Author Topic: The aRTD Poetry Thread  (Read 6694 times)

Daiseerose

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Re: The aRTD Poetry Thread
« Reply #15 on: April 24, 2016, 11:03:25 PM »
I made a poem about puppy fox's POV in year zero/ when the rash started appearing ( if this isn't the right thread I'm super sorry and I'll delete)

Humans. You lovely selfish things.

Always going around in your steel cars.

Ruining the earth as easy as breathing.

Destroying.Creating.Breathing.

Maybe you guys deserve what’s coming.

The sickness. The death.

Maybe this is the best thing to happen to you.

After what you have done.

I hope you all die.


( I hope you guys like it! it's my first poem I actually liked..)

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Re: The aRTD Poetry Thread
« Reply #16 on: April 24, 2016, 11:32:58 PM »
I made a poem about puppy fox's POV in year zero/ when the rash started appearing ( if this isn't the right thread I'm super sorry and I'll delete)

Humans. You lovely selfish things.

Always going around in your steel cars.

Ruining the earth as easy as breathing.

Destroying.Creating.Breathing.

Maybe you guys deserve what’s coming.

The sickness. The death.

Maybe this is the best thing to happen to you.

After what you have done.

I hope you all die.


( I hope you guys like it! it's my first poem I actually liked..)

I like it! (yes this is the right place) defiantly seems like the view puppy-fox would have, yes.
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Re: The aRTD Poetry Thread
« Reply #17 on: April 25, 2016, 12:13:25 AM »
I made a poem about puppy fox's POV in year zero/ when the rash started appearing ( if this isn't the right thread I'm super sorry and I'll delete)

Humans. You lovely selfish things.

Always going around in your steel cars.

Ruining the earth as easy as breathing.

Destroying.Creating.Breathing.

Maybe you guys deserve what’s coming.

The sickness. The death.

Maybe this is the best thing to happen to you.

After what you have done.

I hope you all die.


( I hope you guys like it! it's my first poem I actually liked..)

Yes, this is the right place. : D Generally aRTD-related anything fits on this board best, even when it's a aRTD+SSSS mashup.
Anyway! Pff, Puppyfox, so bitter. Seems about right for him. : )
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Daiseerose

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Re: The aRTD Poetry Thread
« Reply #18 on: April 25, 2016, 10:13:27 AM »
Thank you! :)

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Re: The aRTD Poetry Thread
« Reply #19 on: April 27, 2016, 08:56:42 PM »
Aah, thank you for all the poetry! I have many feelings now - which I consider to be the primary effect of experiencing good poetry, so well done and please keep going! :)
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