Thanks - the drawing wants colour, but I did this on the spur of the moment after reading the first contributions, and didn't have enough time left in the evening. Of course now it's a work week, too (working from home, but still). So, maybe.
Michael/Signe fics are among my favourites, and I like this take. (Do they have cherries on Bornholm?)
I agree with the standard English protocol of putting each new speaker in a separate paragraph, but I will insert wordless reactions into the same paragraph. eg "Let's go, Emil!," Sigrun whooped, "me & my right-hand warrior will get that troll, don't you worry." Emil gulped and gave a weak smile. "On with the butter, Emil, out, out!," she unsheathed her knife and was halfway across the clearing before finishing the sentence.
"On my way!," Emil called after her, searching frantically for his second boot.