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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #615 on: April 25, 2021, 12:29:09 PM »
Color me surprised; Minna's (supposed) father seems to be of roughly the same faith as her.

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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #616 on: April 25, 2021, 04:53:37 PM »
Okay, I'm pretty dumbfounded by this discussion at this point. My personal stance is that Minna's father has effectively inserted himself into the conversation as some "voice" for Minna, since Minna hasn't directly commented or responded herself. Therefore, he should factor into the discussion, as well as Minna's upbringing because that plays a very large role in storytellers' methods. I also don't think it's a particularly big stretch to say maybe a white christian family is not totally 100% not racist or xenophobic, but for the sake of the discussion, I won't consider it further.

I will concur with some of the earlier posts that I was willing to gloss over some of Minna's dicier past comments with the old "oh, she doesn't know any better, she's European" argument, in years past. That was wrong. Reclusive or not, the internet makes research easy and refusing to learn from mistakes is not a good look.

This particular argument comes up a lot when European creators/influencers say some "dicey" things. For the benefit of future discussions, I encourage people to not give them the benefit of the doubt. There should be no excuse for not being able to move past racist, xenophobic, antisemetic, etc... beliefs, no matter where you're from. This is not even considering that racial/religious/ethnic minorities exist in almost every country. Just as a note moving forward, but I'm glad you've come to reevaluate your previous stance even if it is because of this... situation.

If I remember correctly, there was not a single Disqus comment about LP before Minna herself linked to it on 22-Mar apart from the one where Elaine linked to it on Instagram two or three days prior. I knew we¹ were in for a ride when I found myself unable to, over the weekend, come up with any comment that I wouldn't had feared to start a flamefest right away ...

A lot of the people who read the comic do keep up with it solely through the actual webcomic site, so I doubt that people would have come into the comments for the discussion had Minna not kept linking to it for several weeks. As they said, people like the comment section because it's generally a nice and pleasant place where there are even some creative people writing poetry and short stories to contribute.

Now, the link sits there mocking any reader who wants to participate in regular comment affairs, so I'm not sure why "keep it relevant to the comic (SSSS)" is such an absolute rule there.

Aside from that, the same speechlessness was what I felt for many reasons, mostly because I could not find much that was good about the comic to say. Constructive criticism usually does require pointing out strengths and weaknesses, but I couldn't find... any strengths except "art pretty," and even that was pretty shaky in my opinion.

Oh, wait, wow, it's been a whole month and then some since the comic was released!

and hey, maybe we ARE supposed to read between the lines when she realizes "oh heck they labeled my daughter a trash person and i KNOW she is not a trash person!", but it also feels like that requires more intentional reading comprehension than... almost everything else in the comic (the alexa lookalike LITERALLY says 'i spy'. truly a masterstroke of subtle storytelling).  i think this thread has discussed how the story as it is is not doing a good job of serving its own narrative multiple times - the story WOULD, in theory, benefit from another 70 pages where they can actually delve into a more nuanced and complex exploration of the Themes and Topics, but that is assuming LP wasn't hastily thrown together to slide a very specific agenda of remember to repent and convert xoxo under the door with the guise of ACTUALLY warning us about the dangers of totalitarian regimes and corporations controlling social media. there is no thematical cohesion between the story and that agenda. it's like putting a dagger inside a pillow and trying to convince everyone the pillow is 100% soft you guys. why are you upset about the soft pillow. would it be better if the pillow was BIGGER?? why aren't we discussing what REALLY matters here: pillow covers. everyone is making such a big stink about the dagger!! as if none of you have ever used knives!! the HIPOcRISY

Yes, there would be a lot to speculate on. From The Teacher (Peppermint) bringing three kids into exile with not a word about, much less communication with, their father(s?), to The Influencer (Peony) apparently having no relatives whatsoever that she might want to inform, to how much of a Christian Marigold actually is³, to what they all actually do expect to find (other than "what if it's a trap?") in that exile that nobody has any idea of beyond "here's a map, which we ultimately got from a Christian source (Cinnamon)". No, we¹ aren't doing that, yet. Because we¹ have it on good authority that the actual comic contents are supposed to pale against the RL issues the author brings up.

Well, I guess now we can start pointing out how the actual story itself was pretty lacking. This was a major point of confusion for me because had any other author come around with this comic, most of us would probably have just slept on it or read it and then forgotten about it totally. The comic just isn't good enough to warrant a careful thematic analysis, in my opinion. Haiz, I know you wrote this in a haze, but you got down a lot of the problems with how carelessly the comic handles pretty serious issues. That's not even considering that the characters are pretty much cardboard cutouts of tropes. The Influencer, The Teacher who never thinks about her own actions, and the Christian Homemaker who is a Very Good Wife (did I forget to mention how Good a Wife she is?) have like... no depth, we don't get any insight into how they think and where they stand politically, and we just have to take for granted that they're Super Good Friends because they get together and eat every once in a while, which is what all Super Good Friends do!

So, yeah, they all really do exist for Minna's Very Specific Agenda.

Anyway, if there really is any criticism I have for the christian homemaker herself (and it's not even really about her), it's that the story is basically saying "your conservative christian friend is right! Listen to your local Conservative Christian Friend today!" And the last few panels, p. 70 ish I think, include Marigold saying "And now I'm going to tell you guys all about it and you won't be able to escape me." ("it" refers to Christianity or God's providence, I'm not sure, but it's related to Marigold's religion) AND Violet ended up being used as a vehicle for all this for the teacher bunny's family. But JoB, I agree, that's next to nothing compared to every other horrible thing the author has said and the conspiracy-theory-path she was on on the afterword.

Minna doesnt care about Uyghurs, she hates China and everything she thinks China represents.

From surface level racist drivel like the Emil Incident to conspiratorial "China is behind all the tech companies censorign my Freeze Peach on Twitter Dot Com".

"Freeze Peach" had me laughing for a bit. It's pretty funny.

"Minna doesn't care about Uyghurs" is significantly less funny, but I don't have a hard time believing it at all.

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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #617 on: April 25, 2021, 05:37:27 PM »
An earlier comment mentioned LP would have more thematic strength if the homeless rabbit was the turning point for the character's emotional journey.
In a way, it was. That was the turning point for the teenage bunny, before she turned 15 and got her own account. Mind you, I only read LP the one time but the teenager stuck out to me as the most compassionate person in the story in a way that didn't even involve religion. She seemed to be upset over the Homeless Bunny simply because she was a kind person. Generic Christian Housewife Bunny 14-B was fine with the system until it impacted her reading material. Teacher Bunny didn't care until her score was impacted because of her daughter. Influencer Bunny also didn't care until it impacted her because of her friends. All these "Lovely People" are incredibly shallow, and even if Minna had taken the time to give them more depth of character that wouldn't have changed who they were on a fundamental(ist) level.

It seemed to me like the only character in that story with any (nominal and probably unintentional) depth was the teenager. She was angry about how the homeless bunny was treated. If I remember correctly, it was at that point where she decided to tank her score once she had one, and so was the catalyst for almost everything that happened after.

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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #618 on: April 25, 2021, 06:50:15 PM »
i considered making a blingee account

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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #619 on: April 25, 2021, 07:05:46 PM »
Okay, I laughed.  ;D

That's amazing, Haiz!  <3
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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #620 on: April 25, 2021, 07:28:06 PM »
Bahaha!  :))  Awesome, Haiz!
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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #621 on: April 25, 2021, 08:55:59 PM »
Ha! Oh Haiz that may be the loveliest thing I've seen posted about this entire affair.
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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #622 on: April 25, 2021, 09:12:29 PM »
Yes! Best character in the comic!

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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #623 on: April 25, 2021, 10:17:12 PM »
Violet is best bunny, confermed ;D <3

EDIT: Correction; the teenage bunny's name is Lavander, I apologize for the mistake :S
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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #624 on: April 25, 2021, 10:52:25 PM »
haha! Finally some recognition for the real protagonist!

I hope this is setup for the sequel when violet gets sick of commune life and returns to start a revolution.

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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #625 on: April 26, 2021, 12:13:56 AM »
haha! Finally some recognition for the real protagonist!

I hope this is setup for the sequel when violet gets sick of commune life and returns to start a revolution.
I'd (almost) pay money to see Violet say the equivalent of "I offer myself as Tribute!"   ;D

As unlikely as that is, it's still a hilarious mental image, so thanks for that! :)
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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #626 on: April 26, 2021, 12:14:45 AM »
Haiz, I love that! Thank you!
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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #627 on: April 26, 2021, 07:27:42 AM »
hahahah glad you enjoyed my silly little edit.

i've also seen people mention Husband Bunny (husbunny???) as another character that you don't Dislike, but unlike lavender feels so flat and hollow it doesn't feel right to count him. since we're talking about the plot again, i do in fact want to talk about Husband Bunny. WHAT'S HIS DEAL.

see, as a character he is introduced like:
- he is married to homemaker bunny
- he works for alizongle
- he seemingly holds no interests in his wife's hobbies, interests, hopes and dreams other than be a "sure, dear" sounding board for most of the time

in this essay i would like to propose that he could easily have been one of the most intruiging characters/story elements if he had been utilized well. LET ME EXPLAIN

when i read the comic for the first time, i was so certain there was going to be a 'twist' where it's found out he has an affair, or that marigold and her husband were in a loveless marriage and just keeping up appearances and are married because they're ticking off that life checklist, that he had been sipping that alizongle propaganda juice his entire life and was going to turn her in to the secret police, or even just a reveal that working for alizongle was a deeply harrowing and distressing experience and that he's been suffering this entire time and was just pretending Everything Is Fine while secretly harboring rebellious anti-alizongle thoughts.
JUST SOME OF THE MANY THOUGHTS I GOT FROM THE VIBES AND INCLUSION OF THESE PANELS:

he looks distressed to be working for alizongle and in a real hurry to get to his job, overlayered with "see he's so happy to work for them :)"

FORESHADOWING????? alas no his relationship to his work is never touched upon in any way, ever. he does not even have an arc beyond supporting his wife's arc (oh MY a clever subversion of gender tropes! a win for feminism!!) he is still nothing but a sounding board that occasionally says something smart like "if it means something to you the points shouldn't matter" which is almost SUSPICIOUSLY REBELLIOUS considering alizongle's whole deal? and then the whole time he very suddenly decides to take an interest in his wife's passion The Bible after, presumably, years of marriage - so he can mansplain it back to her in her Moment Of Weakness. but even THAT seems to only be rebellious by accident, very "haha woops i accidentally listened to a heavily controversial book that my workplace specifically is censoring" instead of emphasizing the radical-ness of what he actually did.

HOW DOES HE FEEL ABOUT ALIZONGLE? IS HE ACTIVELY SUPPRESSING ALL THE PROPAGANDA HE IS PRESUMABLY BEING FED AT HIS JOB WHILE HIS OWN WIFE AND INFLUENCER BUNNY HAS NO DEFENSES FOR IT? WHAT EVEN IS HIS JOB?? IS HE CONTRIBUTING TO THE REIGN OF THE TOTALITARIAN CORPORATE REGIME?? WHAT IF HE'S OVERSEEING ALL THE PERSONAL DATA INFORMATION OR SOCIAL CREDIT ALGORITHMS?? IS HE JUST AN AIRHEAD FOLLOWING ORDERS??? all we get is "he's just a good man and husband" HE WORKS FOR ALIZONGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW MUCH ARE WE SUPPOSED TO READ BETWEEN THE LINES HERE




*takes a few calming breaths*

anyway on a different topic. i want to share some tweets i saw on my timeline several weeks ago, while i was still deep in the Processing All This Information phase. i follow a lot of webcomic creators and it was very validating to see someone just... MENTION what had happened, and also it made me laugh out loud for like ten minutes straight.
i will give a CW for uhhh blasphemy? poking fun at the whole religious situation? feel free to suggest better wordings if you have them, i'm not posting it here to upset anyone, i just figure we could all use some levity
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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #628 on: April 26, 2021, 08:51:32 AM »
Haiz, this is all so great! Thank you!

What if we later find out that husbunny never worked for alizongle and it was all a cover for his work at the Thought Police? And while he felt a bit divided, and even decided to read the book his wife care so much about, deep inside he still believed in the World Council way of life? What if he's acting to gain the others' trust and just collect information before betraying their new comunity? This could have been a really interesting thing...

I'd (almost) pay money to see Violet say the equivalent of "I offer myself as Tribute!"   ;D

As unlikely as that is, it's still a hilarious mental image, so thanks for that! :)
I'd (almost) die laughing if that happens! ;D
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Re: Lovely People aka 'the bunny comic'
« Reply #629 on: April 26, 2021, 08:52:09 AM »
Yes! Everything Haiz said about poor husbunny!

I was so confused by him - total cardboard cutout. He seems utterly detatched - for pete's sake, his wife mentions her desire to have a baby and he basically says, "Yes dear." He looked as though he utterly loathed his job, comes home and collapses, but his wife is all "He loves his job!" Then when he's late, she worries that maybe he actually hated it and had gone berserk. WTF? Which is it? He just seemed to be a prop until he read the whole damn bible on the train... which bothered the heck out of me for technical reasons, why the hecking heck is he taking an all-night train home from WORK?? It makes. no. sense.

And thanks for pointing out the annoying mansplaining at her hour of need, I was probably just fuming and confused by that point and hadn't really figured out why that bit irritated me so much. Also, the bible is loooong, how did he remember just the right passage? I wish I had that kind of memory.

catbirds,  I adore the idea of Violet/Lavender* coming back to start a revolution!

* Whichever it is... I think my brain just refused to take in any details in this mess of a comic.
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