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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #30 on: October 24, 2021, 03:33:48 AM »
Again, this chapter is pretty to look at. Even with the heavy rain the scenery is still great. I love the way she drew the clouds near the end of the chapter. The dark, more subdued colors really make the lighter, more intense colors pop.

The interactions in this chapter seem a little more straightforward I think. Especially when speaking with Junnu. Maybe Junnu is a straightforward kind of person. It helps get to the point faster. Helping the cute little snakes. I like that Hannu had to use his head this time around without the help from Puppy fox.

My grandparents used to live in an adorable little farming town in Kansas where everyone knew everyone. It only had one Elementary school, Middle school and High school. I like to imagine Hannus village is around the same size. The town is definitely large enough where you might not actually meet everyone there but still know about them. Some of the people he knew he probably heard of them from listening to his friends talk about them and other goings on around the village. So, you might not speak to some people frequently but still know a lot about them from the gossip chain. Other people who live on the surrounding farmland would come to the village to shop, catch up with friends, etc. Which is how the old farm couple met Hannu. They may have talked with his parents frequently even when Hannu wasn't present. If I remember correctly, during festivals people would celebrate on the farmland instead of the town. Maybe that's why there are so few people who got caught up in Puppy foxes little accident.

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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #31 on: October 24, 2021, 04:12:21 AM »
Spoiler: rest of the comic i think • show

Well, there's actually another dog that Ville's jealous of in chapter 5. Astrid, actually. But considering that Ville is the only animal that talks, it could be that these other animals are just versions that exist in the conscience of villagers.

Spoiler: spoiler, spoiler, Ville gets to be a broiler • show

Ah dangit, Astrid, of course. Who is a close companion to also-present Samuli ... which Murunen could easily be to Junnu as well ... but Astrid's in the characters list, while Murunen isn't ... Hm. Guess there are shades and grades involved ...


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But considering that Ville is the only animal that talks, it could be that these other animals are just versions that exist in the conscience of villagers. Exceeept that might be a little bit unfair because why does Ville get to be the exception? But I guess the story wouldn't count for much in terms of narrative if it were just Hannu struggling to (find the motivation to) do tasks for 8 chapters.

And ummm... well, was there ever a reason as to why Hannu was the one who had to solve these problems? Was he chosen because Puppy-fox knew he was dying and so could afford for him to do it and then have him depart immediately after? I can't remember if there really was...

But does this also mean that this could've been avoided if only people weren't gathered?
It's up to you to decide how much you're willing to believe of the information Poxy-F'up Puppy-Fox dishes out, but he did say that due to ATNHF¹, Hannu and Ville were the only possible choices left. Because of being close enough to the village to now be "parted from time and matter" as well, yet hidden well enough to not have been picked up and taken along the Birds' Path by the birds. Which insunuates that if the birds had not found the rest of the villagers gathered in a single place and instead started to thoroughly search the area ...

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... but yes, hope to see this to an end where Hannu cannot tell anyone anything anymore and Ville is back to his non-speaking dog self might have been a factor in Puppy-Fox' planning. It still has a loophole in that the other spirit animals can happily communicate with Ville, if only he gets their attention, but.


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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #32 on: October 25, 2021, 11:32:52 PM »
As someone who lives in a small town in country South Australia (under 1,000 people with most of them living on adjoining small farms, vineyards and in isolated houses on acres), it is a rare occasion when most of the inhabitants are in town at the same time. Maybe three or four times a year for occasions like Anzac Day, the Christmas Street Party, the Spring Fling garden festival or the yearly agricultural show. And even in such a small place it is quite possible to live there for decades, be active in the community and still not get to know everyone who lives there.
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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #33 on: October 29, 2021, 04:14:56 AM »
It's time for… chapter three (up to page 111)!

This is the part where I started breaking up the chapters because 3-5 are super long… not sure why! But if you feel the pacing of this reading is too slow or fast, please let me know! I'm still hoping to finish it juuust around when SSSS ends, give or take a few weeks, as a sort of transition.

So, it's a watery chapter! I like the setting for this and the bright cyan hues, though nowadays it feels exceptionally vibrant for one of Minna's stories. And the water is stylized and interacts with the panels in neat ways! Also, the plank walkways everywhere are cool. And, ummm, the flat-colour houses! It's a very visually interesting fishing village.

It does suck that Ville got turned into a seal and the first few pages are almost all fat jokes, though. Leaves a bad taste in my mouth, though the good parts of this chapter are definitely worth it to me. I don't really have many other issues with the chapter, except that it might be a little boring? It has some good moments, though.

One of the strengths of this chapter is that this is kind of where the strength of the friendship between Hannu and Ville becomes apparent! Their interactions feel much more fleshed out, rather than Ville more or less just hanging by an appendage and providing commentary. I don't know if this was planned all along or if Minna adjusted the plan as the story unfolded, though. The part where Hannu tries and tries to drag Ville through the forest and seemed to feel  bad for letting him get scratched felt too real, considering I'm also one of those people who feel closer with a pet than any human. My favourite is probably page 83, the panel where Hannu's touching Ville's nose.

Does anyone else remember having an experience that was just like the one on page 111? I've had similar experiences where i've taken things and ran, and adults would yell at me the exact same thing. Is it a universal experience???

As someone who lives in a small town in country South Australia (under 1,000 people with most of them living on adjoining small farms, vineyards and in isolated houses on acres), it is a rare occasion when most of the inhabitants are in town at the same time.

More speculation on my part, I think it could be that there are small clusters of people who know each other in small town areas with sprawling farms (in the context of aRTD). And how long people live there also affects things, but even then, I agree that it feels impossible to be perfectly aware of everyone in any town with a population greater than 250, maybe up to 400, and that's on the higher end!

That's all I've got for this week! I actually binged the entire comic a week or two ago because I was That eager to get to the intense part, but it'll be a few weeks before that happens!

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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #34 on: November 03, 2021, 09:05:59 PM »
OK, I went sailing through 3 quite a while ago, then realized I was way ahead of the discussion and stopped. But I made some notes at the time, and they say:

This whole chapter is one long fat joke. yucch.

Mixed with falling down and getting bruised and being shat on by birds being, probably, supposed to be funny. Which it ain't.

Still good art, though.

-- is Ville turning into a bigger animal each time?

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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #35 on: November 03, 2021, 10:50:02 PM »
Yeah, I'm not surprised that this chapter hasn't really aged well, though I didn't really notice the extra fat jokes beyond the first half? :( Errr… the vomit and poop birds felt like a joke that showed up a lot at the time but overall not a great gag, honestly most of the jokes aren't really all that funny in this comic. I just like the overarching plot and the atmosphere…

In my opinion most of this could've been skipped, but I don't really know how to phrase that. I liked their bonding moments, like I said, and I like that they have to work together to solve the problem, but couldn't they have done it without the fat jokes? Maybe Ville could've been a seal with legs or a… frog or an otter?

I don't think lamenting it could change it now that it's eight years finished, but the position they were put in in the narrative deliberately makes it so that fat jokes are a thing even when there are other options probably.

If you want to find out Ville's transformation pattern (and a different small spoiler LOL):
Spoiler: for the rest of the story • show

Nope, the last three transformations break the rule entirely. That's also generally where the fat jokes end unless I'm missing something again, but I don't think I did.

The later parts do decide to throw any themes it was leaning towards into the trash can, though, so that's… not much to look forward to. Buuuut my absolute favourite part comes at the near-end of the story still, hence why I'm so eager to talk about it.


I don't want to be overly negative about the story, though. In the end it's still a giant mixed bag for me! I loved some parts and hated others, but the parts that I loved captured my attention enough for me to get attached to the story.

(Also dont worry if you're a little ahead, the pacing is just for the discussion)

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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #36 on: November 04, 2021, 12:57:20 PM »


In my opinion most of this could've been skipped, but I don't really know how to phrase that. I liked their bonding moments, like I said, and I like that they have to work together to solve the problem, but couldn't they have done it without the fat jokes? Maybe Ville could've been a seal with legs or a… frog or an otter?


It would be entirely possible to say "you are heavy" instead of "you are fat". But no.

It wouldn't make much difference in some cases, because for example I am heavy because I'm fat. But Ville in this chapter is heavy because he was magically transformed into a seal!

Unfortunately some jabs about fat people still happen even in the streams. Not regularly, but it's not something that was left in the 8-year-old practice comic. I am sorry to say.
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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #37 on: November 04, 2021, 06:26:48 PM »
Generally I dislike fat jokes. I use the term joke very loosely here cause they're not really jokes but fat shaming. I'll usually give a pass to characters like Hannu or Puppy Fox though because they're terrible people. Hannu is not above making fun of people because he's a bad person, that's his personality. Awful. It's in bad taste but for bad people I can see them saying those things. Other more decent characters would not get a pass of course and if Hannu was an actual person he would absolutely get an earful for being mean. Maybe accidentally get pushed out of the boat... but alas he is only fictional.

All the fat shaming in the comic makes me think about what Mina thought about herself at that time. Some artists will use their art to express how they feel about stuff in there life. Maybe she's unhappy with her own appearance and being mean makes her feel better. Just speculation due to the frequency of her fat jokes. That's just how it looks from an outside observation. I'll also say that I do not know who Mina is as a person.

I'll also apologize. If this came off as belittling people feelings about weight that is definitely not what I intended.

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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #38 on: November 05, 2021, 02:41:54 AM »
Opening up discussion for the remainder of chapter 3! I'll increase the amount of pages we go through each week once we're done with chapter four, since that's the longest chapter there is.

My thoughts on it are pretty much the same as my earlier post on the chapter, so far the plot hasn't really become as apparent yet. It's still kind of a monster-of-the-chapter story. Uhhh... it's a bit lighter on the fat jokes, thankfully! There's a pretty meaningless joke about therapy there, though, and pretty much every chapter opens with fat jokes until UHHHH chapter 6?

Some moments here and there with the art strike me as just a little off and I've finally figured out that it's because the animals have very human-like faces... hmmmm... (see the seagull on page 128). But that effect basically goes away completely after this chapter.

The parts where Ville is swimming underwater has some cute illustrations (p. 121, bottom left)!

The fish part was pretty anticlimactic though, but that's fine.

Errrrrr... overall, I'm getting the sense that I was a far more insufferable (younger) teenager than I thought I was! It's a fun read, but some parts make me think, "wow, how did I enjoy this?" Not that I ever enjoyed making or hearing offensive jokes, but I sympathized with (the less intense parts of) Hannu's attitude way more than I do now... :'D

Brief warnings on the next chapter just in case:
Spoiler: warnings for chapter 4 • show

Some horror elements, but it's not too severe, and there's discussion of animal death (this one gets more severe in later chapters). There's also a part where a character is at risk of drowning.


It would be entirely possible to say "you are heavy" instead of "you are fat". But no.

It wouldn't make much difference in some cases, because for example I am heavy because I'm fat. But Ville in this chapter is heavy because he was magically transformed into a seal!

Unfortunately some jabs about fat people still happen even in the streams. Not regularly, but it's not something that was left in the 8-year-old practice comic. I am sorry to say.

I agree, especially since Ville is almost always a totally different animal. And it's not that seals don't have a lot of fat on their bodies, but they definitely could've just avoided making it about calling Ville fat in almost every instance where he's a big animal. Especially because of the degree to which he's treated as essentially a human character. Speaking of, it might even have been more appropriate to comment on practically any unique non-human non-dog trait Ville had. That'd add much more to their interactions, I think.

There were a couple in SSSS as well, especially when Emil and Reynir were in Lalli's dream, I think. I haven't seen any streams recently. But for aRTD itself, I mean I'm pretty sure that comic is set in stone and won't ever be altered. I don't even think there are ads on that site anymore, so it's probably pretty much never going to change at this point. It's sad that they're still so normal and frequent, even as people have gotten more aware of social issues.

Personally I've found that jokes about my appearance just make me too self-conscious, though it's not comments about my weight most of the time.

Generally I dislike fat jokes. I use the term joke very loosely here cause they're not really jokes but fat shaming. I'll usually give a pass to characters like Hannu or Puppy Fox though because they're terrible people. Hannu is not above making fun of people because he's a bad person, that's his personality. Awful. It's in bad taste but for bad people I can see them saying those things. Other more decent characters would not get a pass of course and if Hannu was an actual person he would absolutely get an earful for being mean. Maybe accidentally get pushed out of the boat... but alas he is only fictional.

Hmmm... yes and no. The jabs don't really add much to the setting, so even though they're just irrelevant lines said by a bunch of lines drawn on paper, it's still totally unrelated to the issues at hand (the setting, the plot, the main Problem, etc...) and usually a whole detour from the actual plot of the chapter. I've found that the richest interactions between Hannu and Ville are the ones where they're being, like, decent people to each other, but that may just be me. And uhh... yeah, Hannu's just a pretty awful guy! But that gets expressed in much more explicit terms later on than a bunch of jabs that even people who think they themselves are angels will say.

None of us know enough about Minna to comment on her own feelings about it, though, and we'll probably never know.

On an unrelated note, I visited an archived version of the page and it's been fun flipping through the older things! Interesting how aRTD was once placed on the same level of hierarchy as the rest of her portfolio, and reading the old logs is fun. Some of it is about how SSSS was developed, in much more detail than I can find elsewhere... cool!

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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #39 on: November 05, 2021, 03:21:17 AM »
Jokes about people’s bodies, especially about details of their appearance that are beyond their control, can be pretty cruel. Sometimes it is hard to respond in a civilised manner to such jokes (I must admit to having, once, responded sharply to a very tall young man who reached down to ruffle my hair and ask me how the air was down here? (I technically fall just within the category of ‘midget’, but I am very strong for my size and have a lifetime of martial arts behind me). He became much more polite and rather embarrassed when I picked him up by his legs, dropped him, and asked him if he would like to come down and see. I was in my late thirties at the time.

As a tiny red-haired child with glasses I was teased a lot, but I got by with being smart. I did not enjoy the experience. And as an older adult with some quite ugly scars, especially on my legs and lower body, I have had remarks made to me along the lines of ‘How dare I show my scars in a public swimming pool and frighten the children’ which I took to mean that the adults saying such things personally didn’t like the sight. Children are generally fine and are more likely to ask me how I got the scars. My husband said, when somebody asked how he coped with my appearance, that the scars just came with me being me. Bless him!

So reading about poor Ville being teased so was something I found sad, but I presumed that it was in the story to demonstrate that Hannu was simply Not A Very Nice Person.

Edit: something I meant to add was that society having more expectation that people would be courteous to others about their bodies is still a relatively new thing, and would have been a far less common view back when Minna was writing this. It may simply be that the idea of not teasing people about their bodies was far less widespread in the time and culture in which Minna wrote this.  After all, many things written even ten years ago are now thought offensive that would simply have been invisible to people then.
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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #40 on: November 05, 2021, 09:47:56 AM »
Midget? Yikes. That's a word I haven't heard in a while. You're response to that man was kinda funny though. Luckily he learned his lesson. Some adults could use that lesson too. Children are incredibly curious and like asking about things that are out of their ordinary. Scars are one of those things that shouldn't be hidden... actually not much should be hidden in general when It comes to physical appearances. Peoples differences (whether it's physical or not) makes things feel more natural and just better all around. Unfortunately I doubt we'll get to a place where people can be comfortable in their own skin for a long time. Especially when there are people who demand covering up what they deemed unsightly.
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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #41 on: November 05, 2021, 01:50:31 PM »
I am ok with the fact that I am indeed fat, but fat insults ire me greatly. In SSSS there’s also he way Onni calls Mikkel the fat Dane. In that case it’s definitely used as an insult (although Mikkel doesn’t hear it) and cannot be explained as some sort of description or joke, as Onni says it because he’s angry. As if being fat (which Mikkel isn’t at this point in the story) is generally bad. It’s puzzling and disappointing especially as Minna really has realistic body shapes.

Besides that, I like a lot much of the art of Ville swimming in the lake. The landscape panel on p 113 is also nice. And the scene where Ville is the best doggy (p 120) is heartwarming.
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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #42 on: November 12, 2021, 07:31:27 PM »
UhhhHH TIME TO DISCUSS chapter 4, up to page 179!

It's been such a busy week for me that I've almost forgotten to think about this comic! But we're still getting through it I think!

Yeah this chapter starts with another fat joke. Hmmm....

On the other hand, it does also have much more of those horror elements that Minna's comics have been known for. Things creeping in the woods, things that physically exist and you can attack, but are silent and hidden most of the time. And don't really do the slasher kind of thing that we see in movies. I'm pretty fond of this kind of horror, mostly because I can't stomach other types...

On the second or third read-through, I found Ville's ears funny because his form is so close to what a moose is that the few dog features are just so confusing!

Also, they haven't brought up the hannunvaakuna before this. It's a neat mention (it's appeared on Hannu's design's before, but wasn't discussed).

Reading the comment on page 177 does make me very concerned, though. Two comic pages a day is absolute overkill, and even drawing one a day while in post-secondary is soooo much. I can't even keep up with my own schoolwork despite having neglected my own art projects for like two months, though I guess it's a little different for me.

Well, aside from that... pretty art! Lots of nice spreads this chapter, and there's a whole tonne of panels that just feel so soft because of the colour palette. This chapter is far from the softest one, though. Actually I'm pretty sure it just becomes more of a struggle for Hannu after this, but that's going out of the chapter page range so we'll leave it for when that discussion comes!

I continue to be disappointed by my teenage self for indulging in this story and thinking Hannu was cool!

I am ok with the fact that I am indeed fat, but fat insults ire me greatly. In SSSS there’s also he way Onni calls Mikkel the fat Dane. In that case it’s definitely used as an insult (although Mikkel doesn’t hear it) and cannot be explained as some sort of description or joke, as Onni says it because he’s angry. As if being fat (which Mikkel isn’t at this point in the story) is generally bad. It’s puzzling and disappointing especially as Minna really has realistic body shapes.

Yeah, one of the things that drew me in to SSSS was that characters weren't all the same body shape, and perhaps that they weren't drawn to be fanservice-y. Not that that's inherently bad, but it was nice to read something without it (especially because when I started SSSS, I watched a lot of anime). It's super confusing as to why Minna would put it there, especially since I can't recall any other instance where something someone can't control is the butt of a joke. There were some about nationalities in the earlier parts, but SSSS was at least partially about overcoming such differences.

But like I said, there's definitely not much to look forward to for Minna's "sense of humour" in these comics. There's been offensive statements here and there, and ones that aren't really all that bad but aren't really all that funny, either. Personally I felt like the one about getting high on page 176 is pretty meh, and a whole bunch of other ones are just Hannu being terrible or someone having a rough fall.

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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #43 on: November 12, 2021, 09:24:14 PM »
OK, so here are my notes on chapter 4:

in which it's made utterly clear that Hannu is a very unpleasant person.

And nobody else in the strip is pleasant either.

And even Ville behaves like a fool.

And there are more fat jokes. now joined by jokes about old people; and "retard" as an insult.

-- good grief, it's a troll moose! -- with troll speech, even --
(yes, I realize it's not a troll, and was made out of plants. But it sure looked like one.)

an interesting take on what dogs want. But when I was a child, and we had Old English Sheepdogs, they definitely didn't want me to ride them.

It does seem that Hannu and Ville care about each other. The only redeeming feature Hannu's got, it seems.

And it's still good artwork.  Last panel on 261 is lovely.


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Re: aRTD re-read
« Reply #44 on: November 13, 2021, 01:02:59 AM »
OK, so here are my notes on chapter 4:

in which it's made utterly clear that Hannu is a very unpleasant person.

Entire re-read summed up so far... It's kind of weird that Hannu's just this unpleasant, even though it's not always necessary for protagonists to be kind always. And it gets worse as we draw closer to the end, by the way. I'm just so confused about what the point of it all is. But I'll just follow the line of reasoning of whatever Minna has said about how at the time, she had no intention of putting any meaningful themes into her stories. This was before LP.

Not that it makes me doubt their friendship, really, but I can't help but shake off the question that if Hannu's willing to treat even his childhood friend (Paju) and parents terribly, then isn't the relationship dynamic between him and Ville flawed and terribly imbalanced? Ville's entire thing is basically "Loves Hannu Would Do Anything To Make Him Happy," and it's a little bit different, but Hannu does have people who treat him the same way.

But those are all just useless musings. Thankfully, Hannu's totally 100% not real I hope... And I still believe that people genuinely want to be good even if they don't always know how.