise from the fight. The look on his face spoke of scars within, though, so Lalli simply went over to his messy Swede friend and gave him a shoulder bump.

*

There was much to be said in favor of razing the path behind you: it forced you to forge ahead; it denied your enemies their former playgrounds, the chance to strike at you from behind, or the ability to backtrack you to your home; it heartened your friends and demoralized your enemies; and many other things. All told, Sigrun was confident that letting Emil burn this place to the ground would fall in the positive column, rather than the negative.

“I was going to let you go as thanks for ridding me of ‘Eric’, but I can’t countenance the burning of my home, so you have to die.”

Razing the path behind you was also a good way to draw your enemies out of cover, whether you intended to or not. The crazy woman had seemed to go down a bit too easily for Sigrun to be comfortable about it, but she hadn’t wanted to risk checking to see if the nut was playing possum until now.

Emil had heard tales handed down from his forebears about things from the Old Times called “action movies” starring demigods like Jackie Chan, Jean-Claude Van Damme, Jet Li, Wesley Snipes, and many others that featured fights that moved so fiercely and swiftly as to be beyond human capabilities. The fight he now witnessed would have put any of them to shame, he was quite certain. He and Lalli were standing well back and watching carefully, just in case, though Emil doubted his own ability to succeed if Sigrun failed.

Sigrun’s shall we say capability at fighting had obviously surprised the crazy old woman; whether that surprise and Sigrun’s advantages of youth and stamina  would be decisive remained to be seen, as the two seemed quite evenly matched otherwise. Each woman was obviously fully versed in how their bodies could best be used to strike or to evade a blow, and each woman was as quick as the other to take advantage of any perceived slip of their opponent’s. Consequently, the fight swiftly transformed into a fast paced and energetic dance of sorts.

Flesh and blood can only keep going for so long, and eventually, the crazy old oman’s endurance gave out enough for her to be fatally slow to dodge one of Sigrun’s blows, and from there, the vicious cycle of more pain/less speed/more hits taken/more pain etc brought the fight to an inevitable end. Trembling with near-exhaustion herself, Sigrun stood proudly over the corpse of her vanquished foe.

*

After they dealt with the crazy old woman, everything just seemed to fall into place. They found their way back to the surface fairly easily; a boat was waiting for them at the quay; and no other surprises jumped out at them on their way to Björköfjärden.

Once at Björköfjärden, they each went their separate ways again: with goodbyes effusive and taciturn, long and short; with promises of correspondence and visits; with laughter, tears and sad smiles; and with a few particularly poignant echoes of their first encounters, now distant enough to seem a lifetime ago.

Emil, Tuuri and Lalli were the last to depart. Trying to keep a manful composure, Emil stuck out his hand to Lalli, only to be surprised when his Finn friend nearly knocked him over in a Tuuri-esque hug, Tuuri joining them after a moment.

Then the boarding call for the ship to Finland sounded, and the Hotakainens hurried away. Emil sighed sadly and began the long walk to his train. Duty called.


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And there’s an end.

WHAT I KNEW AND WHEN I KNEW IT

At the beginning, I knew it would echo "And Then There Were None" in part, but that there would be 2 opposed villains.

I knew the minor villain would be 'Eric' before I wrote Part 3, when he grabbed Sigrun.

I knew the waiting for the reveal was getting to me when I was writing Part 6 and had to skip to Part 8 to write the reveal.


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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #916 on: September 18, 2015, 07:46:10 PM »
The Oldest Law
A “Stand Still. Stay Silent” fanfic
Part 9
Spoiler: show
Red ‘Eric’ and His Fate




*Joins the applause*
Intense indeed!
I admire the way you show the essence of each story - although if you ever wanted to write out more detailed versions, I'd read those too, probably several times. Per week.

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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #917 on: September 18, 2015, 07:52:03 PM »
If you ever wanted to write out more detailed versions, I'd read those too, probably several times. Per week.

I would too XD
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #918 on: September 18, 2015, 10:05:11 PM »
The Oldest Law
A “Stand Still. Stay Silent” fanfic
Part 9
Spoiler: show
Red ‘Eric’ and His Fate

Spoiler:  Authorial Notes • show

And there’s an end.

WHAT I KNEW AND WHEN I KNEW IT

At the beginning, I knew it would echo "And Then There Were None" in part, but that there would be 2 opposed villains.

I knew the minor villain would be 'Eric' before I wrote Part 3, when he grabbed Sigrun.

I knew the waiting for the reveal was getting to me when I was writing Part 6 and had to skip to Part 8 to write the reveal.

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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #919 on: September 19, 2015, 02:32:50 AM »
LooNEY: oh, well done and very well done. The bit I didn't follow: WHO was the crazy old lady, and why? Or does that come into later tales?
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #920 on: September 19, 2015, 03:05:19 AM »
LooNEY: oh, well done and very well done. The bit I didn't follow: WHO was the crazy old lady, and why? Or does that come into later tales?
More or less: plot contrivance. She's a random psychopathic serial killer with a really good hiding place of the sort that heroes of this kind of story run into at a statistically improbable rate ("Psycho in haunted house? Gee, I didn't know it was Thursday already"). When 'Eric', a psychopathic serial killer, started looking for a good hiding place, he found hers. He then manipulated her into helping him with his hit list, including Emil, and thus our story.

I considered having her be a Gollum-esque survivor from Year Zero, but I thought it would strain credulity.

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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #921 on: September 22, 2015, 12:49:49 PM »
Hey everyone! Remember how a while ago I wrote a story where Emil works in a coffeeshop and Lalli comes in to order cookies?

WELL it now has the second chapter that everyone was asking for! There will probably also be a third at some point. Maybe fourth. But definitely third.
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #922 on: September 22, 2015, 01:44:45 PM »
Hey everyone! Remember how a while ago I wrote a story where Emil works in a coffeeshop and Lalli comes in to order cookies?

WELL it now has the second chapter that everyone was asking for! There will probably also be a third at some point. Maybe fourth. But definitely third.

I love this so much. Emil so would go through that terrible manuscript, poor guy XD Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #923 on: September 22, 2015, 04:20:20 PM »
Hey everyone! Remember how a while ago I wrote a story where Emil works in a coffeeshop and Lalli comes in to order cookies?

WELL it now has the second chapter that everyone was asking for! There will probably also be a third at some point. Maybe fourth. But definitely third.

Yay! I had been looking forward to the next chapter of this fic :P
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #924 on: September 22, 2015, 11:47:24 PM »
I love this so much. Emil so would go through that terrible manuscript, poor guy XD Can't wait for the next chapter!

Yay! I had been looking forward to the next chapter of this fic :P
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #925 on: September 23, 2015, 01:01:54 AM »
coffee shop aus are a weakness of mine

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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #926 on: September 23, 2015, 06:29:31 PM »
Hey everyone! Remember how a while ago I wrote a story where Emil works in a coffeeshop and Lalli comes in to order cookies?

WELL it now has the second chapter that everyone was asking for! There will probably also be a third at some point. Maybe fourth. But definitely third.
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #927 on: September 24, 2015, 12:04:52 AM »
I'm just going to leave these here.

#1: "Routines". 1.2k words. Characters: Emil & Lalli.
Summary: They have their routines. They've become set in them. Sometimes, they make new ones. AKA "that thing with hairbrushing, fluff, and language barriers".
Relationship is friendship/ambiguous.
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#2: "Break Down, Build Up". 500-word drabble sequence. Various prologue characters: Stig & Ulrika, Aino & Kaino, Aksel and his grandmother, Signe & Michael, Árni.
Summary: The world's gone, but as time turns, they hang on. Snapshots of the lives of the prologue characters during Year 0 and beyond. 
Relationships: the canon marriages, also Signe/Michael.
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #928 on: September 24, 2015, 12:11:54 AM »
I'm just going to leave these here.

#1: "Routines". 1.2k words. Characters: Emil & Lalli.
Summary: They have their routines. They've become set in them. Sometimes, they make new ones. AKA "that thing with hairbrushing, fluff, and language barriers".
Relationship is friendship/ambiguous.
On Ao3: http://archiveofourown.org/works/4681715
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I READ THIS A WHILE AGO AND DANG ARE THEY CUTE. AMBIGUOUS RELATIONSHIPS \o/
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #929 on: September 24, 2015, 12:14:42 AM »
!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOLO I'm dead, I died. I also dropped my phone on my face but it was fine.
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