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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1350 on: January 15, 2016, 03:52:10 AM »
I love rhymes too! Especially the ones that seem like they should mean something but you can't figure out exactly what. To avoid too much OT in this thread I'll continue in the cut.

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Hura hura häitä
Kello löi jo kaksitoista
Keisari seisoo palatsissaan
Niin musta kuin multa
Niin valkea kuin varsa
Mitä varten sotamies on parempi kuin herra?
Se ken tulee viimeiseksi onpi kuolema!


Hooray hooray to the wedding
The clock has struck twelve
The emperor stands in his palace
As black as the soil
As white as a foal
Why is a soldier better than his master?
The one who arrives last is death!

This one goes with a game where two people make a gate with their arms and the rest walk under it, singing the rhyme. At the word "death" the gates fall down and catch the person currently underneath. The rest of the players wait while the gates ake their catch a bit to the side and give them a choice between two things, f.ex. blue or red, blueberry or raspberry, bus or train, anything. The person makes their choice and joins the side of the gate that stands for that option. When everyone's caught and chosen their side the game enbds at a tug of war.

And another one with a death theme:

Satu meni saunaan
Laittoi laukun naulaan
Kysyi talon väeltä
Onko saunassa lämmintä.
Eipä ole puita, no onhan tuolla
Kalliolla vanhan ämmän luita.


Satu (it's a girl's name but it also means a fairytale) went to sauna
Hung her/their bag in a hook
Asked the people of the house
If the sauna was warm (= ready for bathing)
There's no firewood, well but over there
On the cliffs are bones of an old woman.

We used this one as a skipping rhyme.
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1351 on: January 15, 2016, 09:33:02 PM »
*Curmudgeonly growling*

The Jylland Jump
A “Stand Still. Stay Silent”/“Jazz Age” crossover fanfic
Part 4
Prior part
Spoiler: show
A Skittery Sax

The noises had only impinged on Emil’s consciousness when he was almost to the band’s “suite”, such as it was, in their Trond-mandated flophouse, but once it had, there was no denying it.

Someone was practicing on a saxophone in the band’s quarters, and in the band’s style of jam.

Emil’s stomach tightened as he listened in the hallway outside their door. The player was pretty good--not as good as Emil, but certainly not bad.

Was this Emil’s replacement in the “Malmö Musikers”?

After a few lifetimes of agonized hesitation, Emil nerved himself up to go in and see who the player was. Best to get it over with; besides, he’d need to pack his sadly few things and be ready to strike out for... wherever he could go this time. Maybe Bergen?

“Mikkel.” Emil didn’t realize that he’d spoken aloud until the big man slowly turned to face him.

After a long silence where Mikkel stared at Emil with a faintly puzzled expression, the Dane finally rumbled, “Well, aren’t you going to join in and make it a proper jam session?” Emil’s look went from shattered to confused. “Didn’t Sigrun send you over so we could see how we jam together? She said she would.”

Emil was just about to faint from relief when a stranger’s voice spoke behind him. “Mind if I join in, too?”

At that, the bedroom door flew open, Tuuri shooting forth like a rocket with a cry of, “ONNI!” Emil managed to dodge in time to avoid being bowled over in the wake of Tuuri’s rush to greet her brother.

Tuuri and Lalli had mentioned this third Hotakainen to their band-mates, of course, so the blocky Finn wasn’t a complete stranger. Nonetheless, Emil and Mikkel were rather more reserved in their greetings.

After a few minutes of Tuuri gushing at Onni, with only grunts of varied tone as responses, Lalli slinked in. Onni made as if to hug his cousin, but a slight backpedal from Lalli cued Onni to simply clasp Lalli’s shoulders instead.

Eventually, once Tuuri was more or less talked out, the newcomer pulled forth a sax from one of his bags, Emil grabbed his own sax, and they joined Mikkel in an impromptu trio, Tuuri and Lalli watching.

Emil was hard-pressed to keep his dismay out of the music after the first few licks. Onni was fantastic. It was actually hard for Emil to keep up with the eldest Finn, and more or less impossible for Mikkel.

“Imagine doing that with us tonight, onstage!” Tuuri gushed. “It would be brilliant, Onni!”

Onni’s face went completely blank, and he dropped his sax. A moment later, he was flat on his back in a dead faint.

*

They’d had to blindfold Onni to get him onstage, and instead of an announcement of the band, Taru put up a banner reading, “Blind Onni & the Malmö Musikers”. None of their audience seemed to get the joke--”Blind Luck” playing for them onstage--but they still liked this new guy’s sound.

The Evening well very well, Onni only trying to get away twice and throwing up (in the backstage hurl bucket) once. After some of Lalli’s shenanigans, this was positively easy to handle.

Emil was so torn. Onni and his sound brought the band up a notch, certainly, and they all sounded great in concert, but there was a fearful, jealous part of Emil that was glad the Finn was so stage-phobic.

Sigrun, nobody’s fool, was trying to smother Onni’s fears and doubts with a flood of enthusiastic words, but Onni stood against her like a stolid Finn rock against a snowstorm.

Tuuri was rather sniffly after Onni left, so Emil knew Lalli would need some distracting as well. Maybe they could work on arranging one of Bing’s songs for the band? Now that Mikkel had been tapped as back-up sax, a lot of possibilities were open...


Spoiler: Authorial Notes • show

I was trying to get the next bit of the Western out, but somebody had to divert my brain over here. Grrrrrr.

...I HOPE YOU’RE SATISFIED. /Trond
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1352 on: January 15, 2016, 10:49:35 PM »
Great story Róisín! I now have an urge to go out looking for some to brew up (but would probably pick something like castor oil plant and kill myself - a herbalist I am not ;D)
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1353 on: January 16, 2016, 12:20:24 AM »
*Curmudgeonly growling*

The Jylland Jump
A “Stand Still. Stay Silent”/“Jazz Age” crossover fanfic
Part 4
Prior part
Spoiler: show
A Skittery Sax

The noises had only impinged on Emil’s consciousness when he was almost to the band’s “suite”, such as it was, in their Trond-mandated flophouse, but once it had, there was no denying it.

Someone was practicing on a saxophone in the band’s quarters, and in the band’s style of jam.

Emil’s stomach tightened as he listened in the hallway outside their door. The player was pretty good--not as good as Emil, but certainly not bad.

Was this Emil’s replacement in the “Malmö Musikers”?

After a few lifetimes of agonized hesitation, Emil nerved himself up to go in and see who the player was. Best to get it over with; besides, he’d need to pack his sadly few things and be ready to strike out for... wherever he could go this time. Maybe Bergen?

“Mikkel.” Emil didn’t realize that he’d spoken aloud until the big man slowly turned to face him.

After a long silence where Mikkel stared at Emil with a faintly puzzled expression, the Dane finally rumbled, “Well, aren’t you going to join in and make it a proper jam session?” Emil’s look went from shattered to confused. “Didn’t Sigrun send you over so we could see how we jam together? She said she would.”

Emil was just about to faint from relief when a stranger’s voice spoke behind him. “Mind if I join in, too?”

At that, the bedroom door flew open, Tuuri shooting forth like a rocket with a cry of, “ONNI!” Emil managed to dodge in time to avoid being bowled over in the wake of Tuuri’s rush to greet her brother.

Tuuri and Lalli had mentioned this third Hotakainen to their band-mates, of course, so the blocky Finn wasn’t a complete stranger. Nonetheless, Emil and Mikkel were rather more reserved in their greetings.

After a few minutes of Tuuri gushing at Onni, with only grunts of varied tone as responses, Lalli slinked in. Onni made as if to hug his cousin, but a slight backpedal from Lalli cued Onni to simply clasp Lalli’s shoulders instead.

Eventually, once Tuuri was more or less talked out, the newcomer pulled forth a sax from one of his bags, Emil grabbed his own sax, and they joined Mikkel in an impromptu trio, Tuuri and Lalli watching.

Emil was hard-pressed to keep his dismay out of the music after the first few licks. Onni was fantastic. It was actually hard for Emil to keep up with the eldest Finn, and more or less impossible for Mikkel.

“Imagine doing that with us tonight, onstage!” Tuuri gushed. “It would be brilliant, Onni!”

Onni’s face went completely blank, and he dropped his sax. A moment later, he was flat on his back in a dead faint.

*

They’d had to blindfold Onni to get him onstage, and instead of an announcement of the band, Taru put up a banner reading, “Blind Onni & the Malmö Musikers”. None of their audience seemed to get the joke--”Blind Luck” playing for them onstage--but they still liked this new guy’s sound.

The Evening well very well, Onni only trying to get away twice and throwing up (in the backstage hurl bucket) once. After some of Lalli’s shenanigans, this was positively easy to handle.

Emil was so torn. Onni and his sound brought the band up a notch, certainly, and they all sounded great in concert, but there was a fearful, jealous part of Emil that was glad the Finn was so stage-phobic.

Sigrun, nobody’s fool, was trying to smother Onni’s fears and doubts with a flood of enthusiastic words, but Onni stood against her like a stolid Finn rock against a snowstorm.

Tuuri was rather sniffly after Onni left, so Emil knew Lalli would need some distracting as well. Maybe they could work on arranging one of Bing’s songs for the band? Now that Mikkel had been tapped as back-up sax, a lot of possibilities were open...


Spoiler: Authorial Notes • show

I was trying to get the next bit of the Western out, but somebody had to divert my brain over here. Grrrrrr.

...I HOPE YOU’RE SATISFIED. /Trond


This made me laugh so hard! Thanks for sharing.

(Please let us see Onni in this fic again.)
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1354 on: January 16, 2016, 04:20:51 AM »
LooNEY: so funny! 'Backstage hurl bucket', heh. And Emil as insecure as ever. Great!
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1355 on: January 16, 2016, 08:19:20 AM »
Apologies, I don't have much time to read or write fanfic or set up new accounts but I wrote this today and thought I'd post it:

Excerpts from a Communication by Universe Cruise Craft Aorryg. This urgent briefing concerns Planet Three (BlueGreen Pearl), System 10 (Bountiful) First visit in one hundred years.

Importance 1: Quarantine planet. virfung outbreak. Critical situation. Almost complete collapse of Counter society. Anti-virfung vessel required.

Importance 2: Life Energy being used, although primitively. 

[…] The majority of womb-breeding species on the planet have perished due to virfung. Fortunately, individual breeders within most species have proven to be immune to the initial virfung expansion and survived to form breeding colonies. However, the future is uncertain for all womb-breeding species because they are prey to the surviving virfung-evolved creatures. As is typical of virfung outbreaks, the host now has the potential to be immortal, allowing the physical virfung to survive indefinitely.

However, one species (Meyourers, see attachments for details) has proven to be resistant to the virfung and flourishes in sustainable numbers on all habitable land masses. It is evolving and can defeat and kill virfung hosts. In former urban areas, where Meyourers were often domesticated, they will band together to kill virfung hosts, even much larger ones, creating space (most likely, unconsciously) for other womb-breeding species. 

In rural or wilderness areas some of these Meyourers have remained solitary adult beasts. However, it would appear that some have developed, out of necessity, breeding patterns that produce herds of adults which keep Meyourer families together and provide greater numbers to ward off the extinctionist amalgamations of virfung.

As a hobbyist cruise ship we do not have permission to physically step on to virfung planets. We also cannot break Tourist Observance Protocol. However, it is recommended that the Meyourer cultures and their unique biology are examined as a matter of urgency. (A virfung resistant species is not unique but the Meyourers are developing fast and have evolved extraordinarily well to survive, flourish and fill ecological niches.) 

Life Energy Discovery

Counters, by far the most technologically advanced and science-aware species on the planet, have proven to be useful hosts for virfung. However, immune and, astonishingly, non-immune counters have survived in isolated settlements. Importantly, some Counters have discovered how to use Life Energy and can direct it in unsophisticated ways. Nevertheless, they associate Life Energy with “Magick” and use it in culturally bound ways, limiting its potential. This initial development of Life Energy by a species requires scientific study.

We also observed an expeditionary group of Counters moving beyond the limits of their safe havens and we on the Aorryg have followed their activities. The group has unknowingly discovered information to defeat virfung in the long-term, thus letting their – and hopefully other – species thrive.

The group has become the most popular reality vision ever on the Aorryg; viewers adjust their body cycles to follow their favourites and have reformed the city-wide imitation decks to allow themselves to act out the events of the Counters’ lives. In fact, a record amount of viewers are bodyshaping to look like their favourite Counter and seduce or be seduced by their favourite Counter.

These counters are also scientifically important. Two of the counters (both male) use Life Energy and have just begun to explore their powers – enhancing their survival chances. As one of the Counters has only just begun developing his skills, we have a unique opportunity to study a Life Energy-aware creature developing its skills in conditions of extreme stress. The Ywq of Hlax request permission to begin this research observance and remain behind on a small, three-kilometre-long, support vessel. They would further justify this by transmitting the reality vision of the expeditionary group and providing aid for the anti-virfung-contamination vessel when it arrives. We have approved this, as in the words of the popular Counter leader: “It is the most best option”.
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1356 on: January 16, 2016, 08:30:28 AM »
Brilliant! Is this our first space-fiction AU? I know LooNEY DAC has done time. Do keep writing!
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1357 on: January 16, 2016, 10:40:13 AM »
*Curmudgeonly growling*

The Jylland Jump
A “Stand Still. Stay Silent”/“Jazz Age” crossover fanfic
Part 4
Prior part
Spoiler: show
A Skittery Sax

The noises had only impinged on Emil’s consciousness when he was almost to the band’s “suite”, such as it was, in their Trond-mandated flophouse, but once it had, there was no denying it.

Someone was practicing on a saxophone in the band’s quarters, and in the band’s style of jam.

Emil’s stomach tightened as he listened in the hallway outside their door. The player was pretty good--not as good as Emil, but certainly not bad.

Was this Emil’s replacement in the “Malmö Musikers”?

After a few lifetimes of agonized hesitation, Emil nerved himself up to go in and see who the player was. Best to get it over with; besides, he’d need to pack his sadly few things and be ready to strike out for... wherever he could go this time. Maybe Bergen?

“Mikkel.” Emil didn’t realize that he’d spoken aloud until the big man slowly turned to face him.

After a long silence where Mikkel stared at Emil with a faintly puzzled expression, the Dane finally rumbled, “Well, aren’t you going to join in and make it a proper jam session?” Emil’s look went from shattered to confused. “Didn’t Sigrun send you over so we could see how we jam together? She said she would.”

Emil was just about to faint from relief when a stranger’s voice spoke behind him. “Mind if I join in, too?”

At that, the bedroom door flew open, Tuuri shooting forth like a rocket with a cry of, “ONNI!” Emil managed to dodge in time to avoid being bowled over in the wake of Tuuri’s rush to greet her brother.

Tuuri and Lalli had mentioned this third Hotakainen to their band-mates, of course, so the blocky Finn wasn’t a complete stranger. Nonetheless, Emil and Mikkel were rather more reserved in their greetings.

After a few minutes of Tuuri gushing at Onni, with only grunts of varied tone as responses, Lalli slinked in. Onni made as if to hug his cousin, but a slight backpedal from Lalli cued Onni to simply clasp Lalli’s shoulders instead.

Eventually, once Tuuri was more or less talked out, the newcomer pulled forth a sax from one of his bags, Emil grabbed his own sax, and they joined Mikkel in an impromptu trio, Tuuri and Lalli watching.

Emil was hard-pressed to keep his dismay out of the music after the first few licks. Onni was fantastic. It was actually hard for Emil to keep up with the eldest Finn, and more or less impossible for Mikkel.

“Imagine doing that with us tonight, onstage!” Tuuri gushed. “It would be brilliant, Onni!”

Onni’s face went completely blank, and he dropped his sax. A moment later, he was flat on his back in a dead faint.

*

They’d had to blindfold Onni to get him onstage, and instead of an announcement of the band, Taru put up a banner reading, “Blind Onni & the Malmö Musikers”. None of their audience seemed to get the joke--”Blind Luck” playing for them onstage--but they still liked this new guy’s sound.

The Evening well very well, Onni only trying to get away twice and throwing up (in the backstage hurl bucket) once. After some of Lalli’s shenanigans, this was positively easy to handle.

Emil was so torn. Onni and his sound brought the band up a notch, certainly, and they all sounded great in concert, but there was a fearful, jealous part of Emil that was glad the Finn was so stage-phobic.

Sigrun, nobody’s fool, was trying to smother Onni’s fears and doubts with a flood of enthusiastic words, but Onni stood against her like a stolid Finn rock against a snowstorm.

Tuuri was rather sniffly after Onni left, so Emil knew Lalli would need some distracting as well. Maybe they could work on arranging one of Bing’s songs for the band? Now that Mikkel had been tapped as back-up sax, a lot of possibilities were open...


Spoiler: Authorial Notes • show

I was trying to get the next bit of the Western out, but somebody had to divert my brain over here. Grrrrrr.

...I HOPE YOU’RE SATISFIED. /Trond


Okay, I just got caught up on these and they're fantastic! I had a really hard time not cackling and confusing everyone at work. (And I see I'm not the only one who's got a case of the Onni bug...)

DiscoMonster that was great! I like the slow reveal that not only are the mysterious alien-types watching...they're also as obsessed with this story as the rest of us. ;)
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1358 on: January 16, 2016, 11:16:08 AM »
Brilliant! Is this our first space-fiction AU? I know LooNEY DAC has done time. Do keep writing!

Oooh! Thank you. There would be lots of ways to follow it up but time and laziness are against that happening. I just woke up with the idea of aliens visiting Year 90 Earth to do SSSS cosplay. Had to write it and that's what happened.

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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1359 on: January 16, 2016, 11:18:17 AM »

DiscoMonster that was great! I like the slow reveal that not only are the mysterious alien-types watching...they're also as obsessed with this story as the rest of us. ;)
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1360 on: January 16, 2016, 01:34:09 PM »
DiscoMonster that was great! I like the slow reveal that not only are the mysterious alien-types watching...they're also as obsessed with this story as the rest of us. ;)
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1361 on: January 16, 2016, 07:23:01 PM »
Ah, of course! The American usage - sorry! English she are a weird language. I meant that DiscoMonster had written an AU set in space, where you have written some where the thing changed is time. Like the delightful tales you are currently posting. Which are really good!
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« Reply #1362 on: January 16, 2016, 07:49:06 PM »
Ah, of course! The American usage - sorry! English she are a weird language. I meant that DiscoMonster had written an AU set in space, where you have written some where the thing changed it time. Like the delightful tales you are currently posting. Which are really good!
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I did realize what you were saying before my Post of Deliberate Silliness, though.

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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1363 on: January 16, 2016, 09:14:07 PM »
So now here comes the part where I was writing something, before we got hit with a whole bunch of new Onni characterization and I realize I want to incorporate it. *headdesk*

I mean... I like new Onni characterization and I do have ideas, but this makes the third false start in a row I've had for Chapter 2. *grumble* *grumble*
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Re: The SSSS Scriptorium
« Reply #1364 on: January 17, 2016, 03:50:17 PM »
Apologies, I don't have much time to read or write fanfic or set up new accounts but I wrote this today and thought I'd post it:

Excerpts from a Communication by Universe Cruise Craft Aorryg. This urgent briefing concerns Planet Three (BlueGreen Pearl), System 10 (Bountiful) First visit in one hundred years.
A pure sci-fi take on SSSS? And a good and funny one, too!? <3 <3 MARRY ME! And make me loads of little sci-fi/SSSS ficlets! PLEASE!

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